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Owl City - Butterfly Wings

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JauiPlaY
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JauiPlaY
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年6月13日 at 9:54:27

Artist: Owl City
Title: Butterfly Wings
Tags: ocean eyes deluxe edition adam young
BPM: 120
Filesize: 6127kb
Play Time: 02:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (2.6 stars, 244 notes)
  2. Insane (-1 stars, 340 notes)
  3. Normal (1.51 stars, 137 notes)
Download: Owl City - Butterfly Wings
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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It's my...28th map.
Special thanks to Azure for her awesome storyboarding!!
I really hope my time become endless.
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69653863
1,818 posts
Joined January 2012
69653863
sup

also add 'deluxe edition adam young' to tags (this track is not available on regular Ocean Eyes album) c:
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
Joined August 2012
Zero__wind
nice stuff
not full ver. though =.=
JauiPlaY
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Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY

inverness wrote:

sup

also add 'deluxe edition adam young' to tags (this track is not available on regular Ocean Eyes album) c:
Will be done when the next update comes.

Zero__wind wrote:

nice stuff
not full ver. though =.=
Really? o.O
Frostmourne
osu! Alumni
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Joined November 2009
Frostmourne
Oh well !
Subscribed now :D
Banana
794 posts
Joined October 2010
Banana
思考
先打两遍说感想 周末来摸
break好多 loop段能找到专用梗的话干掉第一个效果估计会好很多
cs5拯救insane 1/4的跳和有些3/4啥啥的间距长得差不多ar8略不好读
跟了很多低音鼓00:07:490 - 比如这里 好多感觉跟vocal也可以的地方都跟了这个 然后没音效有点不爽
想起了黑历史的单面镜

edit: mod here (不过已经骗到了估计会懒)

[Insane]
00:09:615 (4) - 这边这个圈考虑围大一点 (3,4) 后面(2,3)的尾巴摆个五角星的四个角什么的
00:10:615 (1) - 倒是考虑和之前滑倒左边的滑条对应 复制粘贴翻转啥的
00:11:240 (2) - 要是我肯定不会放这种没nc的间距 这个间距敢放的理由是啥呢..如果是1/4我倒是能理解 所以建议是这个地方nc（虽然估计别人理解不能
00:11:615 (3) - 角度略不对 再平一点（懒截图
00:17:990 (1,2) - 和前面(3,4)的间距不一样啊！（强迫症死掉了
00:22:615 - 方向变了这边节奏不加一个吗 没差倒是
00:36:365 - stack的地方nc感觉不方便读图而且不好看 因为我nc方式经常被你吐槽所以我只是过来说明一下顺便凑点字数
00:39:365 (4) - nc？
00:57:865 (7) - 嘛 反正我觉得两个滑条overlap的话两个相交的滑条尾巴（或者开头）之间的圆心间距应该是一样的 （怕说不明白所以截个图好了 。。233
01:02:865 (3) - pingyidian!
01:26:115 (1) - 感觉这一串不如改成直的
01:30:115 (1) - 重复表强调的话这边重复了是不是间距可以大一点..
01:42:115 (1,2,3,4) - 考虑两个两个ctrl+g一下 有一段时间没大跳了
01:47:615 (5) - ctrl+g感觉顺一点 这边anti一个有点不理解 01:48:365 (2,3) - 改了的话这两个也考虑动一下
01:57:115 (3) - 这个极度不好读 反正这边找不到这样摆间距的理由 觉得节奏一样就可以乱跳的话最好过渡一下
02:06:990 (4) - 这个nc弄得后面的跳不好读（呐 反正我也知道nc思路不同只是凑字数啥啥的

[Normal]
懒了 都懒了 撤退收工
Last edited by Banana , edited 1 time in total.
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Autumn
Hi~ M4M here
I'm noob.. all are suggestions you can ignore ^^

[Insane]
嗯..部分有切分音的地方很跳,部分为二分拍的地方间距却又差不多,有时难以分清,造成读图上的压力
下面是我觉得以上问题比较明显的几个地方:
00:09:990 (1) - 可以和00:10:115 (2) stack 感觉挺好可以试试. 如果stack的话就跳过下一条
00:17:365 (3,4) 和 00:17:990 (1) 的间距: 建议Ctrl+G交换一下3和4 距离就变大了一些
01:47:615 (5) - 和4的间距与前面12乃至更前面的几个四分拍跳一致,这里突然来个二分拍就感觉有点唐突(有点软..的感觉?语死早
解决方案的话可以放高点?:
SPOILER

00:38:115 (1,2,3) - 滑条之间隔二分拍听起来很棒啊..倒是3可以拖拍 考虑下这个节奏吧:
SPOILER
01:05:115 (3,4,5,6) - 这个flow刚开始有点跳,后面又不跳感觉有点软,可以试试以下排列:
SPOILER
02:06:615 (3) - 3连+6连感觉跟得更合理:
SPOILER
01:24:615 (2) - 也许可以看看以下排列,我觉得更美观:
SPOILER

[Hard]
00:26:865 (2,3) - 换个节奏可以避免蓝线起拍..比如
SPOILER
01:36:865 (2,3,1,2) - AR7的话有点confusing 考虑下错开?
SPOILER

[Normal]
00:11:615 - 可以试试clap
01:03:615 - 还是clap好听一些
01:38:115 (1) - 试试Finish?

Sorry for my poor mod..希望能有帮助吧! GL~
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
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Zero__wind
Hi :3 m4m here

general
无hitsound不性福

Insane
00:09:615 (4) - 加whistle 没有合适的弱clap可以用whistle来打拍子的 后面伴奏里有同样小鼓的地方比如00:09:615 (4) - 的头上 我觉得都可以加whistle
00:32:615 (2) - 为什么前后间距差这么多 我以为3和2相隔二分拍呢
00:40:115 (5) - 加个25%左右音量的finish呗
00:40:240 (1) - 转spinner的时候85%音量 要命么 所有diff都改
01:01:615 (4) - 感觉需要离3远点儿 考虑到前面1和2之间的间距…还只相隔四分拍
01:21:115 (3,4) - 不whistle么
01:27:740 (3,1) - 这个之间的间距也会让人以为只相隔四分拍 建议把3移到前面的2的右上方
01:29:865 (6) - 这种类似的旋律部分可以加一些whistle的
01:31:740 (6,1) - 距离拉大
kiai部分旋律高音的地方加一些whistle吧
01:57:115 (3,4) - 可能被狂吐槽 虽然我觉得无可厚非吧
02:01:740 (5,1) - 距离拉大

Hard
HDR怎么说也得5吧 0.0
和Insane里一样的加whistle打节拍建议
00:28:490 (4,5) - 不包么
00:40:115 (5) - 同Insane 建议加finish
01:00:115 (4) - 或许NC
01:32:115 (1) - 让它的尾巴刚好被后面2盖住？ 现在露出了一点感觉不太好看
01:51:115 (4) - 头上加降音量finish
02:08:115 (1) - ^
02:24:115 (4) - 最后总得有个finish吧

Normal
啥也没看出 音效建议同上

good luck
Broccoly
1,359 posts
Joined May 2012
Broccoly
hai~ trying for m4m
since the map is good, most of my mods will be suggestions :D

[insane]

00:10:115 (2,3) // 00:10:615 (1,2) - since the spacing between 2,3 and 1,2 are similar, the players might get confused moving from 1 to 2, hitting 2 earlier thinking it's the similar kind of jump like 2,3
00:18:615 (1,2) - ^similar concept. and it kinda feels awkward to wait between such a short distance.
00:23:115 (4,5,1,2) - That's better, cuz now the jump between 1,2 are similar to 4,5
00:27:615 (5,1,2) - put 1 right in the middle of 5 and 2? Jump doesn't go too well here imo
00:33:365 (4,5) - since this distance is similar to that between 00:32:990 (3,4) , it's hard to read that it's a stop
00:33:365 (4,5,1) - ^same (place 5 right in the middle)
01:06:115 (1,2,3) - a bit far.. makes player sliderbreak :C
01:08:115 (1,2,3) - ooh nice
01:28:615 (2,3) - maybe a bit closer?
01:44:615 (2,3) - ^

[Hard]
00:19:740 (4) - put it 00:19:615 - here instead? I think it fits good as well, incorporating that snare.
00:27:615 (3) - add a note? (preferably on 4's head)
02:05:365 (4) - ctrl + g? more fun imo + the music goes up
02:13:365 (4) - ^

[Normal]
01:54:615 (2,3) - might obscure the repeat sign.. not sure
02:10:615 (2,3) - ^
2good can't find anything

Nice song, nice map!
I like your sexy sliders in Insane.
good luck~
Ilayu
46 posts
Joined June 2011
Ilayu
insane

01:37:865 (2）-ctrl+h之后到右边再往上挪一点
01:43:365 (6) -reverse selection
01:55:865 (5）-让这个滑条往上带一点弧度
02:03:865 (5）-让这个滑条往左拐弯
02:11:865 (5）-让这个滑条也往左拐弯
i'm noob
JauiPlaY
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Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
Fixed some and updated. Thanks for modding!!

About those spacing you've mentioned, I just want my map to keep a special style, which, for some ppl, may be hard to read. But if they try and play more, they will find it fun and interesting enough.

To modders: feel free to leave your suggestion here. I will look think about all of them. If they're reasonable enough, they will be accepted. ;)
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Megurine Luka
2,580 posts
Joined November 2010
Megurine Luka
M4M as requested

[G]

Nope
其实感觉sliderslide声音还是有点...要不换成静音的吧/.\

[N]

00:16:615 (2) - 感觉需要向右调整1-2 grid的样子

[H]

00:29:115 (5) - x=264 y=120
01:39:115 (3) - 这样感觉好点

02:06:115 (1) - 我能吐槽这形状么
02:22:115 (1) - ^ 不忍直视

[I]

00:06:865 (1,2,3) - 三连略显伪和
00:18:365 (3) - ctrl+G 感觉好点
00:36:865 (4) - ^
01:03:615 (5) - clap
01:11:615 (5) - 再次吐槽形状
01:28:115 (1) - ctrl+G


没啦~神mapper~
Flower
1,723 posts
Joined August 2011
Flower
123

[Insane]
00:06:865 (1,2) - slightly reduce volume
00:11:115 - add a note so reads better?
00:31:365 (3,7) - whistle sounds strange. either follow the drum or vocal is anyway better.
00:56:115 (3) - shorten by 1/4 and add a note at 00:56:490 - ?
01:04:115 (1) - ^
01:09:615 (6) - blanket looks better
01:21:615 (5) - you can try deleting this note


[Hard]
00:27:615 - add a note so reads better?

[Normal]
02:11:115 (3) - reverse arrow overlapped

没什么槽点不好mod 但是选曲我不喜啊 bg只穿这个小背心我也不知道是不是NSFW good luck~
Origami_Munchkin
66 posts
Joined October 2011
Origami_Munchkin
Keep up the great work on all your maps! Have a star!
Hanabi
Hanabi
Sana's modding from M4M~~

[Insane]

00:09:365 (3) - NC
00:10:615 (1) - remove NC
00:11:240 (2) - NC
00:14:865 (3) - NC
00:27:115 (3) - make just 1/2 snap
00:39:365 (4) - NC
00:57:865 (7,1) - not so good overlapped
01:08:865 (3) - slider's head or circle must not be hidden by other slider-> replace it
01:36:115 (1) - mute at that time
02:07:740 (6) - NC
02:24:240 - umm..break time?

[Hard]

00:11:365 (3) - NC
00:33:365 (5) - NC
00:34:115 (1) - remove NC
01:21:865 (4) - slider would be better at this time
01:44:615 (4) - ctrl + G+H
02:24:115 (4) - NC

[Normal]

00:20:115 (1,2,1) - like this-> http://puu.sh/302wH.jpg
01:12:115 (4) - NC
01:55:115 (3) - change the dirrection


i hope it's helpful to you!!

nice map Nice song~~ GOOD LUCK~!! ;)


i lov OWL CITY <3
eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
eveless
  • [Insane]
  1. 01:21:490 (4,5,6) - 说实话这边节奏略违和，其实5和01:21:740 和6才是一套体系的，4+5故意空那个地方然后接6就感觉少了什么一样。把4移掉然后01:21:740 加note吧。不然把5去掉。
  2. 01:43:865 (8) - 实在不想吐槽这种对称流，考虑把最后那个slider放在中间互换下三个slider的位置吧
  3. 02:20:615 (2,3,4,5) - 个人觉得2345开头中间的距离应该相等或成比例增加。
  4. 其实后面的红线都用不上你加着干嘛……


  • [Hard]
  1. 感觉漏了很多音效，比如clap什么的。
  2. 00:09:615 (4) - 比如这里
  3. 00:10:615 (2) - 再比如这个结尾，前面00:08:615 (2) - 明明有加。
  4. 00:15:365 (3) - 像这种明显可以加音效确不加我感觉有点过分……
  5. 以下省略blablabla
  6. 01:41:365 (6) - 感觉6-1的flow不是很好？


  • [Normal]
  1. 这是Easy不是Normal吧
  2. 00:14:615 (2) - 这听起来感觉总有一种结束在错误的地方的感觉，延后到红线？（其实蓝线也比较对……反正停在这白线上感觉怪怪的）
  3. 00:28:115 (1) - 感觉没必要nc, 后面开始这一片都有点combo换乱的感觉，建议没有特殊情况的话保持2小节或者4小节一NC。
yurunneram
682 posts
Joined January 2012
yurunneram
Why don't you map the end of the song? OAO You should

Normal
I love the symmetry :D But I think for this difficulty, near the front I couldn't identify the pattern in the song. Maybe it's just me :P Oh well

Hard
00:19:740 (4) - Move to 00:19:615

I can't mod insane but.. I think 00:33:365 (4) is too big of a jump.

That's all. Sorry if not much ^^")7

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~
JauiPlaY
1,287 posts
Joined April 2010
Topic Starter
JauiPlaY
Fixed some issues and updated, thanks for modding!! :D
Azure
771 posts
Joined November 2010
Azure
JPY大人~ SB請收下 :3
http://puu.sh/36qNM.rar
JauiPlaY
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JauiPlaY
跪谢OTL

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