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Shaman King - Brave Heart

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tieff
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Joined March 2009
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tieff
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 12 июня 2009 г. at 17:28:46

Artist: Megumi Hayashibara
Title: Brave Heart
Source: Shaman King
Tags: Shaman King
BPM: 130
Filesize: 3780kb
Play Time: 02:02
Difficulties Available:
  1. Insane (4,98 stars, 363 notes)
  2. Normal (4,68 stars, 283 notes)
Download: Megumi Hayashibara - Brave Heart
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Beatmap #4.
Enjoy, please.
Last edited by tieff , edited 30 times in total.
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined August 2008
Andrea
[Timing]

Offset and BPM looks fine.

[Overall]

Lower by 1 tick normal volume.
Remove triple notes on normal ... Example : 01:11:65 (3,4,5)
Why on hard don't use soft sections like normal?

[Normal]

00:00:12 (1) - Whistle here.
00:16:042 - Remove this green section.
00:31:50 (7) - Finish?
01:11:65 (3,4,5) - I don't like much triple notes on normal difficulty.
01:20:42 (4) - No jumps on normal maps.

[Hard]

00:05:88 (6) - Align perfectly with (4).
00:57:58 (7) - New combo.
01:01:96 (2) - ^
01:31:04 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Too much whistles imo.
tieff
Featured Artist
2,254 posts
Joined March 2009
Topic Starter
tieff

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Timing]

Offset and BPM looks fine.

[Overall]

Lower by 1 tick normal volume. Fixed.
Remove triple notes on normal ... Example : 01:11:65 (3,4,5) Fixed.
Why on hard don't use soft sections like normal? Fixed.

[Normal]

00:00:12 (1) - Whistle here. Fixed.
00:16:042 - Remove this green section. Fixed.
00:31:50 (7) - Finish? Fixed.
01:11:65 (3,4,5) - I don't like much triple notes on normal difficulty. Fixed.
01:20:42 (4) - No jumps on normal maps. Fixed.

[Hard]

00:05:88 (6) - Align perfectly with (4). Fixed.
00:57:58 (7) - New combo. Fixed.
01:01:96 (2) - ^ Fixed.
01:31:04 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Too much whistles imo. Fixed.
Shinxyn
osu! Alumni
1,179 posts
Joined June 2008
Shinxyn
From you signature, you know the correct artist... so use that please~
Use Shaman King as the source instead
One second lead in time isn't enough
I say offset +11
Why is the Normal hitsound volumes not... er.. equal? xD

Normal-
00:03:81 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) -the hitsounds feel a bit too fast here
00:11:19 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - ^
00:23:43 (6) - make this 3 or 5 repeat instead, the move 7 accordingly (preferred right under 4's end)
00:33:81 (6) - remove first whistle only?
00:43:04 (1) - don't like how this ends on a 1/4 (preferred- extend to 00:43:50, have 2 on 00:43:73 and end on 00:43:96 as normal slider, though that'll make this a lot easier)
00:52:50 (2,4) - move these down till the 2 is under slider end?
01:08:42 (6,7) - its off from its formation~
01:13:04 (2,3,4) - ultra nazi- straighten these better?
01:20:42 (4,6) - ^
01:31:73 (7) - nazi- right a tick
01:32:88 (3,4) - ultra nazi- down a tick
01:38:65 (5) - mirror the 1 (down three ticks)
01:40:73 (3) - up a tick? (align with 1?)
Lots of hitsounds are for your own beats, but it seems to me it can follow the music more instead, but that's just what I think.
Pretty hard for a normal..

Hard-
00:03:81 & 00:11:19 same as Normal
00:13:50 (7,8) - random nazi- align with 6 better
Redo Break
00:23:19 (2,3) - random nazi- move a tad bit down for a equal triangle
00:40:27 (3) - left a tick?
00:44:42 (4) - right a tick!
00:44:88 (x) - add note?
01:04:27 (7,8,9) - could look better
01:05:65 (2) - the vocal is on 01:05:88... move the repeat there?
01:10:04 (7) - up one, right one
01:17:07 (1) - illegal spinnorz
01:20:88 (5,6) - barely saw this, new combo maybe?
02:02:42 (5) - lol~ down a tick
Yea, more of your own beats, oh well, your map~ your style

Nevertheless it sounds pretty good~
tieff
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tieff
Thank you, Shin. Many fixed.
mosluv
748 posts
Joined December 2008
mosluv
Normal: (This is definetly a Hard)
Audio Lead-in time: 2 seconds

01:37:50 (x) - Add note here or change 4 into a 1/2 slider with whistle throughout whole slider.
01:44:88 (x) - ^ or change 3 into a 1/2 slider with whistle.

Hard:
Audio Lead-in time: 2 seconds

01:30:11 (x) - Add note here.
01:44:88 (x) - ^

Right now you have 2 Hards. It's best not to use streams in a Normal. So either make an easier difficulty or try make Normal easier. Other than that, great map!

8-)
Starrodkirby86
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3,723 posts
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Starrodkirby86
Sh-Sh-Sh-Shaman King~

[Normal]:
Add a break at the part between the slow part and the fast stuff.
01:21:81 (7,8,9,10) - Oh come on, you're leaving me hanging here with this. (The rhythm's uncool)
01:36:57 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above.
01:44:77 (x) - Add a beat here?

[Hard]:
00:26:19 (x) - Add a beat here?
00:29:08 (x) - Add a beat here?
01:13:73 (6) - Make it repeat?
01:22:61 (x) - Add a beat here? :x
01:37:38 (x) - Add a beat here?
01:44:77 (x) - Add beat here? Pattern found...I hope.

I recommend you to increase your lead in by a second or so.

Normal seems like a Hard and Hard seems like Insane. You definitely need an easier difficulty.

This map is awesome, and I love the skin. Star.
ignorethis
osu! Alumni
1,885 posts
Joined August 2008
ignorethis
Normal:
01:47:656 - Add a note here?

Hard:
01:08:887(1~9) - These notes seem to be very confusing, especially 5-7, rearrange plz.
01:20:887 - Sliders overlapping is not allowed(the 300 mark will somehow block the slider from being seen). move it aside. Same with 01:21:349.

Other than these small issues, no problems. A star.
tieff
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tieff

Nexy wrote:

Normal: (This is definetly a Hard)
Audio Lead-in time: 2 seconds Fixed.

01:37:50 (x) - Add note here or change 4 into a 1/2 slider with whistle throughout whole slider. No. Listen piano in right headphone.
01:44:88 (x) - ^ or change 3 into a 1/2 slider with whistle.

Hard:
Audio Lead-in time: 2 seconds

01:30:11 (x) - Add note here.
01:44:88 (x) - ^

Right now you have 2 Hards. It's best not to use streams in a Normal. So either make an easier difficulty or try make Normal easier. Other than that, great map!

8-)
Ryuukun
476 posts
Joined December 2008
Ryuukun
[Hard]
00:15:11() - useless break D:
01:47:65 (1,2,3) - the song is very neat but this part is kinda messed up, why?

[Normal]
No problems

Maybe one more diff?
like easy :P

and add some tags and a source :P
Card N'FoRcE
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Card N'FoRcE
- Normal:
01:03:11 (2) - move 1 square to the right

- Hard:
00:45:11 (1) - there are some jumps in this map, but this one really surprised me because it was short and i didn't realize. Dunno, it seems fine, anyway
I don't like all those sudden changes in spacing but it plays fine so no problems ^^

Good map :arrow:
Star'd
Mafiamaster
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3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
Remove the 2nd non-inherited timing section at 16,273.
Then +20ms to offset. (140)

Hard~
01:17:65 (8) - Suggestion: New combo.
01:17:88 (1) - Suggestion: Remove new combo. (I'm not a combo expert so feel not to do this.)

Edit: Thanks for the 2 extra stars on my map! I feel I must do the same~ ;)
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Let's try somethin' NEW!

[General] there are too many whistles here, aren't they? Try to add different sounds after 01:18:150 on your choise!

Normal
[00:18:600] (4) clap here...
[00:25:980] (2) ... and here!
[00:33:830] (6) alternate finish (or clap) sounds with whistles!
[01:00:130] (2, 4, 6, 7) finish on 7th, clap on the others (only in the start for the slider)
[01:07:000] (3, 4, 5, 6) try to end these sliders with claps...
[01:14:440] (1, 2, 3, 4) set sounds everywhere but on the start for these sliders: claps on 4th, whistle on the others!
[01:22:520] (10) turn this beat with a little slider ending on about 01:22:789
[01:30:600] (2, 4, 6, 7) whistle on 2nd, clap on the others (only in the end for the slider)

Hard
[00:21:813] add a beat around here, just after the 7th slider

Ok, my work is done for now... Star'd!
Gabi
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Joined December 2008
Gabi
i got your pm alright ^^

[Normal]
00:36:37 (2) - avoid sliders like this, you cant really see the trail.

[Hard]
Abit high on the Hp drain dont you think?
01:09:60 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Inconsistent snapping compared to the rest of the combo


im not really sure how to mod your map because your Normal feels like hard, and your hard is kind of inbetween hard and insane. i might come back to this when you have made up your mind....

for now its a pretty fun map but really hard to read, but ill star it for now
stär
tieff
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tieff

Gabi wrote:

i got your pm alright ^^

[Normal]
00:36:37 (2) - avoid sliders like this, you cant really see the trail. Fixed.

[Hard]
Abit high on the Hp drain dont you think?
01:09:60 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Inconsistent snapping compared to the rest of the combo It's jumps. T___T


im not really sure how to mod your map because your Normal feels like hard, and your hard is kind of inbetween hard and insane. i might come back to this when you have made up your mind.... But i delete all stream on normal...

for now its a pretty fun map but really hard to read, but ill star it for now
stär
Thank you for mod ^^
Ultimate
382 posts
Joined December 2008
Ultimate
Tieff, I'm only suggesting these modifications. If you do not wish to use them, then dont.

Overall:

Timing and Offset seems to be fine.

Normal:

00:04:29 (2) - Align with slider 1 (same combo, 1 (lvl 3 grid) to the right.)
00:04:29 (2) - Align with slider 1 (same combo, 1 (lvl 3 grid) to the left.)
00:35:67 (7) - Align with end of slider (6) (same combo) (align the rest of the next combos if you change this)
00:40:75 (3) - 1 (lvl 3 grid) to the left. (align the rest of the next combos if you change this)
00:43:52 (2) - 2 (lvl 3 grid) to the right.
00:44:44 (3) - If you've changed ^, then put this hit 1 (lvl 3 grid) to the right)
00:46:29 (5) - End of this slider, Finish sound maybe?
00:48:13 (6) - Whistle sound pls xD
00:48:94 (2) - Put this note 1/4 back (on the blue line), then it sounds with the tekst.
00:57:83 (1) - Finish sound maybe?
01:01:52 (6) - It sounds like a lack of hitsounds here, try this: (6),(2),(4),(6 begin and end of slider) clap sounds.
01:07:06 (3) - New combo
01:21:36 (6) - New combo, or atleast somewhere in this combo.
01:28:52 (7) - Or (8) new combo.


I'll mod Hard later, but i really like the map =D (star will come when i've modded Hard)
Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Mashley
Get a decent break in here somewhere. Turn up hitsounds?

Normal
A bit hard, but fine

Hard
00:00:83 (3) - Add whistle
00:02:67 (3) - ^
00:08:21 (3) - ^
00:10:06 (3) - ^
00:01:29 (5) - Reverse finish, replace with clap
00:03:13 (5) - ^
00:08:67 (5) - ^
00:10:52 (5) - ^
00:21:83 - I'd totally have notes here and on the 1/4s near it
00:25:29 (4,5) - Stack?
00:26:21 - Note here?

There is something very wrong... I just can't put my finger on it. Maybe the song choice?
Oh well, starred.
Ultimate
382 posts
Joined December 2008
Ultimate
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
fufe
284 posts
Joined September 2008
fufe
hard-
aahh. little spacing inconsistencies are urking me X.x ill only give two examples since i bet nobody cares
00:23:21 (2,3) - overlaps while others dont
00:26:44 (1,2,3) - 1-2 vs 2-3

-00:32:67 (3,4) = 00:36:37 (3,4) but also spaced differently >.>
00:52:06 (6) -restack? looked better in test mode to me.
01:37:75 (5,6,7) - grid snap 2? the overall shape is off because of these 3

i cant get used to the difficulty curve, it goes from normal play to having to concentrate on approach circles and reading [01:08:90 - 01:47:681 section] then gets pretty easy again at the end =x

normal looks fine
blissfulyoshi
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Joined July 2008
blissfulyoshi
Normal:
00:52:75 (3) - too close to 2
00:59:90 (1) - might want to align with 6
01:07:06 (1,2,3,4) - make all 4 have the same slope or the opposite slope

You might want to make your stacked sliders unstacked because it feels weird if you switch between sliders stacked on each other and unstacked sliders.

Hard:
00:05:90 (6) - stack under the end of 4
00:36:83 (5) - might want to align with 4
00:41:67 (2) - make a horizontal reflection of 1
00:42:13 (3) - make a vertical reflection of 2
00:52:06 (6) - align with 7
01:38:67 (9) - make a horizontal reflection of 7

same note as normal

Besides the issue I have, fine beatmap. Star.
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