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Daisuke Ishiwatari- GGXX- Nothing out of the Ordinary

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vexatiousIdler
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vexatiousIdler
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 26 May 2009 at 19:45:48

Artist: Daisuke Ishiwatari, Koh-ichi Seiyama
Title: Nothing Out of The Ordinary
BPM: 110
Filesize: 6813kb
Play Time: 02:47
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (4.15 stars, 341 notes)
  2. Hard (4.61 stars, 365 notes)
Download: Daisuke Ishiwatari, Koh-ichi Seiyama - Nothing Out of The Ordinary
Download: Daisuke Ishiwatari, Koh-ichi Seiyama - Nothing Out of The Ordinary (no video)
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Right, so this is my first beatmap that I'm uploading. It's about a quarter-way done, and I'm really just looking for some constructive criticism, such as the beat placement sucks ass, the timing's off, better song nub... something like that. Fire away, please. As of 14/05/09, I slapped in a video for the background and whatnot. STILL WORKING ON IT.

15/05/09- Storyboard added for first break to spice up your winning/losing
22/05/09- Started on the solo. Yay. :/
25/05/09- Finally finished this thing. CRITICISM PLEASE D:, and yes, I need to give it hitsounds, I'll get on that.
25/05/09 (again)- Hitsounds added, spacing errors hopefully fixed
26/05/09- Easy has been started on, but don't download it unless you want to critisice, cause it's nowhere near done. Also, decided to remove the video, I'll put that in on a later date, as well as a better comboburst.
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CheeseWarlock
osu! Alumni
1,185 posts
Joined May 2008
CheeseWarlock
Use Distance Snap.

00:12:18 (3,4,5,6) - You shouldn't be using 1/8 snap. Move these all 1/8 later to the 1/4 snap.
00:29:17 (1,2,3,4,5) - Some people might not like this, but I do. This is the one place in this map that I say, screw Distance Snap.
00:31:06 (1) - And move this one 1/8 earlier.
00:35:29 (1) - This is 1/8 too long.
00:36:59 (1,2,3) - And these are 1/8 too late.
00:38:63 (1,1,2) - So are these.
00:39:65 (1) - This kind of slider isn't rankable. It's unclear which way it goes, and the start and the end overlap.
00:47:02 (3) - Should be moved 1/4 earlier.
00:47:43 (2) - This too. And you'll probably want to make it 1/4 longer so it still ends on a white tick.

Offset should be 9,262.

Nice work for a first-time mapper.
Metroid
834 posts
Joined May 2008
Metroid
The BPM seems a little off to me.

You got spacing issues like
00:12:67 (4,5,6) - They aren't spaced correctly.
And you got weird combos as in the new combos are not following anything.
Uzriel
19 posts
Joined August 2009
Uzriel
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
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