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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, June 10, 2013 at 4:21:18 PM

Artist: Lelia Broussard
Title: Spiderwebs
Tags: -bakari- masquerade folk indie
BPM: 90
Filesize: 4217kb
Play Time: 02:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Bakari's Easy (1.59 stars, 117 notes)
  2. Hard (4.7 stars, 247 notes)
  3. Normal (3.03 stars, 148 notes)
Download: Lelia Broussard - Spiderwebs
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Re-download as of 6/10/13

Introducing Lelia Broussard, one of my all time favorite artists.

Easy by -Bakari- (100%)
Normal by Elly-chan (100%)
Hard by Elly-chan (100%)
riffy
All I want is to be free!~ ♥

Done! (Still waiting for your hitsounds)
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Lelia Broussard - Spiderwebs.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 128426
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Spiderwebs
TitleUnicode:Spiderwebs
Artist:Lelia Broussard
ArtistUnicode:Lelia Broussard
Creator:Elly-chan
Version:Bakari's Easy
Source:
Tags:-Bakari-
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:1
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:1
ApproachRate:2
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Lelia Broussard.png",1,1
//Break Periods
2,43092,51092
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
426,666.666666666667,4,3,0,40,1,0
21759,-100,4,3,0,40,0,1
40426,-100,4,3,0,40,0,0
64426,-100,4,3,0,40,0,1
85592,-100,4,3,0,40,0,0
85759,-100,4,3,0,40,0,1
85926,-100,4,3,0,40,0,0
128426,-100,4,3,0,40,0,1
145759,-100,4,3,0,40,0,0
146426,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 57,74,145
Combo2 : 204,194,157
Combo3 : 81,55,51

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68,72,1759,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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244,184,5092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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100,364,13759,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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52,260,38426,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,168,39092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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72,332,131426,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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412,148,145759,2,0,P|420:120|420:76,1,70
256,192,146426,12,0,149759,0:0:0:0:

Let me know if there's something wrong with my diff.

Edit: finished!~ ♥
Andrea
IRC Modded.

SPOILER
14:50 Andrea: bloop :3
14:50 Elly-chan: hehe :3
14:51 Andrea: uhh that brown colour
14:51 Andrea: I'd make it a bit lighter, it's too dark imo
14:51 Elly-chan: okies
14:52 Andrea: you know when you dim the BG is kinda x.x
14:52 Elly-chan: mhm uwu
14:52 Andrea: on easy
14:52 Andrea: 00:32:426 (1,2,3) - slidertick custom hitsounds are too loud, reduce the volume of these sections a bit perhaps?
14:53 Elly-chan: ahh by how much? :0
14:53 Elly-chan: i thought they fit the same volume as the ones on objects lmao idunno
14:53 Andrea: I'd say 50%
14:53 Andrea: from 65 to 50
14:53 Elly-chan: okay
14:53 Elly-chan: lemme see
14:54 Andrea: fff- you used many custom ticks on Normal too ;w;
14:54 Andrea: I guess it would be better to lower the file then
14:54 Andrea: I can do this if you want :3
14:55 Andrea: do you want me to do it?
14:55 Elly-chan: yeshh please ;w;
14:55 Elly-chan: because i use a lot on hard too lol
14:55 Andrea: okay give me a moment :D
14:55 Elly-chan: ty :3
14:56 Andrea: http://puu.sh/2Y3ap.rar try this :3
14:56 Andrea: let me know if that's fine =w=
14:58 Elly-chan: ook
14:58 Elly-chan: replaced it with that :3
14:58 Andrea: easy is simple btw, nothing much to say lol
14:58 Andrea: okay :D
14:58 Elly-chan: ok :3
15:00 Andrea: hmm on Normal
15:00 Andrea: 02:05:759 (1,2) - I'd avoid so many repeats, they confuse beginners
15:01 Andrea: oh and also offset 420 sounds more accurate to me ;3;
15:01 Andrea: that means -6 to your current one
15:01 Andrea: HP +1 on Hard please, it's far too low!
15:02 Andrea: 00:40:426 (1) - is this NC really necessary? (Hard)
15:03 Andrea: 01:05:092 (3,4) - spacing is wrong here D:
15:03 Andrea: 01:15:759 (2,3) - same as above ><
15:04 Andrea: I can't find anything else actually =3=
15:05 Andrea: map is pretty clean~ :3
15:05 Elly-chan: OK OK sorry iw as zoning out im getting so much pms atm XD
15:05 Elly-chan: lemme check them now :3
15:05 Andrea: okay :D
quiz-chan_DELETED
IRC
15:18 Elly-chan: wanna irc mod ?
15:18 Quiz-chan: huh... works for me
15:20 Quiz-chan: What's that bitrate value, cuz it won't show up over here
15:21 Quiz-chan: must be between 128 and 192, don't forget
15:23 Quiz-chan: Shall I just move on with the easy, or post in-thread since it is a GD?
15:24 Elly-chan: post in thread
15:24 Elly-chan: for easy
15:24 Quiz-chan: Sure, sooo
15:24 Quiz-chan: let's skip Easy, next up Normal
15:24 Quiz-chan: aah, yes
15:26 Elly-chan: okay :3
15:26 Quiz-chan: Well, okay, just noticed something that bothers me really
15:26 Elly-chan: mhm
15:26 Elly-chan: ? *
15:26 Quiz-chan: 00:33:753 (3) - This doesn't follow the vocals well, so I suggest you to re-arrange this slider rhythm-based
15:28 Quiz-chan: I mean, look:
15:28 Quiz-chan: 00:33:753
15:28 Quiz-chan: 00:33:753 - This is where she stars with a new word, in this case, that word is spread over 2x 1/4 beats, meaning that...
15:29 Quiz-chan: The slider should normally start at 00:33:753 - and end at 00:33:920 - but for a normal, that wouldn't work, but just using a 3/4 repeated slider doesn't work either
15:30 Quiz-chan: ya get my point?
15:30 Elly-chan: mhm
15:30 Quiz-chan: To put it in a nutshell, that should be rearranged
15:31 Quiz-chan: 01:09:753 (1) - You could possibly remake that wave with only four nodes and even make it look better. Wait, lemme show you
15:32 Quiz-chan: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/768340
15:32 Quiz-chan: Simple technique, works out well
15:32 Elly-chan: alright
15:33 Quiz-chan: 01:16:420 (3) - Same as before, though here, it feels a little more appriopriate, I have no idea why, it just feels ok for me now
15:34 Elly-chan: haha
15:34 Elly-chan: if you're ok with the second wouldn't that make you ok with the first? :0
15:34 Elly-chan: they're both the exact same music haha
15:35 Quiz-chan: Might be true, but somehow I don't know why I don't like it the first time I saw that pattern
15:35 Quiz-chan: Though liked it the second time
15:35 Elly-chan: maybe it's how it plays in feild?
15:35 Quiz-chan: Maybe, it also could be hitsounding, wait, n
15:35 Quiz-chan: *no
15:36 Quiz-chan: You know what? Forget about those
15:36 Quiz-chan: u_û
15:36 Quiz-chan: I think I was just confused
15:37 Elly-chan: lmao, okay XD
15:37 Quiz-chan: haha, anyway, moving on
15:37 Elly-chan: moving on :3
15:37 Quiz-chan: 01:28:420 (1,2,3) - This
15:37 Quiz-chan: Breaks flow in my eyes
15:38 Elly-chan: what should i do then? uvu
15:38 Quiz-chan: I'm trying, hold on
15:38 Quiz-chan: Trying to re-arrange*
15:39 Elly-chan: okay :3
15:39 Quiz-chan: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/768357
15:39 Quiz-chan: Just ignore the timeline above
15:39 Quiz-chan: haha
15:40 Quiz-chan: 01:35:086 (2) - Use the same wave technique as pointed out above
15:42 Quiz-chan: 02:09:753 (3) - Hmmm.... this is too... linear
15:42 Quiz-chan: Why don't you...
15:42 Quiz-chan: Turn it into an introverted arc?
15:43 Quiz-chan: (Like this)[http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/768363]
15:45 Elly-chan: omg
15:45 Elly-chan: i was actually thinking of that before
15:45 Elly-chan: ok
15:45 Elly-chan: :3
15:45 Quiz-chan: 02:23:086 (3) - Can you offset this a little to the right?
15:45 Quiz-chan: Would look unique to me
15:46 Elly-chan: hum
15:46 Elly-chan: ?
15:46 Quiz-chan: You know, just move it some grids to the right
15:47 Quiz-chan: in this case, 5
15:47 Elly-chan: eeh >:
15:47 Quiz-chan: It makes a nice, yet simple refinement in my eyes
15:48 Elly-chan: okay
15:49 Quiz-chan: 02:25:420 (2) - Either (this)[http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/768378] or (this)[http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/768383]
15:50 Quiz-chan: Improves flow
15:50 Elly-chan: ok done
15:50 Elly-chan: :3
15:52 Quiz-chan: Ok, now Hard
15:53 Quiz-chan: 00:54:086 (2,3,4) - Weren't you overusing the whistles here?
15:54 Quiz-chan: And also in some following patterns
15:54 Elly-chan: yea that part and the part right after the kiai
15:54 Elly-chan: are to follow her vocal
15:54 Elly-chan: for a bit change in the hitsound pattern
15:55 Elly-chan: for pre-kiai, i did it in normal as well
15:55 Elly-chan: after kiai i didnt tho
15:55 Quiz-chan: 01:15:753 (2,3) - This jump came kinda sudden
15:56 Quiz-chan: Everything before this was nicely spaced and then that jump
15:56 Elly-chan: meeeh
15:56 Elly-chan: 01:05:586 - i did it here too uwu
15:57 Quiz-chan: oh
15:57 Quiz-chan: When I don't notice, it means it fits
15:57 Elly-chan: ooh
15:57 Quiz-chan: 01:25:753 - This part plays real well, I like it
15:58 Elly-chan: thank :D
15:59 Quiz-chan: That's it for Hard
15:59 Quiz-chan: Just one side note, though...
15:59 Elly-chan: mhm?
16:00 Quiz-chan: I don't see why you use Tick Rate 2 since there are no closed hats audible in the background
16:00 Quiz-chan: Or something *like* closed hats
16:46 Elly-chan: ah
16:47 Elly-chan: it's for the slider tick hitsounds
16:47 Elly-chan: without it it sounds really awkward tbh
16:47 Elly-chan: i wouldn't feel comfortable if it didn't have it
16:47 Quiz-chan: Oh, well then, thassit!
~

Just something general about Easy:
Combos are longer than those in Normal. I think you should consider adding some more?

Good luck!!
riffy
Well.. I'd like to keep combos as they are because they follow my pattern perfectly. And they also help beginners to understand my patterns easier :<
aRiskOfRain
Easy:

01:59:420 (2) - nudge this forward 1/2, follow them lyrics.
I'd suggest another break, but I'm not sure where to put one.

Normal:

Yeah, awesome, keeping it easy but maintaining the energy, good work.

Hard:

Tick rate 2 is fine here too, I think :P I mean, if you're gonna silence them anyway, what's the point?
00:59:086 (1,2) - could you increase this spacing just a smidge, really emphasise this isn't just 1/2 spacing?
01:25:753 to 01:47:086 - Okay, I get that this is a big change, but the music kinda gets more energetic in this section, and I think it would be nice if there was a subtle slider speed increase or a spacing increase, it could just make this section more exciting :) I mean, the music gets more exciting, so why not make things a bit more hectic? :3

All:
02:30:086 - End that last spinner here, so it ends with her "faaaaaST"?

Really, there's not too much wrong here at all, good work :)
Low
IRC modded.

SPOILER
17:00 jacob: raise HP drain and OD to 2
17:00 jacob: 1 is way too little
17:00 jacob: for any diff
17:00 Elly-chan: i raise ar +1 too
17:00 Elly-chan: done
17:00 jacob: k
17:01 jacob: 00:16:753 (2) - no slidertick clap?
17:01 Elly-chan: o
17:01 jacob: or they arent used in this diff
17:01 jacob: im cool with that
17:01 Elly-chan: i probs missed a few in the beginnign ty
17:01 jacob: oh.
17:01 Elly-chan: im fuckign lazy
17:01 Elly-chan: fuck
17:01 jacob: you also need one here 00:24:753 (3) -
17:02 Elly-chan: done
17:02 jacob: 00:28:753 (2) - and here
17:02 Elly-chan: oki
17:02 Elly-chan: any mroe
17:03 jacob: 00:30:086 (3) -
17:03 jacob: there
17:03 Elly-chan: done
17:06 jacob: 00:56:753 (5) - slidertickclap
17:07 jacob: 01:08:420 (5) - whistle at the start of this slider to follow the hitsound pattern
17:08 jacob: 01:12:753 (4) - slidertick clap
17:08 Elly-chan: whistle thingie: no the whistle things follow that weird thingie sound in the music, like the
17:08 Elly-chan: thingie i
17:08 Elly-chan: i dont knwow hat its called
17:08 jacob: oh, ok
17:08 Elly-chan: that htingie
17:08 jacob: 01:27:753 (3) - slidertick clap
17:09 Elly-chan: u know what im talking about right
17:09 jacob: yeah
17:09 jacob: 01:29:753 (5) - slidertick clap
17:09 Elly-chan: alright
17:09 jacob: 01:34:420 (5) - two slidertick claps needed
17:09 jacob: 01:39:086 (1,2) - slidertick claps
17:09 jacob: man wtf
17:09 Elly-chan: jacob if u were a girl would you be gay for me
17:09 Elly-chan: and ok
17:09 jacob: Maybe
17:09 Elly-chan: you should
17:10 jacob: 02:22:086 (4) - stclap
17:11 jacob: that's it for the easy diff.
17:11 Elly-chan: coool
17:11 Elly-chan: fiede all
17:11 Elly-chan: fixed
17:12 jacob: um....
17:12 jacob: check the end of the normal diff
17:12 jacob: the very end
17:13 Elly-chan: o
17:13 Elly-chan: shyt
17:13 jacob: lol
17:13 Elly-chan: fixed
17:13 Elly-chan: LOl omg
17:13 Elly-chan: im an baa
17:13 Elly-chan: bakea * baka
17:13 jacob: baa
17:13 Elly-chan: baka i ma baka
17:14 jacob: 00:31:086 (3) - curve this a little. looks awesome when paired with the next slider http://prntscr.com/16tlkj
17:14 Elly-chan: okieee
17:14 Elly-chan: done
17:17 jacob: 02:05:753 (1,2) - these will easily be mistaken by players as sliders with only one repeat since all of the previous repeat sliders in this difficulty only had one repeat
17:17 jacob: 02:05:753 (1,2) - these will easily be mistaken by players as sliders with only one repeat since all of the previous repeat sliders in this difficulty only had one repeat
17:17 jacob: just remove one repeat on them
17:17 jacob: even i tripped up here
17:19 jacob: that's it for normal
17:20 Elly-chan: oki
17:23 jacob: offset should be 408
17:24 jacob: it's pretty off
17:24 jacob: make sure to resnap notes and green lines.
17:24 jacob: hard diff is nice, gj
riffy
Boom!

I'd keep AR2 and HP/OD1 because it makes diff relaxing and fits with SV. What's more BPM here is low, so keeping diff settings a bit lower is a good idea.

Easy AR2/HP and OD: 1 + some minor changes
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Have a nice day!
BeatofIke
Star!
izzydemon
[Bakari's Easy]
00:30:050 - Snap that slider a bit earlier, it's way too late and doesn't stick with the song
00:40:389 - Try making that spinner start exactly when the singer says "fast" like on the Normal diff - it feels better, trust me.
01:02:207 - Wrongly timed slider, try moving it to 01:01:993
02:24:517 - "Connect" that first circle with the next slider putting a circle there on the red tick.

[Normal]
00:14:153 - Make that into a single slider, it doesn't need to repeat
00:18:074 - Should have the reverse arrow at the blue tick to its left

[Hard]
No problem here.


[ETC]
change the song the word spider scares the sh** out of me
[end of list]



...Goddammit, take my star.
YTYuyu
here's di IRC mod :D

SPOILER
2013-06-09 17:56 Byakugan249: yo are you ready to begin? :3
2013-06-09 17:56 Elly-chan: ya
2013-06-09 17:58 Byakugan249: is it possible to reduce the filesize of the BG? D:
2013-06-09 17:58 Byakugan249: it looks too big IMO
2013-06-09 18:00 Elly-chan: idk how
2013-06-09 18:00 Byakugan249: ooh uhh...
2013-06-09 18:01 Byakugan249: mind if i do it? or you can do it
2013-06-09 18:01 Elly-chan: u can do it
2013-06-09 18:01 Elly-chan: as long as its
2013-06-09 18:01 Elly-chan: the same size yo
2013-06-09 18:01 Elly-chan: and good quality
2013-06-09 18:01 Elly-chan: it has 2 be good quuality
2013-06-09 18:01 Byakugan249: right
2013-06-09 18:01 Byakugan249: does it have to bg png or jpg?
2013-06-09 18:01 Byakugan249: be*
2013-06-09 18:04 Elly-chan: doesnt matter as long as its
2013-06-09 18:04 Byakugan249: well whenever you're ready D:
2013-06-09 18:05 Elly-chan: really good quality
2013-06-09 18:05 Byakugan249: ok then
2013-06-09 18:05 Byakugan249: the easy diff...
2013-06-09 18:06 Byakugan249: 00:11:074 (1) - this note has to be a whistle...the finish is too loud, but if you want to keep it, reduce the volume at least
2013-06-09 18:09 Byakugan249: Lexi...whenever you're ready orz
2013-06-09 18:09 Elly-chan: o ya
2013-06-09 18:09 Elly-chan: easy ya
2013-06-09 18:09 Elly-chan: got it
2013-06-09 18:10 Byakugan249: 00:15:741 (7) - whistle should be removed...it breaks consistency with the hitsound pattern
2013-06-09 18:10 Elly-chan: it follows the instrument thingie making the things the whistles are to i think
2013-06-09 18:10 Elly-chan: ya
2013-06-09 18:10 Elly-chan: i switched the first to a whisleltleltle btw
2013-06-09 18:10 Byakugan249: ahh ok then
2013-06-09 18:11 Byakugan249: 00:18:074 (3,4) - ahh idk about this because it feels awkward to follow for beginners even though it follows the vocals
2013-06-09 18:11 Byakugan249: can you do a 1/1 slider and tell me what you think?
2013-06-09 18:13 Byakugan249: don't forget to add a clap at the slidertick if you do this
2013-06-09 18:14 Elly-chan: i fixediexed the (3, 4) thingie
2013-06-09 18:14 Elly-chan: yea i did it
2013-06-09 18:14 Byakugan249: ok then
2013-06-09 18:14 Byakugan249: 00:58:408 - there should be a circle here because the flow suddenly stops in this part
2013-06-09 18:15 Byakugan249: beginners might think that this starts 1/2 back
2013-06-09 18:15 Byakugan249: i mean (1)
2013-06-09 18:15 Elly-chan: i dont think
2013-06-09 18:15 Elly-chan: i can do that
2013-06-09 18:15 Byakugan249: oh?
2013-06-09 18:15 Elly-chan: w/o ruining flow everywhere
2013-06-09 18:16 Elly-chan: the notes on red and white ticks
2013-06-09 18:16 Elly-chan: space close together
2013-06-09 18:16 Byakugan249: ahh~
2013-06-09 18:16 Elly-chan: really close together lol
2013-06-09 18:16 Byakugan249: mmk then leave it
2013-06-09 18:16 Elly-chan: okki
2013-06-09 18:17 Byakugan249: 01:17:741 (4) - a whistle is missing at the end for a consistent hitsound pattern
2013-06-09 18:18 Elly-chan: o
2013-06-09 18:18 Elly-chan: i screwed up hitsounding somewhere too
2013-06-09 18:18 Elly-chan: 01:40:741 - from here
2013-06-09 18:18 Elly-chan: w/ the slidertick hitsounds
2013-06-09 18:18 Elly-chan: ill fix them dont point them out
2013-06-09 18:18 Byakugan249: ok then if you say so
2013-06-09 18:19 Elly-chan: nah its consistent yo im following the music thingie in the bgm like earlier
2013-06-09 18:19 Byakugan249: ahh like the drums?
2013-06-09 18:19 Elly-chan: the music that like
2013-06-09 18:19 Elly-chan: progressively goes up in pitch
2013-06-09 18:19 Elly-chan: like listen closely
2013-06-09 18:19 Byakugan249: which lyric?
2013-06-09 18:19 Elly-chan: not the durms or vocals
2013-06-09 18:19 Elly-chan: that other thing
2013-06-09 18:20 Elly-chan: nthe whistles in the kiai in general
2013-06-09 18:20 Elly-chan: they follow
2013-06-09 18:20 Elly-chan: that instrument thingie
2013-06-09 18:20 Elly-chan: idk what its called
2013-06-09 18:20 Byakugan249: ohh that
2013-06-09 18:20 Byakugan249: yea i can hear it
2013-06-09 18:20 Elly-chan: mhm
2013-06-09 18:21 Byakugan249: ima change my screen resolution
2013-06-09 18:21 Elly-chan: ok
2013-06-09 18:23 Byakugan249: 01:47:074 - ehh~ idk about the claps D:
2013-06-09 18:23 Byakugan249: they ruin the calmness in the song
2013-06-09 18:23 Byakugan249: i say that you remove all that, and keep the drum set until the kiai IMO
2013-06-09 18:25 Elly-chan: yea
2013-06-09 18:25 Elly-chan: thats the
2013-06-09 18:25 Elly-chan: hitsound error
2013-06-09 18:25 Elly-chan: i fixed it
2013-06-09 18:26 Byakugan249: normal is next
2013-06-09 18:26 Byakugan249: 00:11:074 (1) - same as easy
2013-06-09 18:27 Byakugan249: 00:15:074 (4,5) - whistles are at the end because of the guitar right?
2013-06-09 18:28 Elly-chan: yeah
2013-06-09 18:28 Byakugan249: ahh ok then
2013-06-09 18:28 Byakugan249: btw you applied the 1st suggestion right?
2013-06-09 18:28 Elly-chan: yes
2013-06-09 18:29 Byakugan249: 00:24:741 (2) - i'm thinking that you can curve this slider to blanket (3) o.o
2013-06-09 18:29 Byakugan249: i think it looks a lot nicer to follow during gameplay
2013-06-09 18:30 Elly-chan: done
2013-06-09 18:32 Byakugan249: 00:31:074 (3,4) - i say that you replace the normal set for the drum set at the end of (3)...i don't think there should be a normal set at the beginning of (4) since there are no drums there IMO
2013-06-09 18:33 Byakugan249: 00:53:741 (1) - same as my 1st suggestion
2013-06-09 18:34 Byakugan249: if you wanna keep it, the least you can do it decrease the volume of the finish
2013-06-09 18:37 Elly-chan: id rather keep normal for the first one thingie
2013-06-09 18:37 Elly-chan: ill keep teehehe finish
2013-06-09 18:37 Byakugan249: can you decrease it? it sounds too loud IMO
2013-06-09 18:37 Elly-chan: um ok
2013-06-09 18:37 Byakugan249: 01:46:074 (3) - i want you to be consistent here. replace this for a 1/2 slider and a circle just like 01:44:741 (1,2) -
2013-06-09 18:38 Elly-chan: u skipped over that in easy
2013-06-09 18:38 Elly-chan: is it rly that loud
2013-06-09 18:38 Elly-chan: i dont see it
2013-06-09 18:38 Byakugan249: i did--wow i did
2013-06-09 18:38 Byakugan249: nvm leave it
2013-06-09 18:38 Elly-chan: ok
2013-06-09 18:38 Elly-chan: o that thingie
2013-06-09 18:38 Elly-chan: its for variation
2013-06-09 18:38 Elly-chan: 01:44:741 -
2013-06-09 18:39 Elly-chan: thats why i did this here
2013-06-09 18:39 Byakugan249: ahh ok then :3
2013-06-09 18:39 Byakugan249: 01:55:074 (1) - what about making this slider look like (3) for a smoother transition?
2013-06-09 18:39 Byakugan249: 01:53:741 (3) -
2013-06-09 18:41 Elly-chan: meh id rather not
2013-06-09 18:41 Byakugan249: oh? mmk then
2013-06-09 18:41 Byakugan249: 02:07:074 (2) - how about a curved slider here so that it'll look like (1)?
2013-06-09 18:41 Elly-chan: i just tried it and didnt really like it lol
2013-06-09 18:41 Elly-chan: hmm
2013-06-09 18:41 Elly-chan: ok done
2013-06-09 18:42 Byakugan249: last diff
2013-06-09 18:42 Byakugan249: 00:11:074 (1) - same as easy
2013-06-09 18:43 Byakugan249: ahh the AR feels too forced and there's no smoothness in the movement...consider AR7 for that smoothness in the patterns during gameplay
2013-06-09 18:43 Elly-chan: om
2013-06-09 18:43 Elly-chan: g
2013-06-09 18:43 Elly-chan: the whistle sounds rly weird here
2013-06-09 18:43 Elly-chan: and i dont know why
2013-06-09 18:43 Elly-chan: iejnhrjiekmjj s
2013-06-09 18:43 Elly-chan: stupid hitsounds
2013-06-09 18:44 Byakugan249: if you want, you can replace it back for a finish
2013-06-09 18:44 Elly-chan: screw this im adding finishes again tim so confused
2013-06-09 18:44 Elly-chan: yeah
2013-06-09 18:46 Byakugan249: once i finish this, the least i can do is give a star
2013-06-09 18:47 Elly-chan: yayy!!
2013-06-09 18:47 Byakugan249: since the hitsounds are the only thing that's left
2013-06-09 18:47 Elly-chan: omg
2013-06-09 18:47 Elly-chan: cool
2013-06-09 18:47 Elly-chan: uvu
2013-06-09 18:47 Byakugan249: if you can do it, then i'm sure it'll be ready for a bubbie
2013-06-09 18:49 Byakugan249: yup it's just the hitsounding and it'll be good
2013-06-09 18:49 okay *v*
2013-06-09 18:49 Byakugan249: i'll give you the pic through skype
2013-06-09 18:49 Elly-chan: okieee
2013-06-09 18:49 Elly-chan: should i upload now? :P
2013-06-09 18:49 Elly-chan: is that it?
2013-06-09 18:50 Byakugan249: mhm
2013-06-09 18:50 Byakugan249: i'll post the log
2013-06-09 18:50 Elly-chan: updated
2013-06-09 18:50 Byakugan249: omg the post might take some time ><
2013-06-09 18:50 Byakugan249: i have so much shit open D:
2013-06-09 18:51 Elly-chan: ahh ok ;w;
2013-06-09 18:52 Byakugan249: btw which chara do you want as a star icon?
2013-06-09 18:53 Elly-chan: komACHI
2013-06-09 18:53 Elly-chan: :3
2013-06-09 18:53 Byakugan249: haha ok then Komachi it is :D

everything but the hitsounding is ready. it just minor things, so here's a star :D.

aRiskOfRain
yo what up, modded a little bit again, ain't nothing but hitsound changes, see the log here.

bubble'd
YTYuyu
ok after checking this there's 2 things you need to do...the BG, which i'll give you, and the tags. add "Bakari" in the tags because the hyphens in his name won't show in the number or ranked maps for him. keep the -Bakari- tag however.


if there are any problems, let me know :3.
Topic Starter
Elly-chan
yo i'll upd8 it when i get home ::::)
mancuso_JM_
Bakari in tags is useless. Typing just 'Bakari' I found all his mapsets and Guest difficulties without the necessary to having that in tag (I found this map typing 'Bakari' too and it is not in tags). With that, I mean that '-Bakari-' is enough in your tags
I don't know why but I wanted to clarify that
/runs
YTYuyu
we fixed a hitsound error on easy, and it's ready to go, so here's your rank :D.

LunarSakuya
Lol! Congrats bby
Aurele
congratz speed rankuuur
Topic Starter
Elly-chan
congrats on the rank elly
Aurele

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congrats on the rank elly
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