Hisaka Yoko - Sweet Bitter Beauty Song · forum

DJPop

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DJPop 2009-04-27T12:10:44+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 30 เมษายน 2552 at 23:22:25

Artist: Hisaka Yoko
Title: Sweet Bitter Beauty Song
Source: K-ON!
Tags: anime sweet bitter beauty song hisaka yoko akiyama mio k-on! keion
BPM: 133
Filesize: 6012kb
Play Time: 01:58
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.22 stars, 108 notes)
Hard (4.98 stars, 359 notes)
Normal (4.24 stars, 199 notes)

Download: Hisaka Yoko - Sweet Bitter Beauty Song
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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28th beatmap.

Another song from anime K-ON! (ED Single).
Awesome custom skin again XD.

EDIT 3: 30 Apr 2009
- Fixed offset.
EDIT 2: 29 Apr 2009
- Fixed notes in Easy.
- 80% resized hit bursts.
EDIT 1: 28 Apr 2009
- Fixed notes.

Last edited by DJPop 2009-04-30T16:22:56+00:00, edited 5 times in total.

DJPop

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DJPop 2009-04-27T12:14:54+00:00

FAIL

If you fail the song, you'll see this

Sir Minelli

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Sir Minelli 2009-04-27T17:12:19+00:00

Hello,

[Easy]

Didn't find anything regarding spacing / timing.

Some aesthetics opinions you might want to consider:
00:08:56 (1) - make slider's end point upcoming (1)
00:31:56 (1) - this color is almost the same as this 00:33:37 (1) - i really think you should difference them by changing one a bit. Otherwise it might look as it was the same combo. (another example at normal)
01:18:93 (1) - move one square down to give more smoothness when playing
01:24:35 (1,1,1) - You can give more smoothness here by making the slider's beginning, follow the previous slider's end
In other words, lessen a bit the slider's curves.

[Normal]

00:56:15 (3) - spacing
01:15:10 (1,2,3,4,1) - <-- Example mentioned above, i almost say "new combo" to 01:16:90 (1) - because of the color, and then i noticed it was a new combo already, so again, you might want to difference these colors.
I would suggest alligning some beats to their slider's end if you want to.

[Hard]

00:57:05 (6) - new combo, 00:57:28 (1) - undo new combo. I feel it goes like this with the music, but its no big deal if you want to leave it like that for the look.

The next combo changes should be done:

01:12:84 (5) - new combo, 01:13:52 (1) - undo new combo, 01:15:10 (5) - new combo, 01:15:78 (1) - undo new combo,
01:16:90 (5) - new combo

01:20:51 (6) - new combo, 01:20:74 (1) - undo new combo, 01:22:32 (5) - new combo, 01:22:99 (1) - undo new combo,
01:24:12 (5) - new combo

01:27:73 (7) - new combo, 01:27:96 (1) - undo new combo

01:46:00 (1) - undo new combo, 01:46:68 (5) - new combo, 01:48:03 (1) - undo new combo, 01:48:71 (3) - new combo

01:53:90 (5) - new combo,01:55:25 (1) - undo new combo, 01:55:93 (4) - new combo

DJPop

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DJPop 2009-04-28T12:15:29+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Sir Minelli

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Sir Minelli 2009-04-28T13:14:11+00:00

DJPop wrote:
00:08:56 (1) - make slider's end point upcoming (1)
I don't understand... Can you show the screenshot?

Make the slider's end, face the next (1)

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DJPop 2009-04-28T15:32:37+00:00

Sir Minelli wrote:
DJPop wrote:
00:08:56 (1) - make slider's end point upcoming (1)
I don't understand... Can you show the screenshot?
Make the slider's end, face the next (1)

I still don't know

Give the screenshot plz.

Yuukari-Banteki

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Yuukari-Banteki 2009-04-28T21:38:02+00:00

[Easy]
00:08:56 (1) - that is one pretty sliderball~ <3
00:22:99 (1,1,1) - feels weird spaced unevenly and that far apart...
01:09:91 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - overusing new combo...
01:58:86 (1) - end on a white tick

[Normal]
01:58:86 (1) - end on a white tick

[Hard]
01:58:86 (1) - end on a white tick
your streams of 1/2 notes get a little repetitive...

can you maybe make the hit bursts a bit smaller? theyre distracting and
huge

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DJPop 2009-04-29T12:53:55+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

pete2528

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pete2528 2009-04-30T15:05:52+00:00

เล่นมาแล้วครับ หาจุดผิดไม่ได้เลย สนุกดีครับเพลงนี้

Zekira

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Zekira 2009-04-30T15:17:32+00:00

Offset: 1340

Though it's a minor adjustment, it just might spell accuracy issues a lot...

...I dunno, maybe you like it at your offset. But I just think 1340 fits...

Larto

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Larto 2009-04-30T16:23:11+00:00

Since you used Zekira's offset now... ZACK! Bubble. Neat job.

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vytalibus 2009-05-05T20:24:19+00:00

DJPop: Next time, don't put words that are already on the title/artist/source part in the tags.

Ranked.

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