1. Easy (2,04 stars, 49 notes)
2. Hard (4,79 stars, 106 notes)
3. Konei's Normal (4,3 stars, 75 notes)

1. How i said in irc i think kiai is a bit overused,i love kiai but this is too much for me too, why don't you try to use it only from 00:32:588 - to 00:46:028 - ?
2. 00:48:428 - i think here is better to place a circle as to beginn the spinner because i think a cirle + finish would be a perfect end *-*

1. 00:01:868 (1) - i think you know that is not perfectly symmetric :V
2. 00:13:868 (1,2) - what about to move this 2 circles down not up from the prev slider because i think the flow is not so good between 00:12:428 (2,1) - if you're not goind to place they down try do do a perfect nazi blanket u.u
   
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3. 00:17:228 (1) - i think this slider is too soon for a easy diff
4. 00:20:348 (4,1) - i don't like very much how the (1) - is hidden why don't you try to do something like this:
   
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5. 00:29:708 (x) - i can hear a bass sound why don't you add a circle here?
6. 00:37:868 (x) - same about here^

1. 00:05:708 (1) - why don't you try to use normal sampleset at slider start i think it sounds better for me

1. 00:40:988 (2,3) - you should relook spacing here since the (2) - is a bit to far from (3) -

1. 00:22:508 (4,5) - i think you can do this blanket a bit better

1. 00:05:708 (1) - why don't you try to use normal sampleset at slider start i think it sounds better for me
2. 00:46:508 (5) - missing clap here?

1. 00:46:508 (5) - i think a new combo here is not bad since this combo that you started is become to long.
2. 00:47:948 (1) - this new combo is fitting with anything imo. you should remove it.

1. 00:17:468 (2) - personaly i find this slider a bit ugly , why don't you try to do it like :
   
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2. 00:40:748 (2) - why don't you try to improve this blanket in this way:
   
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1. 00:05:708 (1) - why don't you try to use normal sampleset at slider start i think it sounds better for me

1. 00:17:228 (1) - This slider is way too soon after spinner for the easiest difficulty of the mapset, try to reduce the spinner lenght or to make start the slider a bit later to fix this issue.
2. 00:19:148 (3,4,1) - I'd try avoid overlapping these together, it doesn't look so good to me.
3. 00:25:868 (2) - I think this slider would look and flow better if curve instead.
4. 00:48:428 (1) - I think this spinner would sound better if soft with a whistle in it.

1. 00:07:628 - Start this break here, it would fit with the music perfectly.
2. 00:16:028 (5) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change.
3. 00:46:508 (5) - Add a clap here to follow with the music background, it seems like you're missing it. Also, why don't you add a new combo as well? Otherwise it will be a too long imo.
4. 00:47:948 (1) - Afterwards remove this new combo from here since you won't need it.
5. 00:48:428 (1) - I think this spinner would sound better if soft with a whistle in it.

1. 00:28:268 (5) - This slider is kinda touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit if possible.
2. 00:48:428 (1) - I think this spinner would sound better if soft with a whistle in it.

Andrea wrote:

~Konei's Normal~

1. 00:07:628 - Start this break here, it would fit with the music perfectly. Added a note.
2. 00:16:028 (5) - Add a new combo here due to the new stanza and music change. Would break my pattern, so no.
3. 00:46:508 (5) - Add a clap here to follow with the music background, it seems like you're missing it. Also, why don't you add a new combo as well? Otherwise it will be a too long imo. Added clap and NC
4. 00:47:948 (1) - Afterwards remove this new combo from here since you won't need it. Sure
5. 00:48:428 (1) - I think this spinner would sound better if soft with a whistle in it. Yeah.

Lally wrote:

[Normal]
Spacing:

1. 00:40:988 (2,3) - you should relook spacing here since the (2) - is a bit to far from (3) - Shouldn't be a problem since it looks neat, isn't read badly and doesn't confuse.

Placement:

1. 00:22:508 (4,5) - i think you can do this blanket a bit better In fact, I cannot LOL, looks perfect to me.

Hitsounds:

1. 00:05:708 (1) - why don't you try to use normal sampleset at slider start i think it sounds better for me Naah, but I added drum finishes accordingly
2. 00:46:508 (5) - missing clap here? Already fixed from Andrea's mod

New Combos:

1. 00:46:508 (5) - i think a new combo here is not bad since this combo that you started is become to long. Already fixed from Andrea's mod.
2. 00:47:948 (1) - this new combo is fitting with anything imo. you should remove it. Already fixed from Andrea's mod

00:25:868 (2) - I think this slider would look and flow better if curve instead.

Hey, random mod because you're wizard <3

1. You need some more tags: theme song and maybe ost. Not sure about second one, tho.
2. 00:17:228 - try to place a kiai fountain here? It's a good idea because this part is awesome and sounds like kia. :V
3. Your new BG is so awesome! Try some sexy combo colours?
   
   huehuehue

   Combo1 : 122,221,117
   Combo2 : 79,79,232
   Combo3 : 206,125,210
   Combo4 : 232,218,142
   Combo5 : 189,105,87

4. Disable audioLeadIn! You don't really need it, anyway!

1. Use AR8 (and OD/HP7 for balance). This speed up with low AR looks very unplayable and will stress players. What's more [Hard] is the hardest diff here, and AR8 is the best idea here! I really don't like AR7 here :<
2. 00:04:748 - it feels kinda epty here, I guess circle will fit here. Try to place it here and see if you like it!
3. 00:20:588 (5) - this jump here is too hard and doesn't flow very good. Try to Crtl+G it for better flow?
4. 00:45:548 - it feels quite empty here, try to place a circle with clap hitsound?

1. 00:07:628 - start break time here? just drag that break to this point and test it
2. 00:16:028 (5) - i can't say that 1/4 sliders are really ok here. This slider is too fast and it will confuse some players. I'd try to replace it with two circles. You will miss a beat at 00:16:148 - but it will make map more playable!
3. 00:46:028 (4,5) - here, I'd put New Combo on one of these circles. there's some rhythm changes and you should point them out by placing a New Combo!
4. 00:47:708 - consider placing here a circle, sounds better to me. Without this circle I feel like there's something missed :<

1. 00:03:788 (1) and 00:11:468 (1) - I'd remove those New Combos to keep comboing more consistent.
2. 00:08:108 - place here a break to be consistent with other diffs? Also that - 00:07:628 (2,1) - x0.28 spacing here may confuse players, so break will be reasonable here.
3. 00:21:068 (1) - nazi - this note is too close o previous (3), beginners might mistakenly click it too early! Try something like this instead?
4. 00:44:588 (1,3) - I'd swap those new combos because kiai ends at (3). It's not like you have to do it, but I'll be appy if you do it.

Bubbled!

Stefan wrote:

[Normal]
Why does this Map has over 4 Stars.. I don't get it.
00:48:428 (1) - Same what I said at Gabe's Diffs. Already fixed from Andrea's mod.

-Bakari- wrote:

[Konei's Normal]

1. 00:07:628 - start break time here? just drag that break to this point and test it Will be too short and auto deleted.
2. 00:16:028 (5) - i can't say that 1/4 sliders are really ok here. This slider is too fast and it will confuse some players. I'd try to replace it with two circles. You will miss a beat at 00:16:148 - but it will make map more playable! Since song is short, I guess some challanges won't be too bad :3
3. 00:46:028 (4,5) - here, I'd put New Combo on one of these circles. there's some rhythm changes and you should point them out by placing a New Combo! Already fixed.
4. 00:47:708 - consider placing here a circle, sounds better to me. Without this circle I feel like there's something missed :< Added ~

-Bakari- wrote:

Hey, random mod because you're wizard <3

[General]

1. You need some more tags: theme song and maybe ost. Not sure about second one, tho.
2. 00:17:228 - try to place a kiai fountain here? It's a good idea because this part is awesome and sounds like kia. :V
3. Your new BG is so awesome! Try some sexy combo colours?
   
   huehuehue

   Combo1 : 122,221,117
   Combo2 : 79,79,232
   Combo3 : 206,125,210
   Combo4 : 232,218,142
   Combo5 : 189,105,87

4. Disable audioLeadIn! You don't really need it, anyway!

[Hard]

1. Use AR8 (and OD/HP7 for balance). This speed up with low AR looks very unplayable and will stress players. What's more [Hard] is the hardest diff here, and AR8 is the best idea here! I really don't like AR7 here :< Done
2. 00:04:748 - it feels kinda epty here, I guess circle will fit here. Try to place it here and see if you like it! In my opinion, I can fit pretty well but the thing is, I haven't followed the vocals here, but the soft sounds in the background.
3. 00:20:588 (5) - this jump here is too hard and doesn't flow very good. Try to Crtl+G it for better flow? Done
4. 00:45:548 - it feels quite empty here, try to place a circle with clap hitsound? I don't get why I should ;w;

[Easy]

1. 00:03:788 (1) and 00:11:468 (1) - I'd remove those New Combos to keep comboing more consistent. Done
2. 00:08:108 - place here a break to be consistent with other diffs? Also that - 00:07:628 (2,1) - x0.28 spacing here may confuse players, so break will be reasonable here. We talked about it ingame
3. 00:21:068 (1) - nazi - this note is too close o previous (3), beginners might mistakenly click it too early! Try something like this instead? ;wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww;
4. 00:44:588 (1,3) - I'd swap those new combos because kiai ends at (3). It's not like you have to do it, but I'll be appy if you do it. I prefer keeping it that way

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Everything looks good to me!
Bubbled!
Starred! ~

Arrival wrote:

Salut/Hi !

[General]
Good music, enjoyed modding it, really.
BPM is good.

[Hard]
Suggestion : 00:06:668 (4,5) - Je trouve que cela irait mieux avec la musique si tu faisait comme ceci :
http://puu.sh/2zWAC J'ai fait quelleque chose de similaire.
00:40:748 (2) - Tu pourrais peut etre mieux travailler ce slider. D'accord
00:35:708 (4) - Je rajouterai bien un "clap" ici Je comprend ton idée ici, mais je préfère ne pas avoir un double claps, même si ça fonctionnais très bien.
00:42:908 (3) - ^ ^

[Easy]
Rien a dire ! *w*!

La map est très bien

Starred \o/

Arrival wrote:

[Konei's normal]
00:03:788 (4) - What about a NC here ? You used a new combo here: 00:05:708 (1) - while the music don't really change. So it will be more consistent if you used a NC one this slider Would break consistency.
00:23:708 (6) - You can do a better blanket here i think. I can't LOL, looks good to me.
00:24:908 (1) - Why did you not used the same slider as here : 00:25:868 (3) - ? I find this more consistent, don't you ? I find it good that way :3
00:36:428 (1) - Finish ? Too close to the last finish.
00:44:108 (1) - Why did you use drum finish ? To be consistent with others and it fits the song lol.

Konei wrote:

Edit: Oh btw Gabe, the Slidertick sound you use on Easy is different from the hitclap, in fact when trying to use it as a whistle, I saw it is the default soft hitclap o3o, fix that please? <3 ~

12:01 Konei: Easy
12:01 Konei: 00:15:308 (3) - How about drum clap or any related sound to emphasize this one?
12:02 Gabe: Done
12:02 Konei: 00:33:068 (1) - Do you like that shape much or would you mind to create something that blankets 5?
12:02 Konei: oh well
12:02 Konei: nvm
12:03 Konei: 00:39:788 (4) - Could be moved down a bit to improve the blanket visually I guess
12:04 Konei: 00:46:028 (3) - Drum is also pretty strong here, would you mind to put a sound to emphasize?
12:05 Konei: Ready for Hard?
12:05 Gabe: not yet
12:05 Gabe: just a sec
12:05 Konei: Sure sure
12:09 Gabe: okay
12:09 Gabe: I am done
12:09 Konei: 00:07:028 (5,6) - Rhythm would be much better in my opinion if you deleted 5 and extended 6 to the downbeat. It follows the vocal much smoother.
12:09 Konei: 00:07:028 (5,6) - Rhythm would be much better in my opinion if you deleted 5 and extended 6 to the downbeat. It follows the vocal much smoother.
12:10 Gabe: I will keep it
12:10 Gabe: There's three obvious sounds here
12:11 Gabe: and I want the whistle sound on the upbeat
12:11 Konei: 00:12:788 - Here could be a note to follow the lyrics.
12:11 Konei: yep, cool
12:11 Gabe: Okay
12:12 Konei: 00:22:508 (4) - Idk if its noticeable in game but you can stack it better with 2 lol
12:13 Gabe: done
12:14 Konei: 00:37:388 (3) - Nice loop ></
12:14 Gabe: o/
12:15 Konei: 00:46:988 (3) - Lol, you have drum sound here aswell, so this is a reason you should add it on Easy :>
12:15 Konei: oh no
12:15 Konei: you had this
12:15 Konei: I remember
12:15 Gabe: You asked me to add it on 00:46:028 - 
12:15 Gabe: lol
12:15 Konei: yeah yeah
12:15 Konei: I remember
12:15 Konei: well, that's what I got 
12:17 Konei: Should I post? o3o
12:18 Gabe: I will edit

Konei wrote:

Ehh, add Katsuri to the tags for me please Gabe =w=

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