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Ayana - Last regrets(TV Size)

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cyanberryio
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cyanberryio
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, July 16, 2009 at 7:19:49 PM

Artist: Ayana
Title: Last regrets(TV Size)
Source: Kanon(2006)
BPM: 93.06
Filesize: 16084kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Auu~ (1.89 stars, 99 notes)
  2. DJPop~ (4.92 stars, 220 notes)
  3. Kero~ (0.69 stars, 64 notes)
  4. Uguu~ (4.55 stars, 201 notes)
Download: Ayana - Last regrets(TV Size)
Download: Ayana - Last regrets(TV Size) (no video)
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Kanon OP. ^^

EDIT01: DJPop's moddings.
EDIT02: blissfulyoshi's moddings.
EDIT03: Card N'FoRcE's moddings.
EDIT04: eee's moddings.
EDIT05: Added DJPop's difficulty.
EDIT06: Real1's moddings.
EDIT07: Gen's moddings.
EDIT08: 0_o's moddings.
EDIT09: Breeze's moddings.
EDIT10: rust45's moddings.
EDIT11: tieff's moddings.
EDIT12: Alace's moddings.
EDIT13: foulcoon's moddings. (Remapped ending.)
EDIT14: Updated DJPop's difficulty.
EDIT15: Saturos-fangirl's moddings.
EDIT16: Mogsworth's moddings.
EDIT17: Fixed BPM on DJPop's.
EDIT18: Mogs part 2.
EDIT19: " " 3.
EDIT20: SFG fixes.
EDIT21: Starrodkirby86 moddings.
Last edited by cyanberryio , edited 35 times in total.
DJPop
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DJPop
Why I feel the hitsounds were delay? D=

- Offset 428 is better.
- Map starts too fast.
- Video offset is 196.
- Should reduce the volume of spinner.

~Auu~

00:09:815 - (4)~(1)
It's tricked me :o

00:15:299 - (4)~(1)
Spacing is too close.

01:07:073 - (1),(2)
Move 1/4 forward.

01:09:977 - (5)~(1)
Spacing is too far (compared with other parts).

~Kero~

00:56:912 - (1)
Move 1/2 forward.

~Uguu~

00:18:815 - (7),(8)
Sliderticks make music sounds weird.

No notes' issues.


+Star
Collab request :D
nomadop
36 posts
Joined February 2009
nomadop
good song ^^
cyanberryio
424 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
cyanberryio
Okay, I'll do those when I get home. :)

And I don't really get collabs, but it's where multiple male a difficulties right? Hope I'm right, and that's okay. :)

EDIT: Home to do modding! :)

DJPop wrote:

Why I feel the hitsounds were delay? D=

- Offset 428 is better.
- Map starts too fast.
- Video offset is 196.
- Should reduce the volume of spinner.

~Auu~

00:09:815 - (4)~(1)
It's tricked me :o
:/ Didn't see anything problem here, maybe just spacing..?
00:15:299 - (4)~(1)
Spacing is too close.

01:07:073 - (1),(2)
Move 1/4 forward.
Don't really see this sounding right.
01:09:977 - (5)~(1)
Spacing is too far (compared with other parts).

~Kero~

00:56:912 - (1)
Move 1/2 forward.

~Uguu~

00:18:815 - (7),(8)
Sliderticks make music sounds weird.
Don't really want to have to remove 2x section or lower slidertick rate, so what should I do here?
No notes' issues.


+Star
Collab request :D
Also, thanks for the star. :D
And sure for the collab. Finally got it. D:

(seriously, this version really buggy version is pissing me off. I can't click ok on the timing sections section without osu crashing. :( never did this to me before i updated

peppy's in for a surprise, or maybe not, I don't know how many times it's crashed D:)
Orkel
osu! Alumni
450 posts
Joined September 2008
Orkel
Such a touching song, and the map starts to look good too. Can't wait for ranked. Starred.
blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi
General:
It is very difficult to tell which name corresponds to each diff. I know diff stars exist, but could you make the diff more clear

Kero~:
00:03:65 (4) - It seems a little strange to snap to this sound since it is quite silent
00:13:97 (4) - align better with the end of 2 and 3
00:29:46 (2) - align with 1
00:49:46 (1,2,3) - you want this section to have different spacing than the last section? Then go back to the original spacing?

Auu~:
00:08:49 (4) - make this a reflection of 2
00:13:97 (4) - " "
00:15:91 (1) - align with the start of 4
00:25:58 (1) - align with the 2-7 slope
00:31:07 (2,3) - spacing
00:57:20 (2) - spacing
00:59:78 (6) - spacing
01:08:49 (3) - spacing
01:12:68 (1) - spacing
01:17:52 (2) - restack under the repeating part
01:12:68 (1) - move the top notes of each of these sets 1 notch up (3) to match up with 2 and get correct spacing

Uguu~:
larger notes....
00:07:55 (5) - align with 7 and 9
00:09:17 (1,2) - spacing
00:14:33 (7) - restack under the end of 5
00:14:00 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - this pattern is pretty confusing with 6 and 8 spaced differently than 7 and9 and that 10 and 11 make the person go back upward
00:23:04 (2,3,4,5,6) - it would be nice if all of these were symmetrical, but that is not necessary
00:28:20 (9) - spacing
00:34:00 (8) - align with the end of 7
00:45:94 (5) - align with 3
00:55:62 (7) - one notch (3) higher than all the other ones
00:57:55 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - move 1 notch to the left(3) to account for difference in spacing in 4,5,6 to 7,8,9 in comparison to 1,2,3 to 4,5,6
01:13:20 (2) - I don't like how this is placed under the slider
01:17:55 (7,8,9) - not parallel to 4,5,6
01:19:49 (4,5,6) - " " from last combo
01:20:13 (7,8) - " "

Solid beatmap. Star.
cyanberryio
424 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
cyanberryio

blissfulyoshi wrote:

General:
It is very difficult to tell which name corresponds to each diff. I know diff stars exist, but could you make the diff more clear

Kero~:
00:03:65 (4) - It seems a little strange to snap to this sound since it is quite silent
Moved 1/4th back, that should be better.
00:49:46 (1,2,3) - you want this section to have different spacing than the last section? Then go back to the original spacing?Nah

Uguu~:
larger notes....
lol, yeah, so what? :P

Solid beatmap. Star.
Thanks for the star! :D

And the difficulties should be understood if you watched Kanon. Kero~ is what Nayuki says when she's still half asleep(thinking about it, Nyuu~ would've worked better). Auu~ is what Makoto says a lot. Uguu~ is little Ayu's little saying. :D
Card N'FoRcE
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Card N'FoRcE
Oh, i was thinking about making this one too xD

Offset: 430 (why did the difficulties have different offsets? O.o)
Please fix inherited sections (because in hard this will fuck up 2x sliders)

- Kero:
00:21:07 (1) - how about ending it at 0:24:944? Imho it fits more
00:45:91 (3) - move it 1/2 after, i was really expecting it to be there D: (fix spacing)
00:46:55 (4) - new combo
00:46:87 (1) - delete new combo
00:57:04 (1) - 1/4 after
01:11:39 (4) - choose the right beat snap divisor (1/4 i think)
01:13:65 (1) - end this at 1:16:557 (suggestion)
Don't you think that some sections' audio volume is unbalanced? sometimes it's too low and sometimes too high (sometimes it's really good, so just che some sections a bit)...

- Auu:
00:04:29 (7) - new combo
00:04:94 (1) - remove new combo
00:21:07 (1) - same as easy
00:36:23 (4) - move 1 square down and 2 squares left (grid level 3)
01:25:58 (1) - make this one repeat once more, then move 01:26:71 (2) 1/4 after and delete a repetition.

- Uguu:
Why is circle size bigger than easy and normal? O.o
Anyway, this one is fine, just some nazi things not worth mentioning.

Really nice skin.
Keep it up ^^
cyanberryio
424 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
cyanberryio
Oh, just forgot, since osu! random crashes in the editor, and you must save timing sections manually(press Ctrl+S/Save) or it won't be changed.

Done with those moddings, feel free to make your own difficulties, or just your own whole map(separate from mine). Multiple maps with the same song can be ranked right?

Thanks for the star! :D
eee
692 posts
Joined January 2008
eee
first~ Offset sounds like 430
here goes the actual modz, yo
eeemod GO!!!

[Kero~]
first things first, the difficulty settings are pretty high for an easy map, especially HP Drain and Overall, it's pretty dreadful. Here, at least put all the arrows to the middle (normal) mark in the difficulty tab. cause I can seee that you want your diffs to be hard
00:23:008 (x) - I recommend a break here, if this is the easiest difficulty, which is what it looks like.
00:57:04 (1) - 1/4 forward
01:13:65 (1) - suggestion: end this on 01:16:395 (blue tick)
01:11:39 (4) - ugh, this is snapped to 1/6, I don't get it, it sounds alright on 1/4 with 4 or 6 reverses, if it's 1/6 for a reason, keep it, but I don't really hear anything, unless your trying to create your own sound.

[Auu~]
00:10:10 (1) - this is kinda far, space? ~ suggestion
00:36:23 (4,5) - spacing inconsistencies, move down a level 3 grid (both 4 and 5) to make (4) in the middle of them both
01:07:04 (1,2) - not really sure, but I think that it sounds better moving these 1/4 later, then spacing them afterwards

[Uguu~]
01:07:04 (1,2) - I think this sounds better 1/4 later

Here's the thing: I modded this yesterday, and saved the draft. when I came back to finish it, Card N'Force modded it, so I struck out the things that matched his suggestions. I also noticed that the timing was off on the harder one, I got the same BPM that CNF got, so it should be spot on :D

starring*
cyanberryio
424 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
cyanberryio

eee wrote:

[Kero~]
first things first, the difficulty settings are pretty high for an easy map, especially HP Drain and Overall, it's pretty dreadful. Here, at least put all the arrows to the middle (normal) mark in the difficulty tab. cause I can seee that you want your diffs to be hard
No, I never noticed that D: But every time I change it, osu! crashes.(changing song setup and timing doesn't have ask you if to save)
00:23:008 (x) - I recommend a break here, if this is the easiest difficulty, which is what it looks like.
:\ There's a spinner there...

starring*
Thanks for mod + star :D
DJPop
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DJPop
Fin :)

Download: Ayana.osu
skyflying
80 posts
Joined March 2009
skyflying
love this song
Real1
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Joined September 2008
Real1
[Auu~]
00:21:07 (1) - This spinner ends too early, IMO. Sounds better if it ends at 00:24:946


[DJPop]
01:23:63 (2) - Not stacked 100% correct under the (1) slider. This is very nazi and is not necessarily needed to be fixed.


All I found. Have a star!
GbL
332 posts
Joined February 2009
GbL
Nice map, nice diff DJPop. O:
Starred.
Gens
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Gens
[Overall]
- Beatmap crashes alot on Editor D: (Though this is kinda irrelevant)
- Word of advice: Please avoid sliders like at [Kero~], 01:11:39 (4) (Short, with many repeats), since it's almost impossible to know how many repeats will be. I'm not asking you to change, but to avoid in future beatmaps. :)

[Skin]
Recolor the "star2.png" image to blue! Looks pink in-game.
The rest of the skin is cool. :D

[Timing]
I'm not sure, but I think there is a slight offset problem here... Maybe is just video lagging me :/

[Kero~]
There are some sections with a strange rhythm... But oh well, as far as rankability, I think it's fine.

[Auu~]
Everything's cool I guess.

[Uguu~]
Didn't see any problem here.

[DJPop] (Maybe add a ~? Dunno, just for fun :p)
Offset's different from the rest of the difficulties! Fix please.

-SB-
At the start, it says "Beatmap by DJPop". Change "Beatmap" to "Difficulty"? People might get confused.

00:46:56 (5) - This is just a whole stream! 50% of the difficulty is just a random stream! wtf...
Maybe make something else? Patterns, sliders, I dunno, something!

~ ~ ~

;)
Hanyuu
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Joined February 2009
Hanyuu
Beautiful
0_o
2,155 posts
Joined December 2008
0_o
Kero
00:10:10 (1) - I don't really like this slider; it overlaps the previous note and it doesn't really go anywhere. It'd be nice if you could move some notes around to stretch this out. Really just a suggestion though.
00:31:39 (2) - Kind of the same issue, it just looks ugly overlapping with the previous combobursts
01:07:52 (1) - Remove new combo

Auu
Congratulations, this is the first time I've ever commented on a background in a mod post :) Anyway, I think this background kind of clashes with the skin; the skin is very winter themed, and the background is all orange and warm looking. It'll look weird for people playing with No Video mode.
00:51:71 (4,1) - Swap new combo with 4

Uguu
00:18:81 (7,8) - I have nothing against BPM changes, and it felt natural, but I don't really see the point in having a BPM change here :|

DJ Pop
fine~

Also, the combobreak sound is kind of loud and doesn't really fit the mood of the map imo. Love the spinner/spinnersounds :D

*
Breeze
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Breeze
hi :)

wow,nice skin

random mod:

[Kero~]
good job~

[Auu~]
00:27:526 (4,5,6) - maybe a slider instead is better, piano's sound is not so obvious to match
00:31:397 (3) - the turning point doesn't match anything, it sounds not so comfortable, so...myabe you could change the turning point
00:36:569 (5) - ^
00:47:042 (2) - move to 00:46:881, blue tick
as for 2 star, it seems to be a little hard :)

[uguu~]
01:01:075 (4,5,6) - different spacing to the before notes, it confused
01:09:139 (1,2,3) - ^
01:09:784 (5,6,7) - ^ , myabe you could use overlapped notes

[DJPop~]
oops,terrible array notes...


nice map,here's your star :)
cyanberryio
424 posts
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Topic Starter
cyanberryio

Breeze wrote:

[Auu~]
00:27:526 (4,5,6) - maybe a slider instead is better, piano's sound is not so obvious to match Nah, rather not.
00:31:397 (3) - the turning point doesn't match anything, it sounds not so comfortable, so...myabe you could change the turning point You mean the reverse arrow? Listen closely.
00:36:569 (5) - ^ ^
00:47:042 (2) - move to 00:46:881, blue tick Please someone make up their mind. :P I think someone asked me to change this earlier. :\

[uguu~]
01:01:075 (4,5,6) - different spacing to the before notes, it confused Not really, otherwise I think it'd be too far away
01:09:139 (1,2,3) - ^ Oh come'n it isn't THAT confusing is it?
01:09:784 (5,6,7) - ^ , myabe you could use overlapped notes ^ , and they're called stacks

[DJPop~]
oops,terrible array notes...


nice map,here's your star :)
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