1. DJPop's Insane (4.99 stars, 401 notes)
2. Hard (4.32 stars, 216 notes)
3. Insane (4.96 stars, 388 notes)
4. Normal (2.63 stars, 141 notes)

Gens wrote:

Akira... Hmm...

[Overall]
- There are some sections at the same time, with exactly the same offset. Nonono, that's not good (Even though it doesn't affect gameplay). Why don't you go delete all the extra sections? These came from my mistake while timing, thank you for noticed me.
- Inhereted sections can duplicate and half the BPM already, so... Go change those Base BPM Sections
- 01:25:49 - Mind placing all the Inhereted sections 1/4 earlier? (So the wrong sampleset isn't used) I didn't notice this one= =, thank you very much.
- Kiai Time? Shouldn't that be on the chorus only? (Example: 01:00:56 - 01:13:81) Added more kiai time

[Normal]
- You might want to lower down the Overall Difficulty. Decreased it 1 line
- Hitsounds are not used as cool as you did in [Hard]. Use more? It is lack of note so i can't put more sound then. But i will try it.
00:25:49 (2) - 1/4 shorter? Shorten it
00:34:84 (4) - What the hell is happening here...? 2 Beats at the same time, or there's a mistimed slider... Anyway, you should know what's happening here. It is slider, but it is my mistake again.

[Hard]
00:15:95 (1,2) - Align? (or stack or whatever) Stacked it

Besides ugly sliders, this is definitely rankable. Starred!

• I'd recommend lowering the overall difficulty a tad.
  1. 00:06:60 (1) - Shorten by 1/2; after, delete then redo the break.
  2. 00:21:40 (6) - Inconsistent spacing.
  3. 00:25:88 (3,4) - Align with 00:24:71 (3).
  4. 00:26:47 (5) - Align with 00:25:10 (4).
  5. 00:31:14 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - 1 level 3 grid left.
  6. 01:00:56 (10) - New combo.
  7. 01:44:97 (6) - New combo.
  8. 01:48:29 (8) - Delete.
  9. 01:54:33 (7) - New combo.
  10. 01:58:42 (5) - Stack under fading (1).
  11. 02:07:77 (4) - Align with 02:07:18 (2,3).
  12. 01:58:81 (6) - New combo.
  13. 01:59:97 (1) - Remove new combo.
  14. 02:00:36 (2) - New combo.

• 1. 00:06:60 (1) - Shorten by 1/2; after, delete then redo the break.
  2. 01:12:83 - Delete then redo the break.
  3. 01:20:23 (4,5,6) - 1 level 3 grid left.

awp wrote:

I think you should drop the first section of the map. It really feels like the opening to a scenario akin to EBA/OTO's Mission #: Mission Subtitle! sections where things are starting up. The song itself at this point feels kind of sporadic. There's an appropriate map to it, but I think it'd be better starting the map at 14.5 seconds in. Kinda like what DJPop's does.

[Normal]
This feels much more like an easy-ish Hard than a Normal. I'd probably consider dropping the circle size by one and just calling it Hard.
01:11:47 (2,3) - I'd reshape/reposition the third slider so it doesn't overlap the second quite so much.

[Hard]
This feels much more like a mid-level Insane than a Hard map. Let's be honest here.
Pretty strong map otherwise.

[DJPop]
I love the way this one sounds. It could really use kiai time. Based on the post above, I'm guessing it has been added in that .osu but not uploaded yet. A sudden (UNPROMPTED >=| ) 2x slider is a biiiiit sketchy but it does stand out quite a bit so I won't really grill you on it.

I'll give it a star, since imo it is close to completion.