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dj TAKA - Snow Storm

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Alace
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009年7月18日 at 下午 07:40:17

Artist: dj TAKA
Title: Snow Storm
Source: Beatmania IIDX Gold
Tags: video game
BPM: 145
Filesize: 15609kb
Play Time: 02:08
Difficulties Available:
  1. Another (5 stars, 569 notes)
  2. Beginner (3.27 stars, 188 notes)
  3. Hyper (4.9 stars, 416 notes)
  4. Normal (4.37 stars, 254 notes)
Download: dj TAKA - Snow Storm
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From IIDX 14 Gold
Plz redownload if you have it before
Lissette
i like it!! n.n

star!!
Sushi
[Beginner]
00:13:85 (4) - I suppose this non-verticality is wanted. align with following (1)?

[Normal]
00:17:16 (4,1) - Make those two parallel
00:26:05 (1) - Start 1/2 beat later?
00:38:05 (2) - Try to find a wat to stack better
01:01:02 (1,1,3) - Try to make the slider finish at the center for the 3 notes stack
01:13:43 (3) - 1 grid right for symetry
01:20:88 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - align and make symetryc
01:30:81 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - symetry
01:34:12 (1,2) - align
02:03:09 (5,6) - align better

[Hyper]
00:03:50 (7) - Symetry with previous (2)
00:10:54 (8) - ^ with (6)
00:29:16 (2,4,6,8) - your choice : you can move (2) up 1 grid or move (4,6,8) and following circles down 1 grid
00:45:50 (8,1) - align?
01:07:64 (1) - align with previous (3)
01:12:61 (1,3) - symetry
01:27:50 (1) - align with previous (3,4)?
01:29:78 (3) - ^ (9,1)
01:36:19 (2,4) - symetry


I wont check "Another" as you told be it was in a mess atm.

One last word : Star
Shinde
Since there isn't much to do atm besides placement, and combo starts/finishes, I'll align Nazi.

Easy
0:10:541 (4) - Right one.
0:14:438 (3,4) - Align?
0:19:644 (1,3) - Take these both up 1, while taking 2 down two?
1:57:300 (3) - This needs to be over one right to be aligned horizontally with the previous (1)

Normal
0:11:162 (1) - Move right one?
0:21:713 (2,4,6,8) - All the sliders in this combo are fine. Realign these accordingly, 2 is up 2 in comparison to the sliders, the others are up 3.
0:27:920 (1-8) - I didn't care for this combo, try to see if you can find whip up something more creative here.
0:43:644 (7-12) - These feel misaligned but if you wanted it like this I'm sure it's fine.
1:07:644 (3,4) - If you take 3 and 4 in to 1 and 2, you see that 3 goes down four from 1, while 4 goes up seven from 2. Basically, drop either (3) or (4) down by three.
1:17:162 (8) - I'd take this down one.
1:20:886 (1,2,3) - Realign these with with the rest of the combo.
1:30:909 (1,2,3) - You could turn Grid Align off and just eyeball 1 in the middle of 2,3 instead of having it on the right by half a grid. Then copy > paste that for 4,5,6 and 7,8,9. But that's up to you.
1:39:093 (9) - Left one.
1:45:713 (1) - Up+Left one. Then adjust 2 accordingly.

Hyper
0:25:204 (5,6) - Move both right one.
0:29:162 (4) - Down one, then realign the rest of the combo, including 1-3 in the beginning of the next combo.
0:41:369 (2,3,4) - Move each of these down and left one.
1:04:541 (2) - Left one.
1:17:989 (1,2,6) - 1 right by two, 2 up by one, 6 left by one.
1:26:989 (2~) - Spacing feels wierd. Adjust it if you'd like.
1:31:231 (2) - Take this down one. Or you could take 4 up one, but I think that'd make the next stream look wierd.
1:55:851 (2~) - Check and make sure you like how this is aligned.

Another
I read Sushi say that you thought this was a mess, so I won't look at it atm. Sorry if I repeated any suggestions Sushi already said.

Offset - I'm getting 4ms late holding steadily. Not a big deal really, but test this and if you agree, -# it.

Needs a background. Not sure what you had in mind feel free to look these over.
http://i296.photobucket.com/albums/mm16 ... Techno.jpg
http://images2.layoutsparks.com/1/23924 ... tables.jpg
http://i152.photobucket.com/albums/s191 ... eFlame.jpg

I think all it mostly needs is a background and hitsounds at the moment. Hardly noticeable alignment problems aren't a big deal. Then you can get someone to Nazi on Hitsounds and I think it'll be nearly complete. Besides SBing and Custom Hitcircles, etc, if you want. I like how you included 4 difficulties though, it makes me a little sad when there are only like 2.

Star'd, and I apologize for my OCD.
v2b
star
tieff
Star and kudosu star.
I'll mod it tonight.
mican
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
EVA-X
射了 :oops:
Gabi
great map, i only found very minor things you cant see with gameplay, so ill just tell them to you in irc when i see you on

stär!1
Andrea
[Beginner]

01:01:02 (1) - Maybe this slider with 0.5x bpm looks more better.
01:40:955 - Remove this break. Because is too hard to get the pause XD

[Normal]

00:45:71 (12) - 1 square down imo looks better.

[Hyper]

01:01:02 (1) - Like Beginner, this slider with 0.5x bpm looks better.

[Another]

This is awesome!

Timing is perfect, offset and bpm looks good.

Take my star.
Lizbeth
cool map :D
Zodiark1020
Hey hey, no words :) :D ;)

Cool music, and awesome beatmap.

Star for you, and I hope you'll make many other maps like this.
yaya
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
merimeri
Really cool map ☆彡
Topic Starter
Alace
Guys
don`t waste your pink star for me
I have enough KDS
Free star is ok
Also
Thanks for you guys`s stars
I will finish this map soon
tieff
Some hitsounds suggestions...

[Normal]
00:25:02 (2) - Normal hitsound here?
00:25:64 (4,5) - And here. Or only on 5.
00:31:02 (1) - Finish on end of slider? But not sure about this...
00:34:33 (1) - Same as above.
00:44:26 (9) - Really sorry, but... New combo?
00:47:57 (x) - Add note? And, maybe, with normal hitsound?
00:47:78 (1) - Finish on start of slider?
01:02:67 (1) - Whistle?
01:03:50 (3,5) - ^
01:04:33 (7) - Whistle, or, maybe, finish?
Topic Starter
Alace

tieff wrote:

Some hitsounds suggestions...

[Normal]
00:25:02 (2) - Normal hitsound here? cool
00:25:64 (4,5) - And here. Or only on 5. cool
00:31:02 (1) - Finish on end of slider? But not sure about this... No
00:34:33 (1) - Same as above. No
00:44:26 (9) - Really sorry, but... New combo? cool
00:47:57 (x) - Add note? And, maybe, with normal hitsound? i don`t hear finish in music
00:47:78 (1) - Finish on start of slider? ^

01:02:67 (1) - Whistle?
01:03:50 (3,5) - ^
01:04:33 (7) - Whistle, or, maybe, finish?
I don`t feel like add anything in the soft part

Thanks a lot
Zodiark1020
THIS IS OBVIOUSLY MY FAVOURITE BEATMAP!
So...I will try to mod it...without modifying anything important...just something which could sounds better

<Easy>
Perfect, nothing wrong particularly

<Normal>
01:07:64 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I'm not really a fan of normals difficulty, i love insanes...so I don't play them...but maybe those jumps are a bit hard? tell me if i'm wrong :?

01:48:19 (7) - i just like it with 1 repeat less...check it

02:05:57 (1,2,3) - I'd add 2 repeats each slider, it sounds more full, i don't know why :)

<Hyper>
Nothing wrong here too

<Another>
Only this
01:49:02 (1) - remove new combo...

I'd really like to give another star, if it'd be possible...xD beh
Wishes~ see ya!
archeron_old
really really awesome~~+star~
mosluv
D: Why do you force default skin? I like looking at my custom one when playing maps o.o!
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