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GeneralOk. First of all you have the wrong offset. Use this
4357, resnap all notes
You need a second timing point here
19652 (ctrl+p), resnap all notes again and have your spinner end here 00:21:833
Recheck all your green timing points and change them accordingly
Remember to fix the spinner ends of all your diffs after the timing changeBeginner00:26:742 (2,3) These could be coated better
00:37:106 end spinner here
01:03:288 NC
01:31:106 NC
01:31:652 remove NC
01:34:379 NC
01:31:106 (1,2) coat better
01:53:470 (1,2,3) Align these straight
02:08:742 NC
02:11:470 (2,3) coat these two
02:30:561 NC
02:52:379 NC
03:03:288 (1,2) the distance between the two seem too short
03:04:379 (3,4) coat better
03:09:833 NC
03:18:561 NC
Advanced00:50:197 (1,2,3) All these three can be coated better
00:58:924 (1,2,3) same here
01:01:652 (3,4) coat better
01:07:652 (1,2,3) and here
01:22:652 coat these better also
01:22:924 remove NC
01:25:106 NC
01:25:652 (5,6,1) coat these better
01:31:106 NC
01:31:652 remove NC
01:34:379 (5) NC
01:38:197 NC
01:42:561 NC
01:42:833 note here
01:46:652 NC
01:49:652 (2,3,4) would look cool if you coated these
01:52:379 (4) this slider should end here instead 01:53:470 (thus removing the next combo 1)
02:04:379 remove NC
02:08:742 NC
02:21:833 NC
02:27:015 (2,3) coat better
02:34:652 (5,1,2) same here
02:44:742 (5,1) coat better
02:44:742 (5,3) stack better
02:54:833 (1,1,1,1) remove NC
03:03:288 (1,2,1,2) these should be symmetrical
03:04:379 (2,3,4) coat better
03:18:561 NC
03:27:288 NC
03:31:652 NC
03:36:833 (2,3) coat better
03:44:742 (1,2,3) coat better
Challenging00:06:531 remove NC
00:07:622 NC
00:08:713 remove NC
00:09:804 NC
00:10:895 remove NC
00:22:895 (4,5) You could coat these better, but I also think that the unsnapped distance there feels a bit awkward
00:24:833 (2,4) Make these equally distanced
00:37:106 end your spinner here
00:42:015 remove NC
00:43:106 remove NC
00:46:652 NC
00:51:015 00:51:561 remove these two NC's and keep the one in the middle
00:55:652 make this combo a 1/4 repeat and remove this note 00:56:061
00:59:470 remove NC
00:59:470 remove NC
01:00:561 remove NC
01:04:924 add note here and move 01:05:061 this slider here 01:05:197 and you might want to ctrl+G it
01:08:197 fix this slider like the similar one I pointed out earlier with NC's
01:22:924 remove NC
01:24:561 NC
01:25:106 remove NC
01:28:924 NC
01:30:015 this one feels timed wrong, I highly suggest removing 1 repeat on it and placing a note there instead
Having that, 01:31:106 place NC here
01:31:652 remove NC
01:34:379 two sliders here sounds so much better and follows the vocals like this (use your own slider style)
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/88629501:42:288 NC
01:42:561 remove NC
01:44:470 NC
01:44:742 remove NC
01:46:652 NC
01:48:561 NC
01:51:561 NC
01:55:924 NC
02:00:833 NC
02:06:015 (1,2,3,4) pls no NC
02:21:833 NC
02:26:742 remove NC
02:27:833 remove NC
02:31:379 NC
02:40:379 (6,7,8) Do this instead,
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/886313 place the sliders however you wish, but use these lenghts
02:48:833 NC
02:55:379 remove NC
02:57:561 remove NC
03:03:833 remove NC
03:04:106 NC
03:13:924 NC
03:27:288 I'd shorten this by 1 repeat and add a note or slider after instead
03:36:561 remove NC
03:37:652 remove NC
03:41:197 NC
03:45:288 fix NC's pls