This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domingo, 09 de junio de 2013 at 20:35:39

Artist: Panic! at the Disco
Title: Camisado
Tags: A Fever You Can't Sweat Out alternative synthrock
BPM: 156
Filesize: 4808kb
Play Time: 02:55
Difficulties Available:

1. Average (4,08 stars, 223 notes)
2. Challenging (4,89 stars, 336 notes)
3. Relaxing (2,29 stars, 154 notes)
4. Tough (4,82 stars, 467 notes)

Download: Panic! at the Disco - Camisado
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Meh.. REMEMBER THAT TOUGH IS HARDER THAN CHALLENGING Silly Star rating xD

This is my contribution to Gonz' Album Project: Panic! at the Disco - A Fever You Can't Sweat Out

I really like this song when I listen the first time, so I decided to claim this one in the project.
Everything is complete now

Special thanks to:
Gonzvlo: For the mp3

Mapset:
Relaxing (Easy): 100%
Average (Normal): 100%
Challenging (Hard): 100%
Tough (Insane): 100%

Poke me when you're done and I'll mod it.

-Bakari- wrote:

Poke me when you're done and I'll mod it.

Oh.. Thanks for all bro! :3.
Btw, everything is complete and ready for mods now

Weenaa Washooo!
Nueva Zelanda CTM
[Relaxing]

1. Quita 1 Al AR Esta bien dificil con el AR, es como de un Normal
2. 00:20:197 (3) No me gusta que la nota se devuelva e.e
3. 00:21:735 (1) Curva Pls, As que el (1) Rodee la parte trasera de (3)
4. 00:29:043 Espacio Innecesario
5. 00:48:658 (3) No veo la necesidad de seguir la voz, solo has que sea acorde a la canción y lo suficientemente fácil para que sea un Easy
6. 01:15:581 (3) Veo algo raro aquí D:
7. 01:19:043 (4,1) Mmm, algo raro en el ritmo, y las curvas no están completamente curvadas Grandes pensadores, Thomas Soto Poblete 5/19/2013
8. 01:40:966 (3) Has bien la curva, se ve feo como esta (?
9. 02:14:428 (4) ^ Que te esta pasando? Tus curvas eran cheveres (Me salio medio gay lo anterior xD)

[Average]

1. 00:17:697 (4,5) No sobre pongas el 4, mejor que quede Así
2. 00:46:351 (1,3) Podrías hacer curvas, imo
3. 00:48:274 (4,5,6) Quedaría mejor Así
4. 00:50:966 (3,4,5) Mejor Así
5. 01:13:274 (6) Podrías hacer Esto
6. 01:40:197 (4,5,6) Tal vez Así
7. 01:44:812 (1,2,3) Entiende Hombre, Se Ve Mejor Así
8. 02:34:043 (1,2,3) Lo mismo de arriba pero ya sabes en que forma
9. 02:35:581 (4,5,6) ^
   La razón de que dejara varias veces lo del slider (1,2,3) (Ejemplo) es porque es difícil y complicado, es un Normal Se supone

[Challenging]

1. Podrías bajarle 1 al AR, ya que es de notas pequeñas y bastante acelerado
2. Subir 1 al HP :3

Esta bien el resto maldito pro

[Tough]

1. Lo moddeare cuando aprenda a mappear Insane's

Bueee, Buena suerte

ThoomyyxD wrote:

Weenaa Washooo!
Nueva Zelanda CTM
[Relaxing]

1. Quita 1 Al AR Esta bien dificil con el AR, es como de un Normal Usualmente uso AR3 en mis Easy, pero voy a hacer una excepcion en este caso, estuve testeando la diff. con AR3 y es todo demasiado lento, especialmente despues de los breaks. Asi que por esto lo dejo como esta
2. 00:20:197 (3) No me gusta que la nota se devuelva e.e Lo que pasa es que si no hago esto, ahi si seria dificil para los Newbies
3. 00:21:735 (1) Curva Pls, As que el (1) Rodee la parte trasera de (3) Lo arregle un poquito :3
4. 00:29:043 Espacio Innecesario Viendo el BPM creo que un constante 1/1 seria algo complicado para los nuevos jugadores, ademas creo que la musica me permite esto en esta parte. Prefiero dejarlo asi.
5. 00:48:658 (3) No veo la necesidad de seguir la voz, solo has que sea acorde a la canción y lo suficientemente fácil para que sea un Easy Pero no es dificil . Digo, el Slider es algo largo e incluso el espacio en el timeline entre (3,1) es lo suficiente grande para que los nuevos jugadores puedan seguir correctamente el ritmo
6. 01:15:581 (3) Veo algo raro aquí D: wut?
7. 01:19:043 (4,1) Mmm, algo raro en el ritmo, y las curvas no están completamente curvadas Grandes pensadores, Thomas Soto Poblete 5/19/2013 Lol, las arregle un poco xD.
8. 01:40:966 (3) Has bien la curva, se ve feo como esta (?
9. 02:14:428 (4) ^ Que te esta pasando? Tus curvas eran cheveres (Me salio medio gay lo anterior xD) You so nazi xD. Las arregle un poco, ahora estan mejor

[Average]

1. 00:17:697 (4,5) No sobre pongas el 4, mejor que quede Así Muy buenas sugerencias, no lo habia pensado asi . La verdad que me gusto bastante, asi que arreglado.
2. 00:46:351 (1,3) Podrías hacer curvas, imo Nah.. prefiero recto
3. 00:48:274 (4,5,6) Quedaría mejor Así
4. 00:50:966 (3,4,5) Mejor Así
5. 01:13:274 (6) Podrías hacer Esto
6. 01:40:197 (4,5,6) Tal vez Así
7. 01:44:812 (1,2,3) Entiende Hombre, Se Ve Mejor Así todo esto listo
8. 02:34:043 (1,2,3) Lo mismo de arriba pero ya sabes en que forma
9. 02:35:581 (4,5,6) ^ Listo y listo.
   La razón de que dejara varias veces lo del slider (1,2,3) (Ejemplo) es porque es difícil y complicado, es un Normal Se supone Por eso uso 1,2,3 xD. Se supone que los jugadores intermedios tendrian que estar capacitados para pasar esto. Ademas, estos 1,2,3 casi siempre son Slider, nota, slider, lo cual no causa mayores problemas imo. Pero bueno, gracias por esas sugerencias el mapa se ve un poco mejor sin esos stacks, capaz que lo aplique en algunas otras partes de esta dificultad, pero por ahora asi esta bien

[Challenging]

1. Podrías bajarle 1 al AR, ya que es de notas pequeñas y bastante acelerado No, lo probe con ambos, y se nota todo muy lento con AR7, por culpa de eso meti muchos 100, se me hizo mucho mas facil con AR8 por eso prefiero dejarlo
2. Subir 1 al HP :3 Aca si estoy de acuerdoQue carajo me esta pasando, que me olvido de cambiar esto.

Esta bien el resto maldito pro

[Tough]

1. Lo moddeare cuando aprenda a mappear Insane's

Bueee, Buena suerte

Gracias thommyy! . Updated!!

Hey, you asked me for a mod so, why not?

[General]

Well the background and the circle colors are so dark, i suggest lighten up everything a bit, maybe it's just me but i like brighten things more xD (Especially the brown is really bad readable)


[Relaxing]

00:46:351 (1,2,3) - If you look closely, you can see that something weird there: Move 3 like this, that it fits as well (like.. the distance between 1 and 2 is not the same as between 2 and 3)... if you don't know what i mean i try to explain again xD
01:04:812 (1) - Can you explain me this reverse? o.o
01:35:678 (1) - I think stacked could also be nice, idk, i just like it more this way (especially at circles like this)
02:45:197 (4) - hm.. NC? well it's not necessary but .. it's like an echo xD

Got nothing else to say here, looks fine

[Average]

First of all, it looks nice! Just, didn't you use a bit too many half tick beats? Maybe it's a bit too hard, but it plays nice
01:11:928 - I would delete this one, it's really unnecessary and makes it unnecessary hard
01:18:658 (4,5) - this also plays a bit hard for normal, i mean all of a sudden there is a direction change

Well as I said it looks nice, got nothing to say, just i don't really agree with the stacks and how often you used 1/2's ^-^

[Challenging]

00:49:235 (5) - rotate this by some degrees to get a better bow overall here (with circle 3 and 4)
01:28:466 (6) - move this some grids to the left?
01:29:043 (8,9,1) - this jump? why? xD It doesn't really fit, you should think about keeping DS here
01:55:966 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/2XyLs.jpg ? Maybe you like this
02:07:120 (3) - Making this 1 tick shorter would have a nice beat kind of
02:08:658 (7,8) - If you do this ^ make the same 'slider' pattern here as well
02:52:312 (4) - move the last white point to x: 1078 x:68, because his voice stays the same at this moment

I'm fine with the rest!


[Tough]

00:16:158 (3) - 3 should have the same distance between Slider end 2 and slider end 4..
00:18:658 (1) - I recommend moving it like http://puu.sh/2Xy3u.jpg , because it's pretty confusing ..
00:20:197 (1) - Ctrl + G here? It's kinda a flow breaker, and it will look better, if you want a jump here you could move 7 a bit to the bottom
00:43:658 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3) - In this part: Just to lead in the kiai time a bit better, you could add a stream of 5 circles before the kiai starts
01:16:735 (9) - Eh. this doesn't look very well made, you should place it differently, but i recommend this : http://puu.sh/2XyhS.jpg
02:52:312 (6,1) - I think the slider should already start at Circle 6 hm? o.o

Well, overall the diff looks pretty good, but I really don't like how you placed the jumps everytime a new combo appeared xDD but that's up to you, no offense of course \o/

good luck :3

Irreversible wrote:

Hey, you asked me for a mod so, why not?:D

[General]

Well the background and the circle colors are so dark, i suggest lighten up everything a bit, maybe it's just me but i like brighten things more xD (Especially the brown is really bad readable) Yes, I agree with you. I changed that for brighter colours


[Relaxing]

00:46:351 (1,2,3) - If you look closely, you can see that something weird there: Move 3 like this, that it fits as well (like.. the distance between 1 and 2 is not the same as between 2 and 3)... if you don't know what i mean i try to explain again xD Yeah, I didn't understand this properly, I'll ask you in-game later I think
01:04:812 (1) - Can you explain me this reverse? o.o Yes, this Slider follows the vocals and instrumental at the same time, when the vocals disappear the instrumental still sounding. I forget to add the hitsounding in the reverse and at the end of this slider, with them I think you will notice better what I mean
01:35:678 (1) - I think stacked could also be nice, idk, i just like it more this way (especially at circles like this) I prefer to don't use stacked patterns in these kind of diffs.
02:45:197 (4) - hm.. NC? well it's not necessary but .. it's like an echo xD Let's keep them consistent, is better imo xD.

Got nothing else to say here, looks fine

[Average]

First of all, it looks nice! Just, didn't you use a bit too many half tick beats? Maybe it's a bit too hard, but it plays nice I think the play well in this difficulty, in general when I use notes over red ticks are in the middle of 2 Sliders, which is ok for a Normal diff. I think it is ok, but anyways I deleted others 1/2 not really necessary in the diff.
01:11:928 - I would delete this one, it's really unnecessary and makes it unnecessary hard Removed
01:18:658 (4,5) - this also plays a bit hard for normal, i mean all of a sudden there is a direction change Hmm.. I think it is ok.

Well as I said it looks nice, got nothing to say, just i don't really agree with the stacks and how often you used 1/2's ^-^ Yes, but as you can see, Challenging is a bit harder than a common Hard due to the 1/2 usage, for that reason I have to make a little harder than a Normal for the spread. But as I said, the difficult is ok for a normal imo

[Challenging]

00:49:235 (5) - rotate this by some degrees to get a better bow overall here (with circle 3 and 4) Agree with you
01:28:466 (6) - move this some grids to the left? k (but the next time say me why pls)
01:29:043 (8,9,1) - this jump? why? xD It doesn't really fit, you should think about keeping DS here This is similar as 01:10:581. I follow the drums to place this jump instead of vocals.
01:55:966 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/2XyLs.jpg ? Maybe you like this Is this the correct time?
02:07:120 (3) - Making this 1 tick shorter would have a nice beat kind of Sure.
02:08:658 (7,8) - If you do this ^ make the same 'slider' pattern here as well ^
02:52:312 (4) - move the last white point to x: 1078 x:68, because his voice stays the same at this moment Nah.. it is ok as it is imo

I'm fine with the rest!


[Tough]

00:16:158 (3) - 3 should have the same distance between Slider end 2 and slider end 4.. Why? :/
00:18:658 (1) - I recommend moving it like http://puu.sh/2Xy3u.jpg , because it's pretty confusing .. I think is ok for an Insane, some players test my map and they didn't have problem with that
00:20:197 (1) - Ctrl + G here? It's kinda a flow breaker, and it will look better, if you want a jump here you could move 7 a bit to the bottom Ok, but I prefer to don't add jump in this part.
00:43:658 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3) - In this part: Just to lead in the kiai time a bit better, you could add a stream of 5 circles before the kiai starts But I don't want to overmap, the beats are placed over the red tick, maybe the only place for a note over the red tick is in 00:46:255 but I find it unnecesary, because the highest pitch are over 1/2s.
01:16:735 (9) - Eh. this doesn't look very well made, you should place it differently, but i recommend this : http://puu.sh/2XyhS.jpg Done.
02:52:312 (6,1) - I think the slider should already start at Circle 6 hm? o.o Not really, I listened that in 25% playback and the 'oh' is kinda 'oh.. oooohh' it is looks like it is separated in 2 xD. For these I'll keep it

Well, overall the diff looks pretty good, but I really don't like how you placed the jumps everytime a new combo appeared xDD but that's up to you, no offense of course \o/ This is part of my style, I find this way to make jumpy patterns consistent between them, I like it. You know, these are personal likes xD.

good luck :3

Thanks for your mod! . It was pretty useful .. Updated!!

Hi~ mancusojuanmattos (:3 」_)=3

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Really nice map lol Good luck !!

Gloria Guard wrote:

Hi~ mancusojuanmattos (:3 」_)=3 Hi

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[General]

Fine!

[Relaxing]

00:16:735 (3) I think that the flow is not smooth in this area.
This is slider curve seems to be a good flow.
00:22:889 (2,3,4,5) I will suggest this pattern flow Fixed this

SPOILER

01:39:812 (2,3) oh.. why not this pattern not blanket..? you are check this pattern blanket shape the blanket is between the end of (2) and at the start of (3).
02:04:043 (1,2) I hope the suggestions about the shape of the pattern. Yes looks nice, I re-arranged a bit the slider (1) anyways to make it completely symetric.

SPOILER

SPOILER

172,252,124043,6,0,B|216:276|256:248|256:248|296:276|344:248,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

02:10:966 (3) The slider is unsuited balance. Fixed with your code.

SPOILER

352,36,130966,2,0,P|256:80|152:36,1,225,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

02:36:928 (1) This is true not suitable balance slider Personally, I like this, especially the pattern between (1,2)
I want to improve the appearance.

SPOILER

02:41:735 (2,3,4) This beat is a bit awkward?, i recommend this beat. Hmm.. k, fixed.

SPOILER

[Average]

00:48:274 (6) change the direction of the slider curve, you can achieve better flow. fixed a bit.

SPOILER

00:51:543 (3,4,5) I suggest this beat improve here Done.

SPOILER

00:55:581 (1) This part of the song, you don't need notes. remove note please Yes, you are right. Removed
02:03:658 (1) I was confused about the note, because the spinner and notes overlap didn't look good. I think the stack with the middle of the slider is the better thing in a Normal when I want a 1/1 note after the spinner, especially because they can see properly the note before to complete the Spin
02:38:851 (3,4) This part is the lyrics fit the beat

SPOILER

02:33:274 (5) nazi, This is slider second point move x:464 y:192 and end point move x:448 y:136 is better blanket
02:43:274 (1) 00:55:581 (1) same remove please Done, done and done.

[Challenging]

00:14:428 (5,6,7) I think this pattern shape improve this Done.

SPOILER

SPOILER

332,56,13851,2,0,P|256:76|180:51,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

02:47:505 (4) nazi, This is slider move x:364 y:132 is better blanket Yes
00:27:505 (7) hmm.. i think this slider beat really awkward.. i recommend this beat Nah.. It is ok as it is.

SPOILER

[Tough]

00:15:774 (2,3,4) The pattern shape is a little more than improve here I used your code.

SPOILER

32,336,15774,2,0,P|12:292|20:240,1,100,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
104,192,16158,1,0,0:0:0:0:

Really nice map lol Good luck !!

Thanks a lot! . I fixed a lot of aesthetics things with your mod . Updated!!

HI~ mancusojuanmattos
#modreqs

Relaxing

00:48:658 (3) - http://puu.sh/2XUzV.jpg 00:49:428 (4) - x249 y109

01:09:428 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/2XUEm.jpg > http://puu.sh/2XUF2.jpg

01:10:197 (2) - > 01:10:005 (2) - Go to this place

01:10:581 (3) - Add a note

Average

00:17:120 (3,4,5) - Distance spacing 0.50>1.00

00:46:351 (1,2,3) - ^

00:47:889 (4,5,6) - ^

00:50:966 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/2XUMO.jpg > http://puu.sh/2XUMh.jpg Distance spacing 0.50>1.00

01:13:274 (5) - http://puu.sh/2XUOd.jpg The tail of the slider Finish

01:14:043 (6) - Delete

01:25:581 (5) -http://puu.sh/2XUQh.jpg The tail of the slider Finish

01:26:351 (6) - Delete

01:40:197 (4,5,6) - Distance spacing 0.50>1.00

01:44:812 (1,2,3) - ^

01:53:466 (5) -http://puu.sh/2XURB.jpg > http://puu.sh/2XUSp.jpg

02:34:043 (1,2,3) - Distance spacing 0.50>1.00

02:35:581 (4,5,6) - ^

02:37:889 (2) - Delete

02:38:081 (1) - http://puu.sh/2XUWs.jpg
Good song!
good map!

[ Zzz ] wrote:

HI~ mancusojuanmattos
#modreqs Oh.. you modded this one too! Great!!

Relaxing

00:48:658 (3) - http://puu.sh/2XUzV.jpg 00:49:428 (4) - x249 y109 As I said you in my other map, I'll leave that because follow properly the vocals, new player will catch the game easily

01:09:428 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/2XUEm.jpg > http://puu.sh/2XUF2.jpg

01:10:197 (2) - > 01:10:005 (2) - Go to this place

01:10:581 (3) - Add a note Oh no.. I'll not add notes over red ticks in this diff. just some slider ends but not notes.


Average

00:17:120 (3,4,5) - Distance spacing 0.50>1.00

00:46:351 (1,2,3) - ^

00:47:889 (4,5,6) - ^ I think compressed pattern works better here, an average player will be able to read the pattern easier.

00:50:966 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/2XUMO.jpg > http://puu.sh/2XUMh.jpg Distance spacing 0.50>1.00 I had it as you showed me in your screenshoot, but this way follow better the vocals and it is a simplier pattern for this diff. An as I said before, I prefer to leave the 0.5x spacing.

01:13:274 (5) - http://puu.sh/2XUOd.jpg The tail of the slider Finish

01:14:043 (6) - Delete I'll not delete (1), because follow properly the drums

01:25:581 (5) -http://puu.sh/2XUQh.jpg The tail of the slider Finish

01:26:351 (6) - Delete No, as I said before

01:40:197 (4,5,6) - Distance spacing 0.50>1.00

01:44:812 (1,2,3) - ^ I prefer those compressed

01:53:466 (5) -http://puu.sh/2XURB.jpg > http://puu.sh/2XUSp.jpg Nice! :3. Fixed

02:34:043 (1,2,3) - Distance spacing 0.50>1.00

02:35:581 (4,5,6) - ^ No and no.

02:37:889 (2) - Delete

02:38:081 (1) - http://puu.sh/2XUWs.jpg Oh.. yes, I did that before to see the screenshoot
Good song!
good map!

Thanks for mod my 2 pending maps! . Updated the things in Average this time :3!

TESTPLAY:

Hey :3/

[General]

1. 800x600 BGs are rankable, but it'd be great if you'll be able to find a BG with bigger resolution. :<
2. Try to add some genres, it'll help us to find your beatmap! punk alternative synthrock
3. Disable letterboxes during breaks? Looks like letterbox cut this picture quite bad, because we can't see head of this guy.

[Relaxing]

1. 00:25:197 (1) - I feel like it's quite a bad idea to break consistent 1/1 rhythm here. How about trying to follow vocals this way. It will help you to keep rhythm consistent and it fits with vocals. :3
2. 00:29:812 (5) - this slider here sounds a bit weird, I'd try to place a circle at 00:30:197 - instead. It will fit here better, what's more you did similar thing with two previous circles.
3. 00:48:658 (3) - if you've applieed suggestion at 00:25:197 (1) - you should finish (3) at 00:49:428 - to keep rhythm here consistent, as well.
   Note: same goes for 00:55:197 (4) - 01:40:966 (3) - 01:47:505 (5) - 02:10:966 (3) - 02:49:043 (3) - you got the idea.

[Average]

1. 00:25:966 (3,4) - i'd replace them with 1/2 slider. Looks like this is the only triplet in this part, so it may confuse players a bit.
2. 00:46:351 (1,2,3) - can be misunderstood by players. They may read it as 1/4 triplet, try to keep spacing consistent here, this diff is alrady hard enough :<
   Note: same goes for every x0.5 spaced pattern in this diff. I like this, but I think it's too hard for [Normal] diff :<
3. 01:04:620 (1) - just pointing out that this slider is awesome. I love it.
4. 02:03:658 (1) - nazi - well, it's not a problem, but circle is overlapped with spinner's hitburst. It looks a little bit messy, can't you fix it to make your pattern even better?
   
   Diff is neat and well-mapped. But those x0.5 spaced triplets are quite confusing. This is a [Normal] diff, after all!

[Challenging]

1. Try AR7 because you use AR8 for [Insane] diff. So, diff spread feels kinda unbalanced.
2. 02:33:274 (8) - it's quite hard to guess how many repeats does this slider have. try to make it more readable? readable example

[Tough]

1. 00:58:274 (4,5,6) - try to replace these notes with a triplet to keep consistency with previous pattern.
2. 01:04:620 - I'd place here one long slider, as you did it on other diffs. It will fit here better and help you to keep consistent patterns.
3. 02:15:389 - how about placing here a circle? It will fit with backgound music pretty good, OR yu can make slider 1/4 longer. It'll give you similar effect.

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Good luck!

This map needs a SB

-Bakari- wrote:

Hey :3/

[General]

1. 800x600 BGs are rankable, but it'd be great if you'll be able to find a BG with bigger resolution. :< I'll consider that
2. Try to add some genres, it'll help us to find your beatmap! punk alternative synthrock Added alternative and synthrock
3. Disable letterboxes during breaks? Looks like letterbox cut this picture quite bad, because we can't see head of this guy. Nah.. I like how it looks the BG with it. Btw, who want to see his face?? xD.

[Relaxing]

1. 00:25:197 (1) - I feel like it's quite a bad idea to break consistent 1/1 rhythm here. How about trying to follow vocals this way. It will help you to keep rhythm consistent and it fits with vocals. :3 Oh no, I don't want slider starts or notes over red ticks in this difficulty, can cause trouble in newbies really. Btw, this slider fits perfectly with the vocals!
2. 00:29:812 (5) - this slider here sounds a bit weird, I'd try to place a circle at 00:30:197 - instead. It will fit here better, what's more you did similar thing with two previous circles. Do you have any problem with the 2/1 Sliders??? xDD. Fit perfectly the song, newbies will catch the rhythm easily.
3. 00:48:658 (3) - if you've applieed suggestion at 00:25:197 (1) - you should finish (3) at 00:49:428 - to keep rhythm here consistent, as well.
   Note: same goes for 00:55:197 (4) - 01:40:966 (3) - 01:47:505 (5) - 02:10:966 (3) - 02:49:043 (3) - you got the idea. But I didn't applied it because I don't agree with you

[Average]

1. 00:25:966 (3,4) - i'd replace them with 1/2 slider. Looks like this is the only triplet in this part, so it may confuse players a bit. Yeah, it is the only 1/2 3-plet stacked in this diff. replaced to a 1/2 slider.
2. 00:46:351 (1,2,3) - can be misunderstood by players. They may read it as 1/4 triplet, try to keep spacing consistent here, this diff is alrady hard enough :<
   Note: same goes for every x0.5 spaced pattern in this diff. I like this, but I think it's too hard for [Normal] diff :< I thought that it would be easy for average players but tested by some average players and the didn't think that. they thought that a stack or a 1.0x spacing would be much better, so I did that, stacked some of them and spaced out another one.
3. 01:04:620 (1) - just pointing out that this slider is awesome. I love it. lol. Thanks :3
4. 02:03:658 (1) - nazi - well, it's not a problem, but circle is overlapped with spinner's hitburst. It looks a little bit messy, can't you fix it to make your pattern even better? It looks perfectly with the new Skin, in addition the better way when you want to add a note 1/1 after to the spinner is adding it in the middle of the screen.
   
   Diff is neat and well-mapped. But those x0.5 spaced triplets are quite confusing. This is a [Normal] diff, after all! Thanks, and I fixed that points

[Challenging]

1. Try AR7 because you use AR8 for [Insane] diff. So, diff spread feels kinda unbalanced. But I don't agree, did you test the diff? AR7 is really low, I had a lot of 100 after breaks/spinners when I added single notes or some like this. I tried AR8 and the problems in the gameplay were fixed, and could SS the diff. So, I'll leave that as it is.
2. 02:33:274 (8) - it's quite hard to guess how many repeats does this slider have. try to make it more readable? readable example This is really simple for a Hard, really. In addition, you just have to click when that kind of sliders appear you don't need move the mouse

[Tough]

1. 00:58:274 (4,5,6) - try to replace these notes with a triplet to keep consistency with previous pattern. Not really, the vocal doesn't go on a similar way
2. 01:04:620 - I'd place here one long slider, as you did it on other diffs. It will fit here better and help you to keep consistent patterns. It is an Insane, I prefer to follow more things in the song, not just the vocals
3. 02:15:389 - how about placing here a circle? It will fit with backgound music pretty good, OR yu can make slider 1/4 longer. It'll give you similar effect. Added a repetition in (2) instead

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Good luck!

Thanks a lot for your help -Bakari-! . Updated!!

better quality bg
other beatmaps of the same artist are using "Panic! at the Disco" http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?q=Panic ... he%20Disco

relaxing

1. 01:14:428 (2,3) - looks much better like that imo http://puu.sh/2YI3x.jpg
2. 01:15:966 - 01:16:735 - consider using this custom for that beats on sliderticks http://puu.sh/2YI7S.wav there is more places that you could use it too ofc

average

1. 00:21:351 (5) - this slider placement looks to be forced since you wanted to keep simmetry on next sliders, but imo it looks a bit better llike this http://puu.sh/2YJ5f.jpg or something like 02:53:274 (2,3) -
2. 00:43:274 (1,2,3,4,5) - this simple pattern sounds strange with the fast guitar. try this http://puu.sh/2YJgz.jpg

challenging

1. 00:13:274 (4) - dont like how this slider looks in this combo being the same shape as 00:12:697 (2) - . imo a straight slider like 00:14:428 (7) - would look better
2. 00:13:658 (5) - why 0.9x? you are not using something that small even in slow parts like 00:55:966 (1,2,3) -
3. 01:04:620 (1) - spacing could be better here. or is it intentional? 2nd point 368 y344 3rd point x264 y208 for 1.10x
4. 01:08:274 - its the only diff with a different clap, intentional?
5. 01:10:389 - circle here? i know its much lower than the other sounds but feels more natural like that imo

tough

gangnam stacks!! :>

00:51:735 (2,3,4,5) - looks a bit random made

thats all
i'm not happy with this mod, i dont have enough time to mod it as i want today, its fine if its not good enough for a m4m
star

I'll change the BG when I'll back at my home, but I will not change the Artist because this is the correct one

Hello :3

General:
Here your bg without watermark http://puu.sh/2YHic.jpg

Relaxing:
00:23:658 (4,5) - fix spacing
00:52:505 (1,2,3) - blanket http://puu.sh/2YHmt.jpg
208,180,52505,6,0,P|148:117|54:140,1,180,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,204,53658,1,8,0:0:0:0:
32,224,54043,2,0,P|86:288|178:274,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:04:812 (1) - rotate this -10 looks better imo http://puu.sh/2YHnD.jpg
01:19:043 (4,1) - not a big deal but http://puu.sh/2YHpC.jpg
88,316,79043,2,0,P|157:324|211:287,2,135,0|2|2,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,240,80581,6,0,P|211:202|292:267,1,180,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:

01:39:043 (2,3) - you know I love this things http://puu.sh/2YHsU.jpg
300,116,99043,2,0,P|382:88|451:160,2,180,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,178,100966,2,0,P|302:203|234:177,1,135,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Average:
00:20:197 (4,5,1) - I suggest here to move 00:20:197 (4) - to 364x320 and stack 00:21:351 (5) - on 00:19:812 (3) - and curve a little to something like http://puu.sh/2YHBw.jpg
01:06:735 (2) - rotate this a bit left http://puu.sh/2YHFw.jpg looks good imo
01:29:428 (1) - 200x244 http://puu.sh/2YHI9.jpg much better flow and stacked with 01:30:966 (3) -
02:50:966 (4) - to center? 256x176

Challenging:
00:54:620 (2,3,5) - you can move all this like http://puu.sh/2YHRi.jpg and 00:55:966 (1) - http://puu.sh/2YHRT.jpg to make 00:55:389 (5,2) - stacked not a big deal but feels good imo
01:09:043 (3) - better flow and blanket http://puu.sh/2YHXF.jpg
92,168,69043,2,0,P|68:140|56:100,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
02:42:889 (8) - http://puu.sh/2YI58.jpg to avoid overlap with 02:44:428 (2) -

Tough:
00:16:735 (5) - maybe move 00:16:351 (4) - little further to stack 00:16:158 (3,5) -
00:18:658 (1,2) - add jump here too plays better http://puu.sh/2YI9E.jpg
00:20:005 (7) - 256x184 to center
01:08:658 (5,4) - stack?
01:10:581 (9,10) - this jump feels sudden no strong sound on 01:10:774 (10) - no NC, hard to read
01:10:966 (1) - move a little bit http://puu.sh/2YIfr.jpg to unstack under 01:11:735 (3) -
02:58:658 (9) - NC :3

Good Luck

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

I will not change the Artist because this is the correct one

i was not sure about this information at all, but i spected the bat's that ranked the other panic at the disco maps would know

also, thats one of this group studio album cover http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/e ... irtues.jpg