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Shinji Orito - Uminari
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Хех, спасибо, но похоже, что никто больше так не думает.MennyRuS wrote:
Крутая мапа, мне понравилась
Hey, everyone, i'm realy confused becouse i don't know what should be on hard. Any ideas, please?
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Hmm... It's hard or insane?
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Please endure my poor English
Firstly.. I think the song is very difficult to map beacuse it is a absolute music
So..If you are first time to map, I think you should not do it too hard..
I really recommend you to follow the music and don't put too much your's own rhythm in hard..
Because in some parts, it is a kind of overmapping..
But the Easy and Normal are not bad
Offset seem find
Easy someting need to be changed:
01:13:74 (2) - Move it left 2 grid
01:32:69 (1) - move apart from 3
02:10:97 (3) - new combo?
Normal:00:05:07 (8,9) - move to right 2 grid
00:08:23 (3) - move to rigth 3 grid
00:10:60 (7,8,9,10) - these is a kind of unrankable slider change it
00:13:76 (11) - new combo
00:20:86 (8) - slider
00:33:49 (1) - put on top of 00:34:67 (3) -
01:29:53 (8) - move near 9 is better.....
02:20:44 (1) - move 1 gird downward
Hard: the core structural have to change..
00:12:18 (1,1,1) - move a away...no one can do it
00:18:10 (1,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1) -
00:32:70 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) -
00:36:25 (1,1) - these is someting i said overmapping
Anyway i suggest you to delete the hard and rename normal as hrad...
Firstly.. I think the song is very difficult to map beacuse it is a absolute music
So..If you are first time to map, I think you should not do it too hard..
I really recommend you to follow the music and don't put too much your's own rhythm in hard..
Because in some parts, it is a kind of overmapping..
But the Easy and Normal are not bad
Offset seem find
Easy someting need to be changed:
01:13:74 (2) - Move it left 2 grid
01:32:69 (1) - move apart from 3
02:10:97 (3) - new combo?
Normal:00:05:07 (8,9) - move to right 2 grid
00:08:23 (3) - move to rigth 3 grid
00:10:60 (7,8,9,10) - these is a kind of unrankable slider change it
00:13:76 (11) - new combo
00:20:86 (8) - slider
00:33:49 (1) - put on top of 00:34:67 (3) -
01:29:53 (8) - move near 9 is better.....
02:20:44 (1) - move 1 gird downward
Hard: the core structural have to change..
00:12:18 (1,1,1) - move a away...no one can do it
00:18:10 (1,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1) -
00:32:70 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) -
00:36:25 (1,1) - these is someting i said overmapping
Anyway i suggest you to delete the hard and rename normal as hrad...
Topic Starter
You're english isn't poor.
Thanks for you help! Really thanks.
Thanks for you help! Really thanks.
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[Normal]
This difficulty needs more hitsounds.
[Hard]
58:357(1)-> This is too far from (2).
Your map is fine.
But I think this map is hard to be ranked.
Why? This map is little boring.
To avoid this problem, you have to add some streams on hard.
This difficulty needs more hitsounds.
[Hard]
58:357(1)-> This is too far from (2).
Your map is fine.
But I think this map is hard to be ranked.
Why? This map is little boring.
To avoid this problem, you have to add some streams on hard.
Topic Starter
Hard to be ranked? Too bad =(
And... Streams?
And... Streams?
This is what i was going to say. This is not the best choice of music for osu because it is extremely repetitive.minyeob wrote:
Your map is fine.
But I think this map is hard to be ranked.
Why? This map is little boring.
The map plays well but it gets very boring after a while. All of the beats are in the same place. Well look.
Push Ctrl+A to highlight all beats. Now do this on any other ranked map and you should see a completely different kind of picture.
Ill star because the map flows well and theres no big errors. It could use more style tho.
side note: for your timing tab. if this is timed correctly, you should be able to click "Inherit previous timing settings" on all slots with no issues. Then, maybe put .5 bpm checkbox on the last timing section for a slow end slider? =p
Хех, мне так понравилась песня, что захотелось сделать новую сложность самому. Прости, у меня почему-то не скачался сначала твой hard, поэтому получились похожие места. Hard только сейчас вот сыграл 
Download: Shinji Orito, Magome Togoshi, Jun Maeda - Uminari (tieff) [gyt's hard].osu
Download: Shinji Orito, Magome Togoshi, Jun Maeda - Uminari (tieff) [gyt's hard].osu
Topic Starter
Добавлена сложность.
Overall a very nice map, if a bit repetetive at times.
Normal
00:37:04 (2) - Move up 1 grid to make the end look nicer with (1)
00:46:51 (6) - I think this sounds good with a finish
01:06:64 (6) - Down one grid looks better methinks
Hard
00:11:39 (5) - Up 1 grid maybe
00:31:91 (4) - Down 2 grids to line up with (1)
00:46:51 (1) - It's kind of hard to tell that this is a slider...
01:54:00 (5) - Down 2 grids to line up with 3
Have a star! ^_^
Normal
00:37:04 (2) - Move up 1 grid to make the end look nicer with (1)
00:46:51 (6) - I think this sounds good with a finish
01:06:64 (6) - Down one grid looks better methinks
Hard
00:11:39 (5) - Up 1 grid maybe
00:31:91 (4) - Down 2 grids to line up with (1)
00:46:51 (1) - It's kind of hard to tell that this is a slider...
01:54:00 (5) - Down 2 grids to line up with 3
Have a star! ^_^
[Timing]
Meh, I think it's abit off... but oh well, just a warning~
[Overall]
Yeah, I agree it's abit boring... Well, at least normal was.
[Normal]
It's too... cuadricular. It's a little boring you know :/
00:50:85 (1) - See [Hard]
01:39:00 - Change sampleset?
02:04:26 - ^
[Hard]
00:07:64 (2,3,4) - IMO this sampleset change (Soft -> Normal) doesn't fit.
00:10:60 (1) - I don't mean to be super nazi, but move 1Grid (lvl3) up.
00:12:97 (3,4,5) - Same problem as 00:07:64 (2,3,4).
00:24:01 (6,7,8,9,10) - I think you overmapped this abit.
00:30:33 (3,1) - Yesh, spacing... I tripped me up in Test... Maybe add another beat at 00:30:53?
00:33:09 (1,2,3) - This tripped me up too. Though I think it's doable (And fine if it's [Hard]).
00:38:22 (4) - Sampleset change...
00:50:85 (1) - Ahaha! Now I like how the sampleset change is used here. Maybe add it in [Normal] too?
01:08:61 (1,2,3,4,5) - Disalignment! I'm not liking it.
01:39:00 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5) - Yeah, the sampleset change is fine... If you delete all whistles here.
01:50:44 (2,3,4) - Yeah, this tripped me up too... I don't know if it's acceptable even for [Hard].
Yeah... that's it. I'll star this once you fixed/explained everything.
Meh, I think it's abit off... but oh well, just a warning~
[Overall]
Yeah, I agree it's abit boring... Well, at least normal was.
[Normal]
It's too... cuadricular. It's a little boring you know :/
00:50:85 (1) - See [Hard]
01:39:00 - Change sampleset?
02:04:26 - ^
[Hard]
00:07:64 (2,3,4) - IMO this sampleset change (Soft -> Normal) doesn't fit.
00:10:60 (1) - I don't mean to be super nazi, but move 1Grid (lvl3) up.
00:12:97 (3,4,5) - Same problem as 00:07:64 (2,3,4).
00:24:01 (6,7,8,9,10) - I think you overmapped this abit.
00:30:33 (3,1) - Yesh, spacing... I tripped me up in Test... Maybe add another beat at 00:30:53?
00:33:09 (1,2,3) - This tripped me up too. Though I think it's doable (And fine if it's [Hard]).
00:38:22 (4) - Sampleset change...
00:50:85 (1) - Ahaha! Now I like how the sampleset change is used here. Maybe add it in [Normal] too?
01:08:61 (1,2,3,4,5) - Disalignment! I'm not liking it.
01:39:00 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5) - Yeah, the sampleset change is fine... If you delete all whistles here.
01:50:44 (2,3,4) - Yeah, this tripped me up too... I don't know if it's acceptable even for [Hard].
Yeah... that's it. I'll star this once you fixed/explained everything.
Topic Starter
Gens wrote:
[Timing]
Meh, I think it's abit off... but oh well, just a warning~
[Overall]
Yeah, I agree it's abit boring... Well, at least normal was.
[Normal]
It's too... cuadricular. It's a little boring you know :/
00:50:85 (1) - See [Hard]Fixed.
01:39:00 - Change sampleset? Fixed.
02:04:26 - ^ Fixed.
[Hard]
00:07:64 (2,3,4) - IMO this sampleset change (Soft -> Normal) doesn't fit.Fixed.
00:10:60 (1) - I don't mean to be super nazi, but move 1Grid (lvl3) up. Fixed.
00:12:97 (3,4,5) - Same problem as 00:07:64 (2,3,4). Fixed.
00:24:01 (6,7,8,9,10) - I think you overmapped this abit. Hmm... Not think so. Wait second opinion.
00:30:33 (3,1) - Yesh, spacing... I tripped me up in Test... Maybe add another beat at 00:30:53? Fixed.
00:33:09 (1,2,3) - This tripped me up too. Though I think it's doable (And fine if it's [Hard]).
00:38:22 (4) - Sampleset change... Fixed.
00:50:85 (1) - Ahaha! Now I like how the sampleset change is used here. Maybe add it in [Normal] too?
01:08:61 (1,2,3,4,5) - Disalignment! I'm not liking it. Fixed. 1.2x now.
01:39:00 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5) - Yeah, the sampleset change is fine... If you delete all whistles here. Fixed.
01:50:44 (2,3,4) - Yeah, this tripped me up too... I don't know if it's acceptable even for [Hard]. Hmm... Wait second opinion.
Yeah... that's it. I'll star this once you fixed/explained everything. Thanks! ^^
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Normal~
Hard~
Nice BG again ^^
- 00:27:17 (3) - This has a clap at the end. Intended?
- 02:07:42 (1) - Possibly add a finish sound here.
Hard~
- 01:05:65 (2,3) - Move 2 ticks to the right.
Nice BG again ^^