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Haru - You (Instrumental)

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tieff
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 16 июля 2009 г. at 6:38:49

Artist: Haru
Title: You (Instrumental)
Source: Higurashi
Tags: Techno Instrumental Viotex Higurashi
BPM: 150
Filesize: 7398kb
Play Time: 03:02
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,99 stars, 472 notes)
  2. Normal (4,16 stars, 167 notes)
Download: Haru - You (Instrumental)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Beatmap #6
For the Viotex Project.
Last edited by tieff , edited 27 times in total.
Shinxyn
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Shinxyn
This is totally my opinion, and I know this is WIP, but....
Normal-Whistles totally murder this song, they're much too "strong" for such a light song!! D:
And soft claps don't match the music too well either, though not as much as a concern, maybe replace the default normal-hitnormal for them...

And-
Normal-
00:50:77 (2) - Completely hidden as a slider during play
01:30:77 (8) - lol, this blended with the bg, so I didn't see the slider either.
tieff
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tieff
Ready for mod...
Andrea
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Andrea
[Timing]

BPM is fine. Offset: 39,990

[Normal]

I like more slidertickrate to 2.

02:09:99 (1) - Maybe change sound from normal to soft? Really better imo!

[Hard]

I don't like spacing, sorry. And some jumps are really hard to read or too hard to do.

01:50:17 (7,8,9,10) - Hard to read imo.

[General]

- I don't like much soft whistles :<
ignorethis
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ignorethis
Your map's becoming more and more challenging ;)
Great work.

Normal:
00:39:970 ~ 00:41:170 - Remove plz. These notes make no sense.
00:52:970 - Move 7 up a grid and right a grid, as to line up with 6 and 8.
01:33:970 - wtf... whistle? remove. :( There are a lot of them so I don't want to point out one by one.
01:44:970 - Either move this to the red tick or add a note there. This pattern is weird.

Hard:
Whistle problem still exists(REALLY don't fit for such a song), and remove the beginning sliders, too.
01:00:370 - Add a note
01:01:570 - Too far >:( Consider if people would be able to do such a big jump or not.
01:40:770 - ^
02:55:970 - This is not a proper position to end this map. You could map a bit more.
al2e10
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Joined August 2008
al2e10
Good map ~

But I think you should have (finish)
In the map ~

like ~
00:47:170 (11)
Is a last of a sentens
Shinxyn
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Shinxyn
Whoa... looks totally looks like you're trying out a new mapping style
lower stack leniency to lowest or make it 0 please, it will make all the stacks look better during play

Normal-
00:52:97 (7,8) - space better
There's lots of places that could need more new combos and Normal doesn't need to be stacked so much..
I'm slightly concerned about hitsounds at the start, but I'm starting to understand your style of hitsounds, so I won't complain about Normal's

Hard-
My first opinion... it's like you're trying to map like Nexy~
You might wanna really wanna turn stack to 0 for this diff... (check the notepad for the .osu, and turn stack to 0)
00:41:57 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - whistles should go D:
00:45:57 (4) - new combo
00:50:37 (7) - ^
00:56:17 (9,10,11) - center it?
00:59:57 (6) - new combo
02:06:87 (9) - this sounded very weird, probably cuz the next note stops the whistle halfway?
02:18:77 (1) - add a hitsound to very first part
02:22:37 (1,2,3) - sounds too rushed for this song, oh well, just my thoughts
02:31:27 (6) - sounds odd, too (like 2:06:87
Too many claps.... but then again, it dominates the whole map...
Turn overall diff up by one or two ticks~~!!

I think you're trying a bit too hard now... or that's just how you're adapting to you're new mapping styles...
Sleep Powder
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Sleep Powder
Am I allowed to make a difficulty for this?
[Normal]
00:45:57 (6) - Add a Clap here?
00:53:57 (9) - Finish?
01:35:57 (1) - That's not your ever day whistle...
01:40:77 (4) - Whistle
01:43:97 (2) - Instead of a whistle try a finish?
01:28:37 (2) - Feels like a hitsound should go here
01:40:37 (3) - Finish not a whistle.

^ I like this difficulty way better
[Hard]
00:52:97 (3) - Why is the 3 there? its confusing
00:56:37 (11) - Maybe a whistle?
01:20:77 (1,2,3) - Even with the new combo this is sort of confusing
01:22:37 (1,2,3) - ^
01:30:77 (5) - Take the clap out of the slider end and put a clap here instead.
01:47:97 (1,2,3) - Confusing
01:49:57 (6,7,1,2,3) - ^ which way am I going lol @_@
02:05:17 (3) - Confusing
You're not trying to make everyone fail at this beatmap right?
02:16:37 (1) - Take out new combo here
The note layout was the only thing I didn't like
EDIT ^
Last edited by Sleep Powder , edited 1 time in total.
tieff
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
SteRRuM
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SteRRuM
Hi~!
[Timing]
BPM: 150 (fine)
Offset: Offset is way too early, 39 972.
Make sure you've changed it on both difficulties and resnapped all notes. ^^
[Normal]
  1. 00:44:772 - Add clap,
  2. 00:47:172 - Add clap,
  3. 00:48:772 - Add clap,
  4. 00:51:972 - Add clap,
  5. 00:52:97 (7) - Remove clap,
  6. 00:54:37 (1) - Add clap on end (i know it's checked but add it only on end),
  7. 00:55:97 (4) - Remove clap,
  8. 00:56:77 (1) - Add clap,
  9. 00:57:972 - Add a note here,
  10. 00:58:37 (1) - Add clap,
  11. 01:01:17 (2) - Remove clap from end,
  12. 01:02:77 (7) - Add clap,
  13. 01:03:17 (1) - Add clap on the beggining,
  14. 01:04:372 - Add a note,
  15. 01:04:97 (2) - Remove clap,
  16. 01:08:37 (4) - Remove clap for end,
  17. 01:08:37 (4) - Extend by 1/2,
  18. 01:08:37 (4) - Remove whistle,
  19. 01:37:57 (4) - Remove whistle,
  20. 01:38:77 (1) - Remove end's whistle,
  21. 01:40:37 (3,4) - Remove whistles,
  22. 01:51:17 (6) - Add clap on the beggining,
  23. 01:56:17 (5) - Remove clap,
  24. 01:58:37 (1) - Add clap,
  25. 01:59:17 (3) - And clap on end.
[Hard]
  • I think difficulty is way too fast (stacks, spacing) for this song, it should be slowly~~^^, also it's really Insane,
  1. Overall, sorry, i don't like the whistle :<, If i could i'd remove almost every. Don't be angry on me :D.
  2. 00:41:57 (1) - Add clap here,
  3. 00:41:97 (3) - Remove clap,
  4. 00:42:17 (4) - Remove whistle,
  5. 00:42:37 (5) - New combo,
  6. 00:42:57 (6,7,8) - Remove hitsounds,
  7. 00:43:17 (9) - Remove clap from end,
  8. 00:43:97 (1) - Remove clap from end,
  9. 00:46:17 (4) - Remove clap,
  10. 00:46:37 (5) - Remove clap from end,
  11. 00:46:97 (7) - Remove clap,
  12. 00:47:97 (1) - Add clap,
  13. 00:48:17 (2) - Remove clap,
  14. 00:48:37 (3) - Remove this note,
  15. 00:48:37 (3) - Move 1/2 backward and add clap on end,
  16. 00:48:972 - If you moved the slider add here a note,
  17. 00:49:97 (6) - Remove clap,
  18. 00:50:77 (3) - Remove clap,
  19. 00:54:57 (2) - Remove clap,
  20. 00:54:97 (4) - Remove whistle,
  21. 00:55:37 (7) - Remove clap,
  22. 00:55:57 (8) - Add clap on end,
  23. 00:56:37 (11) - Remove whistle and add clap,
  24. 00:56:77 (1) - Remove clap from end and add on beggining,
  25. 00:57:17 (1) - Remove clap,
  26. 00:57:57 (1) - Remove clap from end and add on beggining,
  27. 00:57:97 (1) - Remove clap,
  28. 00:58:37 (1) - Add clap,
  29. 01:00:97 (2) - Remove clap,
  30. 01:01:37 (4) - Remove whistle,
  31. 01:01:97 (3,4) - Remove claps,
  32. 01:02:97 (4) - Remove clap,
  33. 01:19:97 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Please delete every whistle here :<, they don't fit well,
  34. 01:27:57 (6) - Remove clap,
  35. 01:27:97 (7,8) - Add claps,
  36. 01:27:97 (7,8,9,10,11) - Add claps,
  37. 01:29:17 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Remove every hitsound and then look down :o,
  38. 01:30:37 (4) - Add clap on beggining,
  39. 01:32:97 (2,3) - Remove hitsounds,
  40. 01:33:37 (4) - Delete this note,
  41. 01:34:17 (2,3,4) - Remove all hitsound here,
  42. 01:34:97 (6,7) - Delete them,
  43. 01:35:572 - Sounds like here's missing a note,
  44. 01:36:57 (5) - Delete this note,
  45. 01:36:772 - Add a note here,
  46. 01:38:772 - Add a note here,
  47. 01:38:37 (1,2) - Delete claps,
  48. 01:40:37 (1) - Delete clap on end,
  49. 01:41:17 (1) - Delete clap on end and add on beggining,
  50. 01:41:972 - Feels like a note is missing,
  51. 01:58:37 (1) - Remove clap on end,
  52. 02:11:172 - 02:59:172 - Remove EVERY whistle hitsound (Simply press W 2 times and if any is left delete manually).
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Beatmap is well made, just little problem with hitsounds ^_^. I really like the song and it'd be cool if you'd map whole song but i know it's impossible because of 5+mins :<. Btw. for you xD.
Gabi
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tieff
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About song: It's very hard to add new rhytm or samething, becouse DJ-machine very loud. And I mapped not piano, I mapped rhytm.

No, it's not insane, it's tieff-style hard.
I take same your hitsounds suggestions, thanks for mod.
I see many peoples don't like my whistles... I don't change anything. X)
Starrodkirby86
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You...You...:U

[Normal]:
00:44:77 (5) - Finish on startpoint?
00:55:97 (4) - Finish?

[Hard]:
01:04:57 (x) - Add beat here? Preferably between (5) and the pink (1)?
02:10:57 (3,4,5) - Straight horizontal line?


Those are just the technical problems...Hm, why is there a difference in hitsound samplesets for Normal and Hard?

Lower the stack leniency on [Hard] by a few ticks...I noticed a few notes that were stacked and they look pretty ugly...

The normal hitwhistle custom sound is a bit...disturbing in a way. Not in a creepy sort of manner, but I have some dislike for it...Perhaps if you can find a better custom sound, that'd be cool. Nice utilization of it on the second part of [Hard] though...It still disturbed me. xD

I have to remember your big difficulties in maps...I have to remember that.

Star.
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The Normal whistles sound kinda weird to me

Normal
01:07:57 (3) - This slider is sort of hidden underneath previous combobursts. It's not too bad, but it might throw you off if you aren't paying attention
01:30:77 (8) - Again, tricky slider


Hard
00:48:57 (4) - Sounds weird, I think this would work better as a hitcircle + 1/2 length slider
Pretty crazy map for such a light song :P There are interesting patterns here, but I may not be the best judge of them seeing as this is a little above my skill level.

Cool though, *
tieff
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Huh? Normal whistle?... But I use soft whistles...
Argh! Forgot to reupload.
happy30
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Takuma
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[Hard]
- I don't agree with the large spacing here, especially on a song like this. "You" is a nice calm song, so I don't think it deserves jumps and large spacings. I'm actually quite disappointed. I like the hitsounds here though.

[Normal]
- Please change the slidertick: 2.
Dartmir
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ня ^_^
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