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Hayami Saori & Takagaki Ayahi - Odoriko (TV Size)

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Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Xinely
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 27 April 2013 at 14:17:15

Artist: Hayami Saori & Takagaki Ayahi
Title: Odoriko (TV Size)
Source: Sora no Otoshimono: Forte
Tags: ending Setsurei Hinsvar
BPM: 120
Filesize: 9619kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,88 stars, 90 notes)
  2. Hard (4,75 stars, 194 notes)
  3. Hinsvar's Insane (4,99 stars, 244 notes)
  4. Normal (3,86 stars, 128 notes)
Download: Hayami Saori & Takagaki Ayahi - Odoriko (TV Size)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 3rd ranked map ~
This map dedicated to nirvashzero who really love with Nymph ~
Special Thanks ~
mp3 from nirvashzero >o<
Awesome SB by Setsurei >w<
baka person for his diff o3o
tennya :3 for her skin ~

Mapset :
Easy : Done by me
Normal : Done by me
Hard : Done by me
Hinsvar's Insane : Done by Hinsvar

Ready to mod ^_^
Thanks 4 mod ~ :3
HabiHolic
Zeroarg
Scanter \o\
Andrea OAO
- t e n n y a -
UnitedWeSin
P A N
Matoryoshika
DakeDekaane
Clique
Jacob
LKs for bubble :3
Nymph for rank OAO

Present this map special to Nymph's fans especially to nirvashzero \>w</
Redownload if you download before 17 April 2013, added softslidertick
Last edited by Xinely , edited 17 times in total.
Hinsvar
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Hinsvar
First yay \owo\ /slapped

*rolls*
Decipher
617 posts
Joined December 2010
Decipher
why there's no dedication map for me D:

well actually I got one already
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,789 posts
Joined December 2011
Hinsvar
*points at Rufina*

yes, i've read the transparent text
Decipher
617 posts
Joined December 2010
Decipher
*rolls*
10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
10nya
nymph pettan
HabiHolic
5,372 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic
Hi~ From My M4M Queues~

[Easy]


  • Mapping
    Modding is for slider shape or pattern
  1. 00:04:100 (1) - Try This?

  2. 00:06:100 (3) - ^

  3. 00:28:600 - Add Note?
  4. 00:42:600 - ^
  5. 00:48:100 (1) - Remove nc?
  6. 00:49:100 (2) - nc
  7. 01:25:600 (3) - This?


    Hitsound
    hitsound on suggestions
  8. 00:56:100 (1) - End Remove Finish?
  9. 01:04:100 (1) - Start Finish?
  10. 01:08:100 (1) - Remove Finsh?


[Normal]


  • Mapping
    Modding is for slider shape or pattern
  1. 00:29:100 (2,3) - Try This?


    Nice Dff~

[Hard]


  • Mapping
    Modding is for slider shape or pattern
  1. 00:06:600 (2) - Ctrl + g
  2. 00:09:100 (4) - ^
  3. 00:09:850 - Add Note
  4. 00:21:350 (4) - Try This?
  5. 00:24:600 (3) - How About This pettan?

Good Luck~
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Xinely

HabiHolic wrote:

Hi~ From My M4M Queues~ Hi xD

[Easy]


  • Mapping
    Modding is for slider shape or pattern
  1. 00:04:100 (1) - Try This?
    prefer mine
  2. 00:06:100 (3) - ^
    ^
  3. 00:28:600 - Add Note? follow vocal
  4. 00:42:600 - ^ ^
  5. 00:48:100 (1) - Remove nc? stanza
  6. 00:49:100 (2) - nc ^
  7. 01:25:600 (3) - This?
    it's okay imo

    Hitsound
    hitsound on suggestions
  8. 00:56:100 (1) - End Remove Finish? music ><
  9. 01:04:100 (1) - Start Finish? ^
  10. 01:08:100 (1) - Remove Finsh? ^


[Normal]


  • Mapping
    Modding is for slider shape or pattern
  1. 00:29:100 (2,3) - Try This?
    it's itentional

    Nice Dff~

[Hard]


  • Mapping
    Modding is for slider shape or pattern
  1. 00:06:600 (2) - Ctrl + g aa it's make triangle pattern
  2. 00:09:100 (4) - ^ okay
  3. 00:09:850 - Add Note give break because after this is jump
  4. 00:21:350 (4) - Try This? no, sorry ><
  5. 00:24:600 (3) - How About This pettan?
    yap

Good Luck~
thanks 4 mod \o\
Mythiax
637 posts
Joined August 2012
Mythiax
Irc mod :3 Gl with this Xinely.

03:03 Xinely: zero are u busy? ><
03:03 Zeroarg: no
03:03 Zeroarg: you need me?
03:04 Xinely: yap
03:04 Zeroarg: :o
03:04 Xinely: need mod in my odoriko `w`
03:04 Xinely: since get mod is Hard hard hard orz
03:04 Zeroarg: hmm
03:04 Zeroarg: the song you posted in #modhelp?
03:04 Zeroarg: i mean #modreqs
03:05 Xinely: yes ><
03:05 Zeroarg: can i do it irc? i'm lazy to open the forum orz
03:05 Xinely: okay 'w'
03:06 Xinely: but in insane diff, i think you must irc with hinsvar or post insane in forun 'w'
03:06 Zeroarg: ok
03:06 Xinely: thank you >w<
03:07 Zeroarg: well
03:07 Zeroarg: i start with easy
03:08 Zeroarg: 00:11:100 (5) - 
03:08 Zeroarg: here
03:08 Xinely: yap? owo
03:09 Zeroarg: i personally disagree with repeating sliders in easy. speacially if they're short sliders. change it by other slider like 00:12:100 (1) - ?
03:10 Xinely: aaa i will change when people disagree with this too
03:10 Zeroarg: ok
03:27 Zeroarg: so
03:28 Zeroarg: we continue for now?
03:28 Xinely: can online for 5 min only
03:28 Zeroarg: it's enough for the easy i think
03:28 Xinely: okay ><
03:29 Zeroarg: well
03:29 Zeroarg: 01:16:100 (1) - 
03:29 Zeroarg: add finish at slider's head
03:29 Xinely: k
03:30 Zeroarg: 00:32:600 - 
03:30 Zeroarg: add a note there
03:30 Xinely: owait i think still use whistle for this ><
03:30 Zeroarg: i hear music
03:31 Xinely: ok
03:31 Zeroarg: i said finish before cuz the singer use high voice there so it would fit good imo
03:32 Xinely: i know but i use finish follow music
03:32 Xinely: aa will change again when someone mod that :3
03:32 Zeroarg: ok :3
03:37 Zeroarg: hmm
03:37 Zeroarg: last thing
03:37 Zeroarg: 01:24:600 (1,2,3) - 
03:37 Zeroarg: why not use a similar pattern like the one at 01:13:600 (2,3,4) - 
03:38 Xinely: well something new o.o
03:38 Xinely: to diagonal
03:38 Xinely: in 01:23:600 (5,1,2,3) - 
03:38 Zeroarg: but the 3 straight in diagonal looks bored.
03:38 Zeroarg: maybe this
03:40 Zeroarg: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/699827
03:41 Xinely: changed with my own :3
03:41 Zeroarg: ok
03:41 Xinely: a little like that
03:45 Zeroarg: well, that's all in easy
03:45 Zeroarg: in normal
03:46 Zeroarg: 00:23:100 (7,2) - 
03:46 Zeroarg: almost invisible overlap
03:46 Zeroarg: ok lol
03:46 Xinely: i know but can't find solution
03:48 Zeroarg: i got it
03:48 *Xinely is away: washing
03:48 Zeroarg: move the 00:24:100 (1) -  to
03:48 Zeroarg: x:120 y:200
03:49 Zeroarg: move the 00:24:600 (2) -  to x:136 y:304 and move the last cube from this slider to x:0 y:296
03:56 Xinely: back
03:57 Xinely: done
03:59 Zeroarg: mmm, brb it's raining too much outside
03:59 Xinely: okay owo
04:04 Zeroarg: i'm back
04:04 Xinely: owo
04:04 Xinely: okay continue?
04:04 Zeroarg: sure
04:04 Xinely: k ^w^
04:08 Zeroarg: looks really nice too
04:08 Zeroarg: nothing else
04:08 Zeroarg: btw
04:08 Zeroarg: who choosed images for the sb?
04:08 Xinely: Setsurei
04:08 Xinely: is it bad?
04:08 Zeroarg: no. they're great
04:08 Xinely: aw thanks <3
04:09 Zeroarg: well, gonna see the hard now.
04:11 Zeroarg: 00:03:850 (6,1) - 
04:11 Zeroarg: too extreme jump imo
04:11 Xinely: lol
04:11 Zeroarg: specially for the start of the song
04:11 Zeroarg: maybe leave that for the chorus lol
04:11 Xinely: well i try this i can do it
04:12 Zeroarg: sure
04:12 Xinely: since i'm very suck std player
04:12 Xinely: xD
04:12 Zeroarg: i don't say it's impossible
04:12 Xinely: Niva said it's okay >w<
04:12 Zeroarg: i just it doesn't fit with music imo
04:12 Xinely: okay i will try
04:12 Xinely: to change
04:13 Zeroarg: try this
04:13 Zeroarg: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/699842
04:14 Xinely: omg suck connection until can't open orz
04:14 Xinely: well 
04:14 Xinely: i find the solution btw
04:14 Xinely: :3
04:14 Zeroarg: lol
04:15 Zeroarg: 00:33:100 (3,4) - 
04:16 Xinely: overlap?
04:16 Zeroarg: not nice. this looks better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/699843
04:16 Xinely: omg maybe osu maintenance
04:16 Zeroarg: the tails fit with following slider
04:16 Xinely: i can't open that link
04:16 Zeroarg: o.o
04:16 Zeroarg: not osu
04:16 Xinely: but i can open puush X+X
04:16 Zeroarg: maybe puush
04:17 Xinely: yes plz thanks ><
04:19 Zeroarg: this is the first image
04:19 Zeroarg: http://puu.sh/2xVHj
04:19 Zeroarg: and the second http://puu.sh/2xVHY
04:20 Xinely:  changed with my own :3
04:20 Zeroarg: ok
04:21 Zeroarg: 00:48:100 (1) - flip the curve?
04:21 Xinely: intentional :3
04:21 Zeroarg: owo
04:21 Zeroarg: ok
04:22 Zeroarg: hmm
04:22 Zeroarg: the chorus looks empty imo
04:22 Zeroarg: 00:58:850 - 
04:22 Zeroarg: add a triple there?
04:23 Xinely: added in 00:59:100 - circle only ><
04:23 Zeroarg: ok
04:23 Zeroarg: 01:14:850 - same here
04:24 Xinely: done same as above
04:25 Zeroarg: lol
04:26 Xinely: :3
04:28 Xinely: is it done in hard? :3
04:28 Zeroarg: i was playing it
04:28 Zeroarg: but i think so
04:28 Xinely: okay ^w^
04:29 Zeroarg: hmm
04:29 Zeroarg: disalbe letterbox and coutdown in hinsvar's diff
04:29 Xinely: omg hinsvar baka
04:29 Zeroarg: haha
04:29 Xinely: done
04:30 Zeroarg: last thing
04:30 Zeroarg: 00:11:350 (5) - 
04:31 Zeroarg: move it to x:368 y:280 to fix spacing and make the following stack look better
04:31 Xinely: in hard?
04:31 Zeroarg: yes
04:31 Xinely: 00:10:850 (4,5) - try branket
04:32 Xinely: 00:11:850 (6) - intentional jump
04:32 Zeroarg: o.o
04:32 Zeroarg: ok
04:32 Xinely: lol xD
04:34 Zeroarg: well, nothing else in hard :3
04:35 Xinely: in insane u can irc with hinsvar or post in forum :3
04:35 Zeroarg: well
04:35 Zeroarg: i'm very useless to mod insanse since i can barely play them
04:36 Zeroarg: i don't see anythin to change in insane lol
04:36 Xinely: post in forum 
04:36 Xinely: will give kd
04:37 Zeroarg: ok
04:37 Xinely: thanks for mod ^w^
04:38 Zeroarg: your welcome
THS
1,024 posts
Joined November 2011
THS
hi Youkai /o/ /slapped
study modding~

EASY
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00:42:100 (4) - add another note after this one~
SPOILER
00:43:100 (6) - ^
SPOILER
00:48:100 (1) - ^
SPOILER
01:14:600 (4) - add clap on this one~
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Normal
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00:05:100 (2) - i think change this slider to the one like this~..the song is still nice to hear
SPOILER
00:21:100 (3) - delete this and 00:21:600 (4) - + replace them with a new slider like this~
SPOILER
01:26:100 (1) - this spin is too long for the song i think...so shorten the spin by adding note on 01:26:100
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HARD
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00:03:850 (6) - move this note to so the map will look alive <3
01:26:100 (1) - shorten this spinner to
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Hinsvar's insane
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CS+1
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okay that's all maaf kalo cups
scanter
2,385 posts
Joined July 2012
scanter
o/ Xine :D

General

  1. I recommend Check-on Letterbox during breaks. you're used SB
  2. 01:14:100 - SB/render really strange. I recommend delete this.
  3. 01:25:100 - lyrics was blinded about SB/130.png. move to better place or delete it.

Normal

  1. 00:20:100 (1,2,3,4,5) - I recommend more makes pentagon shape. try to use Ctrl + Shift + D or 72' rotation.
  2. 00:22:850 (6) - Add whistle?
  3. 00:28:600 - Add 1 circle? fill up clap sound.
  4. 00:41:600 (3) - rhythm suggestion. how about this? look at number 3,4 looks more better following vocals a little.
  5. 00:44:600 - Add 1 circle?
  6. 01:09:100 (2) - Add finish sound. you can hear it.

Hard

  1. 00:04:100 (1,2,3,4) - Fits more symmetry? move to roughly x:259, y:202.
  2. 00:18:850 (3) - Change slider curve to clockwise. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/699917
  3. 00:39:600 (6) - Change 2 circles. this is not well. it has clap sounds in 00:39:600
  4. 01:24:600 (1,2,3) - rotate it 90'? overlap looks a little bad.

Hinsvar's Insane


  • It has many overmapping. you should fix something or all about.
  1. 00:08:600 (2,4) - Add clap on slider's first. is it intentionally?
  2. 00:23:350 (2) - Change auto sampleset.
  3. 00:27:850 (4,5) - Change slider one? I don't hear any sound at 00:27:975 this is guideline but I recommend fix this.
  4. 00:38:475 (2) - A little overmapping. I recommend delete this circle or lengthen 00:38:100 (1) this slider to 3/4 point.
  5. 01:01:600 (4,5) - same opinion. look at number 4 http://puu.sh/2xXpQ
  6. 01:03:975 (5) - Delete this circle. I don't hear any sound.
  7. 01:05:475 (5) - ^
  8. 01:07:975 (6) - ^
  9. 01:09:975 (3) - Delete or change 1/4 slider. like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/699943
  10. 01:11:600 (9) - Add clap on slider's end? you can hear it.
  11. 01:12:600 (2,3,4,5,6) - change 1/4 sliders? like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/699948
  12. 01:14:600 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
  13. 01:21:975 (4) - Delete this.
  14. 01:24:725 (2,4) - ^
  15. 01:25:725 (2,4) - ^
nice mapset lol. a little serious song but I like it. GL on rank ;)
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Xinely

THS wrote:

hi Youkai /o/ /slapped
study modding~

EASY
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
00:42:100 (4) - add another note after this one~
SPOILER
00:43:100 (6) - ^
SPOILER
00:48:100 (1) - ^
SPOILER
01:14:600 (4) - add clap on this one~

suara clapnya d ganti finish, klo yg d add note, aku ikut vocal skalian easy gk enak terus2an note, newbie .3.
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Normal
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00:05:100 (2) - i think change this slider to the one like this~..the song is still nice to hear
SPOILER
nyan itu muter QAQ
00:21:100 (3) - delete this and 00:21:600 (4) - + replace them with a new slider like this~
SPOILER
ancur entar QAQ
01:26:100 (1) - this spin is too long for the song i think...so shorten the spin by adding note on 01:26:100 aaaa itu sama kea easy kok
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HARD
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00:03:850 (6) - move this note to so the map will look alive <3 spacing ancur tuh gk konsisten
01:26:100 (1) - shorten this spinner to habis spin nya ngapain dong o.o

okay that's all maaf kalo cups gpp namanya jg latihan, tp gk bisa ksh kd, gk accept soalnya :C
Setsurei
1,149 posts
Joined May 2012
Setsurei

scanter wrote:

General

I recommend Check-on Letterbox during breaks. you're used SB
01:14:100 - SB/render really strange. I recommend delete this.
01:25:100 - lyrics was blinded about SB/130.png. move to better place or delete it.
01:14:100 - what do you mean by "really strange"? the position?
01:25:100 - I moved the level of SB/130.png, and the lyric is visible
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,789 posts
Joined December 2011
Hinsvar

scanter wrote:

Hinsvar's Insane


  • It has many overmapping. you should fix something or all about. ...Not sure what overmapping are you talking about. There are no notes that are mapped on a tick without any sound on the music there (or any sound that sounds too faint to be mapped). I'm very sure of this. Every note is supported by the music and vocal of the song.
  1. 00:08:600 (2,4) - Add clap on slider's first. is it intentionally? It's not really intentional; rather, it's actually necessary.
  2. 00:23:350 (2) - Change auto sampleset. No. A Drum clap really fits the song, and I won't choose a different sampleset on an object without any reason.
  3. 00:27:850 (4,5) - Change slider one? I don't hear any sound at 00:27:975 this is guideline but I recommend fix this. Umm, I'm sure enough the vocal still continues there and is perfectly mappable...
  4. 00:38:475 (2) - A little overmapping. I recommend delete this circle or lengthen 00:38:100 (1) this slider to 3/4 point. That circle follows the vocal...
  5. 01:01:600 (4,5) - same opinion. look at number 4 http://puu.sh/2xXpQ No. The sound from the background music supports the notes, and I won't change it because there's just no problem with that...
  6. 01:03:975 (5) - Delete this circle. I don't hear any sound. It follows the vocal perfectly.
  7. 01:05:475 (5) - ^ ^
  8. 01:07:975 (6) - ^ ^
  9. 01:09:975 (3) - Delete or change 1/4 slider. like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/699943 There's no reason to do that, I'm sure enough of it... The pattern also makes the flow bad, I believe.
  10. 01:11:600 (9) - Add clap on slider's end? you can hear it. ...Nope? I don't hear any sound fitting enough for it.
  11. 01:12:600 (2,3,4,5,6) - change 1/4 sliders? like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/699948 I prefer to use a short stream here. 1/4 jumps are ridiculous for this part, IMO.
  12. 01:14:600 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
  13. 01:21:975 (4) - Delete this. ...Why?
  14. 01:24:725 (2,4) - ^ ^
  15. 01:25:725 (2,4) - ^ ^
...I'm not supposed to say this, but I apologize for not fixing anything, because this is definitely not overmapped ._.

Well, still thanks for checking though~
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Topic Starter
Xinely

scanter wrote:

o/ Xine :D scanta (?)/o/

Easy

  1. 00:13:100 (2) - More blanket this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/699884 aa no, i make with rotate that ><
  2. 00:51:100 (4) - Looks a little weird shape. how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/699887 fix
  3. 01:25:100 (2) - Move to x:266, y:236? looks more better. changed with my own
  4. 01:16:100 (1) - Change slider shape? fits more vocal's vibration. like this shape http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/699893 yap fixed

Normal

  1. 00:20:100 (1,2,3,4,5) - I recommend more makes pentagon shape. try to use Ctrl + Shift + D or 72' rotation. umm, let's try with my manual \o\
  2. 00:22:850 (6) - Add whistle? added
  3. 00:28:600 - Add 1 circle? fill up clap sound. i forgot this is normal diff lol, added
  4. 00:41:600 (3) - rhythm suggestion. how about this? look at number 3,4 looks more better following vocals a little. it's okay imo
  5. 00:44:600 - Add 1 circle? same as 00:28:600 -
  6. 01:09:100 (2) - Add finish sound. you can hear it. fixed ~

Hard

  1. 00:04:100 (1,2,3,4) - Fits more symmetry? move to roughly x:259, y:202. done
  2. 00:18:850 (3) - Change slider curve to clockwise. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/699917 aa nope, i try Niva's style *runs
  3. 00:39:600 (6) - Change 2 circles. this is not well. it has clap sounds in 00:39:600 done
  4. 01:24:600 (1,2,3) - rotate it 90'? overlap looks a little bad. yap nice fixed ~
nice mapset lol. a little serious song but I like it. GL on rank ;)
Thank you for mod Scanter \o/
thanks both all~
Updated My diff, little about SB ~
10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
10nya
Skin as requested =3=~! http://puu.sh/2yvok
hit50.png here http://puu.sh/2yZSx
comboburst-0.png here http://puu.sh/2z05g

Add Epilepsy Warning for all diff. Kind of pulse-ing at kiai part.
I'll edit this post for my mod and skins. :3 uhuk done.

~ Guide~

- Unrankable.
- You Need To Change/Add This.
- It'll be better if you followed this.
- Suggestions

General

  1. Display Epilepsy Warning. as I mentioned above.
  2. I made custom hitclap that probably fit to you c:
    http://puu.sh/2yt9v. I lowed normal clap and added a custom clap there c;
  3. Also for this parts; (00:24:100- until 00:54:100-) you might also have to add custom hitwhistle2. The one that I suggest is this one
    http://puu.sh/2yteK. You can hear a lot of this custom whistle heard at part of the song. You can change sample set at 24100 to soft-custom2 to prove it, lol. Sorry for the bad English btw. c;.
  4. You might also need custom slider tick with clap sound to make clap consistent.
  5. Better if all the spinner end at 01:28:100- cause the song ended there.
  6. Add to tags: そらのおとしもの The Sky's Lost Property Heaven's Lost Property.that's Japanese also translated title by wikipedia lol.
  7. Sorry for not noticing, you have to add 1 more custom clap to make a better sound at 00:24:600 01:24:600 01:25:600.
    http://puu.sh/2z1Ob
    Reduce the volume to -3% if you use them.

Storyboarding

  1. 00:11:600- : 921.jpg , this image move faster than previous images, reduce the movement?
  2. 00:19:100- : 934.jpg is appear not smoother than previous images, and also faster, while I heard violin at here, which transformation that suit is more slower moving image and slower fading image. Uh, try this ?.
    Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\934.png",320,240
     F,0,18850,19850,0,1
     M,0,18850,25100,125,266,265,269
     S,0,19100,25100,1,1.222968
     F,0,19850,24100,1
     F,0,24100,24620,1,0.48
     F,0,24620,25100,0.48,0
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Easy

  1. 00:27:100 (4)- : remove whistle at the head
  2. 00:49:600 (2)- : add custom slidertick with clap sound to make clap consistent
  3. 00:51:600 (4)- : ^
  4. 01:08:100 (1)- : make the slider shape like this to make better flow?
  5. 01:16:100 (1)- : add whistle on the head?

Normal

  1. 00:07:100 (4)- : last slider point 1 grid down
  2. 00:27:100 (5,6,1)- : Make the rhythm like this, it followed vocal better
  3. 00:48:100 (1,2)- : make better shape please, here if you don't mind
    264,168,48100,6,0,P|328:160|368:92,1,130,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    280,80,49100,2,0,P|231:38|167:30,2,130,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  4. 00:51:100 (4)- : ctrl+H this would make better flow
  5. 00:59:350 (6)- : make the shape like this?
  6. 01:11:350 (5)- : move this to x300 y204 would make a better flow, current one is too close with previous slider
  7. 01:13:350 (3,4)- : make a better flow? current one is not make the diff flows better imo, arrange them like this maybe?

Hard

  1. 00:03:600 (3,4,5)- : ctrl+h them to make better flow imo
  2. 00:13:600 (5)- : make this slider curved too? since you used curve slider at 00:12:100 (1)
  3. 00:17:600 (3)- : how about stack this to 00:17:850 (1)'s head to make better jump?
  4. 00:19:350 (4,5)- : the pattern end is odd for me, rearrange them like this please,

    272,160,19350,2,0,P|304:187|321:226,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    204,248,19850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
  5. 00:21:850 (5)- : nc should be here
  6. 00:22:350 (1,2,3,4,5)- : bad flow imo, rearrange them like this would be good
    464,224,22350,6,0,L|424:344,1,85,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    364,348,22850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    284,316,23100,1,4,0:0:0:0:
    284,232,23350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    200,244,23600,2,0,L|192:196,2,42.5,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  7. 00:24:600 (3,4,5)- : rearrange them like this would be good! :D I rearranged the hitsound too >_<

    140,108,24600,2,0,P|132:60|164:4,1,85,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    216,76,25100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    296,44,25350,2,0,P|304:92|272:148,1,85,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  8. 00:26:850 (2)- : add whistle for both head and tail
  9. 00:32:850 (2)- : add whistle
  10. 00:33:100 (3)- : move the whistle from head to tail
  11. 00:34:850 (2)- : add whistle
  12. 00:35:100 (3)- : remove all whistle, add whistle on the reverse
  13. 01:00:850 (2)- : icwudidthere :> move this to x428 y212

Hinsvar's Insane

  1. there's another clap suggestion at General, please follow them >:3~
  2. 00:33:975- : I heard vocal continuing at here, add circle?
  3. 00:47:725 (2)- : add whistle on the head
  4. 01:11:225 (6)- : delete this note, stream should end here because of the music that "tring" voice or what is it called as =,=
  5. 01:11:350 (7)- : nc here due vocal change
GL for this map also your national exam! \c;/
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Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
~General~
  1. The file hit50.png is missing in your folder, please make sure to add it.
  2. The file sb\213.jpg and sb\456.jpg are unused, please make sure to remove them.
~Easy~
  1. 00:56:100 (1) - Remove the finish from this slider end, it sounds too loud, better adding a clap instead.
  2. 01:11:600 (5) - New combo should go here since the new stanza and music changes there.
  3. 01:12:600 (1) - Remove new combo from here afterwards and also remove the finish, it's too loud.
  4. 01:16:100 (6) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change, also because otherwise it would be too long.
  5. 01:23:600 (5,1) - New combo should go on (5) and not on (1) since the new section actually begins there.
~Normal~
  1. 00:56:100 (1) - Remove the finish from this slider end, it sounds too loud, better adding a clap instead.
  2. 01:12:600 (2) - Again, another finish that it's way too loud.
~Hard~
  1. 00:16:100 (1,2) - These sliders could be stacked better together if you disable the grid snap.
  2. 00:24:600 (3,4,5,6) - This jumpy pattern feels a bit too random, why don't you space them normally instead? Would play better.
  3. 00:56:600 (2) - Remove the finish from this slider end, it sounds too loud, better adding a clap instead.
  4. 00:58:600 (2) - Same as above for the same reason.
  5. 01:00:100 (1,2,3) - These sliders could be stacked better together if you disable the grid snap.
  6. 01:12:600 (2) - Again, please try avoid using finishes that sounds too loud, you could try to lower their volume or add a clap instead.
  7. 01:14:600 (2) - Same as above once again.
  8. 01:23:350 (2,3) - These sliders have a weird shape, I think it's better to make them curve instead.
~Hinsvar's Insane~
  1. Use the same colours and epilepsy warning as the other difficulties.
  1. 00:23:850 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not needed.
  2. 00:39:850 (1) - Same as above for the same reason.
  3. 00:43:975 (5) - Remove this note from here, it doesn't follow anything at all.
  4. 00:52:350 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not needed.
  5. 00:52:600 (1) - Same as above, you don't need to spam new combos like that, really.
  6. 01:12:600 (2,3,4,5,6) - This stream doesn't seem to follow anything in my eyes.
  7. 01:14:600 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same as above, I'd consider this parts overmapped just for the sake of it.
Nice map ^^
10nya
2,746 posts
Joined February 2011
10nya

Andrea wrote:

~General~
  1. The file hit50.png is missing in your folder, please make sure to add it. wth how can I forget this DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD: I'll make it asap xinely orz i'm so baka ;w;
Nice map ^^
Added on my previous post. I'm not galau ;w;

EDIT: modding done
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Xinely
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Topic Starter
Xinely
lol galau tennya
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
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Joined December 2011
Hinsvar

Andrea wrote:

~Hinsvar's Insane~
  1. Use the same colours and epilepsy warning as the other difficulties. The colors are already the same... Added the epilepsy warning though.
  1. 00:23:850 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not needed. It's to denote the 1/4 jumps there so they will be readable.
  2. 00:39:850 (1) - Same as above for the same reason. ^
  3. 00:43:975 (5) - Remove this note from here, it doesn't follow anything at all. Okay... Done.
  4. 00:52:350 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not needed. This is to denote the 1/4 jumps.
  5. 00:52:600 (1) - Same as above, you don't need to spam new combos like that, really. The spacing changes radically and frequently here, so I had to do this...
  6. 01:12:600 (2,3,4,5,6) - This stream doesn't seem to follow anything in my eyes. They definitely follow the music. I don't overmap anything here; I'm confident enough of it.
  7. 01:14:600 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same as above, I'd consider this parts overmapped just for the sake of it. ^
Thanks for modding :D

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osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Odoriko (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 55100
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 100,8100,16100,24100,40100,56100,72100,86100
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Odoriko (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:踊り子 (TV Size)
Artist:Hayami Saori & Takagaki Ayahi
ArtistUnicode:早見 沙織 & 高垣 彩陽
Creator:Xinely
Version:Hinsvar's Insane
Source:Sora no Otoshimono: Forte
Tags:ending Setsurei Hinsvar
BeatmapID:238429
BeatmapSetID:87263

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:2.4
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Xinely bg.jpg",1,1
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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235,213,69100,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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173,71,69975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
173,71,70100,6,0,P|224:48|288:64,2,120,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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252,304,71475,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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368,252,74975,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,288,75100,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,332,75350,2,0,P|188:340|128:312,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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370,187,78850,1,0,0:0:0:0:
134,127,79100,6,0,P|152:68|192:24,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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336,272,83975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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56,224,85100,5,4,0:0:0:0:
56,224,85350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
56,224,85600,5,8,0:0:0:0:
116,216,85725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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200,136,85975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,76,86100,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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