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Lazy Town - You Are A Pirate

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Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Mashley
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 15 May 2009 at 09:57:36

Artist: Lazy Town
Title: You Are A Pirate
BPM: 120
Filesize: 5979kb
Play Time: 01:48
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.79 stars, 221 notes)
  2. Larto is a Pirate (4.85 stars, 236 notes)
  3. Lazy (3.25 stars, 123 notes)
Download: Lazy Town - You Are A Pirate
Download: Lazy Town - You Are A Pirate (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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LAND HOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!
Anway, this map is made because Larto requested it and this deserves a decent map. Feel free to make your own difficulties.

24/04/09 - Larto is a Pirate added. Did Sushi971' modding. Did osuplayer111's modding.
25/04/09 - Did Doomsday93's modding. Did JarJarJacob's modding. Did MarioBros777's modding. Changed name of Normal to Lazy. Did DJPop's modding.
26/04/09 - Did animask's modding.
28/04/09 - Did Sir_Minelli's modding.
29/04/09 - Did fufe's modding.
01/05/09 - Did Gabi's modding Did Gens' modding.
02/05/09 - Added fufe's video. Did Metroid's modding and fixed video offset. Did Starrodkirby86's modding.
09/05/09 - Did Takuma's modding. Did Hara's modding. Added new background.
10/05/09 - Did kingcobra52's modding.
11/05/09 - Did CheeseWarlock's modding
14/05/09 - Did RemmyX25's modding
15/05/09 - Did kingcobra52's modding rank now plz
Last edited by Mashley , edited 28 times in total.
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
Download: Lazy Town - You Are A Pirate (Agent Spin Here) [Larto is a Pirate].osu
Sushi
osu! Alumni
2,989 posts
Joined October 2008
Sushi
As always, I'll Nazi mod

First of all, remap the breaks for each difficulty

[Normal]

00:07:29 (3) - align with end of (2)
00:08:12 (1) - align with previous (4)
00:10:62 (2) - align with (1)
00:20:95 (2) - align! [Nazi of Nazi]
00:27:95 (1) - I feel bad about the beginning of this...
00:33:12 (5,6) - guess what? align with previous (4), make (5) and (6) stack on start and finish of previous slider
01:01:62 (4) - align with previous (1), <be carefull with wrong DS approximate>
01:17:12 (5,6) - deja vu? align with previous (4), make (5) and (6) stack on start and finish of previous slider

[Hard]
00:05:12 (3,4,5) - try to center the end of (3) and (4,5)
00:08:12 (1) - Align with previous (7)
00:09:45 (8) - Align with end of previous slider
00:27:95 (1) - I feel bad about the beginning of this...
00:31:04 (1) - align with (1) ?
00:33:62 (4) - align with previous (1)
00:34:95 (5) - put this on 1/4 beat, will you?
00:36:95 (3) - ^
00:44:12 (1,2,3 ....) - 1 grid right
01:01:45 (7,8) - 1 grid left to be well centered
01:11:45 (1) - align with previous (4)
01:15:04 (1) - align with (1) ?
01:18:95 (5) - deja vu? put this on 1/4 beat, will you?
01:21:00 (3) - ^
01:32:95 (6,7,8,9,10) - 1 grid up.
01:45:62 (1) - 1 grid left

[Larto's a Pir-*shot*]
01:06:62 (2,3,4,5) - I feel there's a problem in this alignment
01:15:00 (3,4,5) - i feel that the timing is not correct... but...


Nice map. I lol'd
I star'd too
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
[Normal]

00:11:626 - Remove this break.
00:16:12 (1) - 2 square up.
00:27:79 (1) - I don't like spinner starts on a blue line. Start it on a white line. -> 00:27:626
00:51:45 (4,5) - 1 square to the right?
00:55:626 - Remove this break too.
00:59:45 (1) - 1 square down.
01:01:62 (4) - 1 square up.
01:48:12 (1) - End this spinner here -> 01:49:626 ... sounds better.

[Hard]

00:12:126 - Remove this break.
00:22:12 (1) - 1 square up.
00:27:79 (1) - I don't like spinner starts on a blue line. Start it on a white line. -> 00:27:626
00:38:29 (1) - ^
00:52:12 (1) - 3 to the left?
00:56:626 - Remove this break.
01:48:12 (1) - End this spinner here -> 01:49:626 ... sounds better.

[Larto is a pirate]

00:32:12 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This part is hard to read.
00:56:501 - Remove this break.
01:03:45 (1) - 2 up.

That's all. Star'd !
Doomsday
osu! Alumni
1,960 posts
Joined July 2008
Doomsday
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Jarby
2,963 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby
Normal:

I don't like tick rate 3. Keep it at 1, this is the only difficulty with a different rick rate. Too many spinners, replace some with sliders.

00:17:45 (3) - 1/6 forward.
00:27:62 (1) - Move forward. Shorten. Or replace with a break. Add a circle where it used to end.
00:32:12 (3) - New combo.
00:38:12 (1) - Break time if you didn't add it before. Same deal with circle adding.
00:55:12 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:12:12 (1) - Breaks and stuff with circles.
01:16:12 (3) - New combo.

Hard:

00:27:62 (1) - Spinner stuff. Circle.
00:31:04 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:37:12 (4) - Shorten (1/6?) and remove repeats.
00:41:12 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:12:12 (1) - Spinnercirclewqkhndksj
01:15:04 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:21:12 (4) - 00:37:12 (4) - Shorten (1/6?) and remove repeats.
01:28:12 (1) - Spinner.
01:48:12 (1) - Remove.(?)

Larto is not a Pirate:

00:13:62 (1) - Raise volume.
00:38:12 (1,2) - What...what is this?
00:57:62 (1) - Raise volume.
00:58:12() - Far too many combos in this section.
Lilac
Elite Mapper
1,515 posts
Joined December 2008
Lilac
Basically what JJJ said up there, replace some of the spinners with sliders... Don't worry, there's more! (Sorry, If JJJ has already touched base with some of these things.)

[Normal]:
00:07:25 (3,4) - Spacing issues, fix them.
00:17:50 (3) - Resnap to timeline and spacing.
Just a thing, remember to put breaks whenever you can, so that not only gives player a rest, it also holds the HP Drain so it doesn't lose any.
1:06:75 (2) - The placemen of the slider is very awkward in both spacing and time line because if you snap, it won't work...
1:48:12 (Spinner) - Oh come on... As if there wasn't enough spinners in this level. Get rid of it and/or replace.

[Hard]:
I actually have a suggestion, whether you like it or not, that is up to you. This applies to the combo in 01:16:12 & 00:32:12... which is if you arrange it like this in the attachment below... This is really up to you but I think it makes it more interesting.

Other that that I can't see anything wrong except to put breaks where you can since the HP Drain is significant in here.

[Larto is a Pirate!?!]: (Oh god no... Someone protect the children!!!)
Nothing really comes into mind... (Probably the thought of Larto being a pira-- *shot*)

Just watch out for the end because you don't get full HP no matter what.

I love this song, I don't know why. But you get a star.

MetaSlash
721 posts
Joined October 2008
MetaSlash
Star for you^^ I love this song! :D
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
~Lazy~
Fine.

~Hard~
00:32:126
01:17:001
I prefer this pattern.

00:43:376 - (8)
Note don't line with (9)-(10)

01:01:376 - (7)
It's better by snap on red tick.

01:48:126 - (S)
Move ending point backward 1/3.

~Larto~
Crazy... but fine :\


+Star
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
Download: Lazy Town - You Are A Pirate (Agent Spin Here) [Larto is a Pirate].osu
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
Hard
00:44:12 (1,2) - Stack on fading 3 and 4
00:44:79 (5,6) - Aligns with 10
01:18:87 (4) - This feels like you copied and pasted it around here
01:30:12 - Add Kiai time here? and for the other difficulties maybe?
01:43:62 (10) - Align with 8?

Lazy
00:46:12 (1) - End on white tick?
00:49:62 (4) - Align with end of 3
01:02:12 (1) - Align with 2
01:04:12 (1) - End on white tick
01:06:79 (2) - Feels like there's a note missing here
01:08:12 (2) - End at white tick
01:31:12 (2) - Lyrics don't seem to compliment this as much
01:33:459 (2) - End it there on 1/6th divisor? It seems like you used more than one divisor anyways.

You are a pirate!
Symbolic
519 posts
Joined June 2008
Symbolic
[Lazy]

Perfect, couldn't find anything :).

[Hard]

Couldn't find anything here also.

[Larto is a Pirate]

Perfect :)
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Starred *
Sir Minelli
524 posts
Joined September 2008
Sir Minelli

Symbolic wrote:

[Lazy]

Perfect, couldn't find anything :).

[Hard]

Couldn't find anything here also.

[Larto is a Pirate]

Perfect :)
_______________________________

Starred *
Blah Blah, theres always somthing to find see?

Like first of all, notes aren't resnapped. Please resnap all notes. That goes for EVERY difficulty.


[Lazy]

Mainly Aesthetics, spacing/timing = correct
00:07:29 (3,4) - allign with slider's end
00:20:95 (2) - move it one square up so it alligns better with slider
01:34:12 (4) - new combo


[Hard]

Mainly Aesthetics, spacing/timing = correct
00:06:45 (2,3,6,7) - allign these with their previous sliders
00:26:12 (6) - new combo, 00:26:62 (1) - undo new combo
00:48:93 (3) - allign correctly with previous (2)


[Larto is a Pirate]

Mainly Aesthetics, spacing/timing = correct
00:06:31 (6) - new combo if you like
00:22:12 (1) - reput on top of slider
00:31:62 (4) - same
01:19:00 (3) - allign this slider's beginning with its end
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
Download: Lazy Town - You Are A Pirate (Agent Spin Here) [Larto is a Pirate].osu
Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Mashley
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Mukku
1,434 posts
Joined February 2009
Mukku
I liked the map. I didnt like the long stream-like parts such as 00:46:126 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) in hard difficulty.

Although its propably just me not being good enough player :p
fufe
284 posts
Joined September 2008
fufe
Hard-
00:09:12 (7,8) - nazi allignment
00:10:95 (2,3) - nazi spacing
00:12:551 micro break?
00:24:001 (x) hit here absent? or intentional? iono
00:26:62 (2,3) - align with prev 4,5?
00:48:12 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - shift to put the 3s on top of eachother? (makes no diff to me but stuff like this is wut other people are always on my ass about >.>)
01:46:751 pretty big gap, no? is this a fail trap for someone who couldnt keep up with the final jumps?

lazy-
00:05:12 (3,4) - nazi space inconsistency. nudge up a little to stack on future 4 notes and solve at same time>?
00:08:12 (1,2) - nazi space
00:12:475 break?
00:19:45 (1) - align with prev?
00:20:95 (2) - ^
00:37:12 (2) - ^ k ill stop, these mods annoy me to hell and dont even effect play
00:55:746 break?

Looks fun =3
Aqua
298 posts
Joined December 2008
Aqua
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Gabi
2,554 posts
Joined December 2008
Gabi
[Lazy]

fine

[Hard]

00:06:12 (1) - move 1 grid (level 3) to the left
00:26:62 (2,3) - move the (3) 2 grid to the left (like your previous ones)
00:51:62 (7) - 1 grid to the right
(not a big deal but 00:46:12 (1) - 1 grid to the right if you want to align it with 10)

[Larto is a Pirate]

00:06:29 (1,2,3,4) the (1) is 2 grid spaces away from the rest of the combo
00:27:12 (5) - move 1 grid up, or i guess move the rest of the combo down 1 grid if you want the 5 in the middle
00:59:45 (1,2,3,4) - there's 3 grid spacings between (1-2) but theres only 2 between (3-4) (5-6) etc
01:07:12 (5) - move 1 grid to the right


cool map, lol song ^^

starz*
Gens
osu! Alumni
3,485 posts
Joined August 2008
Gens

Sir Minelli wrote:

Blah Blah, theres always somthing to find see?
I disagree. Modding isn't about naziing stuff to death, modding is about testing the map, checking it, and pointing out possible/annoying errors and suggestions (not nazi suggestions of course) to help the creator in the ranking process. ;)
At least that's what I think.

[Overall]
OMG another lazy town song.

[Lazy]
01:30:12 - Wait. Isn't this section supposed to be Kiai Time'd? <.<

[Hard]
01:48:12 (1) - Use soft sampleset?

Haha, nice song, can't wait to see this ranked. :D
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