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Lia - Tori no Uta

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skyflying
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skyflying
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年5月20日 at 17:22:21

Artist: Lia
Title: Tori no Uta
Source: Air
Tags: alex0686 vikon breeze
BPM: 122.1
Filesize: 18102kb
Play Time: 03:01
Difficulties Available:
  1. Alex's Insane (4.96 stars, 525 notes)
  2. Breeze's Difficulty (4.78 stars, 415 notes)
  3. Easy (1.45 stars, 142 notes)
  4. Normal (3.39 stars, 233 notes)
  5. Vikon's Hard (4.48 stars, 330 notes)
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta
Download: Lia - Tori no Uta (no video)
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Air OP,such a beautiful song.
effort making~

Feb 3 , 2010 added some new skins
Feb 12, 2010 added [Breeze's Difficulty]
Last edited by skyflying , edited 112 times in total.
ACC
54 posts
Joined March 2009
ACC
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Last edited by ACC , edited 1 time in total.
cyanberryio
424 posts
Joined August 2008
cyanberryio
Love this song, but get caps right.

Lia - Tori no Uta

I think it was Tori no Uta though. And I'm not sure about the artist. I'm pretty sure it's Lia, but I see Lix on James' beatmap of the remix. Ask someone else, I can't find it on my anime music source.

I wanted to do this one, but I guess I was beat. :P Can I make a difficulty? I really want to make a storyboarded lyrics, just cause I find that fun. :D

Rounding the BPM is better, so you should change it to just 122. Only stuff like old music/musicals should have weird BPMs.

Star cause I love this song.
skyflying
80 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
skyflying
:) thanks you Alex0686 and hillman,I'm very grateful for your help. love this song too,but feeling too hard to make it well.I'm very happy you can make a difficulty and storyboarded lyrics.

PS:sorry to my bad english

Download: hit.rar
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tom800510
258 posts
Joined June 2008
tom800510
Artist:
Lia(大寫)

title:
Tori(大寫)

timing:
BPM,果沒特殊需要,最好是用整數(個人經驗)
offset 15569(記得resnap all)

間距的部分我覺得問題還蠻多的,請先參考↓第四點修改(省得我要打滿整個篇幅) :P :P :P :P :P
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=25&t=5553

另外呢,怎麼看到count down是開啟的,測試卻沒有....,總之不要開count down~
skyflying
80 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
skyflying
:) 谢谢你的建议，我会尽快修改好的。
Vikon
343 posts
Joined December 2008
Vikon
玩了hard level
感覺上，很多地方，note所設的位置也快了。

是BPM設錯了?還是offset不準?
印象中，如果BPM和offset沒有設錯，主音的note都可以設在紅色 / 白色線上的

還有一個更顯眼的問題.
當有2個或4個音在同一個位置 要連按的時候
(例如 第二句 「僕たちは见送った」後 那2個深藍色的note)
...怎麼說呢，總是覺得有點奇怪
因為曲中沒有相配合的音在那些位置，所以很難觸摸。
或者把它們取消了？

完了第一段( 也就是「悔しくて指を离す」後)
感覺好多了，沒有甚麼大問題。

總而言之，這首歌你在design上設計得不錯的，繼續加油。
希望這些意見能幫到你~
skyflying
80 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
skyflying
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Vikon
343 posts
Joined December 2008
Vikon
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [edit Hard].osu
skyflying
80 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
skyflying
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Vikon
343 posts
Joined December 2008
Vikon
the difficulty has been finished
if there are any problems , plz inform me to correct it ~
THX~

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Vikon's level].osu
Vikon
343 posts
Joined December 2008
Vikon
這次玩了normal，主要都是覺得note位置上有少許偏差

於是對normal作了微調：
00:15 第一個note好像短了一點?
00:23,00:39 調整了note的位置和長度
00:52 ~ 2:19 向右移了一格 和note作了調整

你看看調整後，會不會好一點？

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Edit normal].osu
skyflying
80 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
skyflying
:) 已采用你的建议，做的比我的好O(∩_∩)O哈！
ACC
54 posts
Joined March 2009
ACC
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Vikon
343 posts
Joined December 2008
Vikon
原來是122.09-__-!!!!
因為我也很少做map，如果重set BPM ，所有notes的位置是不是要人手重新移過？
如果不重整BPM，保留現在的BPM，map會有分別嗎？(因為已經重新設定offset及timing了，可以補償那0.09嗎？)


在發現這消息前，我把easy edit了
Easy主要的問題是 ，slider中間那些圈，不在主音上(最高白色和紅色的線上)
所以在00:53~2分鐘那一段， 這次我不只向右移一格了
我把offset 改至slider在主音上
(因為easy的slider最長，不調整的話 太顯眼-_-")

看看現在，重新調整後的4個level可不可以接受，如果不可以，再嘗試重整BPM?


Because 4 difficulties has been updated, ( actually i think they are quite good now , in my opinion only.)
plz help us to see if those 4 difficulties is fine, if there are still problems,may be... change the BPM after that?

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Edit easy].osu
Vikon
343 posts
Joined December 2008
Vikon
原來是122.09-__-!!!!
因為我也很少做map，如果重set BPM ，所有notes的位置是不是要人手重新移過？
如果不重整BPM，保留現在的BPM，map會有分別嗎？(因為已經重新設定offset及timing了，可以補償那0.09嗎？)


在發現這消息前，我把easy edit了
Easy主要的問題是 ，slider中間那些圈，不在主音上(最高白色和紅色的線上)
所以在00:53~2分鐘那一段， 這次我不只向右移一格了
我把offset 改至slider在主音上
(因為easy的slider最長，不調整的話 太顯眼-_-")

看看現在，重新調整後的4個level可不可以接受，如果不可以，再嘗試重整BPM?


Because 4 difficulties has been updated, ( actually i think they are quite good now , in my opinion only.)
plz help us to see if those 4 difficulties is fine, if there are still problems,may be... change the BPM after that?

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Edit easy].osu
ACC
54 posts
Joined March 2009
ACC
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Vikon
343 posts
Joined December 2008
Vikon
在multi裏為4個map進行過測試，
以下為綜合玩家的意見，所作出的微調：


[Easy]
easy的問題在於......note所下的位置，有些是歌詞部份，有些是伴奏，有點教人難觸摸。
但是因為這不是重節奏的快歌....如果在[easy] 只用簡化了的歌詞，就會比easy級更easy了......

因此只作了以下修改：

02:48 開始的10個note，都編成為一組太長了，所以把10個分為了5組

[Normal]

個人和玩家也發現：
「Normal和hard那些短而不斷重覆的slider有點突兀和多餘。」

所以在
1:05:978 , 1:21:905 , 1:37:392
把不斷重覆的slider改為spinner會較好

1:04:687 , 00:56:450 notes的位置調整了(之前有一格偏差)

2:45:876 在尾段為notes重設平均的new combo (和easy相同問題，因為之前分得有點不平均)

2:57:125 為3個漸慢的音作了調整

Hard

hard的問題不大

00:14:831 , 00:50:425
和normal相同，把短而重覆的slider換作了spinner

02:46:183 和以上2個難度一樣，重設了new combo (因為方便玩tag的分配)

以下為上述3個level的edit版，再一次請你看看吧～

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Edit Easy].osu

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Edit hard].osu

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Edit normal].osu
skyflying
80 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
skyflying
:) 已修改，辛苦你了。

Thanks Vikon.
plz help us to see if those 4 difficulties is fine, if there are still problems
Vikon
343 posts
Joined December 2008
Vikon
測試的第二天：


1.修改了[Vikon's level]
01:12:187 slider changed
01:30:015 new combo
01:37:146 new combo
01:43:736 new combo
01:49:195 new combo

2. 因為意見指出.... 其實[Vikon level]是不算難的 (就如我的級數一樣~)
也就是這map欠一個屬於真正 insane 的級數
所以...現在我在嘗試新增一個更難的級數，看看效果如何.....

Download: Lia - Tori no Uta[Air] (skyflying) [Vikon's level].osu
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