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Destinee & Paris - True Love (Nightcore Mix)

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Topic Starter
Lally
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sabato 18 maggio 2013 at 21.48.26

Artist: Destinee & Paris
Title: True Love (Nightcore Mix)
Tags: ShadowSoul Byakugan249 Andrea osuplayer111 trance remix Monroe Collab
BPM: 150
Filesize: 4690kb
Play Time: 02:43
Difficulties Available:
  1. 249's Love (2,41 stars, 173 notes)
  2. Andrea's Love (4,96 stars, 310 notes)
  3. My Love (3,55 stars, 195 notes)
  4. Our Love (4,89 stars, 361 notes)
Download: Destinee & Paris - True Love (Nightcore Mix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#12 mappu (๑╹ω╹๑)

This map is dedicated to 119410501 hope you'll like it :3


I'm feeling stupid, I saw the signs
And now I stand here with watered eyes
We were like one, you and I
I can't believe that I lived a lie



Mapset:
249's Love -> Easy by Byakugan249
My Love -> Normal by Me
Our Love -> Collab Hard by ShadowSoul and Me
Andrea's Love -> Insane by Andrea
SB Names -> by Roxas
mp3 -> by Andrea \o3o/
Andrea
More nightcore >w<

EDIT: Some fixes for my difficulty -> http://puu.sh/2we8S Here.
Andrea
~General~
  1. It would be better to make the kiai consistent on all the difficulties for consistency.
  2. Add trance to tags and something else if you can.
~249's Love~
  1. Decrease OD by 1 tick, it's too high right now for an Easy difficulty to me.
  1. 00:06:640 (1) ~ 00:18:240 (3) - This part feels really empty without hitsounds, please add some whistles or something.
  2. 00:31:040 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not necessary.
  3. 00:57:840 (4) - Add a whistle on this circle to emphasize with the end of the chorus.
  4. 01:01:040 (1) - Add a finish on this circle to emphasize with the strong beat of the song.
  5. 01:25:440 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not necessary.
  6. 01:51:440 (3) - After this slider, I'd prefer if you make a break like the other difficulties, especially because this is an Easy, beginners might need some time to recover more than others, don't you think? Please do it.
  7. 02:43:440 (5) - Add a whistle on this circle to emphasize with the end of the chorus.
~My Love~
  1. 00:19:440 (1) - This slider is way too soon after spinner even for a Normal, please reduce the spinner lenght or let the slider begin afterwards instead, your choice.
  2. 00:32:240 (1) - Same as above for the same reason.
  3. 00:54:640 (1) - Add a whistle instead of a finish at the end of this spinner, it sounds way too loud right now.
  4. 01:26:640 (1) - This slider is way too soon after spinner even for a Normal, please reduce the spinner lenght or let the slider begin afterwards instead, your choice.
  5. 01:49:040 (1) - I almost can't hear this finish at all, try to increase the volume by 20% at least.
  6. 02:05:040 (1) - Add a clap at the end of this spinner and not a whistle, follows more with the song.
  7. 02:08:240 (1) - Again, another slider way too soon after spinner.
  8. 02:17:840 (1) - Add a clap at the end of this spinner and not a whistle, follows more with the song.
  9. 02:25:040 (2,4) - Try avoid the overlap between these two sliders, it doesn't look so good.
  10. 02:27:440 (1) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit if you can please.
  11. 02:30:640 (1) - Add a clap at the end of this spinner and not a whistle, follows more with the song.
~Our Love~
  1. 00:18:640 (1) - This spinner feels a bit too short for a Hard difficulty, try making something else instead.
  2. 00:34:040 (1,2,3,4) - I'd try to avoid such sudden jumps, they don't really fit for this difficulty imo.
  3. 00:37:240 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above for the same reason.
  4. 00:40:440 (4,5,6,7) - This pattern is way too jumpy for a Hard difficulty, try reducing the spacing a bit.
  5. 00:43:640 (4,5,6) - Inconsistent spacing, please make sure to fix it with using the distance snap carefully.
  6. 00:45:040 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again, some more random jumps that you should avoid.
  7. 00:48:640 (2,3) - Try to avoid this small overlap between these two sliders, it doesn't look so good.
  8. 00:53:040 - It feels like you're missing a note here on the main beat, make sure to add it if you think it's good.
  9. 01:01:040 (1,2) - Why such random jump here? It doesn't make sense at all, just space them normally together.
  10. 01:02:640 (1,2) - Same as above for the same reason.
  11. 01:04:240 (1,2) - Really, you overused many random jumps on your parts, Shadow.
  12. 01:05:840 (1,2) - And once again.
  13. 01:13:840 (1,2) - Another time, please avoid them, they're really bad to play and doesn't flow good.
  14. 01:20:240 (1,2) - Same as above once and once again.
  15. 01:21:840 (6,1) - Again, though this one might be acceptable.
  16. 01:23:440 (5,1) - And here too, though this one might be acceptable as well.
  17. 01:28:440 (1,2,3,4) - Again, why have you used such random jumps? I seriously dislike them.
  18. 01:51:040 (1) - I almost can't hear this finish at all, try to increase the volume by 20% at least.
  19. 02:10:240 - It feels like you're missing a note here on the main beat, make sure to add it if you think it's good. Also, add a clap on said note if you do add it.
  20. 02:41:440 (3,4) - This jump seems a bit too large for a Hard difficulty, try to reduce the spacing a bit.
Topic Starter
Lally
@Andrea: personally i don't see any changes in your diff maybe 1-2 slider but the rest is the same à.à btw updated your diff too

mod reply

Andrea wrote:

~General~
  1. It would be better to make the kiai consistent on all the difficulties for consistency. dunno will think about u.u''
  2. Add trance to tags and something else if you can.added o3o
~My Love~
  1. 00:19:440 (1) - This slider is way too soon after spinner even for a Normal, please reduce the spinner lenght or let the slider begin afterwards instead, your choice. it's ok here no changes and all the next spinner that will be mentioned too
  2. 00:32:240 (1) - Same as above for the same reason.
  3. 00:54:640 (1) - Add a whistle instead of a finish at the end of this spinner, it sounds way too loud right now. ok
  4. 01:26:640 (1) - This slider is way too soon after spinner even for a Normal, please reduce the spinner lenght or let the slider begin afterwards instead, your choice.
  5. 01:49:040 (1) - I almost can't hear this finish at all, try to increase the volume by 20% at least. +10 will be ok
  6. 02:05:040 (1) - Add a clap at the end of this spinner and not a whistle, follows more with the song. added normal sampleset
  7. 02:08:240 (1) - Again, another slider way too soon after spinner.
  8. 02:17:840 (1) - Add a clap at the end of this spinner and not a whistle, follows more with the song. added normal sampleset
  9. 02:25:040 (2,4) - Try avoid the overlap between these two sliders, it doesn't look so good. fixed
  10. 02:27:440 (1) - This slider is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit if you can please. fixed together with^
  11. 02:30:640 (1) - Add a clap at the end of this spinner and not a whistle, follows more with the song.added normal sampleset
~Our Love~
  1. 00:18:640 (1) - This spinner feels a bit too short for a Hard difficulty, try making something else instead. for now no changes but will think about
  2. 00:34:040 (1,2,3,4) - I'd try to avoid such sudden jumps, they don't really fit for this difficulty imo.k
  3. 00:37:240 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above for the same reason.k
  4. 00:40:440 (4,5,6,7) - This pattern is way too jumpy for a Hard difficulty, try reducing the spacing a bit. fixed here
  5. 00:43:640 (4,5,6) - Inconsistent spacing, please make sure to fix it with using the distance snap carefully. kk
  6. 00:45:040 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again, some more random jumps that you should avoid. ''we can't take it back'' e va avanti e ditro e ci sta :U imo
  7. 00:48:640 (2,3) - Try to avoid this small overlap between these two sliders, it doesn't look so good. kay
  8. 00:53:040 - It feels like you're missing a note here on the main beat, make sure to add it if you think it's good. added
  9. 01:01:040 (1,2) - Why such random jump here? It doesn't make sense at all, just space them normally together.
  10. 01:02:640 (1,2) - Same as above for the same reason.
  11. 01:04:240 (1,2) - Really, you overused many random jumps on your parts, Shadow.awawawa
  12. 01:05:840 (1,2) - And once again.
  13. 01:13:840 (1,2) - Another time, please avoid them, they're really bad to play and doesn't flow good.
  14. 01:20:240 (1,2) - Same as above once and once again.
  15. 01:21:840 (6,1) - Again, though this one might be acceptable.
  16. 01:23:440 (5,1) - And here too, though this one might be acceptable as well.
  17. 01:28:440 (1,2,3,4) - Again, why have you used such random jumps? I seriously dislike them.fixed 90% of the jumps some ore ok for me so no changes for some in kiai time
  18. 01:51:040 (1) - I almost can't hear this finish at all, try to increase the volume by 20% at least.+10 is ok
  19. 02:10:240 - It feels like you're missing a note here on the main beat, make sure to add it if you think it's good. Also, add a clap on said note if you do add it. kk
  20. 02:41:440 (3,4) - This jump seems a bit too large for a Hard difficulty, try to reduce the spacing a bit.kk


Update :3
Roxas
Ok this is the sb

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For modders: There are big loops like 64 because offset is an integer number so don't say "break loops" lol
Topic Starter
Lally
Ty Roxas \( > u < )/

Updated :3
Nemis
[Andrea's Love]
00:10:040 (2,3) - Suggerisco di riflettere questi due sliders verticalmente per creare un blanket 00:09:440 (1,2) - qui
00:11:640 (5,6) - Non mi piacciono per nulla le ondine così corte, fossi in te le cambierei in qualcos'altro
00:14:640 (5,6,7,1) - Prova a metterli al centro, si vedono molto meglio esteticamente (fixa l'intero pattern di conseguenza)
00:34:040 (5) - CTRL + G mi sembra più bello :P di conseguenza CTRL + G anche 00:34:440 (6) - qui
01:04:440 (2,3) - Suggerisco di riflettere questi due sliders verticalmente per creare un blanket 01:03:840 (1,2) - qui
01:06:040 (5,6) - Non mi piacciono per nulla le ondine così corte, fossi in te le cambierei in qualcos'altro
01:09:440 (6,7) - Prova a metterli al centro, si vedono molto meglio esteticamente (fixa l'intero pattern di conseguenza)
01:28:440 (5,6) - A differenza di prima quà mi sembrano già belli così
02:18:640 (4) - CTRL + G e sposti 02:19:240 (5) - questo beat altrove? Non ho mai visto jumps come 02:18:440 (3,4) - da te, o sbaglio? xD
02:24:240 (1,2) - Ti prego fixa queste forme, le trovo abbastanza bruttine (mi riferisco alla fine, dove prendono la curvatura)
02:31:440 (3,4) - Suggeristo di invertirli di posizione, flowano meglio con (2)
02:32:240 (5,6) - Se hai cambiato come ho scritto sopra lascia così, in caso contrario invertili di posizione. In aggiunta suggerisco di cambiare le due forme in quanto è il sesto slider 1/2 che la ha ricurva
02:37:840 (3,4) - Anche qui consiglio di invertire i sue sliders
02:38:640 (5,6) - Se hai cambiato come ho scritto sopra lascia così, in caso contrario invertili di posizione. In aggiunta suggerisco di cambiare le due forme in quanto trovo bruttine le ondine corte
02:39:440 (7) - Consiglio di cambiare anche questa forma
awesome

[Our Love]
00:19:640 (1) - I suggest to add a note here
00:22:640 (1,2,3) - Try to make the blanket better
00:37:840 (2,3,4) - I suggest to make a perfect triangle
00:46:440 (6) - I suggest to add a note here and remove 00:45:640 (2,3,4,5,6) -
00:48:240 (1,2,3,4) - Try to make the blanket better
00:51:840 (1,2,3) - I suggest to change this rythm in:

00:55:840 (2,3,4) - And this is:

01:14:640 (5,1) - Fix this stack
01:21:040 (5) - I suggest to use CTRL + G here
01:23:440 (5,1) - Sincerly I don't think this jump would be nice there; 01:23:440 (5,1,2,3) - this could make players a bit angry D:
01:28:440 (1,2) - Fix this blanket and I suggest to change 01:29:040 (2,3,4) - since it's not really fun to play
01:31:840 (2) - CTRL + G ? And fix the blanket 01:31:440 (1,2) - here
01:32:640 (5,1) - Try to fix the spacing a bit here, 01:32:440 (4,5,1) - this seems a jumpy singletap when it's not
01:37:440 (3) - Stack this under 01:36:240 (1) - 's end
01:51:040 (5) - I suggest to add a note here and start the spinner after
02:10:240 (5,6,7) - I suggest to make this slider symmetric
02:15:240 (2) - CTRL + G wouldn't be bad
02:39:440 (4) - Make this slider more adherent with 02:38:640 (1) - 's begin
02:41:840 (4,5,6) - This overlap is unrankable
02:41:840 (1) - What about add a new combo here?

[My Love]
00:53:840 (4,5) - Muovili sotto 00:51:440 (1) -
02:05:040 (1) - Trovo davvero insensato porre uno spinner quì ad inizio kiai... come mai non l'hai messo prima come nelle altre difficoltà? Ci sta benissimo, ti consiglio di spostarlo e mappare questo pezzo di inizio kiai
02:17:840 (1) - Suggerisco di eliminare pure quest'altro spinner

[249's Love]
00:08:640 (1) - Remove new combo
00:24:640 (1) - Remove new combo
00:31:040 (1) - Remove new combo
01:03:040 (1) - Remove new combo
01:15:840 (1) - Remove new combo
From 01:52:640 (1) - to 02:01:840 (1) - : why not a break? This song is long like 3 minutes, beginners need a break D:
Nice map and awesome remix/song *-* Good luck
Topic Starter
Lally
Nemis

Nemis wrote:

[notice]
[Our Love]
00:19:640 (1) - I suggest to add a note here meh
00:22:640 (1,2,3) - Try to make the blanket better kay
00:37:840 (2,3,4) - I suggest to make a perfect triangle imo is good
00:46:440 (6) - I suggest to add a note here and remove 00:45:640 (2,3,4,5,6) - =w= uff ok
00:48:240 (1,2,3,4) - Try to make the blanket better uhm here is not supposed to be a blanket
00:51:840 (1,2,3) - I suggest to change this rythm in: kk

00:55:840 (2,3,4) - And this is:kk

01:14:640 (5,1) - Fix this stack kk
01:21:040 (5) - I suggest to use CTRL + G here nah
01:23:440 (5,1) - Sincerly I don't think this jump would be nice there; 01:23:440 (5,1,2,3) - this could make players a bit angry D: dimenticato prima fixed
01:28:440 (1,2) - Fix this blanket and I suggest to change 01:29:040 (2,3,4) - since it's not really fun to play fixato un po
01:31:840 (2) - CTRL + G ? And fix the blanket 01:31:440 (1,2) - here fixed only blanket
01:32:640 (5,1) - Try to fix the spacing a bit here, 01:32:440 (4,5,1) - this seems a jumpy singletap when it's not meh ok
01:37:440 (3) - Stack this under 01:36:240 (1) - 's end lo è ...
01:51:040 (5) - I suggest to add a note here and start the spinner after nah non mi ispira sinceramente o3o
02:10:240 (5,6,7) - I suggest to make this slider symmetric k
02:15:240 (2) - CTRL + G wouldn't be bad why create a jump here?
02:39:440 (4) - Make this slider more adherent with 02:38:640 (1) - 's begin hmm
02:41:840 (4,5,6) - This overlap is unrankable ups
02:41:840 (1) - What about add a new combo here? k

[My Love]
00:53:840 (4,5) - Muovili sotto 00:51:440 (1) - ups fixed
02:05:040 (1) - Trovo davvero insensato porre uno spinner quì ad inizio kiai... come mai non l'hai messo prima come nelle altre difficoltà? Ci sta benissimo, ti consiglio di spostarlo e mappare questo pezzo di inizio kiai
02:17:840 (1) - Suggerisco di eliminare pure quest'altro spinner
perchè volevo fare la normal con molti spinner e nel ''awwwwwwwwwwww'' ci sta benissimo secondo me o3o amo gli spinner io o3o


  1. added SB names o3o
  2. fixed mods
  3. waiting for moe-nya and Andrea's update :3

Update
YTYuyu

Andrea wrote:

~249's Love~
  1. Decrease OD by 1 tick, it's too high right now for an Easy difficulty to me. if i do that, then there's gonna be no flow shown in this diff for beginners.
  1. 00:06:640 (1) ~ 00:18:240 (3) - This part feels really empty without hitsounds, please add some whistles or something. Done. i thought it'd be fitting to the mood for the song but looks like it isn't.
  2. 00:31:040 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not necessary. whoops this was a mistake. fixed.
  3. 00:57:840 (4) - Add a whistle on this circle to emphasize with the end of the chorus. but i'm not following the vocals, i'm following the BGM in this part.
  4. 01:01:040 (1) - Add a finish on this circle to emphasize with the strong beat of the song. fixed.
  5. 01:25:440 (1) - Remove this new combo from here, it's not necessary. ^
  6. 01:51:440 (3) - After this slider, I'd prefer if you make a break like the other difficulties, especially because this is an Easy, beginners might need some time to recover more than others, don't you think? Please do it. ok to make it like the other diffs, done.
  7. 02:43:440 (5) - Add a whistle on this circle to emphasize with the end of the chorus. same as 00:57:840.
ty for the mod, and Nemis, i only applied 1 combo Andrea mentioned, and the break, everything else is ignored because they follow the change in the vocals.

<3
osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
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Title:True Love (Nightcore Mix)
TitleUnicode:True Love (Nightcore Mix)
Artist:Destinee & Paris
ArtistUnicode:Destinee & Paris
Creator:Lally
Version:249's Love
Source:
Tags:ShadowSoul Byakugan249 Andrea osuplayer111 trance
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372,172,13840,2,0,L|372:260,2,80,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,164,15040,2,0,P|200:164|136:208,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,256,16240,6,0,L|88:344,2,80,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,192,17440,2,0,L|40:108,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,144,18240,2,0,P|172:120|272:120,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,88,19440,5,4,0:0:0:0:
380,148,19840,2,0,P|404:220|364:300,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,344,21040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,368,21440,2,0,L|68:368,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,292,22640,5,0,0:0:0:0:
44,212,23040,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,132,23440,2,0,P|88:96|132:88,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,68,24240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
276,60,24640,6,0,L|368:60,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,44,25440,2,0,L|488:44,2,40,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,124,26240,6,0,P|460:216|344:304,1,240,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,312,27840,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,316,28240,2,0,P|132:304|84:220,1,160
92,148,29440,5,8,0:0:0:0:
152,96,29840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,80,30240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,96,30640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,100,31040,2,0,L|392:16,2,80
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336,356,33440,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,332,33840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,292,34240,2,0,L|96:292,2,80,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,248,35440,6,0,L|260:160,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,92,36240,2,0,P|200:56|92:52,1,160
40,108,37440,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,188,37840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
72,260,38240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,316,38640,6,0,P|188:348|244:348,2,120,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,204,40440,2,0,L|100:72,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,44,41440,1,2,0:0:0:0:
244,64,41840,6,0,L|368:64,2,120,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,184,43640,2,0,L|380:184,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,240,44640,1,2,0:0:0:0:
368,300,45040,6,0,L|296:340,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,352,45840,2,0,L|100:352,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,276,47440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,200,47840,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,132,48240,6,0,L|176:44,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,36,49040,2,0,P|340:24|424:40,1,160
452,108,50240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,184,50640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,260,51040,1,8,0:0:0:0:
400,320,51440,6,0,P|340:360|288:360,2,120,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,216,53240,2,0,P|320:148|340:104,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,36,54240,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,80,54640,6,0,P|484:128|484:196,2,120,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,32,56440,2,0,L|212:32,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,80,57440,1,2,0:0:0:0:
100,136,57840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,220,61040,5,4,0:0:0:0:
140,284,61440,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,324,61840,2,0,P|252:332|296:320,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,284,62640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
408,224,63040,6,0,P|420:184|408:148,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,88,63840,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,44,64240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,36,64640,6,0,P|132:40|68:100,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,168,65840,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,196,66240,2,0,P|196:192|260:132,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,64,67440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,108,67840,6,0,P|376:152|376:192,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,256,68640,1,8,0:0:0:0:
284,304,69040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,340,69440,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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216,136,72240,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,112,72640,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,152,73040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
404,220,73440,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,288,73840,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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144,288,75040,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,240,75440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,172,75840,6,0,P|36:100|120:68,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,64,77040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,36,77440,6,0,L|360:36,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,88,78240,2,0,L|404:168,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,240,79040,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,300,79440,2,0,P|284:324|244:324,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,268,80240,1,4,0:0:0:0:
244,208,80640,6,0,L|244:124,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,64,81440,2,0,P|160:56|116:72,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,120,82240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
40,196,82640,2,0,L|40:284,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,316,83440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,344,83840,6,0,L|280:344,2,80,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,264,85040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,192,85440,2,0,P|144:128|232:68,1,160
292,48,86640,6,0,L|380:48,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
431,102,87440,2,0,P|447:166|419:262,1,160
360,304,88640,2,0,P|284:312|204:284,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,236,89840,5,0,0:0:0:0:
96,172,90240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,104,90640,2,0,P|216:64|256:60,2,120,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,172,92240,2,0,L|48:248,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,316,93040,6,0,P|152:356|196:356,2,120,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,204,94840,2,0,L|28:80,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,44,95840,1,2,0:0:0:0:
172,72,96240,6,0,P|248:104|296:104,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,56,97440,2,0,P|408:124|384:172,2,120,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,36,99040,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,112,99440,6,0,P|280:152|296:196,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,236,100240,2,0,P|356:300|268:344,1,160
200,332,101440,2,0,L|112:332,2,80,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,264,102640,6,0,L|240:172,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,104,103440,2,0,P|328:48|396:40,1,160
440,100,104640,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,176,105040,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,256,105440,1,8,0:0:0:0:
408,316,105840,6,0,P|348:356|292:352,2,120,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,200,107640,2,0,L|376:80,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,36,108640,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,76,109040,6,0,L|108:76,2,120,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,176,110840,1,4,0:0:0:0:
244,280,111440,2,0,P|200:320|100:320,1,160,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,121840,12,2,123440,0:0:0:0:
40,60,125040,6,0,L|40:148,1,80,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,220,125840,2,0,P|88:284|168:300,1,160
244,280,127040,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,252,127440,2,0,L|408:252,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,212,128240,6,0,P|492:132|460:56,1,160
396,24,129440,2,0,L|312:24,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,32,130240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,80,130640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
140,152,131040,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,228,131440,6,0,L|120:352,2,120,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,160,133240,2,0,P|288:136|348:136,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,156,134240,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,216,134640,6,0,P|484:280|456:328,2,120,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,112,136440,2,0,L|276:112,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,88,137440,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,104,137840,5,4,0:0:0:0:
68,152,138240,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,224,138640,2,0,P|36:300|116:328,1,160
172,288,139840,2,0,P|248:256|320:288,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,304,141040,5,0,0:0:0:0:
436,232,141440,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,156,141840,2,0,P|460:88|380:52,1,160
308,76,143040,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,108,143440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,108,143840,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,144,144240,6,0,P|52:212|64:272,2,120,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,224,146040,2,0,P|224:248|300:248,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,228,147040,1,2,0:0:0:0:
420,168,147440,6,0,L|420:40,2,120,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,280,149240,2,0,P|328:332|272:332,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,312,150240,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,264,150640,6,0,P|76:144|200:40,2,320,4|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,296,154440,2,0,P|320:292|376:248,2,120,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,192,156240,1,4,0:0:0:0:
232,120,156640,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,68,157040,6,0,P|424:68|488:224,2,320,4|2|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,152,160840,2,0,P|144:192|92:192,2,120,4|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,92,162640,1,4,0:0:0:0:
356,160,163040,1,2,0:0:0:0:
312,228,163440,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Topic Starter
Lally
Ty moe-nya \o3o/

Updated o3o
119410501
Good job.
Topic Starter
Lally
\o3o/ yay ty
Irreversible
Modding as your request

[Andrea's Love]

00:06:640 (1) - I don't really get why this slider is there. It's just unfitting, and confusing :c
00:07:840 (4,5,6) - this is kinda similar to 00:11:040 (4,5,6) -, I think you're enough creative to think about another pattern here? :3
:!: 00:36:640 (5) - place this to x: 256 y: 208
01:31:040 (5) - ^ same thing here

the rest seems ok

[Our Love]

00:19:640 - She starts to sing here, so why don't you put a circle here? i suggest this:
00:18:640 (1) - let the spinner end 00:19:040 - here
00:19:440 - add a circle,
00:19:640 - add a circle as well.

00:43:640 (4,5,6) - in fact that you never put any triplets, this just doesn't fit, i would remove it
00:46:240 (5,1) - in this part you should go with the lyrics as well. 00:46:240 (5) - shorten this slider by 1 tick,
then place a slider from 00:46:840 - to 00:47:240 -
00:47:440 - and add a circle here
00:49:439 (4,1) - this is just overmapped, idk why you're not going with the lyrics, in fact that it really fits better ><
01:25:440 (2,4) - try to move 4 that it doesn't touch 2 that weird, it looks odd, even if you're ingame
02:13:240 (4,5,6) - remove this, replacing by other things

Well the main issue in this diff is the rhythm you placed, especially in your parts, Lally. Try to remove then, listen to the lyrics more closely, it will get better imo. (no offend)

[My Love]

00:11:640 - same thing, the lyrics tells us that you have to place smth here :P
00:41:840 (1,2,3,4) - this isn't good. lyrics xD
00:46:640 - remove this slider here,
00:46:840 (4) - add a slider from here to00:47:240 -
add a slider from 00:47:440 - to00:47:640 -

the second and third kiai time are better, they sound nice and are well placed.
the placing overall is also nice, so ididn't have to point out anything

[249's Love]

no.. kiai? oô
00:19:440 (1) - not sure if wrong placing o,o

Got nothing else to say here :) it's ok~

good luck lally! have a star, since i love this song xD i hope i could help a bit :3
Topic Starter
Lally
Irreversible

Irreversible wrote:

Modding as your request

[Our Love]

00:19:640 - She starts to sing here, so why don't you put a circle here? i suggest this:
00:18:640 (1) - let the spinner end 00:19:040 - here wtf? i hope it's a joke.. this is a unrankable think since the spinner not doing 1000 points
00:19:440 - add a circle,^
00:19:640 - add a circle as well.^

Not all have to follow lyrics how i said,and please try to give atleast not unrankable suggestions òwò

00:43:640 (4,5,6) - in fact that you never put any triplets, this just doesn't fit, i would remove it if you look after you can find other too.
00:46:240 (5,1) - in this part you should go with the lyrics as well. 00:46:240 (5) - shorten this slider by 1 tick,
then place a slider from 00:46:840 - to 00:47:240 -
00:47:440 - and add a circle here same about the rhythm here and not lyrics
00:49:439 (4,1) - this is just overmapped, idk why you're not going with the lyrics, in fact that it really fits better >< what? o.o
01:25:440 (2,4) - try to move 4 that it doesn't touch 2 that weird, it looks odd, even if you're ingame

i don't think so


02:13:240 (4,5,6) - remove this, replacing by other things why?

Well the main issue in this diff is the rhythm you placed, especially in your parts, Lally. Try to remove then, listen to the lyrics more closely, it will get better imo. (no offend)
Imo the rhythm is fine,since for now nobody said something about.

[My Love]

00:11:640 - same thing, the lyrics tells us that you have to place smth here :P this is a normal and i don't wanna do it do difficult
00:41:840 (1,2,3,4) - this isn't good. lyrics xD i don't follow always lyrics
00:46:640 - remove this slider here, no because it sounds good and you should listen the rhythm of the song and not look only at lyrics
00:46:840 (4) - add a slider from here to00:47:240 -
add a slider from 00:47:440 - to00:47:640 - no,same reason as^

the second and third kiai time are better, they sound nice and are well placed.
the placing overall is also nice, so ididn't have to point out anything
It's your opinion,i don't follow always the lyrics in a map but i try to follow also the rhythm too.

good luck lally! have a star, since i love this song xD i hope i could help a bit :3

Ty for support o3o/

à3à
Irreversible
I'm sorry for that spinner suggestion, I didn't see that, yes it was a mistake.

but still, you accepted none of my suggestions, really asking me why i was modding it? Also I don't understand why you're talking for shadow.
Konei
Just saying, just becasue noone says something against something, it doesn't mean, that it is good lol.
No offense, I'm not talking to anyone, just wanted to say this owo
Topic Starter
Lally
this is true ofc,but i didn't fixed nothing because for me this things are ok,and because i don't find it so wrong to follow the rhythm sometimes and not the lyrics.this is the only reason not because i didn't fix anything,and about the triplets they are ok,since in the map they are some not only one random.
riffy
heeey!

[General]
  1. You need tags remix and Monroe because it makes finding this beatmap easier. Also you need some more tags like Nyally BakaSoul Bakandrea Nyandrea and Tsundrea
  2. Consider using Slider Tick Rate 2 for all diffs. It fits with background music.
[249's Love]
  1. I'd recommend you to use HP Drain 2 because it makes diff settings better-balanced and more enjoyable for beginner players. I'd say that HP Drain 3 is too hard here :<
  2. 00:08:640 (1) - try to remove this combo, it feels better here. You don't have new combo at 00:11:840 (3) - 00:15:040 (3) - and so on, so remove this one to keep consistency.
  3. 00:25:440 (2) - I wouldn't use 1/2 sliders for [Easy] diff since they're too short and may confuse beginners a bit. It's up to you, tho.
[Your Love]
  1. 00:51:840 (2) - for sliders like this one, I'd recommend you to separate vocals from music. example
    Note: it may be a bit too hard. But this is kiai time and I think it makes it even more enjoyable for players!
  2. 01:38:040 - same as above, some more 1/2 notes won't hurt too much. It will fit with music, too!
  3. 02:13:440 (5,2) - ULTRA-NAZI - this overlap looks a bit messy. it looks even more awkward because you have no similar overlaps :< Try to fix it, please!
[Nyally X SS]
  1. 00:14:840 (1) - nazi - I'd say that x2.0+ jumps are quite hard. It's doesn't really fis with calm part of the song and it's too hard for [Hard] diff. This is not [Insane], remember!
  2. 00:19:040 - that "spin" sounds ends here. If you will try to cut spinner - it'll be unrankable. Try to replace it with a slider?
  3. 00:41:840 (1,2) - x3.0+ jumps are NOT okay for [Hard] diff. It's too hard and it'll stress players too much! Try to reduce spacing and keep it under x2.5 at least :<
  4. 02:34:440 (2) - sae as above here! This pattern sure looks good, but it's too hard. I'd be glad to see this pattern on [Insane] diff, tho. o3o/[
  5. 02:37:840 (1) - nazi - in fact, this new comb looks a bit extra here. I'd remove it to keep comboing consistent. Just a suggestion, anyway
[Nyandrea's Love]
I smell some lazy mappers here \:3/
  1. Probably it will hurt balance between diffs, but try to use HP Drain 7 here. It feels the way better and makes this diff a bit more enjoyable and balanced.

    I'd say that jumps are overused. But it's just my opinion. Have nothing else to say, anyway.
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Star! ~
BCI
random mod because I can huehue
/me got stalked so sorry if I suggested the same ;_;

[General]
  1. 02:46:440 - how about ending this spinner here? here's the last "oh-oh~"o3o
  2. collab collaboration in tags because Hard - Collab
[249]
  1. OD-1. I saw your comment about flow, but still, OD2 gives you more flow than 3, now it's more like a Normal diff + OD3 ruins all the consistency in diff settings for whole map
  2. welp again different kiai times ;_; how about making full kiai at the end with fountains in the middle and end (look here) now it's too boring imo :<
  3. 00:06:640 (T) - i'd make here 40/50% volume, it's more smoothy and you can feel the difference between slow and not that slow part. +it's too noizy right now
  4. 00:17:440 (2,3,1) - is all the overlaps here intentional? it looks ugly+ruins the spacing, I'd remake this pattern. like in here
  5. 00:25:440 (2) - no no and no pls. don't use sliders with 1/2 repeat in Easy especially it's VERY necesscary. now it isn't because it's only one 1/2 slider in whole map, consider to remake this into 1/1 slider
  6. 00:26:240 (1) - I don't even know which thing this slider is following, fore- or background, vocals or BGM... tl;dr this slider should end 1/1 before (00:27:040 - ) it fits with both vocals and BGM. don't forget to add a clap at the end if you agree
  7. 00:41:440 (3) - how about adding a clap instead of whistle here? whistle fits nothing especially it doesn't even hear here + music still has that strong clap sound + it follows your clap pattern so... \o3o/
    1. if you agree with me, do this for 00:44:640 (3) ; 00:54:240 (3) ; 00:57:440 (3) - and so on too
  8. 00:57:840 (4) - i'd remove this note and drag the break to here, it fits better with the song because now this circle follows absolutely nothing
  9. 01:12:640 (3) - that clap here feels too noizy because there begins small calm part where these clap sounds is missing (tl;dr how about deleting clap and adding whistle instead)
clear diff, I hope you can explain how do you put whistles instead of claps in 00:41:440 (3) :<

[Normal]
  1. 00:06:640 (T) - same as Easy, 60% is too noizy for intro part
  2. 00:17:440 (1) - welp too short spinner + next (1) is too close + too early beginning (it should be at the next white tick) how about delete this spinner and map this part
  3. 00:29:040 (1) - again next (1) is too close after spinner asdfghjk, how about moving the end 1/1 back
  4. 00:48:240 (1,2,3,4) - oh well, I approve, you'd better following vocal here instead of just making symmetry pattern (http://puu.sh/2yBjB)
  5. 01:12:640 (4) - same as Easy
  6. 01:23:440 (1) - same as 00:29:040 (1) -
  7. 01:41:440 (3,4) - asdfghjk this pattern, there's no any flow and it's frustrating to play by me, how about http://puu.sh/2yBqA
  8. 02:05:040 (1) - why this spinner at the begin of kiai time :V that eeeeahhh eeeeahh sound is here for the whole part of the kiai time, it's not a reason, so map this pls
  9. 02:17:840 (1) - ^ (or atleast add claps on these two for keeping clap pattern)
  10. 02:30:640 (1) - oh u sure? it's soooo short, y u no make just slider
  11. 02:33:840 (4) - NC for strong vocal?
  12. 02:37:040 (3) - NC+finish would be awesum
  13. 02:40:240 (1) - delete spinner, map this part and begin le spinner like in other diffs, don't even know why do you put spinner here o3o
[Hard]
Lally:
  1. 00:49:040 (3) - ctrl+g?
ShadowSoul:
  1. 00:13:840 (4) - how about curve it in another way (http://puu.sh/2yBCn) now this pattern have no flow at all
  2. 00:18:640 (1) - too short spinner :< it's not awesome and it doesn't fit, map this spinner pls
  3. 00:34:640 (2,3,4) - make this triangle perfect using DS 1.8 at all circles
  4. 00:37:840 (2,3,4) - ^ also this jump is a bit too big for a Hard so use 1.8 DS again o3o
  5. 00:38:640 (1,2,3) - ... don't do it in Hards next time please, it's Insane pattern o3o (00:41:840 (1,2,3) - same)
  6. 02:35:640 (4) - it fits nothing :U you'd better to follow vocal here, make it liek http://puu.sh/2yBS2
@SS: personally I don't like your parts, I wish you can work on this more o3o

[Andrea]
  1. AR9 is TOO fast. AR8 pls, it fits even better here, you're following the vocals in fact, so you got not-so-crazy diff, no matter this is Insane
  2. I don't get your logic in NC placement, sometimes you follow vocal sometimes you don't o3o
    useless box of NC swapping >.<
    1. 00:15:440 (1,2) - swap NCs
    2. 00:21:840 (1,2) - ^
    3. 00:23:240 (1,2) - ^
    4. 00:35:040 (1,2) - ^
    5. 01:03:840 (1,2) - ^
    6. 01:09:840 (1,2) - ^
    7. 01:16:240 (1,2) - ^
    8. 01:19:040 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is good but for the sake of consistency I suggest to make le combos like (9,10,11,1,2)
    9. 01:29:440 (1,2) - swap again
    10. 02:20:640 (1,2) - ^
awesum diff huehue
Andrea
Here's my update, thanks everyone for modding.

http://puu.sh/2yEYl <- Download.
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