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DWB feat. Fade - One Reason (TV Size)

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Topic Starter
Sieg
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 24 января 2014 г. at 2:28:46

Artist: DWB feat. Fade
Title: One Reason (TV Size)
Source: Deadman Wonderland
Tags: manglobe inc opening shiro ganta black hearts and dollar signs -bakari- evilelvisv2
BPM: 109
Filesize: 14803kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Bakari's Easy (1,75 stars, 80 notes)
  2. EE's Insane (5 stars, 327 notes)
  3. Hard (4,92 stars, 226 notes)
  4. Insane (5 stars, 243 notes)
  5. Normal (4,2 stars, 124 notes)
Download: DWB feat. Fade - One Reason (TV Size)
Download: DWB feat. Fade - One Reason (TV Size) (no video)
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riffy
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Topic Starter
Sieg
\w/
Topic Starter
Sieg
:o
mafu-chan
good map ;)
Topic Starter
Sieg
nope
Aka
NSFW!
riffy
IRC mod

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11:59 *Sieg is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/267557 DWB feat. Fade - One Reason (TV Size)]
11:59 -Bakari-: глянуть или моддить? \:D/
12:00 Sieg: как желание
12:00 Sieg: ;)
12:01 -Bakari-: ДА СМЕНИ ТЫ УЖЕ БГ [10]
12:01 Sieg: лол
12:01 Sieg: забыл
12:01 -Bakari-: найти? :D
12:02 Sieg: ага если не сложно кинь пару я выберу что-нибудь :)
12:02 -Bakari-: http://konachan.com/post/show/118392/de ... ychromatic
12:02 Sieg: ах да еще один момент
12:02 -Bakari-: http://konachan.com/post/show/149126/bl ... anta-short
12:03 Sieg: подумай может добавить чуть-чуть 1\2 в твоей дифе, а то мой нормал слегка высоковат по звездам вышел, упрощал как мог, ну необязательно но подумай и разнообразие и сложность..
12:04 -Bakari-: у меня есть такая штука, сейчас линкну
12:05 Sieg: 1й ничего так
12:06 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/3MO1L.png
12:07 Sieg: а ну
12:07 Sieg: акей
12:07 Sieg: тогда все отлично
12:09 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/3MO7Y.jpg
12:09 Sieg: ага
12:09 -Bakari-: если что, надпись в левом углу можно обрезать сделав 1024x768
12:10 Sieg: не 1024 не надо
12:11 -Bakari-: чомоднадо?
12:11 Sieg: :3
12:11 -Bakari-: go irc
12:11 Sieg: надо надо
12:11 Sieg: двай
12:12 -Bakari-: квик тэйк-э-лук и все такое \:D/
12:12 -Bakari-: ну тэги будут под логом, ты знаешь
12:12 Sieg: с чего начнем
12:12 Sieg: да теги... тоже забыл
12:12 -Bakari-: [General]
12:13 -Bakari-: цвета под новый бг надо?
12:13 Sieg: подберу
12:13 -Bakari-: ну, как на счет тикрейта 2?
12:14 Sieg: слайдер тик убран же
12:14 Sieg: толку нет
12:14 -Bakari-: он же помогает читать слайдеры и ритм
12:14 Sieg: ну там св не меняется
12:14 Sieg: так что не критично
12:15 -Bakari-: ну тогда едем дальше [инс]
12:15 Sieg: уху
12:15 -Bakari-: 00:10:294 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - такие штуки выызывают дикую ярость у игроков. ЛЮТУЮ ЯРОСТЬ.
12:16 -Bakari-: попробуй вклинить пару слайдеров там?
12:17 -Bakari-: 00:16:349 (2,3) - 1/4 джампы? бпм чуть быстроват для них. может хоть спэйсинг поубавишь?
12:17 Sieg: отвалился
12:17 -Bakari-: 00:16:349 (2,3) - 1/4 джампы? бпм чуть быстроват для них. может хоть спэйсинг поубавишь?
12:18 Sieg: не хочу чтоб был легкий нис
12:18 -Bakari-: 00:17:588 (7,9) - <3
12:19 Sieg: 3х для лоу бпм, вобщем я не думаю что это сильно сложно
12:19 Sieg: 3
12:19 -Bakari-: 00:22:267 (11,1) - ну а тут я не знаю
12:19 -Bakari-: это уже не так красиво и не так аккуратно :<
12:20 Sieg: делал специально, ну можно и двинуть
12:21 -Bakari-: 00:43:322 (4,6) - а если поаккуратнее+бланкет? http://puu.sh/3MOut.jpg
12:22 Sieg: да, неплохо
12:22 -Bakari-: 00:45:523 (4,5) - плохо. :< ты его с разгону и на таком ритме не прочитаешь :<
12:23 Sieg: нк можно
12:23 -Bakari-: ну хотя бы
12:26 -Bakari-: AR 9 / HP 8 /OD 7
12:26 -Bakari-: и соответственно на харде по такому же шаблону
12:26 -Bakari-: чтоб ритм был более играбельным
12:26 Sieg: од 7 хм :\
12:27 -Bakari-: ну блин
12:27 -Bakari-: это как 220 бпм
12:28 Sieg: ну насчет этого посмотри кто что скажет
12:29 -Bakari-: ах да, надо русский перевод песни?
12:29 -Bakari-: [http://pesenki.ru/authors/koroleva-nata6a/malen_kaa-strana-lyrics.shtml вот тут, короче]
12:29 Sieg: ну я и так способен понять что там
12:29 Sieg: лол
12:30 Sieg: надо замапать игроря да
12:30 -Bakari-: так-то хард норм
12:30 -Bakari-: но блин
12:30 -Bakari-: не многовато ли 1/4?
12:31 Sieg: ну поменьше чем в инсе да и спейсинг тут
12:31 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/3MOLZ.jpg
12:31 -Bakari-: похоже на хард? \:D/
12:31 Sieg: да и я вроде делал 4 максимум
12:31 Sieg: так что выбить одинм пальчем реально
12:31 Sieg: лол
12:32 -Bakari-: а еще, 01:21:716 (6,1) - это напрягает
12:32 Sieg: этот рипит слайдер
12:33 Sieg: сложно там разместить
12:33 Sieg: чтоб потом уехать влево
12:33 Sieg: 00:45:523 (5,6) - а вот еще такое, это сойдет?
12:34 -Bakari-: там нет реверса
12:35 Sieg: ну да ну да
12:36 -Bakari-: короче, ритм и расстановка норм
12:36 -Bakari-: но блин, это реально слишком на инс смахивает :<
12:37 Sieg: ты еще нормал не видел :<
12:38 -Bakari-: ВОТ ОНО, ВОТ ХОРОШИЙ ХАРД
12:39 Sieg: :<
12:39 -Bakari-: 00:04:239 (1) - уже сто раз высказался, что таие слайдеры ну не для нормалов. :<
12:39 -Bakari-: Короче, ставим тут ар 6
12:39 -Bakari-: и это, блин
12:39 -Bakari-: как сказать-то
12:40 -Bakari-: тут не подойдут стандартные имена
12:40 Sieg: ну можно что-то кастомное
12:40 Sieg: насчет таких слайдеров
12:40 Sieg: да я сам их не очень люблю для нормала
12:40 Sieg: но
12:40 Sieg: такой тут ритм
12:40 -Bakari-: ну вот, видишь :D/
12:41 -Bakari-: можно просто заменять их длинными слайдероми с кучей изгибов
12:41 -Bakari-: да хрен знает, я аниме не смотрел. ничего придумать не могу :<
12:43 Sieg: я тоже не смотрел, только мангу читал
12:43 Sieg: она как раз закончилась
12:44 Sieg: ох
12:44 Sieg: 00:06:166 (3) -
12:45 Sieg: надо этот и подобные двинуть на 1\4 назад, хз почему они поехали
12:45 -Bakari-: да, двигай \:D/
12:45 -Bakari-: мне только слайдеры не нравятся
12:45 -Bakari-: ОЧЕНЬ НЕ НРАВЯТСЯ
12:45 Sieg: почему :<
12:46 -Bakari-: 00:48:276 (4) -
12:46 -Bakari-: мне надо сделать копипасту, что такие слайдеры нечитаемы и реверс появляется слишкомпоздно
12:46 Sieg: ага
12:47 -Bakari-: и все :<
12:47 -Bakari-: надо лог?
12:47 Sieg: отлично же
12:47 Sieg: с этими
12:47 Sieg: да
12:47 Sieg: слайдерами пока оставлю
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We've fixed:
  1. NSFW BG
  2. Diff settings
  3. Minor flow mistakes
  4. Rhythm mistakes
Tags: デッドマン・ワンダーランド - japanese title / Manglobe Inc. / マングローブ - name of the studio / Shiro - BAT character. that girl with white hairs. / Ganta Igarashi - character. / Black Hearts and Dollar Signs - details here


list of tags
Manglobe Inc. Ganta Igarash Shiro rock Black Hearts and Dollar Signs Black Hearts and Dollar Signs デッドマン・ワンダーランド マングローブ
Topic Starter
Sieg

Aka- wrote:

NSFW!
:3
YunoFanatic
Sieg my favo mapper <3

[Bakari's easy]
00:54:468 this can be more beautiful
01:24:468 slider move atleast i tick then end of spiiner decrease one tick

[Normal]
- Not really much fan of blue tick beats in normal but i think its good enough
00:10:294 move x:256 y:224
00:11:533 then snap plz
00:16:762 click then ctrl g
00:35:337 ^
Nc normal makes me wanna play 5 times

[Hard]
00:22:542 remove nc
00:23:092 add nc
00:41:257 add note i think to avoid overlapping

[Insane]
I cant really say much from here but i think this is a good mapset specially insane is hitting the rank button :P ill support this ill leave a star for token of reading this mod :D
Topic Starter
Sieg
Thanks YunoFanatic :3
fixed things on normal
neonat
Insane

If you're following the vocals, you could add a note at 00:53:643
If you're following beats, you could put a note at 00:53:780
01:26:808 - add a note? Somehow I feel an awkward gap here, possible due to the vocals, messes me up

Normal

01:09:331 (4,5) - blanket it better?
Topic Starter
Sieg
Thanks neonat
Ekusukariba
From your M4M queue.

Bakari's Easy
01:03:551 (3) - I feel it comes in a bit awkward.

Hard
00:21:854 (1) - add NC
00:22:542 (6) - remove NC
00:23:092 (1) - add NC here instead since you're starting on vocal.

All I could find, gl. (。◕‿◕。)
Topic Starter
Sieg
Thanks Ekusukariba
Yamadron
Sine the current map has not been updated yet.
[Hard]

00:21:854 (1) - add New Combo
00:22:542 (6) - remove New Combo

00:35:753 (1) - remove new combo
00:36:303 (3) - add new combo .. Why? Following the the rhythm of the vocals. If you follow the rhythm of the background music (guitar), ignore this. But leading vocals is more dominating in this song.

[Insane]

00:27:358 (1) - remove new combo
00:27:496 (3) - add new combo -(Same reason as for hard diff)

Some other parts regarding same issue. If that it how you want it, it is perfectly fine. If you find them a problem, I will continue the list.
riffy

YunoFanatic wrote:

Sieg my favo mapper <3

[Bakari's easy]
00:54:468 this can be more beautiful nah, it looks good enough to me.
01:24:468 slider move atleast i tick then end of spiiner decrease one tick whaaaaat? could you explain this to me ;_;


Ekusukariba wrote:

Bakari's Easy
01:03:551 (3) - I feel it comes in a bit awkward. right, fixed!
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osu file format v12

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Title:One Reason (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:One Reason (TV Size)
Artist:DWB feat. Fade
ArtistUnicode:DWB feat. Fade
Creator:Sieg
Version:Bakari's Easy
Source:Deadman Wonderland
Tags:デッドマン・ワンダーランド manglobe inc opening マングローブ shiro ganta black hearts and dollar signs -bakari-
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412,100,72909,2,0,P|364:68|192:120,1,250,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,204,74835,1,6,0:0:0:0:
156,304,75386,5,12,0:0:0:0:
236,244,75936,2,0,P|288:236|340:248,2,99.9999999999999,2|12|6,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,204,77588,2,0,P|88:212|36:200,1,99.9999999999999,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,108,78689,2,0,P|48:64|56:4,1,99.9999999999999,8|6,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,40,79790,6,0,P|176:84|168:144,1,99.9999999999999,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,220,80890,2,0,P|124:264|136:320,1,99.9999999999999,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,352,81716,2,0,P|244:368|416:168,1,350,12|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,92,84193,5,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84468,12,12,88597,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
Sieg
NC and other stuff fixed
Irreversible
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17:09 Sieg: hey, hello :3
17:09 Sieg: can we have m4m or something? I need some more mods on my map
17:12 Irreversible: hello
17:12 Irreversible: ehm
17:12 Irreversible: what map?
17:12 Sieg: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/100892
17:12 Irreversible: let's go for irc if you don't mind
17:13 Sieg: sure
17:13 Irreversible: i mod bakaris in forum obviously.
17:13 Sieg: ugu
17:19 Irreversible: alright
17:19 Sieg: alright :3
17:19 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/281006 DWB feat. Fade - One Reason (TV Size) [Normal]]
17:19 Irreversible: something went pretty wrong at the begin, it's really very very hard to figure out when you have to click
17:20 Sieg: becuse of song rhytm it uses break beat alot
17:20 Irreversible: ah, i see
17:20 Irreversible: please avoid using blue ticks
17:20 Irreversible: let me see..
17:21 Irreversible: 00:05:478 (2) - move this forward to the white tick
17:21 Irreversible: delete the next slider,
17:21 Sieg: i'll know about blues here
17:21 Irreversible: 00:06:303 - add a circle here
17:21 Irreversible: and a slider from 00:06:579 - to00:06:854 -
17:22 Sieg: hm
17:22 Irreversible: because most 'beginner' only look to the approach circle, that's fine but i don't think that's an excuse to leave it on the blue tick
17:22 Irreversible: it's really really hard to tell
17:22 Sieg: that may work, i'll try
17:22 Sieg: it's actually easier on not first play
17:22 Sieg: but anyway
17:23 Irreversible: :3
17:23 Irreversible: 00:09:606 - add a circle here
17:23 Irreversible: 00:09:744 (2) - and move this again to the white tick (00:09:881 - )
17:24 Sieg: uhu, pretty much the same
17:24 Irreversible: yes, but readable
17:24 Irreversible: i mean look at other normals, sometimes you can't understand why it's there, but you can play it xD
17:25 Sieg: ikr, common thing :3
17:25 Irreversible: another question, what did you mainly map to?
17:25 Irreversible: the background?? xD
17:25 Irreversible: because this might be superduper confusing xD
17:25 Sieg: lol, freestyle
17:25 Irreversible: i see
17:25 Irreversible: for these blue tick issues,
17:26 Irreversible: can you fix them yourself, or should i mention them all?
17:26 Sieg: ofcurse i can xD
17:26 Irreversible: alright then, i go on
17:26 Sieg: uhu
17:26 Irreversible: 00:13:046 (4) -
17:26 Sieg: yrp
17:27 Sieg: yep
17:27 Irreversible: I can understand why you used them at the begin, i also get it here, but here it's too fast and confusing
17:27 Irreversible: double reverse in most situations isn't a good idea
17:27 Irreversible: so you might overthink again :3
17:27 Sieg: i can replace this with 1 slider i think
17:27 Irreversible: alright :D
17:27 Irreversible: 00:16:763 (3) - moe the last white point a bit downwards for blanket
17:28 Irreversible: 00:18:552 (2) - and this to the left, for blanket as well
17:28 Irreversible: (anyway, you might change 00:18:552 (2) - anyway, since it's on the blue tick
17:28 Irreversible: 00:21:579 (3) - same here, i think getting the next circle might be a bit too stressful :c
17:29 Irreversible: let me download puush xD
17:29 Sieg: yep, this reverse sliders bothers me too
17:29 Irreversible: one sec
17:30 Irreversible: Please wait while puush is installed.
17:30 Irreversible: xD
17:31 Sieg: lol
17:32 Irreversible: 00:24:744 -
17:32 Irreversible: 00:24:744 - http://puu.sh/3QigS.jpg try this rhythm
17:33 Irreversible: 00:27:771 (2) - i would replace this one through a smaller one and a circle, fits the lyrics better and is nicer to listen to
17:33 Sieg: i'll try
17:33 Irreversible: 00:35:340 (5) - you know. xD
17:33 Sieg: ugu
17:34 Irreversible: 00:37:679 (3,1) - try ctrl + g, for the rhythm
17:34 Irreversible: 00:50:202 (3) - blanket nazi, but anyway, blue tick again, please go over all of them xD
17:34 Sieg: nice
17:35 Irreversible: 00:51:166 (1) - i suggest ending this 00:52:817 - here already
17:35 Irreversible: 00:53:368 - so you can place something here, sounds better and emphasizes the begin of the chorus
17:36 Irreversible: 00:53:368 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - and could you try to involve some sliders here? it's a bit too circly if you know what i mean
17:36 Irreversible: 00:54:468 (3,4) - instead of these two, use a slider, it might be more comfortable :3
17:36 Sieg: maybe but this is not easy
17:36 Sieg: this is normal :3
17:36 Irreversible: it's not, but still, insane doesn't have only circles too right?
17:36 Irreversible: and it's for the rhythms sake
17:37 Irreversible: 00:56:670 (3) - this curve should go on the other side, i mean flow and stuff
17:37 Irreversible: 00:57:221 (4) - extend this slider to the right tick? it gets smoother, as if you just break it at the blue tick, nice idea, but i prefer this
17:37 Sieg: hm, yep maybe
17:38 Sieg: this one suits drums
17:38 Sieg: that lands on blue
17:38 Irreversible: your decision :3
17:38 Sieg: ofcourse :3
17:38 Irreversible: 01:03:689 (3) - way too confusing. i mean DS might be correct here
17:38 Irreversible: but the distance looks exactly the same, and i don't think beginner player give a shit that the reverse slider lands on the bottom
17:38 Irreversible: so..
17:39 Sieg: yep
17:39 Irreversible: 01:03:001 (2,3) - i don't get this rhythm anyway xD you might change it to something more common
17:40 Irreversible: 01:00:523 (1) - move to 51 250
17:40 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/3QiyR.jpg 01:01:074 (2,3) -
17:40 Irreversible: 01:02:175 (1) - rotate by -52° or something
17:41 Irreversible: 01:04:927 (1,2,3) - something failed with the DS here, it should be the same, or at least look like that
17:41 Sieg: hm
17:41 Irreversible: :D
17:42 Sieg: it is, no? http://puu.sh/3QiBS.jpg
17:42 Irreversible: 01:10:982 - maybe add a kiai fountain somewhere here?
17:42 Irreversible: look between 1 and 2
17:42 Irreversible: and then between 2 and 3
17:42 Irreversible: 01:13:322 (1) - this NC is no need, or maybe it is, but then remove it from
17:42 Sieg: i don't like all this kiai stuff at all ;_;
17:42 Irreversible: 01:13:735 (1) - here
17:42 Irreversible: alright :P
17:43 Sieg: oh
17:43 Sieg: yep
17:43 Sieg: i don't know why there is nc actually xD
17:43 Irreversible: alright, i'm done xD
17:44 Sieg: lot for normal
17:44 Irreversible: i'm sry
17:44 Sieg: lol
17:44 Irreversible: but i'm wondering, normally my normal / easy mods look like:
17:44 Irreversible: remove nc
17:44 Irreversible: lol xD
17:45 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/270597 DWB feat. Fade - One Reason (TV Size) [Hard]]
17:45 Sieg: i'm going to ask more opinions before changing blue tick notes, rest is all to fix i guess
17:45 Sieg: gogo
17:45 Irreversible: really enjoyable diff, good flow overall
17:45 Irreversible: 00:08:092 (4,5,6) - DS fail
17:46 Irreversible: 00:10:157 (3) - move a bit to the right and make sure you use the same DS for all kind of these things (circle and slider, you know like:
17:46 Sieg: ehm
17:46 Irreversible: 00:10:157 (3,4) -
17:46 Irreversible: 00:12:496 (4,5) - look at 4 and 5, as you can see it's not as neat as i wish it was xD
17:47 Sieg: nah this small 0.05 not not noticeable on play
17:47 Irreversible: and?
17:47 Irreversible: i could see it
17:47 Irreversible: stop being lazy otherwise i won't help :3
17:47 Irreversible: and for me it looks like more o,o try to replace it a little bit
17:47 Sieg: lol
17:47 Sieg: okay :\
17:47 Sieg: i fix them all :)
17:47 Irreversible: great~
17:47 Irreversible: 00:12:496 (4,5) - ok, look at this
17:47 Irreversible: please make it like this
17:48 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/3QiPh.jpg
17:48 Irreversible: if you don't want it that curvy, try this
17:48 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/3QiPZ.jpg
17:48 Sieg: 1st one is good
17:48 Irreversible: alright
17:48 Irreversible: 00:14:285 (2) - move it to somewhere around
17:49 Irreversible: 132 20
17:49 Sieg: i love this overlaps
17:49 Irreversible: yes
17:49 Irreversible: they are good
17:49 Irreversible: but move it a bit to the left
17:49 Irreversible: xD
17:49 Irreversible: 00:16:900 (4,5,6,7) - i think a straight line (with the 'stream' works better here, because the end of the slider is obviously straight
17:49 Sieg: oh
17:49 Sieg: yes, great
17:50 Sieg: mb
17:50 Irreversible: 00:25:569 (3) - listen to the lyrics please, this long slider doesn't fit at all, does it?
17:50 Sieg: fits music
17:50 Irreversible: but try this
17:50 Irreversible: 00:25:569 - add circle
17:50 Irreversible: add slider from 00:25:845 - to00:26:120 -
17:51 Sieg: too much 1\2 i try wary this, but i'll try anyway
17:51 Irreversible: cool :D
17:51 Sieg: vary*
17:51 Irreversible: xD
17:51 Irreversible: 00:29:973 (3,4) - try this:http://puu.sh/3QiXt.jpg
17:51 Sieg: cool
17:52 Irreversible: 00:36:854 (3) - this slider
17:52 Irreversible: why doesn't it start 00:36:854 - until00:37:404 - ?
17:52 Irreversible: you could have 1/1 here perfectly
17:52 Sieg: but this plays fine too
17:52 Irreversible: as you saw
17:53 Irreversible: my things aren't 'unrankable' stuff
17:53 Irreversible: i don't like modding that
17:53 Sieg: lol
17:53 Irreversible: way*
17:53 Irreversible: i just mod
17:53 Irreversible: suggestive
17:53 Irreversible: :D
17:53 Sieg: sure
17:53 Irreversible: you can deny
17:53 Irreversible: everything
17:54 Sieg: that's a bad way to improve your maps form mods
17:54 Sieg: :3
17:54 Irreversible: how?
17:54 Irreversible: like i do it? xD
17:54 Sieg: to deny all
17:54 Irreversible: ah
17:54 Irreversible: yes
17:54 Sieg: loool
17:54 Irreversible: i'm happy
17:54 Irreversible: that you like my suggestions XD
17:54 Sieg: yep, pretty useful among all this nc mods
17:55 Sieg: that i got so far
17:55 Irreversible: 00:41:533 (3,4,5) -
17:55 Irreversible: this line bothers me, it's not perfectly straight XD
17:56 Irreversible: circle 4 is more on the right than slider 5
17:56 Irreversible: it looks weird
17:56 Sieg: this supposed to be curve :\
17:56 Irreversible: can you try
17:56 Irreversible: making 5 a bit more curvy
17:56 Irreversible: at the bottom?
17:56 Irreversible: nono
17:56 Irreversible: in the middle
17:56 Irreversible: move the middle point a little tiny bit to the left
17:56 Sieg: i'll try to adjust 3 and 4, 5 is totally fine for me
17:56 Irreversible: and this 00:41:670 (4) - to 20 156
17:56 Irreversible: maybe it was just 4
17:56 Irreversible: i think it was just 4.
17:56 Irreversible: xD
17:57 Sieg: yep i guess so xD
17:57 Irreversible: 00:53:643 - not sure but i think for hard it's fine if you start here
17:57 Irreversible: important point imo
17:58 Sieg: lyrics :\ i usally ignore such spots
17:58 Irreversible: don't you dare
17:58 Irreversible: XD
17:58 Sieg: ;_;
17:59 Irreversible: 00:58:322 (2,3) - don't like the flow between those
17:59 Irreversible: hmm
17:59 Irreversible: 00:53:643 (1,4,5,1,2,3) -
17:59 Sieg: mb, but totall fine
17:59 Irreversible: the flow in this part
17:59 Irreversible: is a bit broken
18:00 Sieg: hm, do you play on tablet?
18:00 Irreversible: nope
18:00 Sieg: oh okay
18:00 Sieg: :3
18:00 Irreversible: let me send you
18:00 Irreversible: a suggestion
18:01 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/3QjiW.jpg
18:01 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/3QjjD.jpg
18:01 Sieg: this may work, yes
18:02 Irreversible: :)
18:03 Irreversible: rest looks fine :DD
18:03 Sieg: great
18:04 Irreversible: no.
18:04 Sieg: no
18:04 Sieg: lol
18:04 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/3Qjpv.jpg
18:04 Irreversible: 01:15:386 (1,2) - can you try?
18:04 Irreversible: 01:18:689 (2,3,4,5,6) - try to improve the curvy shape please :3 if you don't mind xD
18:04 Sieg: looks fine
18:05 Sieg: i don't xd
18:05 Irreversible: alright xD
18:06 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/267557 DWB feat. Fade - One Reason (TV Size) [Insane]]
18:06 Irreversible: seems mostly right, i'm not a big fan of this kind of spacing though, but just ignore that :3
18:07 Irreversible: 00:16:487 (3) - this is incredibly fucking omg i hate it ctrl + g and i'm a happy kid again
18:07 Irreversible: xD
18:07 Irreversible: 00:39:606 (5) - NC? o.o
18:08 Sieg: yes
18:08 Irreversible: 00:39:606 (5) - >:(
18:08 Irreversible: 01:05:478 (3) - move to 344 244 because you can
18:09 Irreversible: 01:09:056 (8) - move to 472 100 because you can xD
18:09 Irreversible: 01:09:881 (5) - NC, because I like to split up these kind of patterns with NC
18:09 Irreversible: 01:10:432 (9) - saaaame reason
18:09 Sieg: not here ;_; it must be all red nc
18:10 Irreversible: 01:23:643 (4) - I'd like to have this stacked with the slider start of the next slider, because now it doesn't look very good to my eye, but there's no other place
18:10 Irreversible: alright :3
18:10 Irreversible: that's it already
18:10 Irreversible: i'm happy with that diff if you changed ^
18:10 Irreversible: except nc, i dont care
18:10 Irreversible: xD
18:10 Sieg: xd
18:11 Irreversible: ops
18:11 Irreversible: when i said >:(
18:11 Irreversible: i meant
18:11 Irreversible: 00:53:643 -
18:11 Irreversible: XD
18:11 Sieg: oh
18:11 Sieg: lol
18:12 Irreversible: you can be my 130th kd <3

^ my irc mod
  1. Normal: Fixed some rhythm issues
  2. Hard: Fixed some blankets, to improve it in General, also esthethics
  3. Insane: Just minor stuff.
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