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knotlamp - Last Train (TV Size)

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Ekaru
3,617 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
Ekaru
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, August 24, 2009 at 11:36:10 AM

Artist: knotlamp
Title: Last Train (TV Size)
Source: Yu-Gi-Oh! 5D
Tags: yugioh Japanese J-pop rock
BPM: 190
Filesize: 1448kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Larto's Fast Normal (3.31 stars, 118 notes)
  2. Train Crash (1.98 stars, 92 notes)
  3. Train Incoming (4.89 stars, 227 notes)
Download: knotlamp - Last Train (TV Size)
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Yu-Gi-Oh! 5D's 2nd and 3rd OPs. They were lazy bums and used the same song for both of them.
Last edited by Ekaru , edited 28 times in total.
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
Download: knotlamp - Last Train (TV Size) (Ekaru) [Larto's Fast Normal].osu

sorry it took so long
Hara
108 posts
Joined August 2008
Hara
[Hard]
01:04:143 (3) - Move 3 grids up and 2 or 3 grids left. Looks better than before.
01:23:564 (1) - Move 1 grid right.

[Larmal]
00:13:143 (1,3,4) - Move 1 grid left.
00:27:354 (2) - ^
00:45:670 (1,2) - Move 1 grid down.
00:45:670 (1,2,3,4) - Move 1 grid left.
00:59:091 (4,5,6) - Move 2 grids left. It's like I don't even recognize you any more Larto :'(
01:03:354 (1,2,3) - Move 1 grid down.
blissfulyoshi
osu! Alumni
4,755 posts
Joined July 2008
blissfulyoshi
Hard:
00:15:03 (7,8) - it is really irritating that these 2 notes are sitting right on the border of the screen
00:35:88 (6,7,8,9) - this jump in spacing is slightly disorienting especially since the pattern is not exactly the same
00:36:82 (9,10) - switching back to your previous spacing... more disorienting
00:41:88 (11) - make this a slider?
01:02:88 (1) - have this end on the end of 7

Normal (I expected something fast like hard):
00:02:72 (1) - realign so it is directly under 2
00:08:72 (3) - might want to make this a horizontal reflection of 1
00:09:35 (4,5,6) - make a vertical reflection of 2
00:21:35 (4) - make a horizontal reflection of 2
00:25:45 (1) - make the center dot in the slider centered on the y-axis (very minor detail)
00:29:24 (3) - make this have the exact curve that 1 has + make this end on 2
00:36:19 (1) - I think it would follow the style of the song if you did not make this a new combo
00:40:61 (1) - " "
00:45:67 (1) - " "
00:53:24 (1,2,3) - change this so that the sliders do not overlap
00:57:03 (3) - make this a horizontal reflection of 2
00:57:82 (4) - realign with the end of 3
01:26:17() - I don't think there is a need to turn off klai

silver color + klai seems a little too bright

Great map. Star.
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
General
Not really my style, but I'll try...

Seems mistimed. A BPM of 193.50 seems a lot nicer. Adjustments will need to be made to accommodate. There may be hidden offsets, but I doubt that. K, it's not 193.50, but it's still off. I think this song has a variable BPM. Sometimes it's off, and sometimes it's not. For example, the kiai section is slightly faster than the rest of the song.

Normal
00:08:50 (3) - Align with (1).
00:25:45 (1) - New slider: Open the .osu file, search for 25459, replace the entire line with this:
192,136,25459,6,4,B|192:80|192:80|200:24|256:0|312:24|320:56|320:80|320:80|320:144,2,300
00:38:09 (1,2) - Make these smoother like 00:33:67 (1,2).
00:56:56 (2) - Replace under (1).
01:02:09 (2) - Bad timing.

Hard
00:12:19 (1) - Try something more interesting?
00:19:14 (1,2,3) - Mistimed?
00:23:24 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Cut into two combos?
00:25:45 (11) - Off-screen a bit.
00:34:61 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - May help reading by using combo differently.
00:48:51 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - What the fuck is this?
Yuukari-Banteki
1,534 posts
Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
[Normal]
00:57:03 (3) - doesnt sound like its mapped to anything
01:03:98 (3,1,2,3) - sounds more in time with the song 1/2 earlier
01:26:09 (9) - finish


[Hard]
00:16:61 (11) - end with a finish
00:26:72 (13) - ^
00:33:19 (1) - end 1/2 later
00:38:09 (1) - ^
00:43:14 (1) - ^ etc.
00:48:51 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - if you can make this anything less clusterfucky and actually readable that'd be great
00:57:82 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - overusing clap
01:25:45 (7) - end 1/2 earlier
Ekaru
3,617 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
Ekaru
Most changes made.

Spinners in Hard are as-is, because they're close enough for me, and... well, I tested them. I originally had them end where you wanted them to, but I could hardly recover for the notes otherwise. As-is, it's just about perfect. <3

The train of sliders is easy to read now. Happy?
ztrot
osu! Alumni
4,378 posts
Joined February 2008
ztrot
Nice map. seems a bit early tho
i got an ave of about 10-15ms early but that might just be me

Overall:loved it
only thing that bugged me was those 1/4 sliders thos where murder
00:48:51 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - those
other than that it was really fun
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
Is it just me or does this map have variable BPM.

I cannot offset nazi if I have no reference points as to when the BPM changes. >_>

EDIT: I tried looking for the offset changes, but I failed. >_> This is friggin hard to time. I apologize if I can't do a thing D:
CheeseWarlock
osu! Alumni
1,185 posts
Joined May 2008
CheeseWarlock
Offset ~5.215 sounds a lot better to me. And I see no real reason to have two.
mrtn
osu! Alumni
1,065 posts
Joined March 2008
mrtn
try offset 2701

[larto's fast normal]
01:18:83 - reinsert break

[hard]
00:20:40 (6) - new combo maybe?
01:18:83 - reinsert break

good job as usual. starred
Starrodkirby86
osu! Alumni
3,723 posts
Here since the beginning
Starrodkirby86
Almost good.

I think the offset is a bit too late. Subtract it by 10 to 20? Whatever though. S:

[Larto's Fast Normal]:
Oh Larto, you're too fast. :U
00:00:19 (1,2,3,4) - Shoot, this killed my ears. Make this part quieter until the big loud moment...? Or else I'm being too much of a pussy.

[Hard]:
00:52:45 (1) - Finish?
awp
osu! Alumni
11,869 posts
Here since the beginning
awp
[TimingPoints]
5234,315.789473684211,4,1,0,80,1,0
10306,315.789473684211,4,1,0,100,1,0
12812,315.789473684211,4,1,0,100,1,0
52459,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
86170,-100,4,1,0,9,0,0

The only part that sounds bad using a single offset is the kick/hat combo near the start of the song. Eh sounds pretty good to me; woosh
Ekaru
3,617 posts
Joined July 2008
Topic Starter
Ekaru
Thanks, timing updated.
Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Mashley
Offset is a little late

Larto's Fast Normal
01:13:28 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - all back 1/2

Hard
Patterns are very frustrating and hard to read. At least rename to insane?
00:48:49 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - lol. wut.
lukewarmholiday
2,148 posts
Joined June 2008
lukewarmholiday

Agent Spin Here wrote:

Hard
00:48:49 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - lol. wut.
star
Takuma
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined October 2008
Takuma
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
minyeob
osu! Alumni
2,540 posts
Joined May 2008
minyeob
[Hard]
00:33:18 (1) - 1/2 longer
00:38:07 (1) - same as above.
00:43:12 (1) - same
-> Aren't fixed yet


00:48:49 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Yo Heatman Stage!
ztrot
osu! Alumni
4,378 posts
Joined February 2008
ztrot
Hmm it Seems you have fixed everything tho I still Don't like this stream
00:48:49 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - evil

And Larto's is fine.

Soo...
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