Hi! Random mod!!
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Difficulties Name: I was looking that and I think it sounds more fitting the following ones: Next day! -
Next month! (yeah, instead of Next week) - Next year!
With that, I mean that Next week! doesn't fit a lot in that sequence, I think
Next month! is better. Well, take that in consideration at least, please.
[Next day!]
- Maybe add a little storyboard with each mapper section? Or at least, add that information in ''Creators Words'' xD• 00:13:396 (1,1) - The distance between the spinner and the object are a bit low imo, even if the BPM is a bit low, you should try other veriety to fix that. You can maybe use a single note in 00:17:614 - instead of the 1/1 slider, I think the beat in 00:17:146 is not totally necessary to be followed.
• 00:35:896 (1,2) - I'd avoid 1/1 stacks in this difficulty, looking that you have some stacked 1/2 patterns later. This can cause confusion in New players, definetly, so yeah.. Unstack this please
• 00:36:364 (2) - Make this Slider 1/2 bigger, actually is not following anything in the music. Doing that, you are going to follow vocals, and this sound in the instrumental that sound like a bell
• 00:48:786 - I'd add a Soft (addition) Whistle here in this reverse arrow. It'll follow properly the ''bells''
• 00:52:536 - (^) (Apply that in similar places if you agree with me)
• 00:53:474 (3,4) - I don't recommend the usage of compress pattern, and less in 1/2.. it'll cause confusion in new players. I suggest you to keep the spacing consistent and use a 1/2 slider instead to make it easier for New players
• 00:59:099 - Same as before, I'd use a soft (addition) Whistle here.
• 01:10:349 (3) - That normal whistle at the slider end sounds really random to me :/. Was it that intentional?
• 01:32:146 (1,2) - Yeah.. Avoid 1/1 Stacks as I mentioned before, to make it the life ''better'' to new players
• 01:43:630 (1,1) - If I listen properly the music, the first Spinner should finish 1/2 back (in 01:46:677), and the second one should start 1/2 back as well (in 01:46:911), this is to follow better the background in the music. In addition, you did something similar in 00:39:880 (1,1).. So, it'll be consistent too.
• 01:51:833 (2,3) - Well, In this case a compress pattern fits properly because they are two ''long'' Sliders in 1/2.. I'd use a 0.5x between these sliders, as it was done in 01:40:114 (2,3) for example
• 01:59:333 (2,3) - (^)
• 02:04:021 (3,4) - Avoid 1/1 stacks, inmediatly you have a 1/2 stack and these kind of changes can be hard for new players as I said before
• 02:32:146 (1,2) - (^)
• 02:49:021 (1,1) - As I said in my first suggestion here, the distance between the Spinner end and the note is pretty short. You should try other variation here :/
• 03:04:021 (1,1) - (^)
• 03:11:286 (3,4,5,6) - Yes, this compressed pattern with notes in 1/2 is not a good thing for a Easy, believe me.. You can reduce a bit the spacing but not that much as you did here, I recommend you to use a (1/2) Slider instead of (4,5) (You can keep the last note if you want)
Last thing: Try to keep consistency in hitsounds between the Kiai sections, guys. It is pretty weird to listen Normal Whistles in the second chorus but not in the others.
- Good, but inconsistent sometimes. I know that is a Collab, but I know that you guys have a similar style, I hope you can fix Spacing/hitsounds inconsistencies (I mentioned most of them in my mod).
Btw, the diff. is a bit hard for an Easy, but it fits for the easiest diff. in the mapset anyway [Next week!]
• 00:19:021 (1) - I find this combo a bit short (the same for the previous one), so I'd remove this one.
• 00:36:599 (3,1) - The flow between these Sliders is a bit weird to me. I think a Ctrl+H in (3) with some spacing fix will make the flow better
• 00:41:755 (4) - Dunno if that Whistle at the slider end is really necessary.. If I were you, I'd remove it
• 00:42:927 (2,3) - Swap these Whistle placement (?
• 01:31:911 (4,2) - It will looks much better if you fix this overlap, it affects a bit during the gameplay. So, yeah.. fix it please
• 01:45:505 (4) - Same as 00:36:599
• 01:46:677 (2,3) - Same as 00:42:927
• 02:10:349 (2) - You should make a flip vertically (Ctrl+J) in this Slider, the pattern between (3,1,2) will be nicer to see, and the flow between (2,1) will increase after to do that.
• 02:20:896 (3) - I'd place this note in
x:100 y:272 to give it other variety to the map. In addition, looks better for me
• 02:31:442
(x) - I find the usage of a note coherent here.. You should give it a try
• 02:41:052 (1) - Remove this New combo, it doesn't make to much sense imo
• 03:16:911
(Spin) - Instead of a Soft finish, use a Whistle in this Spinner. When he says ''When Can I see you again?'' you always place Normal Whistles, so this is for consistency.. If you want, you can also place a Normal finish
- Pretty Good.. I'm not going to nazi'ing you anyway xD..[Next year!]
• 00:19:021 (1,2,3) - The music here, is similar as the pattern placed in 00:22:771 (1,2,3,4) but you used diferent alternatives, in the first you used an antijump in the second a little jump. Would be better if you are consistent with that and use the same alternative in both places, I personally think that the jumpy is the better option.
• 00:36:247 (2,3) - *So Nazi* - Move (2) to
x:88 y:260 and (3) to
x:68 y:268.. Doing that, these notes will fit exactly with the curve of the previous (1) if you know what I mean
- Some jumps look a bit random, but this is not that critical, they fits in some way still xD. Other than that, nice diff!That's all frome me!!
I'll probably check this some day in the future if I have time
Good Luck! 
Tomorrow!
