1. Easy (1.08 stars, 51 notes)
2. Hard (4.84 stars, 168 notes)
3. Normal (3.27 stars, 84 notes)

1. HP + 1
2. 00:30:731 (3) - you'll have a better flow with ctrl+g
3. 00:33:017 (1,2) - the same is about this pattern one of the 2 slider need to ctrl+g

1. OD - 1
2. 00:50:731 (6) - the rhythm should be :
   
   because you miss a sound wich is here 00:51:017 -

1. HP and OD - 1
2. 00:12:445 (8) - new combo here,it starting to be to long
3. 00:21:302 (8) - new combo
4. 00:26:159 (9) - new combo
5. 00:30:731 (7) - new combo
6. 00:39:588 (8) - new combo
7. 00:44:445 (9) - new combo
8. 00:44:160 (7,8,9) - do a better stack here o3o
9. 00:49:017 (7) - new combo
10. 01:11:874 (7,8) - new combo

Lally wrote:

hi o3o #queue req

[Easy]

1. HP + 1 Done
2. 00:30:731 (3) - you'll have a better flow with ctrl+g
3. 00:33:017 (1,2) - the same is about this pattern one of the 2 slider need to ctrl+g Okay, I had to add some more notes to make it work but the slider flow has changed

[Normal]

1. OD - 1 Okay, done.
2. 00:50:731 (6) - the rhythm should be :
   
   because you miss a sound wich is here 00:51:017 - I wanted to avoid having too much 1/2 in that section but I tried to change the rhythm but it ended up looking messy so I didn't change.

[Hard]

1. HP and OD - 1 Alright, done.
2. 00:12:445 (8) - new combo here,it starting to be to long
3. 00:21:302 (8) - new combo
4. 00:26:159 (9) - new combo
5. 00:30:731 (7) - new combo
6. 00:39:588 (8) - new combo
7. 00:44:445 (9) - new combo
8. 00:44:160 (7,8,9) - do a better stack here o3o It looks wonky in editor but this stack is fine in game xD
9. 00:49:017 (7) - new combo
10. 01:11:874 (7,8) - new combo Okay changed the combos so they aren't so long.

nice map o.o i found nothing to mod ;w; have a star /*

Sonnyc wrote:

Hey Shulin~

General:

-- Not all users use the default "Normal" hit sound, so making another hitsound named "normal-hitnormal.wav", which sounds the same as "soft-slidertick.wav". I'm not sure about the reasoning but done :3

Easy:

00:51:874 - Missing a Clap Tick? Hm, no. I left it out because it sounds strange to me xD

Normal:

00:14:445 (7,1) - Start NC from (7)? Okay, done.
00:44:445 (5) - NC? Nah, I want this to be the same color as 1,2,3,4.

I wonder why the spacing keeps changing lol Well it's only small changes lol xD

Hard:

01:03:874 (9) - 1 Grid right and down will make a better line. Done.
01:13:017 (4) - Consider NC? Since a new rhythm imo. Looks strange, I'll think about this one ^_^

Clean map :3
Get a star

UndeadBananaz wrote:

Hello. Saw this in #modreqs. It had a picture of the sea and stuff so I had to mod it. My advertising worked! Everyone loves the sea!

I don't really see anything wrong with Easy and Normal, since they're usually the simple and boring ones.

Hard

I have a few suggestions to make the map slightly more interesting / lively.

• 00:27:017 (6) - Break down this reverse slider into 5 notes, or maybe like 2 short sliders and a note. More fun to play. Yeah agree, so I messed around with this and now it's all notes and a different pattern, hopefully it's better lol
• 00:37:588 (5,6) - I think this part sounds much better this way: I tried it but I think the rhythm is better following the flute or w/e it is

• 00:46:445 - Add a note here. Even if it's just a really short pause, I feel like having this there feels better. I like the pause, it's a good transition to the next part imo.
• Now at the start of the chorus (or kiai rather), you should make the map follow the.. flute thing? I'm bad with instruments, it's probably not a flute. Anyway, turn it into something like this part 01:16:731 (2,3,4,5). Here's a quick example I just did (where the kiai starts): Ah yeah, I tried this when I first mapped it but I didn't like it so I just changed it to 1/2, tried it again and I still don't like it so I didn't change it, sorry! xD

• 01:04:445 (1) - Break this slider into notes / smaller sliders as well I want this one to be consistent with 00:55:302 (1) - plus I kinda like how it plays.

Sorry can't be of more help. The map looks good. Good luck!

Sword Hunter wrote:

EASY

01:09:588 (1,2,3,4) - Well, perhaps you can arrange them into a square, rather than that "abstract" shape? Hm I think the abstract shape is more interesting than a square.

~perfect. I can't say anything, the spacing!, the BPM correct from the first beat, kiai time set correctly with nice audio, smooth map, and no complicated pattern/rhythm for easy, absolutely perfect!

NORMAL

perfect~ i wanna cry!

HARD

00:27:017 (6) - New combo perhaps? up to you. That would be out of sync with the other combos xD

00:53:017 (3) - Don't stack it with the 4,5,6, put it beetween slider no.2(Blue) and slider no 6 (blue), and move it upwards a little. So it will not be boring and will be more creative !!! xD. Hm, I'm not sure what you meant here.

01:12:445 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Because maybe some people consider it strange, I strongly recomned you add some hitsound here and raise the volume a little. Find your own hitsound that you think fit this rhytm perfectly. Well made the hitsounds a little more prominent like 00:44:731 (4,5) -

01:21:588 (1,2) - Just I feel like something's strange in here................ ah maybe put them into linear? 1 in the left, 2 in the right. or 1 in upper part of the map, and 2 in the bottom part of the map. I like the diagonal part =P

kazumikos wrote:

Just some suggestions >_>

[Hard]

00:55:874 (2) - nc?
01:02:731 (7) - ^
01:05:017 (2) - ^ Hm I think the new combos look strange, I think I'll leave them as they are

[Normal]

00:49:017 (4) - finish at start Whoops done
01:17:302 (4,5) - this? Yeah

[Easy]

plz fix
00:37:588 (1) - dont feel like there should be a reverse slider here, use this? New rhythm and pattern
00:45:017 - dont think this slidertick is necessary, remove? o3o There's a drum beat though?
00:51:874 - slidertick1? Noisy xD
00:35:302 (3) - 1 grid left for symmetry Yes

Star~