1. Easy (1.31 stars, 64 notes)
2. Naughty Kiss (2.84 stars, 191 notes)
3. Normal (1.63 stars, 109 notes)

1. 00:14:336 (4,1) - maybe switch those nc, it'll fit better with vocal if it's on 4 instead imo
2. 00:21:783 (4,1) - ^
3. 00:11:854 (2) - move the last slider point 1 grid up so it'll blanket better with the next slider
4. 00:17:646 (4) - small spacing problem here
5. 00:35:021 (2) - this would look better imo if you move this slider at x:280 y:192 it'll be better with your current flow
6. 00:37:503 (1) - ^
7. 00:46:605 (4) - i don't really like this kind of sliders in easys so, maybe remove the red point and make it like this instead?
   
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8. 01:07:290 (2) - how about moving this 3 grids down and rotate it -10 clockwise it'll blanket better imo
9. 01:13:082 (x) - why leaving the strong beat without note and anything, i suggest you to add something here, because it's weird to leave it like this :c

1. 00:53:224 (3) - umm it looks bad, maybe stuck it under 00:51:569 (1) - perfectly?

1. 00:09:785 (3) - move this slider 1 grid up so it'll be perfect mirror effect with the other slider
2. 00:11:854 (4) - move it 1 grid down so it'll blanket the other slider better
3. 00:50:535 (2) - i don't honestly like how you placed this note, i suggest you to move it like this
   
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Oyatsu wrote:

Hi Gero-chan <3

General

Ok!!

Hard

1. 00:10:406 (4,1) - it isn't blanketed. Need give up red point at 364/280 Fixed
2. 00:12:474 (1,2) - I think this rhythm is fine but I want a rhythm both good and hitsound, so you can try this: I prefer to keep it at this way
   
   Example

   
   
   

   300,76,12474,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   300,76,12578,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   300,76,12681,6,0,L|400:104,1,80

3. 00:15:370 (5,6) - They seems too curve at (6) to blanket, Try 2nd point of (6) at 268/44 Fixed
4. 00:39:986 (6,1) - I think NC is at (6) because I can see a big tick at head of (6) and u putted a finish , right? If you maybe followed vocal? ^
5. 00:41:123 - Yea, I often see this. Cahm hitsound isn't needed but which hitsounds like this. When we use tickthey often louder than when we add in note. so u can discrease volumn this into 20~30% Fixed
6. 00:54:465 (2,3) - Tail of 00:54:879 (3) - is at 340/248 and after, fix DS this too 00:55:499 (4) - Fixed
7. 00:59:223 (2,3) - 2nd point is at 212/308 is better to blanket ^
8. 01:01:498 (1,2) - This rhythm is really repeat because preivous rhythm you followed vocal so this is also so. Ctrl+G ^
9. 01:04:808 (4,5) - yea this is unrankble... 2 notes the same time/rhythm. And before, I have some example for this rhythm, you also followed vocal. So try this: why this is unrankable (? o.o
   
   Example

   
   
   

   254,109,64394,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   176,132,64601,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   220,200,64808,2,0,L|260:280,1,80,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

10. 01:15:357 (5) - This is maybe NC
11. 01:26:320 (4) - NC too

Rakuen's Normal

1. 00:14:750 (3,4) - Need blanket this, 00:15:164 (4) - middle point is at 232/336, end point at 272/296 and after, you need fix DS of 00:15:991 (5) - ... Fixed
2. 00:17:129 - Like I said on Hard, this need discrease the volumn to sensible of hitsound- clap. about 30~45 % Fixed
3. 00:16:818 (6) - I can hear a changing in vocal so you need NC, afterward you remove NC at 00:18:473 (1) - I didn't see a changing. And NC at 00:20:128 (3) - Fixed
4. 00:22:093 - It is too, discrease volumn.Fixed
5. 00:23:024 (2) - It is at 468/104 to blanket with 00:21:783 (1) - . It didn't really blanket before mmm imo is fine
6. 00:36:676 (5) - I didn't hear a finish in instrument, so you need remove it Sounds good D:
7. 00:45:364 - 00:46:191 - 01:01:808 - 01:05:118 - 01:08:531 - 01:11:841 - 01:12:668 - 01:15:150 - 01:15:978 - You need discrease volumn them Fixed
8. 00:54:672 (3,4) - They didn't creat a good follow So try 00:54:672 (3) - at 88/196 and 00:54:879 (4) - 104/160 ^
9. 00:59:843 (3) - Tail of it should be at 204/224 ^
10. 01:02:739 (2,3,4,1,2) - They are really quite difficult for noob player can't click 5 times circle. So change 01:03:980 (1,2) - into slider plz (other if u want). ^
11. 01:14:737 (5) - Previous rhythms, I see you map quite active about rhythm but this time you ingore 4~5 beats, oh you really are lazy? Consider to map plz. Need a logic for rhythm in kiai meh is a good rhythm

Normal

1. 00:10:199 (1) - Tail is at 428/204 to blanket with 00:08:958 (4) - . Only abit but I think it is important Fixed
2. 00:32:539 (4,1) - This you need blanket, right? 00:33:366 (1) - Middle point is at 152/276 and end point at 144/336 in my opinion this well
3. 01:11:427 (1,2) - I can hear a long vocal lasts, so I think you can repeat this rhythm that Ctrl+G is better. 01:14:737 (3,4) - is too^

Easy

1. 01:10:600 (1,2) - Remove NC at (1) and NC (2), because (1) doesn't change and (2) is at kiai- big tick Fixed
2. 01:17:219 (1) - 260/292 to blanket with 01:15:978 (2) - Fixed
   
   Good easy!! I love this <3

WOW!! After a month, I mod again. Good luck!! Gero-chan <3

Irreversible wrote:

Requested mod~ Thanks a lot ~

[General]

I guess the mp3 quality is rather bad, where did you get it from? I don't remember but I guess it was on a page of anime
Overall the hitsounds are too loud, I suggest lowering them a bit. kk Fixed

[Easy]

About NCing. What did you follow in particular? Sometimes it’s just really inconsistent, please go have a look at this. The problem is following; 00:36:262 (3) - If you put sliders like this (having something on the big white tick) you can’t put a NC there, which can cause problems. 00:46:605 (4) - And something like this, it should have a NC if you ask me. but this is unnecesary o.o because since as I can not put it in a place on reverse , then I put in the next slider for consistency about the NC I follow the voice.

00:10:199 (3) - That’s slightly offsymmetry, if you wanna keep consistency here, I’d fix that. Fixed
00:15:991 (3) - 306 329 for a slightly neater transition? Fixed
00:17:646 (5) - 48 132 same reason! Fixed

Feedback: The rhythm is interesting, but sometimes you could slightly improve it. Having something ended on the downbeat works, but I personally like to have the click feeling there. That’s, as said, just personal though. (and it also causes problems with consistent NCing, sometimes).

[Normal]

00:39:986 (4,1) - Same NC problem as in Easy Fixed I work a bit about the NC

Feedback: Yeah, it’s basically the same stuff as in easy, according to the NC and the rhythm (although you can leave this, if you like). If you need more stuff pointed out, you can reach me ingame.

[Rakuen’s Normal]

00:10:199 (5) - 00:11:027 (1) - swap NC to keep consistency Fixed
00:20:128 (5) - NC is missing Fixed
00:26:747 (4,1) - Swap NC again? Fixed
00:31:712 (3) - I guess this should have a NC to emphasize the finish here.. Fixed
01:19:287 (4) - Why the timing lines here? Fixed

Feedback: I guess I can see where you’ve put the NCs (according to the vocals?) But that is a bit odd to me since it’s on the red ticks, so.. it feels delayed.


[Hard]

00:39:986 (1) - Before you’ve followed the vocals with NC, then with the finish, it’s really unconsistent >< I Don't think so because I want to be consistent with this pattern 00:36:676 (5)
00:41:640 (1) - Why that NC here? Fixed

Feedback: I enjoyed the diff! But again, the NC.

[Overall]

I guess the mapset is okay, if you could only give it a bit more consistency (or explain me what you've actually followed). Spread was fine too, since Rakuens normal is fixing the gap between normal and hard.

Sorry for that crappy mod, orz
Good luck!