1. Bang! (4,94 stars, 479 notes)
2. Normal (3,02 stars, 211 notes)
3. Sonnyc's Hard (4,47 stars, 279 notes)

Mapset

1. I think the offset and/or the bpm is bad. Listen to 01:10:280 to 01:12:780 at 50%, we can clearly hear that the clap in the music and the clap of your hitsounds aren't at the same time.
   I'm really bad at finding timing so i can't really help you with this but you need to do a timing check.
   I moved all the note 1/8 beat earlier (offset=10217) and it seems way better but try to find a more precise timing.

1. 00:25:217 (1,2,1) - The 3/4 are really to hard for a "Normal" diff. I would suggest you to use this timing instead:
   
   I know the timing isn't perfect but it's the only idea i had which allow to skip the two 3/4.
2. 00:48:217 (1,2) - Maybe Drum Finish on the head of these slider? There ere very "powrful" sound in the music so i think it deserve a hitsound here. (And if you apply it here apply it also at the same other place like this in this diff and the other diff (like 01:28:217 (1,2)))
3. 00:56:217 (1) - ^
4. 01:08:717 (6,1) - I think you can try to avoid this unesthetic overlap.
5. 01:15:717 (4) - Move it to x=332 y=76 for a perfect square with 01:14:217 (1,2,3).
6. 01:41:717 (6) - One grid up for a perfect paralellogram.
7. 01:42:217 (1,2,3,4) - I think the flow would be better if instead of going back and forth at 01:43:217 (3) you put 01:43:717 (4) a little bit ahead of
8. 01:43:217 (3) and make it finish at 01:42:717 (2) instead of making it start here (like you are currently doing) a little bit like this:
   
   
   It kept the aesthetic of the triangle 01:42:217 (1,3,5) and improve the flow imo. (But maybe there is a better way to do it than the one i used)
9. 01:52:217 (1) - Make it finish 1/4 beat later on the clap in the song (and put a clap on the spinner)
10. 02:09:717 (4) - x=436 y=180 for a perfect parallelogram with 02:06:217 (1,2,3).
11. 02:18:217 (1) - x=340 y=144? Guess why ^^
12. 02:47:217 (3,4,5) - I find it a little bit weird because it's the only stack of the diff. Stack are a little bit hard for beginner player but in a Normal diff i think it's ok it's just that..... It will surprise them to see one. (And not the good kind of surprise)

1. 00:26:217 (1,4) - It's a little bit confusing... I don't know if it's rankable or not but it's definitely confusing to play.
2. 00:40:967 (4,1,2,3,1) - The flow here is a little bit.... disturbing. I would suggest to swap 00:40:717 (3,4) then move 00:41:217 (1) where 00:41:467 (2) is then 00:41:467 (2) where 00:41:717 (3) is then 00:41:717 (3) where 00:41:217 (1) is. It solves the little problem i have with your pattern which is 00:41:217 (1,2,3,1). The spacing makes you believe that 00:42:217 (1) is 1/2 beat later which can be confusing while playing in HD. But if it was an intended trap then let it as it is.
3. 00:45:092 - add a note? (There is a note in the vocals AND in the music so why not putting a note here)
4. 00:53:092 - ^
5. 00:56:217 (1,2,3) - Too bad i would have see jump in this part of the song not anti jump. I would suggest to move these sliders further from the center of the playfield.
6. 01:25:092 - add a note. (You did it at 01:32:967 (3,4,5,6,7))
7. 01:28:217 (1,2,3) - Yeah! That was more what i expected from 00:56:217 (1,2,3).
8. 01:36:217 (1,2,3) - Why do you put jump sometimes and anti-jumps other times? It's the same song each time.
9. 01:52:217 (1) - Same as in the "Normal" diff.
10. 02:07:967 (7,1,2) - Well i have the same kind of problem than 00:40:967 (4,1,2,3,1).
11. 02:14:217 (3) - Replace it by a 1/2 beat long slider?
12. 02:24:967 (1) - Make it 1/4 beat longer if i hear correctly.
13. 02:32:717 (1) - Remove NC?
14. 02:40:717 (1) - ^ (You never did this kind of weird NC previously in the diff. If you want to keep them at least do the same in the other place like this in the other kiai)
15. 02:46:217 (1,2,3,4,5) - This flow is definitely awkward. Why not:
    
16. 03:09:717 (5,6,7) - Another weird flow. Curve 03:09:717 (5) and it will be much better imo.
17. 03:14:217 (1) - Add a note here and start the spinner 1/4 beat later?

Roxas wrote:

Fixed the offset and some other things in IRC!

Andrea wrote:

Please provide the log, it's always necessary.

1. You need to have easiest diff below 3 stars, 3.5 is too high :х I suggest you map easy because your normal is already pretty cool to make it easier
2. I feel offset a bit wrong, try to get someone who good at timing to check it

1. 00:45:030 (3,4,5,6) - Suggestion: change this please to 2 1/4 sliders. This stream is estecially looks not so good and feels too slow even with dt, so i suggesting change this to sliders for better playability
2. 00:47:280 (3,4,5) - nazi: make this spacing perfect. Also, why so clamped? >_> Try to use x0.6 ds at lest, looks more pretty imo.
3. 01:09:780 (3) - add whistle here for consistency
4. 01:13:780 (3) - ^
5. 01:27:280 (3,4,5) - clamped spacing again :х
6. 01:35:280 (5,6) - try something like this?
   
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:40:280 (1,2) - I understand fact that you did it for nice pattern but please, change those notes to slider, it follows music better. Also this pattern is already not so good to hit, espacially with ar 7 :х
8. 01:43:780 (5,1) - swap nc follow pattern
9. 01:45:030 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Change to sliders for same reasons. Those mini-streams really too slow and looks not so good. Also, it even sounds better as a sliders
10. 01:52:280 (1) - add finish instead of clap
11. 02:02:780 (2) - add whistle here for consistency
12. 02:06:780 (4) - ^
13. 02:17:280 (3) - ^
14. 02:18:780 (3) - ^
15. 02:25:030 (1,1) - this part is perfectly mapable, wht you add spinnerspam here, espacially with enough short spinners? This playes bad, please remove spinners and map this part >_>
16. 02:41:280 (5,6) - make it less linear please
17. 02:46:530 (2,3,4,5) - omg someone still using this pattern <3 dont change pls
18. 03:09:030 (4,1) - Swap NC follow pattern?

1. 00:36:280 - Add note here, why you ignoring strong beat?
2. 00:49:780 (3,1) - try to make perfect banked here, this overlap looks not so pretty
3. 01:29:780 (3,1) - ^
4. 02:05:780 (5) - Delete this whistle, it doesnt fit.
5. 02:08:280 (1) - Add whistle to the beginning, reverse & end of slider follow lyrics
6. map to the end please >_>

1. 00:46:280 (1) - add finish?
2. 01:03:280 (3,4,5) - um, feels a bit too challenging for a normal diff, consider replace it with 1/2 reverse slider
3. 02:22:030 (1,1) - please map first spinner, this spinner spam looks not so good.
4. 02:40:280 (8) - add finish to the beginning of slider

-Bakari- wrote:

What? Virgin in tags? Sounds like you're uploading some porn

1. this is WIP? lowest diff's star rating is 3.0. you must adjust Normal to be 3.0 or less.

1. 00:12:530 - why did not put circle? this section has the same melody as 00:16:530 - . would be better to add note here or remove 00:16:530 (4) - imo.
2. 00:14:280 (1,2) - (stupid) about distace...it is a mistake simply imo. try to move (1) to x188 y336.
3. 00:21:280 (4) - suggest to exchange two circles. may be tedious because 00:18:280 ~ 00:20:780 - have also the same rhythm. so would be better to add a change imo.
4. 00:49:780 - should be set additions: drum. because it have same sounds at 00:48:280 - 00:49:030 - .
5. 01:02:280 (1,2) - x:468 y:32 ? reason is same as 00:14:280 (1,2).
6. 01:29:780 - same as 00:49:780
7. 02:10:780 (2) ~ 02:21:530 (5) - these rhythm would be better to change more easier.
   
   1. adjust star rating on lowest diff
   2. 02:02:280 (1) ~ 02:09:780 (4) -
   1. 02:10:030 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) -
      
      
      1. 02:10:280 (1) - 1/1 slider
      2. 02:11:280 (2) - ^
      3. 02:12:280 (3) - ^
      4. 02:13:280 (4) - ^
   2. 02:18:280 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as above
      you did not follow 02:18:030 - , so not put circle at 02:20:030 - .
8. 02:34:280 (1,2,3) - forgot to add drum-finish?

1. 00:15:780 - I guess forgot to add clap
2. 00:36:030 - add whistle. this section have a pattern that is different from the other. so would be better to emphasise with whistle.
3. 01:16:030 (4) - same as above
4. 02:11:530 (4) - this whistle may be mistake, remove whistle at overall.

1. 00:17:280 (4) - ctrl+G? vocal is largest at 00:17:780 - . so I suggest to add jump to emphasise it. will be fun!
2. 00:25:905 (3) - this bule tick may confuse players. exchange 3/4 slider please >_<
3. 02:14:280 - forgot to add whistle?

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1. 00:25:530 (2) - can't you replace it with something else. 3/4 beats are really too sudden for this kind of songs! Try something like this. It's probably sounds a bit worse, but it's more playable for sure!
2. 02:22:030 (1,1) - double spinners are confusing bor beginners. They're not used to see second spinner right after the first one! Try to replace it with one loong spinner or map one of the spinner.
   Note: 02:28:280 (1) - 02:58:280 (1,1) - this circle is appears too soon after spinner. This is the easiest diff, be gentle with beginners! probably it's their first time playing osu
   
   Good job!

1. 00:49:780 (3,1) - nazi - I like your flow so much, but this thing looks a little bit off. Try to avoid this overlap to make it look better?
   Note: 01:29:780 (3,1) - not sure if it's intentional or you're just copypasting the same mistake..
2. 02:49:280 - please, place a circle here to emphasize vocals. I'm sure it is needed here to keep your rhythm and patterns consistent!
   Note: 02:51:530 (4) - same happens here. Try my rhythm here! example

1. Try to increase HP Drain by one tick to make mapset a bit more challenging and interesting! Make it really hard! <3
2. 01:49:530 (5,6) - nazi - to make smoother flow and minor jump use Ctrl+G on these two circles. It'll make a nice and more readable triangle!
3. 02:26:280 (1,1) - too soon after spinner! Give players some time to notice the circle and to finish spinning!
4. 02:46:530 (2,3,4,5) - nazi - move (4,5) somewhere else. Stack looks really confusing!