1. Hard (4,71 stars, 374 notes)
2. Normal (2,97 stars, 224 notes)
3. Symbolic (4,78 stars, 437 notes)

Gens wrote:

[Overall]
- Could you lower down the beat volume abit? Done.

[Timing]
Use offset 7,115. I tried it, but it still felt a little off to me, will look at that again later.

[Easy]
- Overall, good job, but it may be a little boring for some people
00:20:69 (8,1) - Spacing problems like these should not occur in Easy! Done.
It'd be fine for a... Normal I guess.

03:04:04 (4) - Maybe divide this slider into 2? Done.

[Normal]
- Looks more like a [Hard] D: Yeah, I was starting to get that feeling too.
I'll wait until you finish this difficulty to mod it.

Some Tips:
- You can set different hitsounds for both points on a slider by double-clicking on a single point. Thanks, I didn't know that!
- Use Distance Snap for your first map! Done, for the most part. Some notes I've left unsnapped on purpose.

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Keep going~
I really liked what you did with those hitsounds.
Unfortunately, I can't star this until you finish at least 2 difficulties.
Good Luck!

Armin wrote:

[Hard]
00:12:80 Stack manually with (6) End Done.
00:17:62 (10) New combo? Done.
00:29:00 Stack manually with the Done.
00:30:32 Maybe new combo? Done.
00:23:31 ^ Done.
00:37:00- 00:44:33 I don't like this part. Maybe you can add spinners when you listen the singer that says "Crussssh" XD Gonna take a look at that tomorrow.
00:59:22 This is an illegal slider. Make a new slider that starts on 00:58:35 and ends on 00:59:20 Assuming you meant spinner - Fixed.
00:59:89 Replace this break. Done.
01:22:87 New combo? Done.
01:29:88^ Done.
02:20:24 unintuitive bpm change Hmm, agreed. Fixed.

Offset maybe is wrong. Try 7.106

I'm going to work also to mod the hitsounds.
Star.

Matma Rex wrote:

Here we go. Great song.

[Easy]
Overall difficulty is too low IMO. I missed few notes because they appeared too early :/
Also, IMO this should be renamed to [Normal]. I'll crank up the difficulties a little and make it Normal.

00:27:04 (1) - add clap or finish to the end. Fixed.
00:45:655 ~ 00:57:479 - I like this part myself, but notes quickly after spinners do not match Easy. In Normal they'll be all right.
01:06:02 (1) - I would add clap/finish only to the end, but it's fine now. Also, if I tell you to add clap/finish to end, you can chage slider to be like this one. Fixed.
01:10:18 (1,2,3) - sounds weird. See screenshot below - it's how I would do it. Agreed, fixed.
01:26:60 (1) - add clap or finish to the end. Fixed.
01:58:35 (1,2) - okay, there's nothing wrong with this jump, but in Normal. Jumps should not exist in Easy.
02:16:09 (1) - add clap or finish to the end. Fixed.
02:23:10 (1) - ^ Fixed.
02:25:50 (1) - ^ Fixed.
03:02:29 (2,3,4,5) - too many sounds IMO. Agreed, fixed.

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[Hard]
Oh damn, it's actually hard.
I really like your mapping style here. Thank you a lot! That's really nice to hear when you're just getting started.
00:22:88 (7) - needed? I would delete it. Yes, but changed it into a slider.
00:26:82 (12) - maybe just circle here? It's timed correctly on spies, I think.
01:11:28 (4) - circle here. Fixed.
01:11:71 (5) - 1/4 back (on blue tick), longer by 1/4 too. But I'm not sure - it's weird part.
01:22:44 (7) - needed? I would delete it. Yes, but changed it into a slider.
01:26:39 (12) - maybe just circle here? It's timed correctly on spies, I think.
02:23:32 (8) - seems a lil bit misaligned.Fixed.
02:30:77 (1) - 1/2 forward, if it's mean to go with words. Correct, fixed.
02:44:77 (1) - ^ Correct, fixed.


And, surely, star :D

Gens wrote:

[Overall]
- Hello. Hello again!

[Timing]
Yes, I know it's my own offset, but how about adding +2? I just noticed ;p I'm not sure at all, but it does sound better. I'll keep it for now.

[Normal]
00:31:64 (1,1) - Eeeuh, the other jumps are OK with me, but could you lower down this one a bit?Made it match more with the other jumps.
00:35:14 (1) - Doesn't sounds too good... Maybe extend it by 1 beat? Agreed, fixed.
01:10:83 (2,3) - I'm not sure about these parts... Shouldn't these be in 1/3s? I dunno, just sayin'. Nah, I think me and Matma got them right now.
01:58:35 (1,2) - Maybe you should make the (2) New combo, as you did in [Hard], just for consistency. Agreed, fixed.

[Hard]
00:12:81 (7) - Hidden repeat slider. Sorry, but this is unrankable, and therefore you need to move the slider. You're right, fixed.
00:43:46 (1) - Meh, auto can only make 1000 Bonus on this spinner. Ever heard about the guideline? Auto must get 2000 Bonus, otherwise the spinner is unrankable. I really like the spinner though, I don't want you to change it, but maybe you'll need to. Oh, I thought it was 1000. I made it start half a beat earlier, won't feel very different.
01:09:31 (9) - Maybe the slider arrow is kinda hidden by (7). It could still be doable at first try though. I think this one should be fine.
02:12:59 (17,1) - This jump can be frustrating rather than fun. Agreed, fixed.
03:02:30 (2) - 2x'd sliders can be no fun for anyone ): Agreed, fixed, I was too focused on making the map harder than it needs to be.

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You really have some potential for mapping. This map is quite good to be one of your firsts. Don't let the nazi mods whimper you down! Thank you very much.
Here you go, the star I promised~ And kudos to you!

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Timing]

BPM fine. Offset 7.120 <- Then resnap all notes. Done.

[Normal]

Redid a lot of beat placements in this difficulty to fix spacing issues and jumps.

00:29:45 (4,1,1) - No JUMPS on normal.
00:31:20 (3,1,1) - ^
01:10:73 (2) - Sounds bad. Try to change it. Done.
01:22:00 (4,1,1) - No JUMPS on normal.
01:23:76 (3,1,1) - ^
01:58:36 (1,1) - ^

[Hard]

00:43:25 (1) - Sounds bad. It's either that or a Auto+1k spinner. Anyone have a good suggestion on what I can do to fix it?
01:07:34 (1) - Remove new combo. I don't know where this suddenly came from, but fixed.
01:07:78 (1) - ^ I don't know where this suddenly came from, but fixed.
01:11:72 (5) - Sounds bad. You're right. I extended it by 1/4.
01:42:81 (1) - ^ It's either that or a Auto+1k spinner. Anyone have a good suggestion on what I can do to fix it?
02:18:29 (12) - New combo. Done.

Kiai time is bad placed. Fixed.

Good job for a first map, star.

1. 00:50:90 (1) - Move 1/2 forward and cut by 1/2,
2. 01:10:83 (2) - Cut by 1/4,
3. 01:58:78 (1) - Remove new combo?,
4. 02:36:01 (1) - Move 1/2 forward and cut by 1/2,
5. 02:46:52 (1) - Move 1/2 forward and cut by 1/2,
6. 02:50:02 (1) - Move 1/2 forward and cut by 1/2.

1. 00:43:24 (1) - Illegal (Auto 2000+),
2. 01:27:69 (1,2,3,4,5) - Remove hitsounds from Red Ticks and place on White Ticks,
3. 01:33:38 (11) - Move 1/2 forward and cut by 1/2,
4. 01:42:80 (1) - Illegal (Auto 2000+),
5. 01:58:78 (1) - Remove new combo?,
6. 02:39:95 (1) - Illegal (Auto 2000+).

Lissette wrote:

Nice map
star ^^

suggestions

Normal
01:10:84 (2) Make this slider end at 01:11:06 (next white tick)
01:11:39 (3) Start this slider at 01:11:49 (next white tick), and ends at 01:12:37 (sounds better imo ^^ )
01:43:79 (1)(2) move to the next white tick

Hard
01:42:81 (1) Remove the spinner and place a note here 01:43:03 and stack it with the next note ^^ Thanks a lot, that fixed the Auto+1k problem nicely!

Thanks for the help!

SteRRuM wrote:

Hi!
[Timing]
BPM: 137.000 (fine)
Offset: Try 7 110.
Resnap all notes on all diffs.
[Normal]

1. 00:50:90 (1) - Move 1/2 forward and cut by 1/2, Fixed.
2. 01:10:83 (2) - Cut by 1/4, Fixed.
3. 01:58:78 (1) - Remove new combo?, Fixed.
4. 02:36:01 (1) - Move 1/2 forward and cut by 1/2, Fixed.
5. 02:46:52 (1) - Move 1/2 forward and cut by 1/2, Fixed.
6. 02:50:02 (1) - Move 1/2 forward and cut by 1/2. Fixed.

[Hard]

1. 00:43:24 (1) - Illegal (Auto 2000+), Fixed.
2. 01:27:69 (1,2,3,4,5) - Remove hitsounds from Red Ticks and place on White Ticks, Fixed.
3. 01:33:38 (11) - Move 1/2 forward and cut by 1/2, Fixed.
4. 01:42:80 (1) - Illegal (Auto 2000+), Fixed.
5. 01:58:78 (1) - Remove new combo?, Fixed.
6. 02:39:95 (1) - Illegal (Auto 2000+). Fixed.

Thanks Sterrum!

EEeee wrote:

Normal
01:10:83 (2) - make this end 1/4 back, on the white tick, ( this note is the second "c'mon" which is faster than01:10:17 (1 )but 01:10:17 (1) is just fine make sure u space 3 afterward Fixed.
01:26:59 (1) - just make it rebound 1 more time Fixed.

Nice diff, really liked the ending Thanks. ^_^

Hard
00:15:65 (6) - new combo this or space it, but new combo would be cooler and proper Fixed.

Thanks for the help and suggestions!