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Rissyu - uni [OsuMania]

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HanzeR
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HanzeR
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, April 11, 2013 at 6:30:28 AM

Artist: Rissyu
Title: uni
Tags: hatsune miku vocaloid
BPM: 131
Filesize: 3170kb
Play Time: 02:35
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard - 7Key (3.93 stars, 899 notes)
  2. Insane - 7Key (5 stars, 1536 notes)
  3. Normal - 7Key (3.02 stars, 578 notes)
Download: Rissyu - uni
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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uni uni la ta ta♪


\≧▽≦/

My first attempt at mapping mania. I've only been playing this game for a few weeks, so I hope it isnt too terrible. >//<
Special Box
Super awesome people:
Silynn
Entozer
Bobbias
chonicle
rickyboi
Sp3ct3r
Hanyuu
saka1234
Trigoon
Frans Niko
iantanye
DJNightmare
Everyone else that''s ever played/tested my maps <3
Last edited by HanzeR , edited 56 times in total.
Sp3ct3r_2k11
56 posts
Joined March 2011
Sp3ct3r_2k11
Hello.
Logs
07:22 Sp3ct3r: anyways, into modding
07:22 Sp3ct3r: 00:24:419 (24419|5) - May i ask what this represents? i'm confused @_@
07:25 HanzeR: ohh i was supposed to delete that >>
07:25 HanzeR: fixed lol
07:27 Sp3ct3r: question
07:28 HanzeR: sure
07:28 Sp3ct3r: does the map involve making own beats into the song (like osu)?
07:29 HanzeR: hm not sure what you mean
07:29 HanzeR: like overmapping?
07:29 Sp3ct3r: not really
07:29 Sp3ct3r: some people mapped o!m as the same as standard maps. they make their own beats and rhythms that follows through the song
07:29 Sp3ct3r: usually o!m maps are 100% accurate with the music, instead to have out of place beats and such
07:30 Sp3ct3r: overmapping is usually when you map it so much that it turns out ridiculous and illogical
07:31 Sp3ct3r: and by that, i mean notes being out of place, not being 100% accurate
07:31 Sp3ct3r: and also notes being mashed when it's not fitting
07:31 HanzeR: ahh ok i get it
07:31 HanzeR: well id say i tried to follow the vocals in 90% of the map but there are a few places
07:32 HanzeR: where i made rhythms like
07:32 HanzeR: 00:38:503
07:32 HanzeR: 00:40:335 (40335|2) -
07:32 HanzeR: this section
07:32 HanzeR: and most of the end i guess
07:33 HanzeR: but i dont think there are any notes that dont align with notes in the song
07:33 HanzeR: atleast i tried to avoid that
07:33 Sp3ct3r: actually, that part was 100% accurate to the song :x
07:33 HanzeR: the holds dont follow anything :<
07:34 Sp3ct3r: yes it does actually
07:34 HanzeR: hm
07:34 Sp3ct3r: it can be applied as a LN for the beeping background effect
07:35 Sp3ct3r: at the left part, is this missing a note? 00:47:549 (47549|6) -
07:36 HanzeR: oh yeah ,
07:36 HanzeR: fixed ehe
07:37 Sp3ct3r: 00:53:846 (53846|2,53846|6) - delete this if you're following the vocals
07:37 HanzeR: ah yeah
07:37 Sp3ct3r: 00:54:304 (54304|0,54304|5) - bump this up
07:37 HanzeR: i should add a note here then too huh 00:54:419
07:38 Sp3ct3r: not really
07:38 Sp3ct3r: since well, you should bump the part i mentioned up by 1/4
07:38 HanzeR: ah ok
07:39 Sp3ct3r: 00:54:648 (54648|1) - and 00:54:877 (54877|3) - should be deleted if following vocals
07:40 Sp3ct3r: 00:56:136 (56136|0,56136|5) - delete if following vocals
07:40 Sp3ct3r: 00:56:022 (56022|4,56022|1) - this will turn into a Long Note (LN) if such. LN will be 2/4
07:43 HanzeR: ok did all that ^^
07:44 Sp3ct3r: basically, recheck the chorus with 25% playback
07:46 HanzeR: haha yaeh i see what you mean
07:46 HanzeR: ok
07:49 Sp3ct3r: 00:45:831 (45831|0,47663|0) - umm, cut off?
07:50 HanzeR: i dont see it >>
07:50 HanzeR: what do you mean
07:50 Sp3ct3r: between those LNs were cut
07:51 Sp3ct3r: might want to minimize
07:51 Sp3ct3r: it's the highlighted blue
07:52 HanzeR: ohh ok well i fixed it i think >>
HanzeR
921 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
HanzeR

Sp3ct3r wrote:

Hello.
Logs
07:22 Sp3ct3r: anyways, into modding
07:22 Sp3ct3r: 00:24:419 (24419|5) - May i ask what this represents? i'm confused @_@
07:25 HanzeR: ohh i was supposed to delete that >>
07:25 HanzeR: fixed lol
07:27 Sp3ct3r: question
07:28 HanzeR: sure
07:28 Sp3ct3r: does the map involve making own beats into the song (like osu)?
07:29 HanzeR: hm not sure what you mean
07:29 HanzeR: like overmapping?
07:29 Sp3ct3r: not really
07:29 Sp3ct3r: some people mapped o!m as the same as standard maps. they make their own beats and rhythms that follows through the song
07:29 Sp3ct3r: usually o!m maps are 100% accurate with the music, instead to have out of place beats and such
07:30 Sp3ct3r: overmapping is usually when you map it so much that it turns out ridiculous and illogical
07:31 Sp3ct3r: and by that, i mean notes being out of place, not being 100% accurate
07:31 Sp3ct3r: and also notes being mashed when it's not fitting
07:31 HanzeR: ahh ok i get it
07:31 HanzeR: well id say i tried to follow the vocals in 90% of the map but there are a few places
07:32 HanzeR: where i made rhythms like
07:32 HanzeR: 00:38:503
07:32 HanzeR: 00:40:335 (40335|2) -
07:32 HanzeR: this section
07:32 HanzeR: and most of the end i guess
07:33 HanzeR: but i dont think there are any notes that dont align with notes in the song
07:33 HanzeR: atleast i tried to avoid that
07:33 Sp3ct3r: actually, that part was 100% accurate to the song :x
07:33 HanzeR: the holds dont follow anything :<
07:34 Sp3ct3r: yes it does actually
07:34 HanzeR: hm
07:34 Sp3ct3r: it can be applied as a LN for the beeping background effect
07:35 Sp3ct3r: at the left part, is this missing a note? 00:47:549 (47549|6) -
07:36 HanzeR: oh yeah ,
07:36 HanzeR: fixed ehe
07:37 Sp3ct3r: 00:53:846 (53846|2,53846|6) - delete this if you're following the vocals
07:37 HanzeR: ah yeah
07:37 Sp3ct3r: 00:54:304 (54304|0,54304|5) - bump this up
07:37 HanzeR: i should add a note here then too huh 00:54:419
07:38 Sp3ct3r: not really
07:38 Sp3ct3r: since well, you should bump the part i mentioned up by 1/4
07:38 HanzeR: ah ok
07:39 Sp3ct3r: 00:54:648 (54648|1) - and 00:54:877 (54877|3) - should be deleted if following vocals
07:40 Sp3ct3r: 00:56:136 (56136|0,56136|5) - delete if following vocals
07:40 Sp3ct3r: 00:56:022 (56022|4,56022|1) - this will turn into a Long Note (LN) if such. LN will be 2/4
07:43 HanzeR: ok did all that ^^
07:44 Sp3ct3r: basically, recheck the chorus with 25% playback
07:46 HanzeR: haha yaeh i see what you mean
07:46 HanzeR: ok
07:49 Sp3ct3r: 00:45:831 (45831|0,47663|0) - umm, cut off?
07:50 HanzeR: i dont see it >>
07:50 HanzeR: what do you mean
07:50 Sp3ct3r: between those LNs were cut
07:51 Sp3ct3r: might want to minimize
07:51 Sp3ct3r: it's the highlighted blue
07:52 HanzeR: ohh ok well i fixed it i think >>

SPOILER

thanks for being awesome ^^
Niko-nyan
1,990 posts
Joined June 2011
Niko-nyan
booo
*runs
irc mod
HARDER PLEASE D:
HanzeR
921 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
HanzeR

Frans Niko wrote:

booo
*runs
irc mod
HARDER PLEASE D:
SPOILER
01:44 HanzeR: :D ok !
01:45 Frans Niko: 00:26:594 - why finish at the red line? try to make the slider/long note finish at the white line
01:46 Frans Niko: 00:52:243 - i think to hard for newbie player (just delete it and add circle there)
01:47 HanzeR: ok did both these
01:48 Frans Niko: (anyway that still easy diff lol)
01:52 Frans Niko: hard : make it harder please
01:52 *Frans Niko >w<
01:52 HanzeR: ;w;
01:52 HanzeR: ahah i can hardly play it already
01:53 *Frans Niko is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/232025 Rissyu - uni [Hard]] <osu!mania> |7K|
01:55 HanzeR: nice !
01:56 Frans Niko: need more Long Note
01:56 Frans Niko: D:
01:56 Frans Niko: must i post at forum? *runs
01:56 HanzeR: loll
01:56 HanzeR: yeah !!

thanks a lot for mod !!!
Hanyuu
2,223 posts
Joined February 2009
Hanyuu
Hi :D

Easy:

00:03:694 needs a note with a clap here, spacebar seems good
00:04:610 (4610|6) - add clap sound
00:08:732 Clap seems missing here too
00:15:602 (15602|0) - really needs a note here on the 7th key
00:16:060 (16060|3) - This Hold doesnt really fit. The beep is way short. Better turn the Hold start into a normal note and use Holds for the guitar part after that :P
01:17:892 (77892|6) - This hold is half a beat too long, end on white tick. If you want add another one where it ends
00:27:052 needs a note with a clap here
00:38:503 finish here missing
00:56:136 (56136|0) - add clap
01:03:465 (63465|6) - ^
----
Ill stop pointing out hitsounds because i dont wanna check every single note and the song repeats itself here but i think by not you got the main idea :P

01:36:670 (96670|2) - This part would be so much better if this hold was changed to 3 notes
2:09:418 add note
02:23:846 (143846|1) - This hold is half a beat too long, end on white tick. If you want add another one where it ends
02:34:152 (154152|0,154381|5,154610|2,154839|4,155068|1,155297|3) - i think you could arrange this part better to make the last 2 objects stand out more from the rest~

Normal:

Some places i pointed out in the easy are the same here.

00:19:266 (19266|6) - 3 holds are not fitting the music here. 2 is better
00:22:930 (22930|0,22930|6,22930|4) - ^
00:28:884 (28884|0,28884|6) - They arent fitting so good aswell
00:42:167 (42167|5) - forgot a whistle here :P
00:54:877 (54877|3) - delete this one
00:58:541 (58541|1) - ^
01:07:129 (67129|5,67358|5) - 2 claps would be nice here
01:51:327 (111327|3) - too long
01:51:785 (111785|1) - add a finish hitsound here
02:33:465 (153465|2) - better delete this one
02:35:297 (155297|2,155297|3,155297|4) - too many holds :P

Hard:


00:45:831 (45831|0,47778|0,48579|0,49037|0) - this is wrong. The holds should start at 45:831...46:747...47:663...48:579 to 49:495. Make sure you have the start points of the holds exactly at those times if you want to put a pattern like this.

00:51:785 (51785|1,51900|2,51900|5,52014|3,52014|4,52129|1,52129|6,52243|0) - hitsounds and notes are lacking here:
Add another note here 00:51:785 (51785|4) - with clap sound
00:52:129 (52129|6) - add clap
00:52:243 (52243|4) - add note with clap

01:29:228 (89228|2) - delete this note, and move this one 01:29:228 (89228|3) - to the 4th key, spacebar
01:36:212 (96212|0,96213|5) - one of those 2 notes feels useless to me

1:51:327 I think this part is not fitting too well here. This place is actually nice for a little speedup trick ... Add a single note here on the 4th key 01:51:327 (111327|3) - Add an inherited timing section at 1:51:327 with a custom slider velocity multiplier 2,4x and add another inherited timing section at 1:51:633 with a multiplier of 0,7x (change the beatsnap divisor to 1/3 to set this timing section)

1:54:762 clap missing here
1:58:426 add 2 notes here.. one of them has a clap
1:58:655 ^
01:58:655 (118655|1) - remove the clap from here since the previous added notes and let this one stay for bass
2:02:091 need a clap note
2:05:755 add 2 notes here.. one of them has a clap
02:07:816 (127816|5) - remove the clap from here and put another note at the same place
02:09:762 (129762|3) - this hold seems off
02:13:312 add note here
02:20:411 (140411|0) - add another note here next to it
02:33:465 (153465|2) - delete this one
02:35:297 (155297|2,155297|4) - better if those 2 are deleted aswell. they seem to sound for nothing


Great job overall on the map! :) It's fun to play allthough it has still a few flaws in it. But im sure if you polish it up a little more it will be great and good for ranking aswell.
Try to check the hitsounds through all your difficulties though. Try not to miss a single clap sound, its sometimes on the red ticks aswell as i pointed it out.

Good luck on the map! ;)
HanzeR
921 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
HanzeR

Hanyuu wrote:

Hi :D

Easy:

00:03:694 needs a note with a clap here, spacebar seems good fixed !
00:04:610 (4610|6) - add clap sound yup
00:08:732 Clap seems missing here too ok
00:15:602 (15602|0) - really needs a note here on the 7th key ok
00:16:060 (16060|3) - This Hold doesnt really fit. The beep is way short. Better turn the Hold start into a normal note and use Holds for the guitar part after that :P ah ok
01:17:892 (77892|6) - This hold is half a beat too long, end on white tick. If you want add another one where it ends ok
00:27:052 needs a note with a clap here ok
00:38:503 finish here missing fixed
00:56:136 (56136|0) - add clap fixed
01:03:465 (63465|6) - ^ fixed
----
Ill stop pointing out hitsounds because i dont wanna check every single note and the song repeats itself here but i think by not you got the main idea :P

01:36:670 (96670|2) - This part would be so much better if this hold was changed to 3 notes ok!
2:09:418 add note woops x.x
02:23:846 (143846|1) - This hold is half a beat too long, end on white tick. If you want add another one where it ends fixed
02:34:152 (154152|0,154381|5,154610|2,154839|4,155068|1,155297|3) - i think you could arrange this part better to make the last 2 objects stand out more from the rest~ ok! made this part cooler :D

Normal:

Some places i pointed out in the easy are the same here.

00:19:266 (19266|6) - 3 holds are not fitting the music here. 2 is better fixed
00:22:930 (22930|0,22930|6,22930|4) - ^
00:28:884 (28884|0,28884|6) - They arent fitting so good aswell
00:42:167 (42167|5) - forgot a whistle here :P
00:54:877 (54877|3) - delete this one
00:58:541 (58541|1) - ^
01:07:129 (67129|5,67358|5) - 2 claps would be nice here
01:51:327 (111327|3) - too long
01:51:785 (111785|1) - add a finish hitsound here
02:33:465 (153465|2) - better delete this one
02:35:297 (155297|2,155297|3,155297|4) - too many holds :P

Hard:


00:45:831 (45831|0,47778|0,48579|0,49037|0) - this is wrong. The holds should start at 45:831...46:747...47:663...48:579 to 49:495. Make sure you have the start points of the holds exactly at those times if you want to put a pattern like this.

00:51:785 (51785|1,51900|2,51900|5,52014|3,52014|4,52129|1,52129|6,52243|0) - hitsounds and notes are lacking here:
Add another note here 00:51:785 (51785|4) - with clap sound
00:52:129 (52129|6) - add clap
00:52:243 (52243|4) - add note with clap

01:29:228 (89228|2) - delete this note, and move this one 01:29:228 (89228|3) - to the 4th key, spacebar
01:36:212 (96212|0,96213|5) - one of those 2 notes feels useless to me

1:51:327 I think this part is not fitting too well here. This place is actually nice for a little speedup trick ... Add a single note here on the 4th key 01:51:327 (111327|3) - Add an inherited timing section at 1:51:327 with a custom slider velocity multiplier 2,4x and add another inherited timing section at 1:51:633 with a multiplier of 0,7x (change the beatsnap divisor to 1/3 to set this timing section) woww thats so cool haha, added

1:54:762 clap missing here
1:58:426 add 2 notes here.. one of them has a clap
1:58:655 ^
01:58:655 (118655|1) - remove the clap from here since the previous added notes and let this one stay for bass
2:02:091 need a clap note
2:05:755 add 2 notes here.. one of them has a clap
02:07:816 (127816|5) - remove the clap from here and put another note at the same place
02:09:762 (129762|3) - this hold seems off
02:13:312 add note here
02:20:411 (140411|0) - add another note here next to it
02:33:465 (153465|2) - delete this one
02:35:297 (155297|2,155297|4) - better if those 2 are deleted aswell. they seem to sound for nothing

I fixed everything :D
Great job overall on the map! :) It's fun to play allthough it has still a few flaws in it. But im sure if you polish it up a little more it will be great and good for ranking aswell.
Try to check the hitsounds through all your difficulties though. Try not to miss a single clap sound, its sometimes on the red ticks aswell as i pointed it out.

Good luck on the map! ;)

Thanks so much for the mod !!!! I fixed just about every change you listed, it was so helpful x.x

thank you !!
Entozer
297 posts
Joined February 2010
Entozer
Hello~

General: Offset is at 00:00:018

Easy
HP = 6

00:14:216 (14216|3) - Change to single note?
00:14:674 (14674|2,14674|4) - Add notes if you did ^

00:23:376 (23376|2) - Remove? I'm not sure but I think you are following the vocals/synths for most of the part.

00:37:575 (37575|6,38033|0) - I think it's better if you map it like the previous ones (on the same lane as the previous notes) (00:37:575 (37575|5,38033|1) - )

-----nazi------
00:39:865 (39865|3) - Move two lanes to the left? (00:39:865 (39865|1) - )
00:40:323 (40323|2) - Move two lanes to the right? (00:40:323 (40323|4) - )
00:40:781 (40781|6) - Move to leftmost lane? (00:40:781 (40781|0) - )
00:41:239 (41239|4) - Move two lanes to the left? (00:41:239 (41239|2) - )
00:41:697 (41697|1) - Move three lanes to the right? (00:41:697 (41697|4) - )

http://puu.sh/2mXqu

00:43:071 (43071|6) - move two lanes to the left? (00:43:071 (43071|4) - )
00:43:529 (43529|3) - Move to leftmost lane? (00:43:529 (43529|0) - )
00:44:445 (44445|6) - Move to second lane from the left (00:44:445 (44445|1) - )

http://puu.sh/2mXqP
----end nazi----

00:45:819 (45819|0) - add note? (Looks more neat)

01:11:010 (71010|6) - Remove? (Again, not sure >< ) But if you don't want to remove it, then there are some parts that you should add a note with claps too.
01:14:674 (74674|6) - ^

01:20:857 (80857|1,81086|4,81315|3,81315|1,81544|6,81544|0,81773|3) - Change to http://puu.sh/2mXGg ? (I don't know why there are double notes there, unless I have bad headphones)

01:22:460 (82460|1) - move to the left

01:25:208 (85208|0,85666|4) - Move one lane to the right (same lane as previous notes)

01:29:788 (89788|6,90018|4) - Delete and change the note to hold? D: Like on 00:38:491 -

From 01:29:788 - to 01:35:743 - The leftmost lane is empty D: Maybe try to rearrange them like the previous part that I modded (Or in any variant you want. Alternating left and hand for the notes seems nice here)

01:36:659 (96659|5,96659|3,96659|1) - 3 notes looks a bit too much :x (Sorry Hanyuu)



01:58:185 (118185|2) - delete?
02:05:514 (125514|1) - ^
02:12:842 (132842|3) - ^

02:16:735 (136735|3) - Try to move this note to another column. It looks a bit weird since there are almost no consecutive notes throughout the whole song (except for 01:29:330 (89330|0) - which is understandable)
02:19:712 (139712|4) - ^

02:22:002 (142002|1) - Move one lane to the right?

02:32:079 (152079|6,152537|5,152995|4,153453|2) - This part is a bit too hard. (And it feels a bit weird because of the previous hold). Maybe you can delete 02:32:537 (152537|5,153453|2) - ?

If you did delete them, Move 02:32:995 (152995|4) - to spacebar

Normal
00:16:392 (16392|5) - Move one lane to the left?
00:17:880 (17880|1) - Delete? 3 looks a bit too much
00:18:338 - Add note at this time

00:27:727 (27727|4,27842|2,27956|3) - This sudden change of pattern is a bit hard (unless it was unintentional)

00:52:231 (52231|0) - This feels better if it is extended until 00:52:689 -

00:53:376 (53376|6) - Delete? (The four note feels a bit weird)
00:53:834 (53834|6) - Move to space

00:57:498 (57498|6,57956|6) - Same as ^

00:54:292 (54292|4) - Remove
00:54:407 (54407|4) - Place it here instead

00:54:979 (54979|4) - http://puu.sh/2mY8Q (Or any other pattern with that timing) I'm pretty sure you were following the vocals there, but there were some mistakes (like the double note here 00:55:208 (55208|2,55208|6) - )

00:58:643 (58643|3) - Change to http://puu.sh/2mYh2 ? (Having the double notes there feels a bit weird for me)

01:00:705 (60705|0) - delete?
01:00:934 (60934|0) - move one lane to the right
01:01:163 (61163|0) - move to space

01:01:506 (61506|1) - move to leftmost lane

01:02:193 (62193|3) - delete

01:02:880 (62880|6) - delete

01:03:338 (63338|5,63453|6) - move one lane to the left

01:04:598 (64598|2) - delete
01:04:941 (64941|1) - ^

01:05:170 (65170|3) - move one lane to the right
01:05:285 (65285|4) - delete

01:09:636 - add a note

01:13:987 (73987|6) - delete
01:13:987 (73987|2) - Move one lane to the left

01:20:628 - add a note

01:29:788 (89788|6,90018|5) - delete (Change to hold)

01:38:949 (98949|0) - I think it's better if this is a hold

01:40:094 - add a note

01:41:010 (101010|2) - remove?

01:51:315 (111315|3) - I think it's better if you extend it until 01:51:773 -

01:52:460 (112460|0) - move one lane to the right

01:52:918 (112918|6) - move to another lane, 01:53:033 -

01:54:750 (114750|6) - delete
01:57:155 (117155|5) - ^
01:58:185 (118185|3) - ^

02:03:224 (123224|6,123224|4) - remove one note (either)
02:03:567 (123567|5,123567|1) - ^

02:03:911 (123911|2) - remove
02:08:147 (128147|1) - ^

02:09:407 (129407|6) - ^
02:09:521 (129521|4) - ^

02:11:239 (131239|5) - ^
02:17:308 (137308|6) - ^

02:18:109 (138109|4) - ^
02:18:338 (138338|0) - ^

02:18:567 (138567|2) - ^

02:18:682 - Add note

02:18:796 (138796|6) - delete

02:30:247 - add a note

02:33:453 (153453|2) - remove

02:33:911 - add note

Hard
HP=8?
I will mod this soon ;_; Tired. Basically, try to keep the notes more organized so players can pinpoint which instrument they are. Also try to check each note carefully.
HanzeR
921 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
HanzeR

Entozer wrote:

Hello~

General: Offset is at 00:00:018 fixed !

Easy
HP = 6 ok !

00:14:216 (14216|3) - Change to single note? ok
00:14:674 (14674|2,14674|4) - Add notes if you did ^ ok

00:23:376 (23376|2) - Remove? I'm not sure but I think you are following the vocals/synths for most of the part. not sure what you mean here D:

00:37:575 (37575|6,38033|0) - I think it's better if you map it like the previous ones (on the same lane as the previous notes) (00:37:575 (37575|5,38033|1) - ) ok !

-----nazi------
00:39:865 (39865|3) - Move two lanes to the left? (00:39:865 (39865|1) - )
00:40:323 (40323|2) - Move two lanes to the right? (00:40:323 (40323|4) - )
00:40:781 (40781|6) - Move to leftmost lane? (00:40:781 (40781|0) - )
00:41:239 (41239|4) - Move two lanes to the left? (00:41:239 (41239|2) - )
00:41:697 (41697|1) - Move three lanes to the right? (00:41:697 (41697|4) - )

http://puu.sh/2mXqu

00:43:071 (43071|6) - move two lanes to the left? (00:43:071 (43071|4) - )
00:43:529 (43529|3) - Move to leftmost lane? (00:43:529 (43529|0) - )
00:44:445 (44445|6) - Move to second lane from the left (00:44:445 (44445|1) - )

http://puu.sh/2mXqP
----end nazi----
^did all this >>
00:45:819 (45819|0) - add note? (Looks more neat)
ok !
01:11:010 (71010|6) - Remove? (Again, not sure >< ) But if you don't want to remove it, then there are some parts that you should add a note with claps too. oooooooooh now i see what you mean, ok i'll go back and add claps now :D
01:14:674 (74674|6) - ^

01:20:857 (80857|1,81086|4,81315|3,81315|1,81544|6,81544|0,81773|3) - Change to http://puu.sh/2mXGg ? (I don't know why there are double notes there, unless I have bad headphones)
i dunno \:D/ fixed
01:22:460 (82460|1) - move to the left
ok !
01:25:208 (85208|0,85666|4) - Move one lane to the right (same lane as previous notes)
ok ~
01:29:788 (89788|6,90018|4) - Delete and change the note to hold? D: Like on 00:38:491 -
sure
From 01:29:788 - to 01:35:743 - The leftmost lane is empty D: Maybe try to rearrange them like the previous part that I modded (Or in any variant you want. Alternating left and hand for the notes seems nice here)
rearanged this section like before :D
01:36:659 (96659|5,96659|3,96659|1) - 3 notes looks a bit too much :x (Sorry Hanyuu)

ok

01:58:185 (118185|2) - delete?
02:05:514 (125514|1) - ^
02:12:842 (132842|3) - ^
changed all these
02:16:735 (136735|3) - Try to move this note to another column. It looks a bit weird since there are almost no consecutive notes throughout the whole song (except for 01:29:330 (89330|0) - which is understandable) my reasoning here is that the vocal hits the same note twice, i think i kept it like this in all diffs >>
02:19:712 (139712|4) - ^
oh woops, this is on accident>>
02:22:002 (142002|1) - Move one lane to the right?
ok
02:32:079 (152079|6,152537|5,152995|4,153453|2) - This part is a bit too hard. (And it feels a bit weird because of the previous hold). Maybe you can delete 02:32:537 (152537|5,153453|2) - ?

If you did delete them, Move 02:32:995 (152995|4) - to spacebar

Normal
00:16:392 (16392|5) - Move one lane to the left? ok
00:17:880 (17880|1) - Delete? 3 looks a bit too much oops acident>> fixed!!
00:18:338 - Add note at this time ok

00:27:727 (27727|4,27842|2,27956|3) - This sudden change of pattern is a bit hard (unless it was unintentional)
removed it :D
00:52:231 (52231|0) - This feels better if it is extended until 00:52:689 -

00:53:376 (53376|6) - Delete? (The four note feels a bit weird)
00:53:834 (53834|6) - Move to space

00:57:498 (57498|6,57956|6) - Same as ^

00:54:292 (54292|4) - Remove
00:54:407 (54407|4) - Place it here instead
fixed these ^
00:54:979 (54979|4) - http://puu.sh/2mY8Q (Or any other pattern with that timing) I'm pretty sure you were following the vocals there, but there were some mistakes (like the double note here 00:55:208 (55208|2,55208|6) - )
woops, ok
00:58:643 (58643|3) - Change to http://puu.sh/2mYh2 ? (Having the double notes there feels a bit weird for me)

01:00:705 (60705|0) - delete?
01:00:934 (60934|0) - move one lane to the right
01:01:163 (61163|0) - move to space

01:01:506 (61506|1) - move to leftmost lane

01:02:193 (62193|3) - delete
fixed all these ^
01:02:880 (62880|6) - delete
ohhh woops i didnt even catch that >>
01:03:338 (63338|5,63453|6) - move one lane to the left
that sounds cool :D ok
01:04:598 (64598|2) - delete
01:04:941 (64941|1) - ^

01:05:170 (65170|3) - move one lane to the right
01:05:285 (65285|4) - delete

01:09:636 - add a note

01:13:987 (73987|6) - delete
01:13:987 (73987|2) - Move one lane to the left

01:20:628 - add a note

01:29:788 (89788|6,90018|5) - delete (Change to hold)
fixed all^
01:38:949 (98949|0) - I think it's better if this is a hold

01:40:094 - add a note

01:41:010 (101010|2) - remove?

01:51:315 (111315|3) - I think it's better if you extend it until 01:51:773 -

01:52:460 (112460|0) - move one lane to the right

01:52:918 (112918|6) - move to another lane, 01:53:033 -

01:54:750 (114750|6) - delete
01:57:155 (117155|5) - ^
01:58:185 (118185|3) - ^

02:03:224 (123224|6,123224|4) - remove one note (either)
02:03:567 (123567|5,123567|1) - ^

02:03:911 (123911|2) - remove
02:08:147 (128147|1) - ^

02:09:407 (129407|6) - ^
02:09:521 (129521|4) - ^

02:11:239 (131239|5) - ^
02:17:308 (137308|6) - ^

02:18:109 (138109|4) - ^
02:18:338 (138338|0) - ^

02:18:567 (138567|2) - ^
delete delete delete ehe, fixed everything :D
02:18:682 - Add note

02:18:796 (138796|6) - delete

02:30:247 - add a note

02:33:453 (153453|2) - remove

02:33:911 - add note

Hard
HP=8? do you think it will make it funner? D: i hope not, i can barely pass it as it is orz/color]
I will mod this soon ;_; Tired. Basically, try to keep the notes more organized so players can pinpoint which instrument they are. Also try to check each note carefully.
Thank you so much for the mod!! so helpful, thankyou!!
Entozer
297 posts
Joined February 2010
Entozer
No Kudosu~ Just a light follow up.

easy
Try to keep the OD of all diffs the same (7)
00:22:918 - Missing note?
01:35:743 - ^

normal
00:49:598 (49598|1) - delete (no vocals here I think)
00:55:895 (55895|3,56124|1) - Move to some other place (making them a stair feels like they're part of the vocals). Preferably on the other hand side

01:20:628 - Missing note?

01:52:918 (112918|6) - move to 01:53:033 (113033|6) -

02:07:575 (127575|3) - delete? (no vocals I think)


02:18:567 (138567|1) - move to 02:18:682 - ?
HanzeR
921 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
HanzeR

Entozer wrote:

No Kudosu~ Just a light follow up.

easy
Try to keep the OD of all diffs the same (7) ok!
00:22:918 - Missing note? oops
01:35:743 - ^

normal
00:49:598 (49598|1) - delete (no vocals here I think) ok
00:55:895 (55895|3,56124|1) - Move to some other place (making them a stair feels like they're part of the vocals). Preferably on the other hand side
alright
01:20:628 - Missing note?
oops >>
01:52:918 (112918|6) - move to 01:53:033 (113033|6) -

02:07:575 (127575|3) - delete? (no vocals I think)


02:18:567 (138567|1) - move to 02:18:682 - ?
fixed these^
really cool ^^ thanks so much entozer!! :)
Cloudchaser
2,327 posts
Joined May 2012
Cloudchaser
i love the bg
HanzeR
921 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
HanzeR

-Cloudchaser wrote:

i love the bg
haha, miku is so cute >//<
Entozer
297 posts
Joined February 2010
Entozer
(Just passing by again. Are you willing to continue this map? \o/)
HanzeR
921 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
HanzeR

Entozer wrote:

(Just passing by again. Are you willing to continue this map? \o/)
Yessr!! very much so. I've been meaning to talk to a few people for mods ~~
rickyboi
rickyboi
Did an IRC mod about patterns on Hard diff.

derp
21:09 HanzeR: hey rickyman
21:09 rickyboi: hey hanzerdude
21:09 HanzeR: haha
21:10 HanzeR: if you ever get a chance sometime could i bother you to take a look at my map
21:10 *HanzeR is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/232356 Rissyu - uni]
21:10 rickyboi: I actually checked it yesterday
21:10 rickyboi: haha
21:10 HanzeR: oh
21:10 HanzeR: lol
21:14 HanzeR: i think itd be really cool to get a mania map ranked, so if you have any suggesions let me know /o/
21:14 rickyboi: it's cool
21:14 rickyboi: I just suck
21:14 rickyboi: no warm up yet though
21:14 HanzeR: haha]
21:16 rickyboi: 00:19:483 (19483|4,19712|4) -
21:16 rickyboi: i suggest you put this into a different row
21:17 HanzeR: `would it work better if i just moved 00:19:483 (19483|5) - to 5
21:17 rickyboi: repeating patterns aren't that good on this type of map.
21:17 rickyboi: what was 5 again?
21:17 rickyboi: haha
21:17 rickyboi: 5 is spacebar ?
21:17 rickyboi: or the blue one on the right?
21:18 HanzeR: its pink on my screen
21:18 HanzeR: but yeah
21:18 HanzeR: the 6th key
21:18 HanzeR: lol
21:18 rickyboi: yea mean you want to move it to 6 right?
21:18 rickyboi: 5 to 6?
21:18 HanzeR: mhm
21:18 rickyboi: I still don't understand how the numbers work
21:19 HanzeR: its like
21:19 HanzeR: 1 is 0
21:19 HanzeR: and it goes up from there
21:19 HanzeR: lol
21:19 HanzeR: so 7 is 6
21:19 rickyboi: so which one is 0.
21:19 rickyboi: left or right
21:19 HanzeR: left
21:19 rickyboi: I see
21:19 rickyboi: okay
21:19 HanzeR: its silly aha
21:19 rickyboi: so from 4 to 5
21:20 rickyboi: yea it works
21:20 rickyboi: just don't repeat on the same row too much
21:20 rickyboi: it'll look like a bms chart.
21:20 rickyboi: haha
21:20 HanzeR: haha ok
21:21 rickyboi: usually repeats are done once only
21:21 rickyboi: unless the music only has 1 type of tune
21:21 rickyboi: or chord
21:21 rickyboi: haha
21:21 rickyboi: then it repeated 3 or 4 times.
21:21 rickyboi: that's the only good time you'll use it.
21:22 rickyboi: 00:18:796 (18796|6) -
21:22 rickyboi: move that to 5 also
21:22 HanzeR: hm ok
21:22 HanzeR: its not too close to 00:18:338 (18338|5) - is it ?
21:22 rickyboi: nah it's fine
21:22 HanzeR: aity
21:23 rickyboi: 00:19:254 (19254|4) - move to 3
21:23 rickyboi: 00:22:460 (22460|6) - move to 5
21:23 rickyboi: 00:22:918 (22918|4) - move to 3
21:24 rickyboi: 00:26:353 (26353|0) - move to 1
21:24 rickyboi: 00:26:811 (26811|2) - move to 3
21:25 rickyboi: 00:30:247 (30247|6,30247|0,30247|4,30247|2,30247|3) - I'd prefer this to only have 3 notes
21:25 rickyboi: 5 seems a little too much
21:25 HanzeR: haha ok
21:25 rickyboi: 00:30:247 (30247|4,30247|2) - either remove these
21:25 HanzeR: should i just delete the space then
21:25 rickyboi: 00:30:247 (30247|6,30247|0) - or these
21:25 HanzeR: ait
21:26 rickyboi: 00:30:476 (30476|6,30476|4) - better if you put it on 2 and 5
21:26 rickyboi: 00:31:163 (31163|6) - starting from this part
21:27 rickyboi: notes repeating twice are bad.
21:27 rickyboi: imo
21:27 rickyboi: the third note might be played better if it was on a different row.
21:27 HanzeR: hmmmm
21:28 HanzeR: i could move 00:31:621 (31621|4) - to 4
21:28 HanzeR: and just do that for every one
21:28 HanzeR: of that pattern
21:28 rickyboi: yea
21:28 rickyboi: you could also move the others to space or to the pink notes.
21:28 rickyboi: whatever floats your boat.
21:29 rickyboi: 00:38:605 - you forgot to put a note here.
21:29 HanzeR: where
21:30 rickyboi: 00:38:720 (38720|2) - you might wanna put this on another row (preferrably on 1)
21:30 HanzeR: because thats on a blue line?
21:30 rickyboi: I heard a triple on the music
21:30 rickyboi: haha
21:30 rickyboi: you should definitely add a note
21:30 HanzeR: hmmm
21:30 HanzeR: ok
21:30 rickyboi: unless you were ignoring that on purpose
21:31 rickyboi: and was just following the bass and synth the whole time.
21:31 HanzeR: at 00:31:621 (31621|4) - right?
21:31 HanzeR: wait
21:31 HanzeR: 00:38:605
21:31 HanzeR: 00:38:605 (38605|2) -
21:31 HanzeR: lol
21:31 rickyboi: lol put a dash
21:31 rickyboi: haha
21:32 rickyboi: so I can click
21:32 rickyboi: I prefer it on 1
21:32 rickyboi: it's up to you though
21:32 rickyboi: just not on 3
21:32 rickyboi: i mean 2
21:32 rickyboi: fuck
21:32 rickyboi: this is annoying
21:32 rickyboi: haha
21:32 HanzeR: loll
21:32 HanzeR: it is
21:32 HanzeR: ok
21:33 rickyboi: http://puu.sh/2oTcO
21:33 rickyboi: this might help
21:33 rickyboi: haha
21:33 HanzeR: ok i did that
21:33 HanzeR: ohh is it in the vocal that you hear it
21:34 rickyboi: nah
21:34 HanzeR: now i see it lol ok
21:34 rickyboi: it's the synth
21:34 HanzeR: really
21:34 rickyboi: 00:40:323 (40323|5) - move to 0
21:34 rickyboi: I have good heaphones
21:34 rickyboi: haha I can hear small details
21:34 rickyboi: lol
21:34 HanzeR: i can tell lol
21:35 rickyboi: 00:42:842 (42842|6) - move to 5
21:35 rickyboi: 00:43:071 (43071|4) - move to 1
21:35 rickyboi: no scratch that
21:35 rickyboi: don't move it to 1
21:35 rickyboi: move it to 4
21:36 HanzeR: it was on 4 right
21:37 rickyboi: oh right
21:37 rickyboi: I meant 3
21:37 rickyboi: I'm so confused
21:37 rickyboi: haha
21:37 rickyboi: I have to recount
21:37 rickyboi: god damn it
21:37 HanzeR: its sooo annoying haha
21:37 HanzeR: i messed up like 1/2 of hanyuus mod because i counted wrong
21:37 HanzeR: orz
21:38 rickyboi: 00:56:582 (56582|5) - I'd suggest you delete this note if you were following the vocals only
21:38 HanzeR: ok
21:40 rickyboi: 00:58:185 (58185|1) - you could extend this to a hold up to 00:58:414 -
21:40 rickyboi: click on the note then hold shift
21:40 rickyboi: then drag it
21:40 rickyboi: to convert it into a hold
21:40 HanzeR: oh cool
21:40 HanzeR: ok
21:41 rickyboi: 00:57:498 - starting from here, you might wanna fix that pattern a bit.
21:42 rickyboi: maybe something like this?
21:42 rickyboi: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/675191
21:43 HanzeR: that looks neat
21:43 HanzeR: ok
21:43 rickyboi: 00:58:643 (58643|3) - also this part
21:43 rickyboi: note density is messed up
21:44 rickyboi: if you're going with 1, 2, 1, 1, 2 notes
21:44 rickyboi: doesn't really play good
21:44 rickyboi: better if you the 2 notes on the white line
21:44 rickyboi: and red lines
21:44 rickyboi: blue lines are better with less notes than the red and white line
21:44 HanzeR: ohh i see
21:44 HanzeR: yeah
21:44 HanzeR: ok
21:45 rickyboi: so starting from white (2, 1, 1, 1, 2)?
21:45 rickyboi: might be good
21:45 rickyboi: or 2,1,2,1,2
21:45 rickyboi: your choice.
21:46 rickyboi: 00:59:788 - put a note here
21:46 rickyboi: 01:00:018 - and here
21:46 rickyboi: effect sound
21:46 rickyboi: is too visible to be left out
21:46 rickyboi: haha
21:46 HanzeR: yeah
21:46 HanzeR: aha
21:46 HanzeR: ok
21:47 rickyboi: 01:03:682 (63682|3,63682|4,63796|2,63796|3) - I don't really have a problem playing this
21:47 rickyboi: but this pattern is pretty ugly if imo
21:48 rickyboi: 01:03:796 (63796|2) - might look better if you move this to 4
21:48 HanzeR: so it repeats?
21:48 HanzeR: or
21:48 rickyboi: yea repeats
21:48 HanzeR: ok
21:48 rickyboi: or you could
21:48 rickyboi: not repeat the space button at all
21:48 rickyboi: haha
21:49 HanzeR: haha ok
21:49 rickyboi: both works good, your picl
21:49 rickyboi: pick
21:49 rickyboi: 01:05:285 (65285|4) - remove? since you're following vocals again
21:49 HanzeR: aight
21:49 rickyboi: 01:07:117 - yea add a note here.
21:50 HanzeR: brb 1 min , getting a call
21:50 rickyboi: ok
21:50 rickyboi: 01:07:804 (67804|0) - since this is pretty much a repeat of the intro, I guess you can fix this by yourself already.
21:52 rickyboi: 01:40:094 (100094|2) - starting from here, pattern looks pretty messed up. I didn't exepect it to be barrage of 1/4s
21:52 rickyboi: since I couldn't read it properly.
21:54 HanzeR: a well fuck ive gotta run , small emergency , post and ill send you some cute star points
21:54 HanzeR: thanks so much man, im really sorry
21:54 rickyboi: haha
21:54 rickyboi: let's continue this on another time

Just message me again if you wanna continue from where we left off.
chonicle
201 posts
Joined August 2009
chonicle
From DJPOP's modding queue~

[EASY]
00:28:872 (28872|0) - This hold can be shorter. The 1 sound seems to be shorter then previous holds. (White line to red line)
01:20:170 (80170|0) - ^
02:32:079 (152079|6,152995|3) - um... don't overlap holds there?
02:35:285 (155285|3) - Final note. Seems a short 1. Consider just put a note there? Or a shorter hold?

[NORMAL]
00:14:216 (14216|5) - Shorter holds?
00:52:231 (52231|0) - Single note
01:20:170 (80170|0,80170|4) - Shorter holds?
01:40:666 (100666|6) - move to 01:40:781 (100781|6) -
02:12:842 (132842|0,132842|3) - Don't need a hold there.
02:35:285 (155285|2,155285|4) - Same with easy

[HARD]
00:14:216 (14216|5) - Singe note better?
00:45:819 (45819|0,46392|3,46392|4,46621|1,46621|6) - This part would play better if the hold is in the middle and we still have a symmetric pattern
01:36:201 (96201|4) - Don't need a hold there.
02:23:147 (143147|3) - What's this for? Maybe start at the white line after?
02:35:285 (155285|3,155285|5,155285|1) - Same with easy

[GENERAL]
Hard should be a insane. Easy should be <2.5 star. Also try to use pitch relevance more :D
HanzeR
921 posts
Joined May 2012
Topic Starter
HanzeR

chonicle wrote:

From DJPOP's modding queue~

[EASY]
00:28:872 (28872|0) - This hold can be shorter. The 1 sound seems to be shorter then previous holds. (White line to red line) ok
01:20:170 (80170|0) - ^
02:32:079 (152079|6,152995|3) - um... don't overlap holds there? ok i changed this part a little
02:35:285 (155285|3) - Final note. Seems a short 1. Consider just put a note there? Or a shorter hold? i followed when the entire song faded out \:D/

[NORMAL]
00:14:216 (14216|5) - Shorter holds? ok
00:52:231 (52231|0) - Single note k
01:20:170 (80170|0,80170|4) - Shorter holds? ok
01:40:666 (100666|6) - move to 01:40:781 (100781|6) - oops, fixed
02:12:842 (132842|0,132842|3) - Don't need a hold there. ok
02:35:285 (155285|2,155285|4) - Same with easy

[HARD]
00:14:216 (14216|5) - Singe note better? ok !
00:45:819 (45819|0,46392|3,46392|4,46621|1,46621|6) - This part would play better if the hold is in the middle and we still have a symmetric pattern ill talk to some people and get their opinion too, i kind of like it how it is as i think its a little more challenging this way
01:36:201 (96201|4) - Don't need a hold there. sounds cool, ok
02:23:147 (143147|3) - What's this for? Maybe start at the white line after? fixed
02:35:285 (155285|3,155285|5,155285|1) - Same with easy

[GENERAL]
Hard should be a insane. Easy should be <2.5 star. Also try to use pitch relevance more :D

Thanks so much for mod chonicle !!!! helped me fix a lot of things ^^
rickyboi
rickyboi
Here's the mod continuation. No kds please.

lel
23:22 HanzeR: hey rickyy, if you get a chance sometime today wanna keep going with this
23:22 *HanzeR is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/232025 Rissyu - uni]
23:23 rickyboi: okay
23:23 rickyboi: wait a sec
23:23 rickyboi: I see you're stuck again
23:23 rickyboi: you haven't fixed some of things I told you.
23:23 rickyboi: lol
23:23 HanzeR: ohh really
23:23 HanzeR: hm
23:23 rickyboi: yes
23:23 rickyboi: go read my mod again
23:23 rickyboi: haha
23:24 rickyboi: then I'll come back to you when you're done.
23:24 HanzeR: ok :D
00:09 HanzeR: i -think- i fixed everything, i wasnt sure what you wanted me to do with the 1/4s at the end though
00:09 rickyboi: ahh
00:09 rickyboi: okay
00:10 rickyboi: stand by
00:13 rickyboi: okay where did we stop?
00:14 HanzeR: 001:40:208 (100208|6) -
00:14 HanzeR: heree
00:14 HanzeR: you said you couldnt read the 1/4ths
00:14 HanzeR: or werent expecting them atleast*
00:14 rickyboi: oh
00:14 rickyboi: I'll get right to it
00:14 rickyboi: just checking a few stuff
00:14 rickyboi: 00:32:995 (32995|0) -
00:14 HanzeR: oops
00:14 rickyboi: 00:37:117 (37117|5) -
00:15 rickyboi: 00:38:491 (38491|4,38605|3,38720|2) - this part also, I tested it out. Didn't really came out that good
00:16 rickyboi: so I'm suggesting this http://puu.sh/2qIly
00:16 HanzeR: aha looks good ok
00:17 rickyboi: 00:56:582 (56582|5) -
00:17 rickyboi: I think I already told you to delete that
00:17 rickyboi: since you were following the vocals on that part.
00:17 HanzeR: ok
00:18 rickyboi: the hihat sound doesn't seem to be heard that much
00:18 rickyboi: so it won't affect the removal .
00:18 rickyboi: 01:13:300 (73300|4,73414|6,73529|4,73643|6,73758|4) -
00:19 rickyboi: I think this looks better http://puu.sh/2qIpM
00:19 HanzeR: yup
00:19 rickyboi: 01:16:964 (76964|2) - same also for this
00:19 rickyboi: consistency is good
00:20 rickyboi: 01:21:544 (81544|0,81544|2,81544|6,81544|3,81544|4) - reduce 2 notes.
00:20 rickyboi: 01:30:018 (90018|4) - move to 3
00:21 rickyboi: 01:36:201 (96201|5) - convert this to a hold extending up to the next note.
00:21 HanzeR: i think i had it as a hold but someone told me to delete it
00:21 HanzeR: lol
00:21 HanzeR: i like it better this way though
00:21 HanzeR: as a hold*
00:22 rickyboi: ahha
00:22 rickyboi: well it's your choice.
00:22 rickyboi: it definitely fits as a hold though
00:23 rickyboi: 01:39:865 (99865|4) - move this to 5
00:24 rickyboi: 01:40:094 (100094|2) - either delete or move to 5 or 6
00:24 rickyboi: 01:40:094 (100094|2) - either delete or move to 6
00:25 rickyboi: 01:40:094 (100094|0) - starting from this part. I'd suggest this http://puu.sh/2qIzm
00:26 rickyboi: or this
00:26 rickyboi: http://puu.sh/2qIAq
00:26 rickyboi: you may pick or maybe do something better haha.
00:26 HanzeR: haha ok
00:27 HanzeR: should i move 01:39:636 (99636|2) - somewhere else then
00:27 HanzeR: i put it on 2 for now
00:27 rickyboi: http://puu.sh/2qIBT this one also looks good
00:27 rickyboi: put that on 2
00:28 HanzeR: if i do the last one should i put it on 0
00:29 rickyboi: do what
00:29 HanzeR: http://puu.sh/2qIBT
00:29 HanzeR: 01:39:636 (99636|0) -
00:30 rickyboi: wasn't that previously on 6?
00:30 rickyboi: or was it originally on 0
00:30 HanzeR: it was on 4 before i think
00:31 rickyboi: well, where ever it goes it's fine
00:31 HanzeR: haha ok
00:32 rickyboi: 01:43:071 (103071|3,103071|2,103185|3,103185|4) -
00:32 rickyboi: lol this is hard to execute.
00:33 HanzeR: aha
00:33 HanzeR: ok
00:33 rickyboi: maybe this? http://puu.sh/2qILy
00:34 rickyboi: 01:43:529 (103529|0) - also this part.
00:34 rickyboi: god this probably one of the things that are very HARD to SS
00:34 rickyboi: it's very easy to miss
00:34 HanzeR: aaah
00:34 HanzeR: yeah
00:34 HanzeR: hm
00:34 rickyboi: since it goes back to the previous place after the 3rd note.
00:34 HanzeR: i stole the idea from love fighter /o/
00:34 HanzeR: aha
00:35 rickyboi: but love fighter used it smoothly
00:35 rickyboi: 5/6 notes then return to previous place.
00:35 rickyboi: start ladder again
00:35 rickyboi: I'm gonna suggest something wait a sec
00:35 HanzeR: mmm
00:36 rickyboi: http://puu.sh/2qIPZ ?
00:38 HanzeR: that looks neat ok
00:38 HanzeR: the 1/4 note spacebar isnt too mean you think?
00:38 rickyboi: hmm
00:38 rickyboi: indeed
00:38 rickyboi: haha
00:38 rickyboi: then let's change again
00:39 HanzeR: haha
00:39 rickyboi: is it just me ? or did I lose the ability to move multiple highlighted notes at a time?
00:39 HanzeR: hold control
00:39 HanzeR: i think
00:39 rickyboi: OHH
00:40 rickyboi: okay
00:42 rickyboi: http://puu.sh/2qIY9
00:43 HanzeR: ok
00:44 rickyboi: 01:52:460 (112460|0) - this part
00:44 rickyboi: I think we've already encountered something like this before.
00:44 rickyboi: note density
00:44 rickyboi: blue lines suck when they have more notes than white and red lines
00:45 HanzeR: mm ok
00:45 rickyboi: 01:55:208 (115208|1) - delete
00:46 rickyboi: 02:02:537 (122537|6) - you forgot a clap here.
00:46 HanzeR: aa
00:47 rickyboi: 02:08:605 (128605|1) - starting from here. http://puu.sh/2qJ6l
00:47 rickyboi: I think you can see what's wrong there already
00:48 rickyboi: the left side used to repeat the same pattern too much
00:48 HanzeR: yeah
00:48 rickyboi: while the right side was changing it's flow drastically
00:48 rickyboi: You can either fix the left side or make the right side repeat the same fate as the left one.
00:48 rickyboi: lol
00:49 rickyboi: 02:19:140 (139140|0) - move to 4
00:49 rickyboi: 02:19:254 = add a note on 0
00:50 rickyboi: 02:19:254 - add a note on 0
00:50 HanzeR: is this any better http://puu.sh/2qJ9d
00:50 HanzeR: so the left side pattern goes from inside outside inside
00:50 rickyboi: yea it's good
00:50 HanzeR: ok
00:51 rickyboi: 02:08:491 - I think you noticed it already, but this has only one note.
00:51 rickyboi: All the others have 2 notes
00:51 rickyboi: lol
00:51 HanzeR: oh yeah
00:51 HanzeR: orz
00:51 HanzeR: aha
00:52 rickyboi: http://puu.sh/2qJdm
00:53 HanzeR: oh
00:53 HanzeR: yeah
00:53 HanzeR: i did those
00:53 rickyboi: ok good
00:53 rickyboi: 02:20:857 (140857|0) - this part
00:53 rickyboi: add a note on 6
00:53 rickyboi: then delete this 02:21:086 (141086|6) -
00:54 HanzeR: yeh that looks better
00:54 HanzeR: ok
00:54 rickyboi: 02:23:147 (143147|6,143262|5) - move 1 row the left.
00:55 HanzeR: a ok
00:56 rickyboi: 02:30:247 (150247|1,150361|4,150361|3,150476|5,150590|3,150590|2) - note density
00:56 HanzeR: aa
00:57 HanzeR: what about this http://puu.sh/2qJjA
00:57 rickyboi: sure
00:57 HanzeR: ok /o/
00:58 rickyboi: 02:33:224 (153224|0,153453|1,153682|0) - forgetting claps aren't we?
00:58 rickyboi: the first note had it thogh
00:58 rickyboi: but besied it
00:58 rickyboi: haha
00:58 HanzeR: yeah woops ><
00:58 rickyboi: beside
00:58 rickyboi: god I'm sleepy
00:58 rickyboi: :<
00:59 HanzeR: aw :[
00:59 rickyboi: 02:35:285 (155285|1,155285|5) - maybe extend it same as the space's lenght?
01:00 HanzeR: i was actually wondering if i should shorten it to 02:35:743 -
01:00 HanzeR: because thats where the bass cuts off
01:00 rickyboi: that also works
01:00 rickyboi: your pick again
01:00 HanzeR: haha ok
01:01 rickyboi: 02:35:056 (155056|0) - move to 2, add a note on 4
01:01 rickyboi: welp, that's it for the hard.
01:01 HanzeR: yay \:D/
01:02 rickyboi: you might wanna recheck your blue lines
01:02 rickyboi: because the others definitely had more than red and white.
01:02 rickyboi: I just skipped through it
01:02 rickyboi: haha
01:02 HanzeR: right
01:02 HanzeR: haha
01:02 HanzeR: ill go through it again ^^
01:02 rickyboi: okay
01:02 HanzeR: anyways
01:02 rickyboi: welp that's it
01:02 rickyboi: I won't mod normal and easy
01:03 rickyboi: LOL
01:03 HanzeR: thanks so much haha, savelog and post :D
01:03 HanzeR: yeah np lol
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From 01:26:124 - to 01:29:101 - I think It's better if the lines on the white ticks have two notes to them (drums) instead of on the synth. The synth has no change so it feels a bit weird for it to suddenly have two notes
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