This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, September 06, 2009 at 9:50:22 PM

Artist: K-taro Takanami
Title: Yasashisa no Shouzou
Source: Chobits
BPM: 162
Filesize: 3773kb
Play Time: 02:42
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4.77 stars, 258 notes)
2. Normal (2.41 stars, 171 notes)

Download: K-taro Takanami - Yasashisa no Shouzou
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Also known as "Portrait of Tenderness." This is a really nice and relaxing melody from Chobits.

Let me know what you think of the custom additions.

Enjoy.

Edit: Revived. It was tough at first, but I finally got a hard made.
Edit 2: fixes.

This maps gives me comfy chills! Lovely!
Here is something I think sounds better though:
[Normal]
02:11:658 (1) - This spinner should have a whistle hitsound
02:16:103 (1) - Same with this one.

Why should they have that? It matches the hitsounds of the following sliders, like the one at 02:20:547.

Fixed. Also did the same on hard.

Thanks for modding.

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[Normal]
00:10:17() - A beat here?
00:19:06() - A beat here?

Is the background supposed to move higher at the end?

[Hard]
01:07:21 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This star pattern seems kind of... weird...



[Both]
Is the background supposed to move higher at the end?



Starred.

That's just the way the spinner background works I think. Since I have the same image for both the spinner bg and the map bg, it looks like it shinks then moves upward.

Hopefully the star looks a bit better now. Thanks.

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All fixed.

[Normal]
02:09:43 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - overusing whistle
02:13:88 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:18:32 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
02:22:76 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
02:40:54 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^


[Hard]
00:42:70 (5) - fix the break
same whistle thing ad Normal


call me back for bubbling :3

Done.

nicp map
all fine.i can not find any problems.maybe because of my little experience,sorry,i did not any good.XD
stared~

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[Normal]

Suggest higher volume at the start and riding volume (quiet -> louder), possibly.

00:58:32 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Riding volume
01:02:76 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Riding volume
01:07:21 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Riding volume
02:42:76 (1) - Fading volume on this

[Hard]

General suggestions:

I suggest increasing volume by 10-15% to every section.

The beginning part really tricked me as it was so silent I had no "feeling" that I was hitting any notes or sliders. You can try increasing the volume from silence to around 35% for the starting section, riding volume.

Suggest slider tick rate 0.5 and lowering the slider velocity.

Specific suggestions:

00:42:70 (5) - Change this to a 3 stack
00:58:32 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Riding volume here would be nice
01:02:76 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Riding volume here as well
01:07:58 (2,4,6) - Add soft whistles to these at a lower volume perhaps
01:12:02 (2,4,6) - These as well
01:37:58 (1,2) - Kinda noisy, change the first repeat slider to a 3 stack, remove the second one and add a note on the white/red tick, like so:



01:40:64 (3) - Remove this repeat slider, add a 3 stack on the red tick then add another note on the red tick after the stack
01:46:47 (1,2) - I'd change these too to something like the above
02:27:21 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Doesn't sound good here, I would suggest changing these to streams/stacks of the nature with single notes following. I put down something quick as an idea, you should revise this though as it doesn't exactly sound great either:



02:31:65 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same as the above
02:42:76 (1) - Fading out volume on this spinner please

Good job on this very difficult to map song, have my star. Also please note that what I put down in those screenshots were not placed properly but rather are just there for me to listen to ._.

Incorporated Alace's volume suggestions for now. If you really think I need the riding volumes though, attach a difficutly with the volumes added and I'll consider adding them. (I've never used them in my maps before, so I'd probably do it wrong) :\

Also changed around Hard a bit and lowered the tick rate on both difficulties. I'm against lowering the velocity.

Thanks for your feedback.

Okay, added some quick volume controls to your Hard, renamed to Test for your experimenting purposes.

Have a look:

Download: K-taro Takanami - Yasashisa no Shouzou (kingcobra52) [Test].osu

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Mystearica wrote:

Okay, added some quick volume controls to your Hard, renamed to Test for your experimenting purposes.

Have a look:

[attachment=0:42eb3]K-taro Takanami - Yasashisa no Shouzou (kingcobra52) [Test].osu[/attachment:42eb3]

Added to normal and hard. Thanks.

Offset: 9.428 should work better I think.

Hard:
01:24:99 (3) - Partially offscreen ;|

Normal:
I have the feeling that the sliders are around double as slow as they should be. Am i right?

Done.

Bubbled!