AlpacaCokelat wrote:

Heyy

[General]

• Bitrate audio file-nya harus 192kbps-128kbpsmasih nyari yg bagusan;v;
  audio lead-in-nya mungkin ditambah jadi 1.5 ssip

[Easy]

• HP OD AR sama kayak normal lol
  AR-2, BPM-nya lumayan lambat imo, lebih cocok AR3 buat easy
  OD-1 atau OD-2
  HP-1 atau HP-2
  
  00:00:923 (1) - spinner mulai dari 00:00:220 - berhenti di 00:04:439 - kayaknya lebih cocok
  00:05:377 (1) - soft-finish di awalan slider
  00:20:377 (1) - ^
  00:28:814 (4,1) - switch nc
  01:05:377 (1) - finish di awalan slider
  00:43:345 - 00:45:220 - 00:47:212 - 00:58:345 - 01:00:220 - 01:02:095 - unused green timing points?

fix semua~

[Normal]

• 00:00:923 (1) - sama kayak easy
  00:20:377 (1) - soft-finish di awalan slider
  00:40:767 - add a note. rasanya nggak greget kalo ga ada beat antara 00:40:064 (3,4) - , atau 00:40:064 (3) - dibuat reversed sliderndak, mau keep rhythm orz
  00:50:377 (1) - finish di awalan slider
  01:05:377 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm suggestion
  ^
  00:01:627 - 00:43:345 - 00:45:220 - 00:47:212 - 00:58:345 - 01:00:220 - 01:02:095 - unused green timing points?

[Hard]

• 00:00:220 (1) - spinner berhenti di 00:04:439 - ?
  00:20:377 (1) - add soft-finish
  00:23:423 (4) - suggestion, diperpanjang sampe 00:23:892 - , rhythm-nya agak konsisten sama 00:21:548 (5) -
  00:27:408 (4) - remove whistle di akhiran slider?
  00:38:658 (4,1) - bikin blanket?
  00:44:517 (4) - clap
  00:46:627 (6) - agak aneh kalo akhiran slider-nya dimute, imo .__.unmute
  00:49:673 (6) - remove finish di akhiran slider? finish di awalan slider 00:50:377 (1) - ini aja udah cukup
  01:01:627 (1) - kayaknya mendingan bikin circle aja di 01:01:627 - trus spinner-nya mulai dari 01:01:861 - ok
  01:05:377 (1) - finish di awalan slider
  01:19:439 (6) - clap di awalan slider

[Despair]

• OD+1?
  
  00:00:923 (1) - sama kayak easy
  00:19:909 (5) - soft-finish di akhiran slider
  00:46:627 (6) - sama kayak hard
  00:49:907 (8) - remove finish di akhiran slider?
  01:16:627 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - only suggestion, kalo disini rhythm-nya ngikutin vocal kayaknya keren. lagian ini insane
  buat insane, menurutku ini kurang greget. ada banyak bagian yg bisa dibikin jump ya tapi terserah mapper laa o3o

yay yg gak isi note brarti fixed ya
rapi bangetmakasih ;///; masih noob gini orz
smoga cepet ranked >w<
good luck~

alvinheriadi wrote:

[General]
[00:01:627~00:35:377 Seems inaudible, make this louder (use 65% Volume) upped

[Despair]

1. 00:34:439 (1) - Remove NC?ndak, SV change
2. 01:07:603 Better remove clap?ok

makasih modnya ovo

mintong89 wrote:

hi from m4m

Black: Normal suggestion
Red: Unrankable issue

[General]
That mp3 quality... i wish you can change better quality of this song. and your mp3 bitrate is 320kbps, please change it at least 192kbpscurrently searching for it
I wish you can use custom hitsound.

can't find that fits

[Despair]
Generally i want say is: It's not Insane. It just like Hard diff more than Insane, make it more hard. you can increase the SV and DS. (btw at Insane, i didn't use DS because it's no fun)lol hard+

00:05:377 (1) - i did like you use three 1/2 note or 1/2 slider with reverse note at here, you use a slider to overshadowed the lyric is the worst select.
00:07:134 - add a note at here, it's have a vocal at here.fixed
00:09:009 - ^
00:10:299 (5,1) - why do you stack it? it's destroy the flow, and it's no fun at play.want to keep the rhythm
00:11:237 (4) - just above i say, this slider is overshadowed the lyric.^
00:44:752 (1,2) - the (1) is cover the (2) look ugly imo.
01:03:502 (5) - NC it? it seem too long of this combo.fix
01:11:002 (6) - ^^
01:18:736 (5) - ^^

This maps need more work on Insane...btw Hard, Normal, Easy and Placement is fine on me imo.
anyway good luck!

thanks for mod

Chronotakular wrote:

Sorry this took so long, and thanks once again for your mod!
Let's Mod 4 Mod!

[Easy]

I didn't have any problems here. Consider turning up your hit sounds for the first part of the song though. Since this is an easy difficulty, sound effects are really helpful when learning how to stay on beat.upped

[Normal]

00:11:470 (3) - Anytime you had a circles like this before a slider, I would normally hit these circles early. All of them. I didn't know what you were going for and they didn't really fit the rhythm here. I would just not stack these circles.yeah deleted it
00:12:877 (1,2,3) - This is the exception to what I said above. I can hit these really easily.
00:31:861 (1) - Since this is the normal difficulty, I would pitch this spinner, and just chart it normally through here.it's fine for normal imo

[Hard]

I got an SS on my first try, so this chart is pretty good as of right now. yay

[Despair]

Also got an SS on my first try. So I would say, I think this map is a little too easy. Try turning up maybe the approach rate by one, if not, the life drain by 2 or 3.changed the setting

A bigger distance snapping is probably necessary for everything that wasn't a stream. A lot of stuff felt way too close together for an "Insane" difficulty.


Sorry this took so long again! Also, sorry the mod is short! You've got some very well made maps on your hands. I hope this helped and I wish you good luck!

Alarido wrote:

Hi ♥
A Free Mod from Coffee Party Queue -- ROUND VI
(You got the Queue open, but even closed, My mutuals can post there ♥)

Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
♥ → Greetings
* → Just comments, not mods
Naked Lines → Mods

* No complaints on General Things

[Easy]
♥ Nice

[Normal]
♥ Nice.
* 00:51:314 (2,3,4,5) - I stumbled a bit here due to whole map is almost mapped on drums/beats but this part seems mapped to the voice. It still nice, yeah.lol the vocal feels stronger here

[Hard]
♥ Nice too. I did SS.

[Despair]
♥ Nice too (:

That's it ^^ Nice song and nice fully mapset (: STARRR!!!!!

Hope to get ranked soon !!!!

Att. thanks for mod alarido!!

sheela901 wrote:

[General]
The bitrate is at 320kb/s and the maximum is at 192kp/s and minimum is at 128kp/s. Here's one: http://puu.sh/3Sfdk.mp3used the 192kbps
00:00:923 (1) - The spinner should start at 00:00:103 because the music starts herefollowing alpaca's suggestion

[Normal]
00:40:767 - Add note hereok

It was all perfect. Sorry if it is just three things. Good Luck and star! thanks for mod

gideon5504 wrote:

Hey from M4M queue

General:
~The audio quality is quite bad, try to find a better one. I can't give u a suggestion since I am bad at this as well
~The offset seem off for me, I suggest u post in the timing check queue. (I can't seem to find the correct offset T.T )
~Follow more music in easier diffs rather than vocals.
~I STRONGLY RECOMMEND TO MAP EASY AND NORMAL DIFFS WITH 1/2 BEAT SNAP DIVIDER.

Easy:
~No probs here.

Normal:
~00:07:252 (3,4) - This was quite sudden to me, it might confuse beginners. Try to keep the intro nice and simple and leave the complex stuff for the build up and chorus.

~00:11:236 - The gap here can be filled by moving 00:11:705 (3) to 00:11:236 Then mapping the gap that follows.
~00:18:502 (4,5,6,7,8) - I dun think this arrangement is suitable for Normal diff. It might be too hard for beginners.
~00:27:877 - Stack a circle on top of 00:28:111 (1) and make NC. Cuz coming back through 1/2 beat is a bit weird and it doesn't really match with the music.
~00:40:533 - Map it pls, gap doesn't fit.
~00:41:002 (4) - This doesn't really match with the music. Map a bit more in Kiai to emphasis Kiai. I mean the long slider here is just boring to play.
~00:50:377 (1) - Remove finish from end of slider and add it on the head.
~00:52:252 (3,4,5) - Again this is very confusing for beginners especially on the quarter beat. Try this http://puu.sh/3U6Jn.jpg (Just dun copy my arrangement cuz it's just for reference.)

~00:54:127 (1) - Same as above.
~01:09:127 (1) - Dun copy and past it again and again, try mapping the parts urself. This just shows laziness.

Hard:
~CS could +1 since it's quite easy.umm no, the difference is too big
~00:44:634 - Could stack a circle and make triplet here for hard diff.I'm trying to make the hard a little easier, so i'm not adding triplet on hard
~00:47:564 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part doesn't really fit with the music. Remap that part starting from 00:47:330. Dun leave gaps in hard.remapped parts here orz
~01:05:377 (1) - Add finish on head.ok
~01:24:009 - No 5% volume pls. In most cases, they are unrankable.ok

Despair:
~00:06:432 (3,4) - Remove them, they dun fit at all. Try this. http://puu.sh/3UkhG.jpgdone, a bit different though
~00:07:369 - Add note for stream to match vocal.done
~00:32:798 (4,5,1,2) - This is really confusing. Pls remap this part.it is to match with the vocal, and it is hard+ so i think it is okay :v
~00:49:556 - I think snapping a stream here is more suitable.done
~01:19:439 - 1/4 snapped stream from 01:19:439 to 01:20:142. Make NC on the start of stream.

Overall, your beatmap has a very good structure and it's well organised, but work on following the music with notes and slider more often than following vocals as it might ruin some parts of the map when playing.Yay! and thanks for mod

Work on it!! Good Luck!

Rakuen wrote:

Hi, from M4M you modded.

I'm not sure what to mod...
and don't what to mod with rap, not suggested to map rap part...eh lol why not

threw a star here for support >.o / (as said in rule, M4M gets 1 star)

Try to find a better quality for the music if possible.yah, It is really hard to find one >.<
Check offset and BPM if it's really correct or not.

Just few suggestions here:

[General]
Consider extending spinnner to 01:27:759 - No, the spin gets too long and doesn't really fit

[Easy]
00:06:314 (2,3) - Replace with slider, it doesn't fix any lyric (try slower playback rate) and there's no cover in that part
^ or replace 00:05:377 (1,2,3) - with a long sliderfixed
00:08:658 (2) - Not on the tick too, try 25% playback (hit circle approaches earlier than the rap)
00:10:533 (2) - ^ (applies to the circles on rap part too)
Lyric starts at 00:50:494 - , check the offset.
00:49:908 (3,1) - Suggest perfect blanket which the curve covers the circle (applies to any slider you feel ok with it), refer picture below:
It is too get a smoother turn and i think it encircles fine :v

[Normal]
Too many notes on blue ticks, hard to play
00:10:064 (2) - Stack with tail of 00:07:486 (4) - , looks better
00:19:439 (6,7) - Replace with slider

[Hard]
No big problems
It's a lot better than Normal and Easy
Suggest to increase SV.yay

[Despair]
Make shorter spinner since it's insaneumm the n it wouldn't fit w/ music imo
01:02:330 - Hitsounds change should start at 01:03:502 - when KIAI time is out, makes matches >.o /currently matching with vocals

I feel there should be 2 different Offset or BPM for rap part and singing part. (try to ask others for help)

For singing part, try 00:35:025 - as your red point (offset) see if it fits.

Hope it helps.Thanks for mod and star

CloudSplash16 wrote:

Rakuen wrote:

I feel there should be 2 different Offset/BPM for rap part and singing part. (try to ask others for help)

For singing part, try 00:35:025 - as your red point (offset) see if it fits.

No. There is no need to add a second timing section here. The BPM does not change, neither does the main beat.

However, your current offset is VERY OFF. I would suggest something close to 1688 approx. (+/-7).

Changed off set, thanks

mtbbsben wrote:

From my queue of normal mod

[Easy]
No problems.

[Normal]
00:11:705 (3) - In my opinion, start at 00:11:470 - and make a come-back slider like 00:10:064 (2) -
00:36:314 (2) - ?,why not end at 00:36:783 - ?
00:40:064 (3) - end at 00:40:533 -
00:40:767 - add note
00:52:603 (4,5) - why not
01:07:252 (3) - ...
why on blue line? it's not a 4.5star normal :<

[Hard]
Good diffthanks~

[Despair]
Well, no problems, also no advantages, just a normal insane diff, but it's also ok.

Hope you can rank it soon~Thanks for mod too