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Kawabe Chieco - Sakura Kiss (TV Size)
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Well, starring since your map is so pro I felt like making a diff myself. ;o
EDIT: Looking back in retrospect, I never starred.
EDIT: Looking back in retrospect, I never starred.
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BPM:166
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BPM:166
Offset:-2
cute map! I like this.☆彡
but... I want a if possible easy a little more difficulty.
but... I want a if possible easy a little more difficulty.
Too many hitsounds, i think.
Also you can decrease volume of hitsounds.
[v0xtrot]
00:25:662 (7) - Up 1 grid. (Lvl 4 grid)
00:34:156 (x) - Add note here, OR add note here 00:34:337
01:06:867 (10) - Remove note and add note here 01:07:048
01:09:668 (9-10) - Down 1 grid.
It's all.
Starred.
Also you can decrease volume of hitsounds.
[v0xtrot]
00:25:662 (7) - Up 1 grid. (Lvl 4 grid)
00:34:156 (x) - Add note here, OR add note here 00:34:337
01:06:867 (10) - Remove note and add note here 01:07:048
01:09:668 (9-10) - Down 1 grid.
It's all.
Starred.
I still am not very good at timing, but I got 1,817 ms as the offset.
- All:
Needs an easier difficulty, imo.
- v0trot:
00:31:81 (1) - Short spinner. I think its best that you delete this and place notes at 00:32:00 and 00:32:18.
01:09:68 (9,10) - Possibly line up with 01:09:40 (7,8).
- Gentle Death:
Use more hitsounds throughout the map, like the other difficulty. This map is so boring without them.
00:19:15 (1) - Inconsistent spacing; not sure why you changed the distance spacing here.
00:33:97 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:39:75 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:23:31 (4) - Shorten this by 1/4.
00:26:74 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - What exactly are these meant to follow? I can't figure out what - it could just be me.
01:10:12 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
- Shin's
No real problems here; fun.
- All:
Needs an easier difficulty, imo.
- v0trot:
00:31:81 (1) - Short spinner. I think its best that you delete this and place notes at 00:32:00 and 00:32:18.
01:09:68 (9,10) - Possibly line up with 01:09:40 (7,8).
- Gentle Death:
Use more hitsounds throughout the map, like the other difficulty. This map is so boring without them.
00:19:15 (1) - Inconsistent spacing; not sure why you changed the distance spacing here.
00:33:97 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:39:75 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:23:31 (4) - Shorten this by 1/4.
00:26:74 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - What exactly are these meant to follow? I can't figure out what - it could just be me.
01:10:12 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
- Shin's
No real problems here; fun.
Topic Starter
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Yeah, you're brazilian, then i'll speak in portuguese, lol
Paulo, só umas sugestões...
[Gentle Death]:
00:10:208: add um círculo aqui, acho que se as sequencias ficarem as três iguais, fica melhor. :]
[v0xtrot]:
01:13:012 (1): esse circulo e o 2, não seriam melhor continuarem na sequencia anterior? Assim a nova sequencia seria do 3 em diante.
Shin's tá ótimo. xD
Só uma dica, em alguma dificuldade, separa mais os sliders um do outro, dando um pouco mais de dificuldade. As 3 dificuldades estão pouco parecidas, dar uma diferença nelas é interessante. c_c
Starred, congratz.
Paulo, só umas sugestões...
[Gentle Death]:
00:10:208: add um círculo aqui, acho que se as sequencias ficarem as três iguais, fica melhor. :]
[v0xtrot]:
01:13:012 (1): esse circulo e o 2, não seriam melhor continuarem na sequencia anterior? Assim a nova sequencia seria do 3 em diante.
Shin's tá ótimo. xD
Só uma dica, em alguma dificuldade, separa mais os sliders um do outro, dando um pouco mais de dificuldade. As 3 dificuldades estão pouco parecidas, dar uma diferença nelas é interessante. c_c
Starred, congratz.
[gentle death]
no problems here
[v0xtr0t]
00:31:80 (1) - spinner doesn't meet the auto+2000 rule.
01:09:58 (?) - i think a note here would fit better...
[shin's]
00:09:39 (1,2,3) - i find this to be confusing. The repeating sliders make the pattern really weird.
00:50:23 (3,4) - this is really confusing
other than those things all seems fine:)
no problems here
[v0xtr0t]
00:31:80 (1) - spinner doesn't meet the auto+2000 rule.
01:09:58 (?) - i think a note here would fit better...
[shin's]
00:09:39 (1,2,3) - i find this to be confusing. The repeating sliders make the pattern really weird.
00:50:23 (3,4) - this is really confusing
other than those things all seems fine
:)Relaxing
00:13:19 (1,2,3) - I wouldn't have notes on the offbeats on Easy difficulties. Try moving 1 and 2 ahead a white tick, remove 3, then make 2 a slider where 3 used to be.
00:51:68 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Overlaps like this may be too confusing for beginners
v0xtrot
00:31:80 (1) - bad bad bad bad bad bad spinner 
either lengthen to the next white tick or remove
aaand mrtn already mentioned it
Shin's
epically overmapped, but sure
yay
00:13:19 (1,2,3) - I wouldn't have notes on the offbeats on Easy difficulties. Try moving 1 and 2 ahead a white tick, remove 3, then make 2 a slider where 3 used to be.
00:51:68 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Overlaps like this may be too confusing for beginners
v0xtrot
either lengthen to the next white tick or removeaaand mrtn already mentioned it
Shin's
epically overmapped, but sure
yay
Topic Starter
almost everything fixed~
I've got new skin elements coming, and they are pretty nice! Just wait ;D
I've got new skin elements coming, and they are pretty nice! Just wait ;D
[Relaxing]
00:02:52 (3) - A finish at end of slider :3
01:15:17 (4) - ^
This difficulty needs hitsounds.
[Gentle Death]
00:03:25 (8) - Finish here, too.
00:37:77 (5) - ^
01:15:44 (7) - ^
[v0xtr0t]
00:11:74 (8) - 1 square up? better
00:31:80 (1) - Unrankable spinner. <----- IMPORTANT TO CHANGE!!!!!
01:06:50 (8) - New combo.
01:07:59 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:09:03 (5) - New combo.
[Shin's]
Fine.
Star this <3
00:02:52 (3) - A finish at end of slider :3
01:15:17 (4) - ^
This difficulty needs hitsounds.
[Gentle Death]
00:03:25 (8) - Finish here, too.
00:37:77 (5) - ^
01:15:44 (7) - ^
[v0xtr0t]
00:11:74 (8) - 1 square up? better
00:31:80 (1) - Unrankable spinner. <----- IMPORTANT TO CHANGE!!!!!
01:06:50 (8) - New combo.
01:07:59 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:09:03 (5) - New combo.
[Shin's]
Fine.
Star this <3
You guys sure didn't like the spinner. Meh, thanks for the quick feedback on this map. ;o
[Gentle Death]:
00:20:51 (10) - Please put a finish or something here.
00:32:16 (14) - Same here.
00:37:76 (5) - Finish?
[shin]
00:43:55 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - I don't get this stream yo. :/
And that's pretty much all I have to say for now, I really like both your and Shin's maps.
I made some small changes on my map, like the first spinner, a note on a spot, etc. Check it out yo.
Download: Kawabe Chieco - Sakura Kiss (TV Size) (Paulo8624) [v0xtrot].osu
Meh, thanks for the quick feedback on this map. ;o[Gentle Death]:
00:20:51 (10) - Please put a finish or something here.
00:32:16 (14) - Same here.
00:37:76 (5) - Finish?
[shin]
00:43:55 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - I don't get this stream yo. :/
And that's pretty much all I have to say for now, I really like both your and Shin's maps.
I made some small changes on my map, like the first spinner, a note on a spot, etc. Check it out yo.
Download: Kawabe Chieco - Sakura Kiss (TV Size) (Paulo8624) [v0xtrot].osu
You guys sure didn't like the spinner.
No, is not that, for rank a map the spinner have to give with auto 2000 bonus...
No, is not that, for rank a map the spinner have to give with auto 2000 bonus...
Cool beatmap, cool spinner~
I don't have time to go into details, but this beatmap looks good.
So yeah, starred.
I don't have time to go into details, but this beatmap looks good.
So yeah, starred.
Relaxing~
Gentle X_x~
- 00:02:52 (3) - Redo break after beat. (It'll shorten)
- 00:10:11 (2) - Move 1 tick down.
- 00:49:87 (2,3,4) - Move 1 tick to the right. (This is for even spacing between 1 and 2.)
Gentle X_x~
- 00:20:59 (x) - Small suggestion: Possibly add a beat here? Since the drum sound ends there.
- 00:28:19 (1,2) - Move 3 ticks to the left.
- The offset is 0, change to 359. Then resnap.
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Shin's Chaos.... why doesn't that sound appealing to me... 
Anyways~
I'll look over Relaxing...
full nazi~!
Remove ALL claps and replace with whistles imo
00:02:52 (3) - remove finish or whistle (just one of them)
00:14:09 (2) - remove whistle-slide
00:19:15 (2) - don't like this, it follows the drums, but then doesn't...make this slider or add note to 00:19:51! (and no hitsounds for this)
00:20:96 (1) - sounds awkward, but whatever
00:22:40 (2) - remove whistle-slide
00:24:75 (3) - maybe new combo (since the last slider ended with Finish and its new start for vocal?)
00:26:74 (1) - down a tick?
00:30:72 (5) - right a tick or center it, and remove whistle-slide?
00:45:53 (3) - maybe add finish to end?
01:01:44 (2,4) - add whistle (to 4's start)
01:01:80 (3,4) - 4 left a tick or 3,4 right a tick
01:02:16 (4) - maybe finish to end?
01:03:25 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - make the lines parallel (and have that first 1 align with 4 from last combo)
01:05:05 (3) - maybe finish to end? or not... your choice here~
01:14:09 (1,2,3,4) - down a tick
01:14:09 (1,2,3) - remove whistles~
01:15:17 (4) - if you did add more finish to those slider ends, then keep the finish here~ if you didn't, then remove
For hitsounds, I won't keep it simple ~
What else... right, a star...
Download: Kawabe Chieco - Sakura Kiss (TV Size) (Paulo8624) [Shin's Chaos].osu
Anyways~
I'll look over Relaxing...
full nazi~!
Remove ALL claps and replace with whistles imo
00:02:52 (3) - remove finish or whistle (just one of them)
00:14:09 (2) - remove whistle-slide
00:19:15 (2) - don't like this, it follows the drums, but then doesn't...make this slider or add note to 00:19:51! (and no hitsounds for this)
00:20:96 (1) - sounds awkward, but whatever
00:22:40 (2) - remove whistle-slide
00:24:75 (3) - maybe new combo (since the last slider ended with Finish and its new start for vocal?)
00:26:74 (1) - down a tick?
00:30:72 (5) - right a tick or center it, and remove whistle-slide?
00:45:53 (3) - maybe add finish to end?
01:01:44 (2,4) - add whistle (to 4's start)
01:01:80 (3,4) - 4 left a tick or 3,4 right a tick
01:02:16 (4) - maybe finish to end?
01:03:25 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - make the lines parallel (and have that first 1 align with 4 from last combo)
01:05:05 (3) - maybe finish to end? or not... your choice here~
01:14:09 (1,2,3,4) - down a tick
01:14:09 (1,2,3) - remove whistles~
01:15:17 (4) - if you did add more finish to those slider ends, then keep the finish here~ if you didn't, then remove
For hitsounds, I won't keep it simple ~
What else... right, a star...
Download: Kawabe Chieco - Sakura Kiss (TV Size) (Paulo8624) [Shin's Chaos].osu
[Relaxing]
00:20:96 (1) - End repeats at white tick instead?
00:28:19 (3) - Hitsound at end of this?
00:30:72 (5) - End at red tick?
00:54:93 (4,5) - Move these up 1 on level 3 grid for equal distance
[Gentle Death] (the name sounds hot lol)
00:03:25 (8) - Finish?
00:20:51 (10) - I don't like the clap here
00:39:75 (4,5,6,7) - Doesnt sound right
01:15:53 (8) - Finish
[Shins Chaos]
00:43:55 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - lolwut?
00:55:11 (7) - Fast sliders up ahead...wow I got a "Splash Mountain" flashback from disneyland with this somehow lol
01:15:53 (6) - Finish
[v0xtrot]
Yay my favorite difficulty~!
Starr'd
00:20:96 (1) - End repeats at white tick instead?
00:28:19 (3) - Hitsound at end of this?
00:30:72 (5) - End at red tick?
00:54:93 (4,5) - Move these up 1 on level 3 grid for equal distance
[Gentle Death] (the name sounds hot lol)
00:03:25 (8) - Finish?
00:20:51 (10) - I don't like the clap here
00:39:75 (4,5,6,7) - Doesnt sound right
01:15:53 (8) - Finish
[Shins Chaos]
00:43:55 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - lolwut?
00:55:11 (7) - Fast sliders up ahead...wow I got a "Splash Mountain" flashback from disneyland with this somehow lol
01:15:53 (6) - Finish
[v0xtrot]
Yay my favorite difficulty~!
Starr'd