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What a cute little song.

Easy:
1:13:182 - You may want to avoid putting a note on the end of a slider in an easy difficulty. It can be very disorienting for people who aren't used to it.

Normal:
0:54:263 - I find myself really wanting to hit this note a half beat after the slider rather than a whole beat. Same with the one at 0:57:065. I don't know if that's a legitimate rhythm issue or just me being a spazz, but I think it's because the music is stronger on its 2's and 4's than its 1's and 3's, during that part. Probably also because that's how the slider at 0:33:066 was timed.
1:11:080 - This part of the combo feels a bit awkward because slider three bounces you away from the next one, where all the previous combos have flowed smoothly.
1:21:766 - Likewise, the order and position of this combo feels awfully counterintuitive for a normal difficulty.

Hard:
1:13:708 - The triples here and at 1:15:810 feel artificial to me; like they don't really evolve naturally from the music.

I think that's all I can crticize.

RINRINRIN

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Thanks! I changed some Stuff again. But i dont know about the spacing you said in the beginning. I left it as it is but if it is really such a problem ill change it later

I almost remade hard difficulty. Everything should be better now

Hey Hanyuu, wanna hold me like a princess?

O_o

[Easy]:
00:30:08 (4) - Have you tried putting a Finish here instead?

[Normal]:
Cool~

[Hard]:
00:38:15 (4,5,1,2) - Just look at that trap~ :O
00:47:26 (6) - Add whistle?
00:53:21 (8) - New combo~
00:54:27 (11) - Why not put this guy somewhere like the center of the triangle?
00:56:71 (6) - Move this so it's a horizontal flip of (1).
00:58:81 (6) - Intentional? Perhaps consider a new combo?
01:05:48 (1,2) - Move one of these to make a horizontal flip of the other.
01:15:81 (6,7) - Optional, but perhaps stack this to where (3) was?

Nothing much I can see that is wrong though. :3

Star~

All done except the optional.. i think its OK

Thank you very much. helped

starred

Easy:

-00:37:621 (4) Suggestion: Shorten this slider by 2 ticks and add one more reverse arrow and add circle to 00:39:197

Normal:

About spacing, maybe you could shorten the biggest jumps a little 'cause I got a bit confused after some jumps and then pressed too early the next circles :S

Hard:

-01:22:467 (2.3) Suggestion: Shorten these sliders by 2 ticks and put circles to the ends of the sliders. Your sliders here sounds okay and I'm not sure if mine sounds better or not, but try it out

Good map, good song
Starred~

Hard:
00:26:76 (6) - No whistles in this slider
00:30:43 (7) - Un-combo
00:30:78 (8) - New combo
00:33:59 (11) - New combo
00:33:94 (1) - Un-combo this one
00:39:19 (4) - New combo
00:39:54 (1) - Un-combo
00:48:83 (4) - Un-combo
00:50:409 - Inherit all these timing sections
00:58:81 (6) - This slider should have nomal hitsounds looking at the part before it.
01:04:423 - Place a beat here, move the spinner one tick forward on the timeline and be sure it ends @ 01:05:124
01:07:399 ~ 01:09:851 - The whistles here are really hurting my ears, remove the whistles or turn down the volume at this part.
01:20:37 (1) - Un-combo
01:25:44 (4) - add whistle in the slider path
01:26:14 (5) - Whistle?
01:26:84 (7) - New combo

Normal:
00:25:18 (1~7) - whistles?
00:33:59 (4) - New combo
00:33:59 ~ 00:36:044 - this would sound better with soft hitsounds
[NOTE] You can also try this on hard, but on hard you placed it in a different way wich also sounds ok to me.
00:36:04 (1) - Un-combo
00:36:39 (11) - new combo
00:39:548 ~ 00:41:650 - ^^^
00:36:39 ~ 00:36:39 - ^
00:36:39 ~ 00:59:518 - whistles?
01:00:39 (4) - New combo
01:01:62 (5) - New combo
01:07:40 (1) - New combo
01:20:014 ~ 01:23:868 - No claps anymore?
01:20:36 (2) - New combo
01:24:92 (4) - New combo
01:25:79 (4) - Un-combo
01:27:54 (7) - New combo

Easy:
I think this difficulty is a bit hard because the slider velocity is just as fast as in hard and many patterns overlap wich could be hard for nubs. Think about it.
[NOTE] If you lower the slider velocity you may have to remap easy because everything is messed up right right after you've lowered it. Save before you tweak on it. You can change it @ the timing tab
00:33:59 ~ 00:36:044 - this would sound better with soft hitsounds
00:39:548 ~ 00:41:650 - ^
00:36:39 ~ 00:36:39 - ^
00:54:78 (2) - this slider point is off, try something else here.
00:57:59 (4) - New combo
01:00:39 (4) - New combo
01:18:61 (1) - New combo

:3

Mianki wrote:

Easy:

-00:37:621 (4) Suggestion: Shorten this slider by 2 ticks and add one more reverse arrow and add circle to 00:39:197
Think its cool as it is

Normal:

About spacing, maybe you could shorten the biggest jumps a little 'cause I got a bit confused after some jumps and then pressed too early the next circles :S
Yes the spacing gets out of control at the end . I made it a bit easier

Hard:

-01:22:467 (2.3) Suggestion: Shorten these sliders by 2 ticks and put circles to the ends of the sliders. Your sliders here sounds okay and I'm not sure if mine sounds better or not, but try it out
Hm i could do that but i like the long curved ones more. They look more beautiful

Good map, good song
Starred~

Thank you very much

The whistles here are really hurting my ears

I love whistles

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Hello again~
Small fixes.

- Easy:
00:51:10 (6) - New combo.

- Normal:
00:22:38 (3) - New combo.
00:57:59 (3) - New combo.

Dokidokidoki

Cute new background

Normal was a bit hard to read, well some parts anyway.
Hard was fun~

Starred` for you~

Cheery wrote:

Dokidokidoki

Cute new background

Normal was a bit hard to read, well some parts anyway.
Hard was fun~

Starred` for you~

dokidokidoki

good map and song
i make a soundlab for you
most of your hitsound pattens are good
so i just follow them
if you accept those change
rename this sounlab to Normal
and use those pattens in your hard

Download: Kagamine Rin - Hold Me Like A Princess (Hanyuu) [Soundlab].osu

Download: Kagamine Rin - Hold Me Like A Princess (Hanyuu) [Soundlab Hard].osu

~Easy~

Fine.

~Normal~

Fine imo.

~Hard~

00:22:380 - (1)~(2)
00:23:606 - (5)~(6)
00:24:832 - (7)~(1)
00:34:468 - (4)~(5)
00:35:168 - (6)~(7)
00:38:322 - (5)~(1)
00:39:197 - (1)~(2)
00:49:708 - (6)~(7)~(1)
00:57:942 - (2)~(6)
01:11:781 - (6)~(8)
01:22:993 - (2)~(4)
Spacings are different from others.

00:57:066 - (1)
01:13:008 - (9)
Remove new combo and add new combo on next circle.

01:06:526 - (3)
01:18:614 - (3)
Add new combo.


+Star

DJPop`s points are like the picture
some spacings are different
pn fact
i can beat all of them
you can set some new combos or fix the spacing