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kanpakyin
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kanpakyin
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年7月23日 at 18:43:58

Artist: livetune
Title: Star Story
Tags: Hatsune Miku tell your world ep kz Vocaloid2 Nymph
BPM: 70
Filesize: 10126kb
Play Time: 04:34
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.48 stars, 453 notes)
  2. Normal (2.88 stars, 308 notes)
Download: livetune - Star Story
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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I'm serious. I want to remap this beautiful song.
bfbyw
storyboard by kodomonoyume, thank you!
Hard:
02:03:647 - ~ 03:15:647 - - Done by Nymph

whee, if you want to feel how bad my old is: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/23640 <_<
Last edited by kanpakyin , edited 29 times in total.
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
沙发！
those
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Joined November 2010
those
remappp
pw384
2,287 posts
Joined January 2012
pw384
bfbyw
Zejky
694 posts
Joined February 2011
Zejky
i like song
waxman
467 posts
Joined February 2012
waxman
[Hard]

00:36:218 (3,4,1,2,3) - Its difficult for me to get 300 with DT.
03:56:790 (4) - If u want to change I want you to put about (384,208) , but its not bad :D
04:05:147 (2,3) - intentional spacing?

how nice map!
I think this map will be ranked soon. :D


SPOILER

I passed Hard mode with DT (acc 99.56%)
Kyouren
5,583 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
Star Story ( I Small Mod)

General:
Tick display epilepsy warning

SB:
Delete SB Bios from break 2 and 3 (break 2 : 03:12:647 and break 3 : 04:10:718)

Normal:
Oops!!! Is so Hard to use Hardrock on normal
CS-1

Hard:
Fixed

Good Luck~~ :)
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,231 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
kanpakyin
:o

waxman wrote:

[Hard]

00:36:218 (3,4,1,2,3) - Its difficult for me to get 300 with DT. //I would say keeping this for now. Let see if other modder say so.
03:56:790 (4) - If u want to change I want you to put about (384,208) , but its not bad :D //would love to keep this as it balances with 03:37:076 (3) -
04:05:147 (2,3) - intentional spacing? //Yes! I made this to fit the pitch.

gokugohan12468 wrote:

General:
Tick display epilepsy warning

SB:
Delete SB Bios from break 2 and 3 (break 2 : 03:12:647 and break 3 : 04:10:718)

Normal:
Oops!!! Is so Hard to use Hardrock on normal
CS-1 //This is normal not easy you know - -
Thanks anyway~
Lally
3,177 posts
Joined December 2011
Lally
o3o/ hiii random here just because of the song *-*)

[Normal]
  1. 00:03:647 (1,2) - what about to make with slider (2) a little blanket for the (1) ?
  2. 00:12:218 (1,2,3,4) - i don't really agree to stack circles like this in a easier diff of a mapset ;_;
  3. 00:19:076 (3) - what about to curve it a bit to make a blanket with 00:20:361 (4) - ?
    SPOILER
  4. 01:01:504 (4,1,2) - what about to make this pattern like:
    SPOILER
  5. 01:07:933 (4) - what about to make this slider like:
    SPOILER
  6. 02:24:218 (1) - i think it will flow better like:
    SPOILER
  7. 02:39:218 (3) - i think you should remove this one circle because there is no sound in the song
  8. and add one here 02:39:647 - since you missed a sound here
[Hard]
  1. 01:32:147 (2,3,4,1,2,1) - i ask me why such a complicate patternin a relaxing song? ;_; what about something like:

    SPOILER

  2. 02:23:790 (5,6) - how about to doit like:
    SPOILER
  3. 03:32:790 (1,1) - what about to stack this 2 objects perfectly?

good luck *-*)/ and have a staru-chan <3
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel
As you request via in-game PM

不服但還是想玩怎麼辦 (逃


[General]


clear !



[Normal]


00:56:790 (3) - 選取00:56:790 (3,4)後一同移動到(251,152)，為的是讓00:55:076 (1,2,3)呈現等間距

01:25:933 (6) - a tiny stuff. (1.3x DS)把這slider移動到(291,350)讓它跟01:25:076 (5)呈一個perfect☆blanket
改完後調整一下01:27:218 (1,2)，you know what I mean.

01:59:790 (3) - (1.4x DS)移動到(296,205)，理由也是blanket。然後02:00:647 (1)微調到(427,160)以修正間距(1.4x DS)





[Hard]


00:07:076 (3) - 相較前面00:01:504 (2,3)、00:03:218 (5,1)之間的間距，00:06:647 (2,3)的間距就顯得過短了些，感覺無端縮小間距有點不舒適。把00:07:076 (3,4,5)一同選取後移動到(340,300)之類的位置 ?

00:12:218 (1,2,3,4) - 想提一下我對這邊的看法。由於這邊音調漸低，如果是我我會做一個逐漸縮短間距的的效果而不是逐漸加大，感覺會比較合音樂

00:36:218 (3,4,1,2,3) - 之前那個modder提出的似乎不無道理，其實我覺得這裡的節奏不是很舒適，但是目前這樣的確還是有跟著節奏在走的。節奏不是很好認，所以至少把這邊的重疊各種 (不完全1/4重疊 + 1/1重疊 + 1/2重疊)擺的乾淨些lol，把00:37:718 (2)移動到(314,112)，這樣好讀多了。 然後應該不用擔心00:39:433 (5)的尾部跟00:37:718 (2)相碰不美觀，我test之後看起來影響不大

02:11:361 (7) - 在(117,194)才是和02:10:076 (4)完全重疊。no grid重疊不看座標只看眼力是不可靠的=.= 我剛開始no grid製圖也只靠眼力，後來都乖乖看座標了lol

03:43:076 (4) - 點一下03:41:147 (1)會發現它在(178,112)而不是(179,113)

04:00:218 (1) - 事實上我覺得這邊ctrl + g滿爽的，03:59:790 (5,1,2,3,1,2) - 這flow感覺還延續了這麼長，試試不 ?

04:11:790 (4) - 我知道你的圖向來flow相較其他mapper顯的曲折了點，但這邊我覺得需要提一下，04:11:790 (4)使其ctrl + g後，不管是04:11:361 (3,4)之間或04:11:790 (4,1)之間的銜接足以減輕移動壓力和增加舒適感，我相信大部分人會比較喜歡這樣的flow的 (包含我在內)

04:16:504 (4,5) - 由於2個sliders間隔1/1拍頭尾不完全重疊是在這難度首次出現，有些玩家可能會有點措手不及，給這兩個sliders都加上NC，不僅幫助讀圖，還能強調這auti-jump的存在感

我覺得比較可惜的是第2段kiai time相較於其他兩段無聊了些，只用了一些簡單的重疊跳，跳的數量遠比其他兩段少，設計感也相對低下。但除了這點之外就沒什麼能抱怨的，很好的圖:>
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
from in-game

[General]
Tag里miku没大写。。V家v也没大写，还有我记得说是跟妮姆芙collab来着?..
歌词文件夹里有Thumbs.db
SB右上角那存在感略小。。

[Normal]
00:01:504 (2,4) - 我觉得你把whistle加这边更好听。
01:27:433 (2) - 结尾大鼓落下了
02:13:504 (4,5,1) - 我感觉可以稍微修一下。。。
02:39:218 (3,4,1) - 我知道你跟hit-hat但是感觉这放normal真的挺不好理解的。。
02:44:790 我感觉好像没换军鼓啊。。
我都快听睡着了你怎么做完的。。

[Hard]
00:24:218 (5) - 我觉得这边做个小跳比蹲舒服
01:07:718 (5,1,2) - 我觉得你干脆2放上NC然后1的摘下去。。反正我是读错了

没了，小贤哥哥嫁给我
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,231 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

Lally wrote:

o3o/ hiii random here just because of the song *-*)

[Normal]
  1. 00:03:647 (1,2) - what about to make with slider (2) a little blanket for the (1) ? //It's weird to do a blanket for a short slider imo, would keep it.
  2. 00:12:218 (1,2,3,4) - i don't really agree to stack circles like this in a easier diff of a mapset ;_; //I don't agree with you too sorry. This stack can be easily read and as a normal, it's fine.
  3. 00:19:076 (3) - what about to curve it a bit to make a blanket with 00:20:361 (4) - ? //Same as 00:03:647- it looks weird to me.
    SPOILER
  4. 01:01:504 (4,1,2) - what about to make this pattern like: //did some adjustment, but not exactly the same.
    SPOILER
  5. 01:07:933 (4) - what about to make this slider like: //nope as explained it before.
    SPOILER
  6. 02:24:218 (1) - i think it will flow better like: //I don't think so, I do this for the blanket.
    SPOILER
  7. 02:39:218 (3) - i think you should remove this one circle because there is no sound in the song //Listen to the song carefully, it has a drum sound there.
  8. and add one here 02:39:647 - since you missed a sound here //^
[Hard]
  1. 01:32:147 (2,3,4,1,2,1) - i ask me why such a complicate patternin a relaxing song? ;_; what about something like: //Seriously, I don't think they are complicated. They are simple 1/4 only...

    SPOILER

  2. 02:23:790 (5,6) - how about to doit like: //leave to nymph
    SPOILER
  3. 03:32:790 (1,1) - what about to stack this 2 objects perfectly? //Actually I did this intentionally. I want to make more diversity in my map, and this can actually make more fun to it.

DarknessAngel wrote:

As you request via in-game PM


[Normal]


00:56:790 (3) - 選取00:56:790 (3,4)後一同移動到(251,152)，為的是讓00:55:076 (1,2,3)呈現等間距 //其實我的原意是在這邊弄一個等邊三角形的 (1)- 尾巴, (2)- 和 (3)- 頭 所以沒動 不過倒是弄了一下間距

01:25:933 (6) - a tiny stuff. (1.3x DS)把這slider移動到(291,350)讓它跟01:25:076 (5)呈一個perfect☆blanket
改完後調整一下01:27:218 (1,2)，you know what I mean. //fixed, I guess

01:59:790 (3) - (1.4x DS)移動到(296,205)，理由也是blanket。然後02:00:647 (1)微調到(427,160)以修正間距(1.4x DS) //搞定





[Hard]


00:07:076 (3) - 相較前面00:01:504 (2,3)、00:03:218 (5,1)之間的間距，00:06:647 (2,3)的間距就顯得過短了些，感覺無端縮小間距有點不舒適。把00:07:076 (3,4,5)一同選取後移動到(340,300)之類的位置 ? //我想我知道你在表達甚麼了 orz 其實呢, 我前面跳的地方都是在1 .3拍上面麼? 而我就是利用這點, 在後面也搞成1.3拍上做個跳的

00:12:218 (1,2,3,4) - 想提一下我對這邊的看法。由於這邊音調漸低，如果是我我會做一個逐漸縮短間距的的效果而不是逐漸加大，感覺會比較合音樂 //音量提高到35% 這邊我個人還是想做放大音量 因為我是跟music一起變大的

00:36:218 (3,4,1,2,3) - 之前那個modder提出的似乎不無道理，其實我覺得這裡的節奏不是很舒適，但是目前這樣的確還是有跟著節奏在走的。節奏不是很好認，所以至少把這邊的重疊各種 (不完全1/4重疊 + 1/1重疊 + 1/2重疊)擺的乾淨些lol，把00:37:718 (2)移動到(314,112)，這樣好讀多了。 然後應該不用擔心00:39:433 (5)的尾部跟00:37:718 (2)相碰不美觀，我test之後看起來影響不大 //經過考慮之後, 我決定把1/4移走 我想既然全段都是1/2間距的話 還是別搞甚麼好了

02:11:361 (7) - 在(117,194)才是和02:10:076 (4)完全重疊。no grid重疊不看座標只看眼力是不可靠的=.= 我剛開始no grid製圖也只靠眼力，後來都乖乖看座標了lol

03:43:076 (4) - 點一下03:41:147 (1)會發現它在(178,112)而不是(179,113) //...我會說我只靠感覺放notes麼 <_<

04:00:218 (1) - 事實上我覺得這邊ctrl + g滿爽的，03:59:790 (5,1,2,3,1,2) - 這flow感覺還延續了這麼長，試試不 ? //我試了一下, 覺的現在的會比較喜歡一點 你那個我會再考慮一下

04:11:790 (4) - 我知道你的圖向來flow相較其他mapper顯的曲折了點，但這邊我覺得需要提一下，04:11:790 (4)使其ctrl + g後，不管是04:11:361 (3,4)之間或04:11:790 (4,1)之間的銜接足以減輕移動壓力和增加舒適感，我相信大部分人會比較喜歡這樣的flow的 (包含我在內) //好把

04:16:504 (4,5) - 由於2個sliders間隔1/1拍頭尾不完全重疊是在這難度首次出現，有些玩家可能會有點措手不及，給這兩個sliders都加上NC，不僅幫助讀圖，還能強調這auti-jump的存在感 //好

我覺得比較可惜的是第2段kiai time相較於其他兩段無聊了些，只用了一些簡單的重疊跳，跳的數量遠比其他兩段少，設計感也相對低下。但除了這點之外就沒什麼能抱怨的，很好的圖:> //hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, - - 尼姆服阿

No_Gu wrote:

from in-game

[General]
Tag里miku没大写。。V家v也没大写，还有我记得说是跟妮姆芙collab来着?..
歌词文件夹里有Thumbs.db //both fixed
SB右上角那存在感略小。。 //根據烤多貓說小才有美感.

[Normal]
00:01:504 (2,4) - 我觉得你把whistle加这边更好听。//好
01:27:433 (2) - 结尾大鼓落下了 //恩
02:13:504 (4,5,1) - 我感觉可以稍微修一下。。。//感覺沒問題
02:39:218 (3,4,1) - 我知道你跟hit-hat但是感觉这放normal真的挺不好理解的。。//算了 removed
02:44:790 我感觉好像没换军鼓啊。。//加了點音量
我都快听睡着了你怎么做完的。。 //kenewa himitsu dayo!

[Hard]
00:24:218 (5) - 我觉得这边做个小跳比蹲舒服 [color=#BF00FF//ok[/color]
01:07:718 (5,1,2) - 我觉得你干脆2放上NC然后1的摘下去。。反正我是读错了 //也可
fanzhen0019
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
1,723 posts
Joined July 2010
fanzhen0019
a quick mod
[General]
没啥 要不要换张HDBG

[H]
00:14:361 (5) - nc
02:38:147 - 这段break可以考虑下anti jump转一圈转回来
04:24:647 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 其实可以考虑跟前面04:14:576 (1,2,3,1) - 一样摆开了下

[N]
01:03:647 (3,4) - 不完全一样是故意的吗
02:16:504 (1) - 其实新手会被这样的东西吓到 然后break. 不如和其他的一样 比如这里02:13:504 (4) -
不过也没啥...自从看到后面很多这样的pattern
Megurine Luka
2,580 posts
Joined November 2010
Megurine Luka
From your request via PM!

[General]
  1. Should mention which part/diff is Nymph's work in diff name or creator's word? Or ppl might not notice his work ovo
  2. Should add 2 after Vocaloid since Hatsune Miku is a production of Vocaloid2
  3. Nothing else I suppose

[N]
  1. 00:12:218 (1,2,3,4) - I might think this is kinda difficult for Normal players cuz they basically don't hit the circle based on approaching circle.
  2. 00:33:647 (3) - I think this kind of hidden should be avoided in a Normal diff 0.0
  3. 02:05:361 (3) - make it curved and encircle the head of 02:06:647 (4) - ?
  4. 04:25:504 (1,2,3) - use the same spacing as before?

[H]
  1. 00:11:361 (2) - use the same pattern as 00:09:647 (2,3) - ?
  2. 00:37:718 (x) - add a circle? kinda follow vocal
  3. 00:57:647 (1) - I think ctrl+g flows better
  4. 01:14:361 (4) - ^
  5. 02:16:933 (6) - ^
  6. 02:58:076 (6) - ^


Nothing else =3=
kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,231 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

fanzhen0019 wrote:

a quick mod
[General]
没啥 要不要换张HDBG //找不到要跪...

[H]
00:14:361 (5) - nc //k
02:38:147 - 这段break可以考虑下anti jump转一圈转回来 //Nymph.
04:24:647 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 其实可以考虑跟前面04:14:576 (1,2,3,1) - 一样摆开了下 //這邊還是像這樣搞.

[N]
01:03:647 (3,4) - 不完全一样是故意的吗 //修了下
02:16:504 (1) - 其实新手会被这样的东西吓到 然后break. 不如和其他的一样 比如这里02:13:504 (4) -
不过也没啥...自从看到后面很多这样的pattern //我倒是覺得在超慢歌這樣放還是無問題的..

Megurine Luka wrote:

From your request via PM!

[General]
  1. Should mention which part/diff is Nymph's work in diff name or creator's word? Or ppl might not notice his work ovo //will do it
  2. Should add 2 after Vocaloid since Hatsune Miku is a production of Vocaloid2 //k
  3. Nothing else I suppose

[N]
  1. 00:12:218 (1,2,3,4) - I might think this is kinda difficult for Normal players cuz they basically don't hit the circle based on approaching circle. //k
  2. 00:33:647 (3) - I think this kind of hidden should be avoided in a Normal diff 0.0//nope, it's clear enough since there is a glimsp between (1) and (3)-
  3. 02:05:361 (3) - make it curved and encircle the head of 02:06:647 (4) - ? //hum..not suppose to do this.
  4. 04:25:504 (1,2,3) - use the same spacing as before? //I would like to keep this, for now at least.

[H]
  1. 00:11:361 (2) - use the same pattern as 00:09:647 (2,3) - ? //nope, I would do more variation here.
  2. 00:37:718 (x) - add a circle? kinda follow vocal //hum, saw my reply on dna's mod \o.o/
  3. 00:57:647 (1) - I think ctrl+g flows better //k
  4. 01:14:361 (4) - ^ //did this intentionally 0.0
  5. 02:16:933 (6) - ^
  6. 02:58:076 (6) - ^//Nymph 0.0

Thanks~
Nothing else =3=
Dark_Ai
1,832 posts
Joined July 2010
Dark_Ai
Hey Mod from my Queues ~



General
  • • may add epilepsy warning?

Normal
  • • 00:12:218 (1) - try to make a better stack with 00:09:647 (1) end
    • 00:13:933 (1) - same here
    • 00:24:218 (1,2,3,4) - may make it more symmetrical like this? http://puu.sh/3GAFR.jpg or better. I think it looks better imo
    • 01:01:933 (1,2) - these notes feels kinda wrong, may try to make like this? http://puu.sh/3GALP.jpg I think this way fits more with the rhythm
    • 01:13:933 (2) - may try to stack this better with 01:11:790 (4) end? here the code if you want
    SPOILER
    254,308,71790,2,0,P|221:298|184:296,1,71.9999978027344,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
    104,348,72647,6,0,P|62:349|24:340,2,71.9999978027344,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    184,296,73933,2,0,B|196:259|196:259|175:207|193:148,1,143.999995605469,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    • 01:34:290 (3) - delete this note because it doesnt even fit with the Rhythm and also it's better/easier for newbews too remember this is the easiest Diff
    • 01:53:361 (5,1,2) - what do you think to make it lihe this?
    SPOILER
    I think it look much better imo
    • 02:16:504 (1) - hmmm I think to add a circle only here it better instead of this slider. It may confuse the beginner because it's hard to read as a slider. It's more like 2 circle one after the other. I'm note sure if this a problem but it's only my suggestion ;P
    • 03:02:361 (1) - same here
    • 03:27:218 (2,3) - actually I dont really like this.. but well :P
    • 04:25:504 (1) - stack this better with 04:23:361 (1) endpoint

Hard
  • • 03:47:790 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern feels kinda out of the Rhythm or vocal whatever *hides* What do you think about this way?
    SPOILER
    I think it fits really much better imo
    04:25:290 (4) - this Note feels really out of the rhythm here may delete it?
    04:34:504 (1) - Let the spinner begin here it fit better?

well it's a nice song
sorry for my noob mod >< and good luck with rank~ :3
ts8zs
2,123 posts
Joined May 2011
ts8zs
感觉很难mod的样子XD
同一首歌第一人……不同mode不算XD （其实我有夏祭 taiko.ver jubeat.ver miku.ver …… Full.ver 还没动 XD）
[Hard]
STR2?
00:01:933 (3) - NC?
01:04:290 (3) - remove?
01:33:647 (1) - Ctrl+G?(感觉再跳一下就是insane了:3)
[Normal]
STR2?
02:54:218 (3) - blanket
04:04:933 (2,3,4) - 不顺着弧线摆么？
就这些……好少
DexFrild
304 posts
Joined December 2010
DexFrild
Hi :з

[Hard]
03:48:647 - pleeease add slider here :cry:
T_T
[Normal]
No problem ^_^

Good luck~
Nemis
847 posts
Joined May 2012
Nemis
Here as requested <3
• Suggestion
• Must fix/High suggestion

[General]
• Add the epilepsy warning, it's needed for flash like 01:08:790 (1) - this one

[Hard]
• Since you used stack leniency 1 stack manually each stack that's not readable (notes under sliders' ends or on sliders' heads). They are hard to read, especially with hidden...
• Fix all the stacks like 02:10:076 (4,7) - this one since stack leniency 0 doesn't stack them
• The greenline at 229076 is not necessary

• 00:11:361 (2) - Reverse this slider (CTRL+G), it would flow a lot with the next pattern (00:12:218 (1,2,3,4) - this one)
• 00:23:790 (4) - Move this note at x:264 y:80 beetween 00:23:361 (3,1) - these two elements
• 00:36:218 (3) - I don't see the necessity to make this slider 3/4, end its end 1/4 before
• 00:37:504 (1,2) - Change this rhythm is the one in the screenshot below, it follows the vocals:
SPOILER

• 00:54:218 (3) - Reverse this slider (CTRL+G), it flows a lot with 00:53:361 (2) - this slider
• 01:08:790 (1) - until 01:36:218 (3) - add a clap on each white tick between the downbeat, it follows the music very well:
SPOILER
• 01:14:361 (4) - Reverse this slider (CTRL+G), it would flow better
• 01:21:218 (4) - Change this slider with 01:20:790 (3) - this one reversed for a better flow:
SPOILER
• 01:33:647 (1,2) - Improve this blanket a little bit
• 02:28:504 (1,2,3) - Fix this blanket a little bit
• 02:31:076 (1,2,3) - Improve this triangle
• 02:36:647 (6) - Reverse this slider (CTRL+G), it flows better with 02:36:218 (5) - this one and you did the same 02:20:790 (8,9) - here
• 02:49:504 (1) - until this KIAI's end you are missing the clap hitsounds like 02:46:290 (5) - this one (S:1 clap), they fits the music a lot and I don't understand why you should stop using them from 02:49:504 (1) - here, so add them
• 02:50:790 (4) - Here is missing a clap
• 03:25:933 (1,2) - Fix this blanket, 03:27:218 (2) - this note is not so visible
• 03:39:647 (1) - until 04:07:076 (5) - here I'd say the same as I said before, add the S:1 claps where they are needed
• 03:46:504 (3,1) - Improve this stack, the note is not so visible
• 03:48:433 (4) - Add a 1/2 slider after this note, it follows the vocals:
SPOILER

[Normal]
• Since you used stack leniency 1 stack manually each stack that's not readable (notes under sliders' ends or on sliders' heads). They are hard to read, especially with hidden...
• Fix all the stacks like 00:22:076 (2,4) - this one since stack leniency 0 doesn't stack them
• The greenline at 273861 is not necessary

• 00:20:361 (4) - Move this note at x:368 y:200, it flows better with 00:20:790 (1) - this slider
• 02:54:218 (3,4) - Improve this blanket a little bit
• 02:57:647 (3) - Curve this slider and then make a blanket with 02:56:576 (2) - this slider
SPOILER
• 03:43:504 (6,1,2) - Stack these notes manually, if you play the map you'll see this:
SPOILER
• 03:58:504 (3,4) - Improve this blanket a little bit
• 04:31:933 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is like a stream, I'd not put it in a normal, especially when the normal is the easiest difficulty of the mapset]
Wow, awesome map! Good luck kanpakyin :D
LunarSakuya
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined August 2011
LunarSakuya
hey

General
- In your skin, you're missing "reversearrow.png"

Normal
00:33:647 (3) - you could stack this on the head of (1) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/880544 would look neater imo
00:44:361 (4,5,6) - Try this rhythm instead http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/880568 , it bothered me that (5) kept going past the vocals, a pretty strong part too
03:37:933 (3) - not really important but moving this a little to the right will make a neater blanket with (1)'s tail imo
:)

Hard
00:37:718 - Add note? the vocals seem pretty prominent here
01:14:361 (4) - Ctrl+G, better cursor/oval flow from this to the next note imo
04:00:218 (1) - Ctrl+H and adjust around the head of (3) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/880653 creates a better sense of directional flow i feel. After coming off from 03:59:790 (5) - I have the mentality of shooting towards the left after notes like 03:57:647 (1,2) -
04:14:361 (4) - NC, delete NC on next note; similar part as 04:24:647 (1) -

Very lovely map <3
Feel free to call me back
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