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Lily Allen - Not Fair

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lthefuryl
183 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domenica 18 ottobre 2009 at 20.54.55

Artist: Lily Allen
Title: Not Fair
BPM: 121,5
Filesize: 3187kb
Play Time: 02:44
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,77 stars, 367 notes)
  2. Insane (4,99 stars, 499 notes)
  3. KyO's MiX (4,98 stars, 527 notes)
  4. Sir Minelli's Normal (4,35 stars, 257 notes)
Download: Lily Allen - Not Fair
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Omg my third beatmap in 2 weeks :O
Last edited by lthefuryl , edited 38 times in total.
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
[Hard]

01:40:80 (7) - Suona meglio se finisce qui : 01:41:301
01:43:27 (2) - New combo causa jump.
01:43:77 (3) - ^
01:44:26 (4) - New combo.
01:50:68 (2) - Aggiungi clap.
02:06:48 (2) - ^

Ottima mappa. Migliore sempre piu bravo fury. Star :)
[Youmu]
87 posts
Joined August 2008
[Youmu]
Star for hard
eee
692 posts
Joined January 2008
eee
hi hi

[Hard]
00:14:63 (7) - move this back 1/4 so it lands on blue tick, then space it
00:20:56 (5) - ^ same here, move back 1/4 to blue tick
00:22:53 (4) - ^ same here
01:03:89 (4) - ^
01:17:84 (6) - ^
02:44:26 (1) - this, I think this should end on 02:45:992

[Insane]
it's not finished, but it looks pretty fine so far

btw, hard was pretty fun ;D
star4you*
Sir Minelli
524 posts
Joined September 2008
Sir Minelli
Offset:

7.456

=)
[Youmu]
87 posts
Joined August 2008
[Youmu]
forgot to star now it starred from me xD
lthefuryl
183 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
K Claps looks cool dude

but fix ur breaks in insane, and slighty fix em in hard, but if this advice isn't worth it, don't give kudosu, cause ur not done yet
right?

hard
01:03:505 - add note here and make sure its still spaced with the pattern
01:32:88 (6) - end on the white tick it's close to
lthefuryl
183 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
ok ty EEeee...i've fixed all ur things :P
happy30
Featured Artist
2,064 posts
Joined August 2008
happy30
Found nothing on hard, just some nazi things on Insane.

[insane]

00:09:43 (2,3) - 1 grid right? dunno
00:10:17 (4) - 1 grid left
01:12:14 (8) - 1 grid up
02:01:28 (1,2,3) - these overlaps aren't realy visible
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
[Hard]
01:01:03 (5) - Make it a smoother horizontal slider
02:09:18 (3) - Take out grid snap to make this a smoother vertical slider
02:11:65 (4) - End this on the white tick 02:12:394
02:23:75 (4) - Just a suggestion but add finishes after the end of the combos like this one?
02:33:62 (4) - You could align this with 1

[Insane]
00:52:39 (8) - Make the slider start at 8 instead?
01:34:12 (5) - Start the slider at 5
01:55:23 (4,5) - Place on the blue ticks instead
02:01:28 (1,2,3) - This will probably confuse some people
02:10:41 (x) - Add a note here?
02:11:40 (1) - End at white tick before break
02:23:75 (7) - Add a finish?
02:25:72 (8) - ^
02:27:70 (8) - ^
02:31:40 (9,10,11) - The spacing doesn't seem right here
02:44:98 (15) - This also might trick people


The beatmap seems fun :)
kioukiou
774 posts
Joined June 2008
kioukiou
[Hard]

00:16:34 (1,2) - Spacing too far.
02:06:46 (2,3) - Spacing too close.

[Insane]

Fine.

And star.
Doomsday
osu! Alumni
1,960 posts
Joined July 2008
Doomsday
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

[HARD]

01:01:03 (5) - the end of this sldiers a little off. move it up a little so its completely horozontal
01:12:39 (8) - maybe start the combo here instead of (1)?

[INSANE]

01:03:01 (2) - maybe start combo here instead of (1)?
02:01:28 (1,2,3) - im not sure whether overlapping sliders like these are legal in maps anymore. i'd ask a BAT whether you can have these like that
02:34:86 (5) - new combo?
02:39:55 (10) - move this over to the left by 1, grid level 3



pretty good map. pretty fun too, streams <3

star'd
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
plz think about what kioukiou and Doomsday93 mod
i will take a look again

by the way
use volume 85% is better IMO
i see a big improvement in hitsounds
good job
lthefuryl
183 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
lol ok Alace ty :) i've fixed all your things ty and ty doomsday93 :P <3
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
Hard~
  1. 02:11:65 (4) - Redo break after this slider.

Insane~
  1. 00:52:51 (9) - Redo break after beat.
  2. 02:11:40 (1) - Redo break after spinner.
  3. 02:30:41 (6) - Move this up a tick so it aligns diagonally.
Good job.
lthefuryl
183 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
ty Mafiamaster :) fixed
Starrodkirby86
osu! Alumni
3,723 posts
Here since the beginning
Starrodkirby86
Whee~

[Hard]:
00:14:36 (6,7,8) - Where's the claps?
01:40:78 (7) - You know, you had a break after this area before. Why not do it again?

[Insane]:
01:42:51 (x) - Add beat? Or replace this whole thing with a spinner like the area before.
02:01:28 (1,2,3) - Hidden sliders :(


You're a beatmap factory. <_>;;; This is good work you did. Not so many mistakes~

Star.
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
you didn`t fix what i suggest (85% volume)
if you) don`t like the suggestion
plz post that
I won`t change that................... blabla
Luxary
826 posts
Joined August 2008
Luxary
[Hard]

Perfect <3

[Insane]

00:08:93 (8) - Necessary?
00:10:91 (7) - ^

Awesome Beatmap!!! <3 Starred!

PS: 02:38:07 (7) and 02:44:98 (15): ROTFL@Skype XDXDXD
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