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Dark_Ai
1,832 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Dark_Ai
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sonntag, 14. Juli 2013 at 03:22:26

Artist: HyunA
Title: Ice Cream
Tags: Melting Kim Hyun-a k-pop 4minute
BPM: 120
Filesize: 7145kb
Play Time: 03:12
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,87 stars, 394 notes)
  2. Normal (3,03 stars, 222 notes)
Download: HyunA - Ice Cream
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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I’ll melt you down like Ice cream
Because she is nice :D
Special Thanks to Baka Roxas for helping with Hitsounds <33!~
well hitcircle and overlay using from Pink Agate's map ''T-ara - Bo Peep Bo Peep''


Mapset:

Normal - Done

Hard - Done
Last edited by Dark_Ai , edited 15 times in total.
Chyo-Kun
308 posts
Joined May 2012
Chyo-Kun
Mod requested In-Game

[General]


  1. The reverse arrow overlaps with the hitcircle overlay (just sayn,it's not really that big of a problem)

    [Normal]

  2. 00:14:820 (2,3,4) - Those beats are following the voice,but in the main melody here we have a pause,so maybe silence those by 40%-50%
  3. 00:22:320 (3) - NC? Looks better :P
  4. 00:33:070 - Consider adding a beat here(x:362 y:80),this is a normal diff and part like 00:33:320 (4,5) those can be confusing for newbies because of the pause. Adding a beat can belp keeping the flow up without making that part any harder
  5. 01:36:320 - Replace this slider with a normal beat? Sounds way better
  6. 02:40:320 - ^
  7. 03:12:070 (1) - Why doesen't this just end on her "Ahhh" but on a ranom quiet moment? Make it end 03:13:820 here

    [Hard]

  8. 00:02:320 (5) - NC since the same melody as before is repeating
  9. 00:36:320 (4) - This sounds ugly D: Remove this or replace with something else
  10. 01:01:070 (6) - NC since she's changing voice pitch owo

    Everything else is just fine. Nice map :3

I'l melt you there like ice cream <3
Dark_Ai
1,832 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Dark_Ai
Changed everything
Thanks for your mod moe x3

Updated~
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
Because someone (I guess you know who is it) requested a mod for you :3

[General]
  1. You may add tags k-pop and ice-cream. It'll help us to find your beatmap easier :3
  2. Check your artist again, I guess it may be corrupted. My computer reads it as [urlhttp://puu.sh/3akuU.png]squares[/url]. Maybe it's just me, but PLEASE check it again just to make sure!
  3. Try to keep your kiais consistent, AiBat says that kiai #3 on [Normal] ends a bit earlier.
  4. Please, vary your hitsound volume a bit! For parts like 02:24:320 - this one 80% is TOO loud, but for kiais I'd use Normal hitsiunds, because kiais should have louder hitsounds.
[Normal]
  1. I'd try AR4 here. This is the easiest diff + song is slow. So, try it and see if it looks good to you or not.
  2. 00:42:320 (1) - no, please don't! THis slider is too fast and second reverse-arrow appears TOO soon. It's impossible to read it! Consider replacing second repeat with a circle!
  3. 01:20:320 - I really like the way how you change your rhythm here. It looks and flows really good. <3
  4. 01:36:820 - drag your break here? It will look good here, I guess.
  5. 01:50:320 - drag end of your brea here. It'll look cool here, try it now! Same goes for 02:54:320 - vocals are repititive here, you know. Same goes for [Hard]

    Really nice diff.
[Hard]
  1. Try to use AR7? Song is quite slow, so I guess it'd be ok to try AR7 here!
  2. 00:02:320 (1,2) - 00:11:320 (6,7) - nazi - only these two patterns are stacked. Other 1/4 notes are unstacked, I'd recommend you to unstack 00:02:320 (1,2) - 00:11:320 (6,7), oo to keep your patterns more consistent.
    Note: 00:25:320 (4,5) - same as above. Just fix them all to make this map perfect :3
  3. 00:18:570 (8) - have you missed a new combo here? It fits with vocals and music + makes your comboing even more consistent!
  4. 00:22:320 (1,2,3,4) - these jumps are too hard. This is a [Hard] diff and song isn't that jumpy. Try to keep distace of jumps under x2.5 here, to keep this diff playable! x3.8 is the way too much, I'm sure! How about trying something like this instead?
  5. 01:09:820 (1,2,3,4) - in case if you've applied my suggestion above, do the same for all similar patterns (where she sings 'cream, cream, cream..') to keep your patterns consistent. Well, it's quite clear that same goes for 01:18:320 (5,6,7,8) -
  6. 01:50:320 - drag end of your brea here. It'll look cool here, try it now! Same goes for 02:54:320 - vocals are repititive here, you know.
  7. 01:51:820 - you're foollowing vocals, right? Please, place a circle for that "ah" sound there. It'll perfectly fit with music and make your rhythm more consistent!
  8. 02:40:320 (7) - missed a new combo? It'd fit with music, vocals and your pattern, what's more it even looks cool here.
  9. 03:12:195 (1) - I'd finish spinner here. With that "ah" it will fit PERFECTLY, imo. You did it at [Normal] diff, do the same here!
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Good luck!
Dark_Ai
1,832 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Dark_Ai

-Bakari- wrote:

Because someone (I guess you know who is it) requested a mod for you :3
ikr <3 owo he is so baka hehehe

Thank you for your mod anyway. I will change it later :3

Changed everything except 01:18:320 (5,6,7,8) because I like this way :c

Updated ~
Last edited by Dark_Ai , edited 1 time in total.
Chyo-Kun
308 posts
Joined May 2012
Chyo-Kun
*Hides*


Bakari's 3200° post owo
KantoKun
1,114 posts
Joined December 2011
KantoKun
Mod req VIA in game ;w;~

[General]


  • I like this song!!
    Offset :290 this good?

[Normal]


  • 00:16:320 (1) - finish
    00:24:320 (1) - add finish in head slides
    00:34:820 (6,7) - like this?
    00:49:320 (2,3) - ^
    01:00:320 (6,7) - ^
    01:03:320 (4,5) - ^
    01:53:320 (2,3) - ^
    02:04:320 (6,7) - ^
    02:07:320 (4,5) - ^
    00:43:820 (2) - clap?
    00:48:320 (1) - add finish in head slides
    01:04:320 (1) - finish
    01:12:320 (1) - add finish in head slides
    01:36:320 (6) - finish
    01:52:320 (1) - add finish in head slides
    02:08:320 (1) - ^
    01:59:820 (6) - add finish in end slides
    02:31:820 (6) - ^
    02:40:320 (6) - finish
    02:56:320 (1) - ^
    03:04:320 (1) - remove clap in head slides

[Hard]


  • 00:14:820 (4) - clap
    00:16:320 (1) - add finish in head slides
    00:16:820 (2) - clap
    00:24:320 (1) - finish
    00:31:820 (1) - add clap in head slides
    00:32:320 (2) - add finish in head slides
    01:03:570 (6) - add clap in end slides
    00:40:320 (2) - add finish in head slides
    00:48:320 (2) -add finish in head slides
    00:55:820 (6) - add finish in end slides
    01:04:320 (1) - add finish in head slides
    01:12:320 (1) - finish
    01:36:320 (7) - remove slides and add 1 circle (finish)
    01:51:820 (1) - clap
    01:52:320 (3) - finish
    01:59:820 (9) - add finish in end slides
    02:08:320 (1) - add finish in head slides
    02:16:320 (1) - finish
    02:40:320 (1) - remove slides and add 1 circle (finish)
    02:56:320 (1) - add finish in head slides

Good Luck and Get Ranks!!
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
General:

-- Add "SliderBorder : 255,255,255" after combo colors in .osu file.
-- Add "4minute" in tags? Since this is hyuna's group,,,

Normal:

00:08:320 (1) - 1 Grid right and flip (2) as well? for better distance,,
00:30:320 (4) - Since Finishes appear, NC?
00:33:070 (3,4) - !
00:42:320 (1,2) - Why are these missing claps? I don't see the reason, in the music.
02:24:320 (1) - Drum-Whistle as 01:20:320 (1)?
03:04:320 (1) - Delete Clap at the start
03:12:070 (1) - Imo, there is a vocal "AH" at the end, so ending almost silently doesn't feel like a good idea. Same on Hard.

Hard:

-- Where's the volume reduction here 00:14:570?

00:05:570 (3) - 1 Grid left?
00:06:320 (5) - NC
00:16:820 (2) - Clap
00:21:320 (4) - Delete Clap at the start
00:24:320 (1) - Following the 1.50x distance will play better. Imo, 2.00 jump was too large.. So place on (372,196)?
00:29:820 (1,2) - Swap comboes. Since 00:29:320 (4,1) are same pattern/in the same lyric
00:37:820 (1,2) - Similar above. ^
00:39:070 (5) - Dividing to a note and 1/2 slider rather fits the song.
01:06:570 (5) - NC?
01:09:820 (1,2) - Swap comboes.
01:13:320 (4,5) - Well, this feels too large as a 1/4 jump. Reduce the spacing please, by changing the curving of (4) or smt,,
01:18:320 (5) - NC.
01:20:570 (2,4) - Rhythm is bad here. (2) should be 1/4 all, and (4) should start from 01:21:195 for the vocal.
01:26:820 (3,4) - 1.10 spacing feels weird here~
01:52:070 (2) - NC? For consistency with Normal on 01:51:820 (1).
02:02:820 (4) - Overlap with the previous slider looks bad on reading.
02:14:320 (5) - NC
02:23:320 (3,4) - This is a copy paste of (1,2) right? I think giving a rotation to each slider will give more variation.
02:26:945 (3) - 1 Grid up?
02:40:320 (1) - Copied the previous pattern? Then this is different with 01:36:320 (7).
03:02:320 (6) - NC.
03:10:320 (5) - NC.

I didn't really loved the 1/4 usage of Hard,, Good luck~~
Dark_Ai
1,832 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Dark_Ai
kantokun

kantokun wrote:

Mod req VIA in game ;w;~

[General]


  • I like this song!!
    Offset :290 this good? well okay

[Normal]


  • 00:16:320 (1) - finish okay
    00:24:320 (1) - add finish in head slides I dont think it need
    00:34:820 (6,7) - like this? I'd prefer unstack these notes :c same for all ↓
    00:49:320 (2,3) - ^
    01:00:320 (6,7) - ^
    01:03:320 (4,5) - ^
    01:53:320 (2,3) - ^
    02:04:320 (6,7) - ^
    02:07:320 (4,5) - ^
    00:43:820 (2) - clap? yeah forgot to add
    00:48:320 (1) - add finish in head slides I dont think it need :c
    01:04:320 (1) - finish ok
    01:12:320 (1) - add finish in head slides nuuh :c
    01:36:320 (6) - finish okay
    01:52:320 (1) - add finish in head slides hmm okay
    02:08:320 (1) - ^ nuu ><
    01:59:820 (6) - add finish in end slides I dont like finish here
    02:31:820 (6) - ^ okay
    02:40:320 (6) - finish okay
    02:56:320 (1) - ^ not sure if it need but I prefer to dont add it ><
    03:04:320 (1) - remove clap in head slides okay

[Hard]


  • 00:14:820 (4) - clap I dont think it need here because you cant hear any clap in music too
    00:16:320 (1) - add finish in head slides I dont like it ><
    00:16:820 (2) - clap added
    00:24:320 (1) - finish I dont think it need because you cant hear finish in music too
    00:31:820 (1) - add clap in head slides ok
    00:32:320 (2) - add finish in head slides no finish in music
    01:03:570 (6) - add clap in end slides no clap here because the music goes lower and you cant hear clap too
    00:40:320 (2) - add finish in head slides no finish in music
    00:48:320 (2) -add finish in head slides I dont like a finish here
    00:55:820 (6) - add finish in end slides no finish sound :c
    01:04:320 (1) - add finish in head slides same
    01:12:320 (1) - finish same
    01:36:320 (7) - remove slides and add 1 circle (finish) aah I dont like a circle here. I think the slider here is better imo ><
    01:51:820 (1) - clap no clap sound in music
    01:52:320 (3) - finish same
    01:59:820 (9) - add finish in end slides same
    02:08:320 (1) - add finish in head slides here too
    02:16:320 (1) - finish same
    02:40:320 (1) - remove slides and add 1 circle (finish) same as above
    02:56:320 (1) - add finish in head slides ^

Good Luck and Get Ranks!! Thank ya~ :3

Sonnyc

Sonnyc wrote:

General:

-- Add "SliderBorder : 255,255,255" after combo colors in .osu file.
-- Add "4minute" in tags? Since this is hyuna's group,,,
well okay add

Normal:

00:08:320 (1) - 1 Grid right and flip (2) as well? for better distance,, okay
00:30:320 (4) - Since Finishes appear, NC? okay
00:33:070 (3,4) - ! aaah ><
00:42:320 (1,2) - Why are these missing claps? I don't see the reason, in the music. already change from the preview mod
02:24:320 (1) - Drum-Whistle as 01:20:320 (1)? okay
03:04:320 (1) - Delete Clap at the start ok
03:12:070 (1) - Imo, there is a vocal "AH" at the end, so ending almost silently doesn't feel like a good idea. Same on Hard. hmm dunno :c

Hard:

-- Where's the volume reduction here 00:14:570?

00:05:570 (3) - 1 Grid left? okay
00:06:320 (5) - NC added
00:16:820 (2) - Clap already change from above
00:21:320 (4) - Delete Clap at the start did it
00:24:320 (1) - Following the 1.50x distance will play better. Imo, 2.00 jump was too large.. So place on (372,196)? okay
00:29:820 (1,2) - Swap comboes. Since 00:29:320 (4,1) are same pattern/in the same lyric okay
00:37:820 (1,2) - Similar above. ^ kk
00:39:070 (5) - Dividing to a note and 1/2 slider rather fits the song.
01:06:570 (5) - NC? okay
01:09:820 (1,2) - Swap comboes. no ><
01:13:320 (4,5) - Well, this feels too large as a 1/4 jump. Reduce the spacing please, by changing the curving of (4) or smt,, ah there wasnt a jump at all >< something went wrong seem :c
01:18:320 (5) - NC. okay
01:20:570 (2,4) - Rhythm is bad here. (2) should be 1/4 all, and (4) should start from 01:21:195 for the vocal. hmm
01:26:820 (3,4) - 1.10 spacing feels weird here~ changed
01:52:070 (2) - NC? For consistency with Normal on 01:51:820 (1). ok
02:02:820 (4) - Overlap with the previous slider looks bad on reading. hmm I like it but I will see what other one saying about it. so no change for now ><
02:14:320 (5) - NC ok
02:23:320 (3,4) - This is a copy paste of (1,2) right? I think giving a rotation to each slider will give more variation. hmm
02:26:945 (3) - 1 Grid up? kk
02:40:320 (1) - Copied the previous pattern? Then this is different with 01:36:320 (7). o.ô
03:02:320 (6) - NC. ok
03:10:320 (5) - NC. ok

I didn't really loved the 1/4 usage of Hard,, Good luck~~

Thank you both for modding :33

Updated ~
P A N
2,349 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
irc :3

SPOILER
21:47 P A N: 00:53:790 (5,1) - how about to make it blanket like this? http://puu.sh/3bKaa.jpg (hard)
21:48 Dark_Ai: let me see
21:49 Dark_Ai: ok
21:49 P A N: 01:22:540 (2) - and this :3 what about this blanket http://puu.sh/3bKgH.jpg
21:50 P A N: the current one is a bit closely with (3)'s tail imo
21:51 Dark_Ai: changed
21:51 P A N: 01:52:040 (1) - I don't know what is this nc mean >_> maybe remove?
21:52 P A N: oh, or you follow the vocal
21:52 Dark_Ai: yes :D
21:53 P A N: 01:52:290 (2) - maybe add finish or clap?
21:54 Dark_Ai: hmm I cant hear any clap or finish sound in music so i dont know :/
21:54 P A N: lol ok
21:54 Dark_Ai: if it need ><
21:55 P A N: i dont know too. i see it is beginning of the strong beat lol just leave it go
21:56 P A N: 02:08:290 (1) - hmm is this not annoying you, move tail 1 grid down for more blanket
21:58 P A N: 02:12:790 (2,3) - maybe make it blanket like http://puu.sh/3bKwp.jpg ? :3
21:59 Dark_Ai: ok
22:00 P A N: 03:00:540 (1) - 1 grid up x_x
22:05 P A N: hmm nice normal
22:06 P A N: but maybe change some http://puu.sh/3bKKU.jpg to 1 repeat slider? because ai least its still the easiest diff imo..
22:07 P A N: thats all ><
22:07 Dark_Ai: hmm but I think its okay so.. maybe I will wait what other one saying about this ok ><
22:07 Dark_Ai: and okay :D
22:08 P A N: sure :D
22:08 Dark_Ai: Okay :33
Dark_Ai
1,832 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Dark_Ai
Updated ~
khop khun khaa ~
Irreversible
osu! Alumni
4,315 posts
Joined December 2011
Irreversible
hurrdurr
15:02 Irreversible: o,,,,o
15:04 Dark_Ai: hm?
15:04 Irreversible: ist es die ice cream map?
15:04 Dark_Ai: yap
15:07 Irreversible: sieht gut aus ^^;
15:09 Dark_Ai: huh?
15:09 Irreversible: was?
15:09 Irreversible: xD
15:09 Irreversible: habs mal angeschaut
15:09 Irreversible: vllt modd ichs mal
15:10 Dark_Ai: okay o.o
16:21 Irreversible: wenn du magst
16:21 Irreversible: können wir irc machen
16:21 Irreversible: ^^
16:21 Dark_Ai: ok
16:23 Irreversible: [general] i like the song pls rank fast c:
16:23 Irreversible: also
16:23 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/258816 Hyun A - Ice Cream [Hard]]
16:24 Dark_Ai: ''rank fast'' hahaha 
16:24 Irreversible: lol xD
16:24 Irreversible: wars jez wegen der grammatik oder wegen reality? D:
16:24 Dark_Ai: reality 
16:24 Dark_Ai: :c
16:24 Irreversible: XD
16:25 Irreversible: 00:02:790 (2) -  kannst ud den nach x 260 y  28 verschieben?
16:25 Irreversible: oder ein wenig weiter oben, es sieht dann besser in der combo aus find ich
16:26 Irreversible: 00:09:540 (4) -  mh hier bin ich nicht so sicher wegen dem spacing :c das verwirrt ein wenig, ich würds normal spacen, nicht gestackt
16:27 Irreversible: 00:25:290 (4) -  kannst ud hier ein schöneres blanket machen? D: ein wenig rotieren und so xD 
16:27 Irreversible: eh, sag mir wenn du hier bist xD
16:28 Dark_Ai: musste grad was anschauen xD
16:28 Dark_Ai: wd
16:29 Irreversible: wb
16:30 Dark_Ai: mein Bruder schläft in der Badewanne xD
16:30 Irreversible: WTF
16:30 Irreversible: sehr op
16:30 Irreversible: xDD
16:30 Irreversible: sag dann ob du changed hast oder nicht 
16:32 Irreversible: o...o
16:32 Irreversible: xD
16:33 Dark_Ai: warte xD
16:33 Dark_Ai: bin grad dabei muss auch alles erst wieder anpassen :c
16:33 Irreversible: kk
16:34 Irreversible: sag wenn ich weitermachen kann
16:35 Dark_Ai: okay
16:35 Irreversible: jez?
16:35 Irreversible: xDDD
16:35 Dark_Ai: ja xD
16:35 Irreversible: hast du es gefixt? oder nicht? xD
16:35 Dark_Ai: hab ich
16:35 Irreversible: o3o yay
16:36 Irreversible: 00:28:540 (1) -  ein blanket mit 5 mahen?
16:36 Irreversible: 00:28:790 (2) -  beweg das dann einfach ein wenig nach rechst
16:36 Irreversible: egal wenns hier nen jump gibt xDD
16:37 Dark_Ai: ok
16:37 Irreversible: 00:31:540 (3) - 
16:37 Irreversible: versuch mal den rhythmus
16:37 Irreversible: 00:30:790 (2) - reverse den
16:37 Irreversible: 00:31:540 (3) -  circle
16:37 Irreversible: 00:31:790 (4) - circle ODER slider
16:38 Dark_Ai: naa ich mag es wie es ist
16:38 Irreversible: 00:42:290 (1) - : http://puu.sh/3bNCk.jpg 
16:39 Irreversible: also ^ ist episch :C
16:39 Irreversible: xD
16:40 Dark_Ai: passt aber ich mag den letzten slider nicht 
16:42 Irreversible: 02:26:540 (1,2,3,4) - 
16:42 Irreversible: mach doch hier so einen runden flow
16:42 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/3bNKm.jpg
16:42 Irreversible: sieht ganz gut aus :P
16:44 Dark_Ai: kannst du mir code schicken?
16:44 Irreversible: ehm
16:44 Irreversible: ok
16:44 Irreversible: lol xD
16:44 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/3bNO7.jpg  und hier so ein rhythmus vielleicht: 02:56:790 (2,3,4) - 
16:44 Dark_Ai: ja xD
16:44 Irreversible: passt vllt ganz gut o3o
16:44 Irreversible: warte ich mach kurz den code
16:46 Irreversible: schau bei pm xD
16:47 Dark_Ai: okay
16:47 Irreversible: 03:01:290 (4) - ein paar grids nach oben.. o: für besseres rund-feeling loljk xD
16:47 Irreversible: 03:06:540 (1,2) - ein paar nach oben rechts (grids) wegen dem blanket 
16:48 Irreversible: finde die map ganz gut o3o
16:48 Irreversible: deswegen son noob mod xD
16:49 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/258817 Hyun A - Ice Cream [Normal]]
16:49 Irreversible: 00:34:790 (6) -  NC wegen echo-effekt xD
16:49 Dark_Ai: warte
16:50 Dark_Ai: 03:06:540 (1,2) -  ich find das oky
16:50 Irreversible: ll
16:50 Irreversible: kkç
16:50 Irreversible: kk* -.-
16:52 Irreversible: 01:36:290 (6) -  finish oder so? D: xD
16:53 Irreversible: ich find nix sonst bei normal o.o

viel glück :)
OEvil
299 posts
Joined December 2012
OEvil
Mod Request!~

[Normal]
  1. Edits:
    - 1/3 of the map is kiai time. Consider reducing this

[Hard]
  1. Edits:
    - 1/3 of the map is kiai time. Consider reducing this
    - 00:10:040 (1) - Remove this circle.
    - 00:10:290 (2) - Remove this circle.
    - 00:10:040 - Add a slider from here until 00:10:290, with a NC.
    - 00:10:790 (4) - Remove this circle.
    - 00:11:040 (5) - Remove this circle.
    - 00:10:790 - Add a slider from here until 00:11:040.
    - 00:27:040 (3) - Remove this circle.
    - 00:27:290 (4) - Remove this circle.
    - 00:27:040 - Add a slider from here until 00:27:290.
    - 01:08:540 (1) - Remove this circle.
    - 01:08:790 (2) - Remove this circle.
    - 01:08:540 - Add a slider from here until 01:08:790, with a NC. Like This: http://puu.sh/3bRfx.jpg
    - 01:12:290 (1) - Remove this circle.
    - 01:12:540 (2) - Add NC.
    - 01:15:040 (3) - Remove this circle.
    - 01:15:290 (4) - Remove this circle.
    - 01:15:040 - Add a slider from here until 01:15:290.
    - 02:58:540 (1) - Move to {x:196 y:184}
    - 02:58:790 (2) - Move to {x:304 y:100}.
    - 02:59:040 (3) - Remove this circle.
    - 02:59:290 (4) - Remove this circle.
    - 02:59:040 - Add a slider from here until 02:59:290.
    - 02:58:540 (1,2,3) - ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ Make This like this ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ : http://puu.sh/3bRtx.jpg ↑↑
    - 03:07:290 (4) - Remove this circle.
    - 03:07:540 (5) - Remove this circle.
    - 03:07:290 - Add a slider from here until here 03:07:540.

I Hope You Like My Mod
Dark_Ai
1,832 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Dark_Ai
OEvil

OEvil wrote:

Mod Request!~

[Normal]
  1. Edits:
    - 1/3 of the map is kiai time. Consider reducing this I dont think this is a problem

[Hard]
  1. Edits:
    - 1/3 of the map is kiai time. Consider reducing this
    - 00:10:040 (1) - Remove this circle.
    - 00:10:290 (2) - Remove this circle.
    - 00:10:040 - Add a slider from here until 00:10:290, with a NC.well okay
    - 00:10:790 (4) - Remove this circle.
    - 00:11:040 (5) - Remove this circle.
    - 00:10:790 - Add a slider from here until 00:11:040. okay
    - 00:27:040 (3) - Remove this circle.
    - 00:27:290 (4) - Remove this circle.
    - 00:27:040 - Add a slider from here until 00:27:290. no I like it like this way
    - 01:08:540 (1) - Remove this circle.
    - 01:08:790 (2) - Remove this circle.
    - 01:08:540 - Add a slider from here until 01:08:790, with a NC. Like This: http://puu.sh/3bRfx.jpg I dont like it ><
    - 01:12:290 (1) - Remove this circle. ^
    - 01:12:540 (2) - Add NC. ^
    - 01:15:040 (3) - Remove this circle.
    - 01:15:290 (4) - Remove this circle.
    - 01:15:040 - Add a slider from here until 01:15:290. I think same as above
    - 02:58:540 (1) - Move to {x:196 y:184}
    - 02:58:790 (2) - Move to {x:304 y:100}. hmm okay
    - 02:59:040 (3) - Remove this circle.
    - 02:59:290 (4) - Remove this circle.
    - 02:59:040 - Add a slider from here until 02:59:290.
    - 02:58:540 (1,2,3) - ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ Make This like this ↑ ↑ ↑ ↑ : http://puu.sh/3bRtx.jpg ↑↑
    - 03:07:290 (4) - Remove this circle.
    - 03:07:540 (5) - Remove this circle.
    - 03:07:290 - Add a slider from here until here 03:07:540. I dont really like these suggestions gomen >< so no change :c

I Hope You Like My Mod

Thank you for your mod :)

Updated ~
tiper
tiper
[Hard]
  1. I don't sure but some notes seem to be off for me.
    Maybe I ain't right but check this diff and I think you'll find some hidden vocal beats which are landing on 1\3 ticks
  2. 00:33:540 (3) - nc, cuz there's new vocal line starting?
  3. 00:42:040 (5) - ^
  4. 00:45:790 (1) - rnc
  5. 00:46:040 (2) - nc because of same reasons
  6. 01:18:790 (2,3) - ctrl+G both. This flow looks better for me
  7. 01:22:290 (1) - rnc
  8. 01:22:540 (2) - nc
  9. 02:20:290 (1) - rnc
  10. 02:20:540 (2) - nc
  11. 03:04:290 (1,2) - rnc (1), nc (2)
    Looks like a pretty good relax-diff. The main problem is in missnapped notes but as I said I don't sure. Just check them out(f.e. some of 1\4 ticks).
[Normal]

  • Can't say a lot. Pretty nice Normal. :>
Dark_Ai
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Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Dark_Ai
well changed everything you pointed out C:
Thank you for your mod

Updated ~
Zero__wind
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Zero__wind
Hi :3 mod as requested

irc
03:11 Zero__wind: hi hi ~
03:11 Zero__wind: If it's ok for me to simply irc mod for you ?
03:11 Dark_Ai: okay
03:12 Zero__wind: fine, I'm just about to check it out and found you editing
03:12 *Zero__wind is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/258816 Hyun A - Ice Cream [Hard]]
03:12 Zero__wind: 00:09:540 (4) - clap at end
03:13 Zero__wind: 00:12:290 (1,2) - maybe don't let 1's tail touch 2's head and that would looks better, forget about the distance snap ?
03:13 Zero__wind: After all ths is Hard
03:14 Zero__wind: it's up to you
03:15 Zero__wind: maybe a default soft finish on head sounds nice for 00:16:290 (1) -
03:16 Zero__wind: 00:36:290 (4,5) - recommend to stack, for this is the first time this kind of rhythm appears
03:16 Zero__wind: 00:38:540 (2,3,4) - while this one is ok imo
03:17 Zero__wind: maybe NC on 00:58:290 (8) - instead of 00:59:040 (1) -
03:18 Dark_Ai: still Hard?
03:18 Zero__wind: and 01:01:040 (1) - this NC is not really neccessary
03:18 Zero__wind: yeah
03:18 Zero__wind: 01:18:790 (2) - clap on head
03:19 Zero__wind: maybe add a note at 01:24:915 - to form a tripple
03:19 Zero__wind: for the current rhythm don't follow the vocal
03:20 Dark_Ai: 01:01:040 (1) - I think I wont change this ^^
03:20 Zero__wind: fine
03:20 Zero__wind: It's also ok for me
03:20 Dark_Ai: okay
03:21 Zero__wind: maybe simply split 01:31:165 (4) - into two circles would be easier for hard-lever playrers to handle
03:22 Zero__wind: maybe consider to move NC from 01:52:040 (1) - to 01:52:290 (2) - for the down beat lands on (2)
03:22 Zero__wind: It's ok for you to keep it, following the vocal
03:23 Dark_Ai: ok
03:25 Zero__wind: eh ? why is that I found no claps for the last kiai
03:25 Zero__wind: oh no, not the whole part
03:25 Zero__wind: clap on 02:56:790 (2) -
03:25 Dark_Ai: o.O
03:25 Zero__wind: 02:57:790 (5) -
03:25 Dark_Ai: oh forgot to add after remake this part xD
03:25 Zero__wind: ~~
03:26 Zero__wind: I was wondering if my ears went wrong
03:26 Zero__wind: noting wrong ~
03:26 Zero__wind: nothing*
03:26 Zero__wind: then...
03:26 *Zero__wind is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/258817 Hyun A - Ice Cream [Normal]]
03:27 Zero__wind: oh let me wind back =.= a little more for the Hard diff
03:28 Zero__wind: 00:14:040 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - maybe add some whistles for this part
03:28 Zero__wind: just like what you did in Normal ?
03:28 Zero__wind: It really sounds nice, when I checked this part in Normal
03:29 Zero__wind: ok,, this time it's really for Normal
03:29 *Zero__wind is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/258817 Hyun A - Ice Cream [Normal]]
03:30 Zero__wind: maybe also add NC on 00:32:290 (2) - if you want to keep the NC on 00:31:790 (1) -
03:30 Zero__wind: it's up to you
03:30 Zero__wind: clap 00:43:790 (2) -
03:32 Zero__wind: maybe add notes at points like 01:07:540 - and 01:15:540 - to bring some variety to the rhythm
03:32 Zero__wind: drum whistle at 01:21:290 (2) - 's end ? because you used it on 01:20:290 (1) -
03:33 Zero__wind: also maybe add drum whistle on 01:23:290 (4) - 's end
03:33 Zero__wind: of course, if you just want to only use for once, it's ok
03:33 Zero__wind: or you can use it as pattern for this part, till the break time
03:34 Dark_Ai: changed ^^
03:35 Zero__wind: also for the part from this point on 02:24:290 (1) - ~
03:36 Zero__wind: maybe somehow add a finish on the last note ? 02:40:290 (6) -
03:36 Zero__wind: custom one or default one is up to your choice
03:38 Zero__wind: oops also I seem forget to say, you may add finishes at all the first down beat of each kiai part
03:38 Zero__wind: also in Hard diff
03:38 Zero__wind: do what you like
03:38 Dark_Ai: hmm :/
03:38 Zero__wind: and no other critical stuffs found ~
03:38 Zero__wind: quite good song and map :3
03:39 Dark_Ai: ah thank you >o<

Good luck~
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Dark_Ai
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Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
Dark_Ai
Thank you for star and mod :3

Updated ~
RikiH_
1,149 posts
Joined February 2011
RikiH_
Chyo-Kun asked me to mod this.

Normal

00:16:290 (1) - Add a finish or a clap on this note, it feels empty at the moment
00:31:790 (1) - Is this NC really necessary?
01:04:290 (1) - The same as above, you should add an hitsound here
01:10:290 (3,1) - Fix the stack, they are not perfectly stacked
01:35:290 (5,6) - You can curve the slider and move the following note just a bit, for a better flow
02:06:290 (2,4) - Try to add whistles on these notes. If you like it, you should apply this in all similar parts of the song in all diffs
02:18:790 (4) - 208|68 for a better flow
02:20:790 (2) - This way for a better flow
02:56:290 (1) - Add an hitsound here please
03:10:790 (5) - For a better flow:

Hard

00:00:290 (1) - I'd put an hitsound at the beginning, maybe a finish
00:15:790 (7) - Whistle at the beginning? If you do it, apply this in all similar parts of the song and in al diffs
00:31:790 (1,2) - Actually this blanket is a bit ugly...
01:01:040 (1) - Uhm, whistle at the end?
01:19:790 (4) - I'd use ctrl+g here
01:20:540 (2) - Well, this is 1/4. I suggest you to use a 1/4 slider with a repeat instead of 1/2 that sounds a bit odd
01:28:665 (1) - I really think this should start 1/4 later, so move the slider 1/4 later, and move the clap from the end to the beginning
01:31:040 (3,5) - Delete these notes. The rhythm will improve in my opinion but it's your choose
01:50:290 - I'm not an expert but I think the blue pause is supposed to be snapped on the tick
02:32:665 (1) - Same as 01:28:665 (1)
02:34:790 (1,2,3,4) - For the rhythm: Delete (3) and replace (4) with a note in 02:35:165
02:54:290 - Same as 01:50:290 (I'm not sure about this anyways)
02:57:290 (4,5) - Improve this blanket

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Nice map, take a star. Bye
Roxas
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1,354 posts
Joined August 2011
Roxas
I'll melt you with this mod rawwr /me runs xD

[General]
Nothing to see

[Normal]
00:33:040 (2) - Delete this?
01:50:290 - Adjust here
02:16:290 (1,2) - Make a thing like this
SPOILER
02:54:290 - Do as 01:50:290 -

[Hard]
01:01:040 (1) - You really need NC here? There aren't SV changes or huge jumps...
01:37:040 - Do as normal
01:50:290 - Same as I said in normal
01:51:790 (1,2) - Change with a slider?
02:02:790 (4) - Move like here
SPOILER
02:54:290 - Do as 01:50:290 -

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