1. Hard (4,17 stars, 184 notes)
2. Normal (1,72 stars, 110 notes)

_tear wrote:

Please make a more moddable map next time ;-;

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  00:31:118 (2,3) - Fix blankut pls (center anchor 1 grid to the right)
  00:38:800 (1) - ^ Endpoint 2 grids down
  00:44:105 (4,5,1) - Try this to empathize the white tick http://puu.sh/36b4g.jpg
  01:51:788 (1) - Should be a few grids higher to it looks better with the previous slider (Move the stuff that comes after it too if you fix this)
  02:01:849 - Add a note here to follow the vocals?
  02:07:154 (2) - Try this to fit the vocals better: http://puu.sh/36bu8.jpg

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  00:10:996 (3) - 1 grid down to make it look better
  00:27:825 (1) - Giving this a little curve to the left looks/flows awesome http://puu.sh/36bCJ.jpg
  00:35:874 (3) - End point 1 grid to the right so it properly goes underneath the start of (2)
  01:18:313 (5) - Little downward curve? http://puu.sh/36bLh.jpg
  01:31:483 (1) - This is kind of unexpected, try 2 sliders instead of 2 repeats?

Kyshiro wrote:

Most of this is nazi because the map is pretty much perfect already



Hard

• 
  00:31:118 (2,3) - Fix blankut pls (center anchor 1 grid to the right) fixd
  00:38:800 (1) - ^ Endpoint 2 grids down fixd
  00:44:105 (4,5,1) - Try this to empathize the white tick http://puu.sh/36b4g.jpg hmm i did this so many times in the map anyways lol
  01:51:788 (1) - Should be a few grids higher to it looks better with the previous slider (Move the stuff that comes after it too if you fix this) fixd
  02:01:849 - Add a note here to follow the vocals? nah this was supposed to be undermapped bcus end
  02:07:154 (2) - Try this to fit the vocals better: http://puu.sh/36bu8.jpg ^

Normal

• 
  00:10:996 (3) - 1 grid down to make it look better fixd
  00:27:825 (1) - Giving this a little curve to the left looks/flows awesome http://puu.sh/36bCJ.jpg fixd
  00:35:874 (3) - End point 1 grid to the right so it properly goes underneath the start of (2) fixd
  01:18:313 (5) - Little downward curve? http://puu.sh/36bLh.jpg fixd
  01:31:483 (1) - This is kind of unexpected, try 2 sliders instead of 2 repeats? i think it will cofuse newbies even more bcus 1/3 lol at least this way this is just a hold

inb4 speedrank fuck you

dkun wrote:

owl ciiiiiity <3

P A N wrote:

m4m :3

Hard

00:16:849 (3) - move tail to 296|332 looks more fit with that blanket. imo the direction fits but the overlap is ugly D:
01:07:337 (4) - move 1 grid up and move tail to 164|368 ok
01:27:093 / 01:32:947 / 01:34:410 / 01:51:971 / 01:57:825 - hmm, i dont know is this on your purpose but the sound is so loud X_X oh yeah this is a bug. this was supposed to be WAY lower. when playing the volume is normal, i have no idea why it is THAT LOUD in editor D:
02:08:069 - try this beat maybe? sounds better for me works but I wanted to undermap the end because... it's the end :3

Easy

01:31:483 - I know its fit the song but i think it can make beginner confuse.. maybe try this beat? also add whistle on head if you follow ok, changed it

nothing much to say x_x good luck

1. 02:08:069 (3) - Finish doesn't fit here imo. Just a whistle'd be fine.

1. 00:53:435 (1) - Reverse Arrow on a yellow 1/8 tick (or 1/3, I'm not sure, cause I suck). Sounds better imo.
2. 01:31:727 (2) - No. This is like this: http://puu.sh/37gqz.jpg (It starts at a yellow tick, reverse arrow on blue tick and ends at yellow tick)
3. 02:08:069 (3) - Here again with the finish. Dunno, I don't like it, but I'm probably the only one who thinks it doesn't fit /orz\

Alumetorz wrote:

Hey, from my queue~

[Normal]

1. 02:08:069 (3) - Finish doesn't fit here imo. Just a whistle'd be fine. boring

[Hard]

1. 00:53:435 (1) - Reverse Arrow on a yellow 1/8 tick (or 1/3, I'm not sure, cause I suck). Sounds better imo. overmap
2. 01:31:727 (2) - No. This is like this: http://puu.sh/37gqz.jpg (It starts at a yellow tick, reverse arrow on blue tick and ends at yellow tick) this is what fits the most without using a weird beat. voice is NEVER really accurate to ticks. osu! is. won't change for the sake of "following" the voice strictly
3. 02:08:069 (3) - Here again with the finish. Dunno, I don't like it, but I'm probably the only one who thinks it doesn't fit /orz\ finish since this is the end lol

That's it. Nothing more I could find. Nice map and SB!
Good luck!