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HitoshizukuP x Yama - Crazy nighT

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Sephibro
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on domenica 6 ottobre 2013 at 04:33:05

Artist: HitoshizukuP x Yama
Title: Crazy nighT
Tags: Hatsune Miku Kagamine Rin Len Megurine Luka KAITO MEIKO GUMI Kamui Gakupo meiikyuu Rakuen Vocaloid Eight
BPM: 204
Filesize: 3694kb
Play Time: 03:18
Difficulties Available:
  1. Crazy (4,9 stars, 683 notes)
  2. Easy (2,1 stars, 193 notes)
  3. meiikyuu's Hard (4,97 stars, 503 notes)
  4. Rakuen's Normal (4,49 stars, 288 notes)
Download: HitoshizukuP x Yama - Crazy nighT
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My very first map, enjoy!

Easy by me
Normal by Rakuen
Hard by meiikyuu
Crazy by me

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Mercusheigan
sheela901
Darky
Itachi_Uchiha
AlpacaCokelat
Leader
Pagno
-Gamu-
Franc[e]sco
Inyuschan
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Genshin
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Flower
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Leorda
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ZLOdeuka-
10crystalmask01
RandomEffect
Asphyxia
sjoy
rEdo
Desperate-kun
TheGrimOfCrazy
MMzz
HabiHolic
MasterKirin
Kurai
rezoons
-Srui-
zorefire
Senbon
Guy
- Jelly -
Puncia
Kenterz9
HelloSCV
Alarido
Saten
bigfrog
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Rotte
-Bakari-
MetalJo
Nightcore Princess G
Frostmourne
Kurai
Mercusheigan
00:16:909 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - awful pattern, bad spacing and ugly to see. I made it like this because i have no better ideas, help me - increase the spacing from the last tap of the stream do match the spacing in the pattern.
00:19:409 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this may be hard to play, i need to fix it to make it more playable - i'd make the spacing in both combo colors more consistent with each other, because they are pretty much the same music beat.
00:25:888 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/3VuuA.jpg or http://puu.sh/3VuvT.jpg ? does it fit with the successive pattern? - i'd do smth like this - http://puu.sh/3WYf2.jpg (just change green 1 to green 2 lol) - because this way the pattern will be close to the next one or just make the green 1,2,3,4 like the blue one, but in a reverse way.
00:42:055 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i like the ascending one, but i don't like this. i need something else - http://puu.sh/3WYuu.jpg - the 6 and 7 at 41:@@@ dont really match the chorus and i would'nt keep the 42:055 pattern, soooo i seted a slider at 00:41:844 followed by 3 taps (00:42:212, 00:42:359, 00:42:506)
00:47:061 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - i ilke this pattern but i think it's pretty hard to play - fine to play imo, but set a new combo at 6 (start of 1st star) so ppl can notice the pattern change
01:08:820 (1,2,3) - maybe this is ugly lol - pretty ok, but the distance is way too much imo, i'd reduce the distance
01:39:408 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - should this be hourglass-shaped? - up to you, but the following slider of this pattern is kinda too fast
02:02:937 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - is this pattern playable enough? - yes, but consider a way to make it more confortable to play, by creating a flow in the sliders at 02:03:830, 5 is ok since it ends in the stream so, i'd make smth cool in 3 and 4.
02:41:771 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i think this can be much better - gotta agree, but its pretty ok to play, i'll see if i can find anything for you here
03:18:830 (2) - probably unrankable, but it's soo cool :C - i can't really answer this :( but this slider can be performed by holding at a right point, so i dont think its unrankable.

i'm really happy to see this mapped! ^^

best luck! I'll see if i can do a full mod of this later :p ( i'm really slow...), but i hope this helped you enough for now

btw CS 4 or 5 is totally up to you, personally i prefer 4, but 5 is totally fine for extras/insane as well
Topic Starter
Sephibro

Mercusheigan wrote:

00:16:909 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - awful pattern, bad spacing and ugly to see. I made it like this because i have no better ideas, help me - increase the spacing from the last tap of the stream do match the spacing in the pattern.
00:19:409 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this may be hard to play, i need to fix it to make it more playable - i'd make the spacing in both combo colors more consistent with each other, because they are pretty much the same music beat.
00:25:888 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/3VuuA.jpg or http://puu.sh/3VuvT.jpg ? does it fit with the successive pattern? - i'd do smth like this - http://puu.sh/3WYf2.jpg (just change green 1 to green 2 lol) - because this way the pattern will be close to the next one or just make the green 1,2,3,4 like the blue one, but in a reverse way. Nice one, i think i will put this in
00:42:055 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i like the ascending one, but i don't like this. i need something else - http://puu.sh/3WYuu.jpg - the 6 and 7 at 41:@@@ dont really match the chorus and i would'nt keep the 42:055 pattern, soooo i seted a slider at 00:41:844 followed by 3 taps (00:42:212, 00:42:359, 00:42:506)
00:47:061 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - i ilke this pattern but i think it's pretty hard to play - fine to play imo, but set a new combo at 6 (start of 1st star) so ppl can notice the pattern change
01:08:820 (1,2,3) - maybe this is ugly lol - pretty ok, but the distance is way too much imo, i'd reduce the distance Done, it was simpler than it looked
01:39:408 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - should this be hourglass-shaped? - up to you, but the following slider of this pattern is kinda too fast
02:02:937 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - is this pattern playable enough? - yes, but consider a way to make it more confortable to play, by creating a flow in the sliders at 02:03:830, 5 is ok since it ends in the stream so, i'd make smth cool in 3 and 4. Working on it
02:41:771 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i think this can be much better - gotta agree, but its pretty ok to play, i'll see if i can find anything for you here
03:18:830 (2) - probably unrankable, but it's soo cool :C - i can't really answer this :( but this slider can be performed by holding at a right point, so i dont think its unrankable.

i'm really happy to see this mapped! ^^

best luck! I'll see if i can do a full mod of this later :p ( i'm really slow...), but i hope this helped you enough for now Take your time :)

btw CS 4 or 5 is totally up to you, personally i prefer 4, but 5 is totally fine for extras/insane as well
Thank you for your suggestions :)

Probably i'll remap much of the first part, i need more ideas and i'll put them all together!
Wafu
Unrankable. Your map needs at least 2 diffs (in your case 3 for good spread). If it's going to be approved, it's unrankable too because only 6minutes+ are allowed to be approved.
Topic Starter
Sephibro

Wafu wrote:

Unrankable. Your map needs at least 2 diffs (in your case 3 for good spread). If it's going to be approved, it's unrankable too because only 6minutes+ are allowed to be approved.
i know im working on easy diff, that's why this map is still wip.. but this diff can be modded already
btw if you want to mod this map i can m4m :)

EDIT: easy done
sheela
[General]
I think the background don't fit with the music. Maybe this one? http://i3.topit.me/3/d3/97/1128197643f2f97d33o.jpg
I think is "nighT"
No video? If so, here's one: http://puu.sh/3Yvpq.flv

[Easy]
00:15:888 (1) - Remove NC (new combo) and NC 00:17:065 (2)
00:24:124 (1) - Ugly pattern. Copy 00:22:947 (3) , paste it and Ctrl+J and Ctrl+H. And NC here.
00:46:477 (6) - NC?
01:14:124 (2) - Don't get the circle overlap by 01:12:359 (6)
01:37:065 (3) - NC
01:42:947 (2) - ^
02:00:594 (2) - ^
02:10:594 (2) - Don't get the circle overlap by 02:08:829 (6)
03:00:594 (6) - NC?
03:17:065 (6) - ^

[Crazy]
Maybe put the CS to 4
00:25:006 (4) - x:160 y:48?
00:36:771 (6) - x:352 y:48?
01:35:594 (6) - ^
01:36:771 (4) - x:168 y:336
01:41:183 (1) - The slider went too fast. Put the slider velocity to 1.50x or 1.30x

Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Sephibro

sheela901 wrote:

[General]
I think the background don't fit with the music. Maybe this one? http://i3.topit.me/3/d3/97/1128197643f2f97d33o.jpg Thank you, i'll probably put this one soon
I think is "nighT" Done
No video? If so, here's one: http://puu.sh/3Yvpq.flv <3

[Easy]
00:15:888 (1) - Remove NC (new combo) and NC 00:17:065 (2)
00:24:124 (1) - Ugly pattern. Copy 00:22:947 (3) , paste it and Ctrl+J and Ctrl+H. And NC here.
00:46:477 (6) - NC?
01:14:124 (2) - Don't get the circle overlap by 01:12:359 (6)
01:37:065 (3) - NC
01:42:947 (2) - ^
02:00:594 (2) - ^
02:10:594 (2) - Don't get the circle overlap by 02:08:829 (6)
03:00:594 (6) - NC?
03:17:065 (6) - ^
everything done

[Crazy]
Maybe put the CS to 4 i need to change too many things if i switch to 4, maybe i'll do it later
00:25:006 (4) - x:160 y:48?
00:36:771 (6) - x:352 y:48?
01:35:594 (6) - ^
01:36:771 (4) - x:168 y:336 all done here
01:41:183 (1) - The slider went too fast. Put the slider velocity to 1.50x or 1.30x half speed of the previous jump

Good Luck!
i dont think there's so little to change on crazy diff, if you find more please let me know! :)
Darky
So lets begin :)

I will answer only those questions:

READ HERE What i need help on:

- I'm not sure if this should be CS 4 or 5. I would need to fix some distances if i switch to 4 switch to 4, and don't need fix distances
- HITSOUNDS! i put almost none, and maybe this song needs a custom sample set try switch to soft sample set, and finish switch to normal-finish http://up.ppy.sh/files/normal-hitfinish.wav.
look this : t/729


00:16:909 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - awful pattern, bad spacing and ugly to see. I made it like this because i have no better ideas, help me It's your map! show imagination! For example:

00:19:409 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this may be hard to play, i need to fix it to make it more playable yes. add some sliders instead circles
00:25:888 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/3VuuA.jpg or http://puu.sh/3VuvT.jpg ? does it fit with the successive pattern? I think 1 img better
00:42:055 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i like the ascending one, but i don't like this. i need something else I have no idea D: maybe you try fix all pattern 00:41:035 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) -
00:47:061 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - i ilke this pattern but i think it's pretty hard to play it's ok 00:48:241 (1,2,3,4,5) - Change this pattern with something else
01:39:408 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - should this be hourglass-shaped? 01:40:594 (1,2,3,4) - about this - it's very suddenly
02:02:937 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - is this pattern playable enough? NO D:
02:41:771 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i think this can be much better it's ok, but 02:43:241 (5) - can be located on somewhere else. think about it.
03:18:830 (2) - probably unrankable, but it's soo cool :C Right..
Thats all..You need more practice, and you will be awesome mapper :3
Good luck!
Itachi_Uchiha
[General]
  1. Offset is: 2974
  2. BPM: 102
[Eazy]
  1. 00:18:241 (2) - Make a curved one like before. This slider looks ugly
  2. 00:44:124 (5) - Take this code for the Slider:
    144,296,44123,2,0,B|88:244|88:244|124:192|124:192|88:140|88:140|144:88,1,280
  3. 00:47:652 (2) - Delete
  4. 00:48:829 (1) - Start where previous 2 where and let it end on the same spot
  5. 01:20:594 (4,5,6) - THis looks ugly arranged
  6. 02:26:476 (4,5,6) - ^
  7. 02:33:241 (1,1) - Definitely too less space between slider and spinner. Too hard for an easy
[Crazy]
  1. 00:16:771 (5,1) - Wrong spacing. People will stream the 1 but it´s not a part of the Stream
  2. 00:16:918 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Badly arranged
  3. 00:18:241 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  4. 00:20:006 (1,2,3,4) - Why spacing change there
  5. 00:20:594 (1,2,3,4,5) - This doesn´t look good
  6. 00:23:535 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  7. 00:25:300 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Make proper Tornado Jumps using the polygon tool (CTRL-SHIFT-D)
  8. 00:26:477 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - These sudden spacing changes are confusing to play
  9. 00:35:447 (8,9,1,2,3) - Try not to overlap
  10. 00:41:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Alright this is just brainf***
Alright
Look at other maps and keep their polished way in mind
Polish your map up as good as you can, when you done contact me and I recheck it^^ (Currently only applies to the crazy, The easy is way better)
Topic Starter
Sephibro

Itachi_Uchiha wrote:

[General]
  1. Offset is: 2974
  2. BPM: 102 bpm is the only thing im sure about this map
[Eazy]
  1. 00:18:241 (2) - Make a curved one like before. This slider looks ugly fixed, that was so random lol
  2. 00:44:124 (5) - Take this code for the Slider: done
    144,296,44123,2,0,B|88:244|88:244|124:192|124:192|88:140|88:140|144:88,1,280
  3. 00:47:652 (2) - Delete done
  4. 00:48:829 (1) - Start where previous 2 where and let it end on the same spot done
  5. 01:20:594 (4,5,6) - THis looks ugly arranged
  6. 02:26:476 (4,5,6) - ^
  7. 02:33:241 (1,1) - Definitely too less space between slider and spinner. Too hard for an easy yeah, i deleted the spinner
[Crazy]
  1. 00:16:771 (5,1) - Wrong spacing. People will stream the 1 but it´s not a part of the Stream
  2. 00:16:918 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Badly arranged
  3. 00:18:241 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  4. 00:20:006 (1,2,3,4) - Why spacing change there
  5. 00:20:594 (1,2,3,4,5) - This doesn´t look good
  6. 00:23:535 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  7. 00:25:300 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Make proper Tornado Jumps using the polygon tool (CTRL-SHIFT-D)
  8. 00:26:477 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - These sudden spacing changes are confusing to play
  9. 00:35:447 (8,9,1,2,3) - Try not to overlap
  10. 00:41:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Alright this is just brainf***

Sephibro wrote:

I'm gonna remap the first part, any small or big good idea is highly appreciated!
read first posts, i'm perfectly aware of all these issues and i will remap this part you modded, you could have modded the other sections instead.
I made some temporary fixes btw, thanks for helping me brainstorming


Alright
Look at other maps and keep their polished way in mind
Polish your map up as good as you can, when you done contact me and I recheck it^^ (Currently only applies to the crazy, The easy is way better)
regarding Darky's "mod", please stop copy pasting my first post without even watching the map from start to end.
Charles445
Hi, don't KD this post, this is a quick overview

It looks like you're going for a gimmicky approach to this map. This means that you're trying a lot of weird patterns. That's cool, but you need to avoid copying and pasting. The more varied weird stuff the better!

If you find yourself asking whether you should map a break or not, chances are you should map it :P
jyu
hi~ filling in for zorefire

[General]

  • Add the Vocaloid Eight personnel in Tags, such as 'Hatsune Miku' , 'Kagamine Rin' , etc
    and yes you need something between easy and insane diff

    i think it's okay not to map those breaks in easy diff

[Eazy]

  • HP-1
    idk what the widescreen support is used for

    there are some places that can be spiced up with finishes, i'll just point out those places and it's up to you to put finish or not
    00:12:359 - 00:17:065 - 00:21:771 - 00:26:477 - 00:28:830 - 00:30:006 - 00:40:594 - 00:45:300 - 00:59:418 - 01:04:124 - 01:13:535 - 01:18:241 - 01:22:947 - 01:37:065 - 01:41:771 - 02:00:594 - etc

    00:20:594 (1,2) - switch nc, the downbeat is 00:21:771 (2) - so (2) should be nc-ed
    00:21:771 (2,3) - only suggestion. if you follow, don't forget to adjust (4)'s shape
    00:26:477 (6,1) - switch nc, the downbeat is at (6)
    00:31:183 (5,1) - switch nc, the vocal starts at 00:31:183 (5) -

    maybe you should lower the hitsound volume a bit from 00:31:183 - since the song's also quiet from that point. also apply from this point too 01:18:241 - . then you can louder the hitsound volume again when the music starts to get louder

    01:02:947 (1,2) - switch nc
    01:44:712 - maybe add a note here or fill the gap between 01:44:124 (2,1) - it can accent the vocal and the part before spinner
    01:59:417 (1) - remove nc
    02:52:359 (1,2) - switch nc
    03:02:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - even though it fits the song, i think this is a bit overmapped and can be really hard for easy

    the copy-paste pattern in first two kiai times is really disappointing, i prefer if you mapped a new pattern at 2nd kiai

[Crazy]

  • ok the CS is really annoying to me, since i'm not a pro player the jumps is kinda hard so i would suggest CS-1

    00:16:771 (5,1) - should be far enough

    ok i'm not good at modding insane diffs like this, i can't even play it ._.
good luck~
Leader

Charles445 wrote:

Hi, don't KD this post, this is a quick overview

It looks like you're going for a gimmicky approach to this map. This means that you're trying a lot of weird patterns. That's cool, but you need to avoid copying and pasting. The more varied weird stuff the better!

If you find yourself asking whether you should map a break or not, chances are you should map it :P
Più o meno quello che ha detto.

[General]
  1. L'artista è:ひとしずくP (romanised: Hitoshizuku-P) mentre il titolo è Crazy ∞ nighT, Source: Vocaloid, poi adda Hatsune Miku Kagamine Rin Len Megurine Luka KAITO MEIKO GUMI Kamui Gakupo Yama△ nelle tags
  2. Userei un bg più inerente alla canzone, magari su google trovi quello proprio inerente al video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T-lcOKt8uas
[Crazy]

  • Non saprei se mettere CS4 o 5, penso che per il tipo di mappa ci stia meglio 4
  1. 00:12:947 (1,1) - Togli new combo
  2. 00:15:300 (1,1) - ^
  3. 00:18:241 (1,2) - Non so cosa volevi fare, ma io mettere il 2 nello spazio che hai fatto usando il red point nell'1
  4. 00:19:418 (1,4) - Toglili dalla coda degli slider, stanno male
  5. 00:20:594 (1,2,3,4) - Falli simmetrici piuttosto
  6. 00:22:212 (2,3,4,5) - Distanziali di più dall'1, non devono toccarsi (comunque fai uno slider e poi copincollalo e fai Edit -> Rotate 90° ecc., così escono precisi)
  7. 00:23:977 (4) - Non farlo toccare con l'1
  8. 00:27:065 (5) - È troppo vicino allo stream precedente, sembra diviso da 1/4 invece che da 1/2
  9. 00:27:359 (6,1) - - Evita questi overlap (sovrapposizioni di note/slider se non lo sapessi) ghgh
  10. 00:31:477 (4,5,6) - ^
  11. 00:32:653 (2,3,4) - ^
  12. 00:35:447 (8,9,1,2,3) - ^
  13. 02:07:212 (3,1,2,3,4) - ^
  14. 01:37:359 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) -
  15. 00:30:300 (1,1,1) - Togli queste new combo
  16. 00:40:594 (5) - Io eviterei questi slider a meno che non ci sia un momento particolare nella canzone (che non c'è qua)
  17. 00:42:947 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  18. 02:40:006 (4) - ^ Questo poi rovina di molto il flow
  19. 03:01:771 (1) - ^
  20. 01:00:888 (2) - Io lo farei orrizontale lasciando il 3 così com'è
  21. 01:01:624 (4) - Qualche grid su
  22. 01:03:535 (3) - brrr, cambia
  23. 02:00:006 (4) - ^
  24. 01:31:477 (2,3,4,5) - Non si capisce il loro spacing
  25. 01:32:212 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Mi piace l'idea ma non rende con il momento
  26. 01:45:374 - Fai partire uno spinner fino a 01:46:183
  27. 01:56:330 (2) - Potresti metterlo tra 01:55:447 (3,4) - questi due
  28. 02:03:241 (1,2,1,2) - Togli le new combo, devono seguire più la canzone che i pattern, cerca di usarli sul tick bianco grande, il downbeat
  29. 02:03:830 (3) - Io lo farei simmetrico al 4
  30. 02:04:712 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Questo stream non ci sta per niente
  31. 02:06:183 (5) - Stavi seguendo le vocal fino ad ora, questo stona, dovresti continuare con gli 1/2 :\
  32. 02:14:712 - Fai iniziare il break qui (basta che vai nella timeline e sposti quando esce lo stesso cursore per fare i repeat degli slider
  33. 02:24:124 - Io mapperei questo pezzo con 0.75 di SV considerando che è una parte lenta prima del kiai finale
  34. 02:27:359 (5,1) - Come detto prima non è quel granché di pattern
  35. 02:34:271 - Aggiungi una nota qui
  36. 02:38:388 (2) - Mettilo sotto l'inizio di 02:37:947 (6) -
  37. 02:42:065 (1) - Togli la new combo per il motivo di prima
  38. 02:45:006 (5) - Stessa cosa di 02:06:183 (5) -
  39. 02:44:418 (2) - Spostalo da quei slider, sta maluccio, io lo metterei sotto l'1
  40. 02:46:477 (1,3) - Falli spaziati come il 2 e il 4
  41. 02:49:712 (1,2,3,4) - Troppo spaziati imo
  42. 02:52:065 (7) - Più a destra
  43. 02:57:653 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Troppo spaziati aaa, riduci lo spacing (fai metà di quello che hai usato)
  44. 03:05:300 (4,5,6,7) - Falli usando il rotate di 90° come ho detto prima
  45. 03:14:418 (4) - Fallo parallelo, io lo sposterei poi in x:8 y:216
  46. 03:14:712 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Non mi piace tanto, ma vabbé, puoi tenerlo
  47. 03:18:830 (2) - Unrankabile a meno che non ci fai una storyboard solo per mettere un avviso per l'hold, quindi.. lol
Dovrebbe bastare, ricordati che servono gli hitsounds
Topic Starter
Sephibro

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

hi~ filling in for zorefire

[General]

  • Add the Vocaloid Eight personnel in Tags, such as 'Hatsune Miku' , 'Kagamine Rin' , etc yessir
    and yes you need something between easy and insane diff Soon™

    i think it's okay not to map those breaks in easy diff

[Eazy]

  • HP-1
    idk what the widescreen support is used for idk too, fixed

    there are some places that can be spiced up with finishes, i'll just point out those places and it's up to you to put finish or not
    00:12:359 - 00:17:065 - 00:21:771 - 00:26:477 - 00:28:830 - 00:30:006 - 00:40:594 - 00:45:300 - 00:59:418 - 01:04:124 - 01:13:535 - 01:18:241 - 01:22:947 - 01:37:065 - 01:41:771 - 02:00:594 - etc
    im loving you

    00:20:594 (1,2) - switch nc, the downbeat is 00:21:771 (2) - so (2) should be nc-ed done
    00:21:771 (2,3) - only suggestion. if you follow, don't forget to adjust (4)'s shape it is very cool but 4 wouldn't fit anywhere then ç_ç
    00:26:477 (6,1) - switch nc, the downbeat is at (6)
    00:31:183 (5,1) - switch nc, the vocal starts at 00:31:183 (5) -

    maybe you should lower the hitsound volume a bit from 00:31:183 - since the song's also quiet from that point. also apply from this point too 01:18:241 - . then you can louder the hitsound volume again when the music starts to get louder i was already thinking about this, will do in the Crazy too

    01:02:947 (1,2) - switch nc done
    01:44:712 - maybe add a note here or fill the gap between 01:44:124 (2,1) - it can accent the vocal and the part before spinneri just made the spinner longer
    01:59:417 (1) - remove nc done
    02:52:359 (1,2) - switch nc done
    03:02:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - even though it fits the song, i think this is a bit overmapped and can be really hard for easy keeping it for now

    the copy-paste pattern in first two kiai times is really disappointing, i prefer if you mapped a new pattern at 2nd kiai ouch i thought i was ninja enough with ctrl H

[Crazy]

  • ok the CS is really annoying to me, since i'm not a pro player the jumps is kinda hard so i would suggest CS-1 yes i think i really should too

    00:16:771 (5,1) - should be far enough slightly moved

    ok i'm not good at modding insane diffs like this, i can't even play it ._. it's even more difficult than i meant to because my patterns suck
good luck~
thank you very much an thank you charles too!
Topic Starter
Sephibro

Leader wrote:

Charles445 wrote:

Hi, don't KD this post, this is a quick overview

It looks like you're going for a gimmicky approach to this map. This means that you're trying a lot of weird patterns. That's cool, but you need to avoid copying and pasting. The more varied weird stuff the better!

If you find yourself asking whether you should map a break or not, chances are you should map it :P
Più o meno quello che ha detto.

[General]
  1. L'artista è:ひとしずくP (romanised: Hitoshizuku-P) mentre il titolo è Crazy ∞ nighT, Source: Vocaloid, poi adda Hatsune Miku Kagamine Rin Len Megurine Luka KAITO MEIKO GUMI Kamui Gakupo Yama△ nelle tags fatto
  2. Userei un bg più inerente alla canzone, magari su google trovi quello proprio inerente al video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T-lcOKt8uas tengo ancora un po' bondage miku troppo figa
[Crazy]

  • Non saprei se mettere CS4 o 5, penso che per il tipo di mappa ci stia meglio 4 mi avete convinto
  1. 00:12:947 (1,1) - Togli new combo fatto
  2. 00:15:300 (1,1) - ^ fatto
  3. 00:18:241 (1,2) - Non so cosa volevi fare, ma io mettere il 2 nello spazio che hai fatto usando il red point nell'1 era esattamente quello che volevo fare, ma poi mi sono accorto che sarebbero venuti troppo vicini :\ risolto, dio benedica ctrl G e ctrl H
  4. 00:19:418 (1,4) - Toglili dalla coda degli slider, stanno male fatto
  5. 00:20:594 (1,2,3,4) - Falli simmetrici piuttosto
  6. 00:22:212 (2,3,4,5) - Distanziali di più dall'1, non devono toccarsi (comunque fai uno slider e poi copincollalo e fai Edit -> Rotate 90° ecc., così escono precisi) distanziati, comunque era mia intenzione che non fossero simmetrici
  7. 00:23:977 (4) - Non farlo toccare con l'1
  8. 00:27:065 (5) - È troppo vicino allo stream precedente, sembra diviso da 1/4 invece che da 1/2 corretto
  9. 00:27:359 (6,1) - - Evita questi overlap (sovrapposizioni di note/slider se non lo sapessi) ghgh in effetti non piaceva nemmeno a me
  10. 00:31:477 (4,5,6) - ^
  11. 00:32:653 (2,3,4) - ^
  12. 00:35:447 (8,9,1,2,3) - ^
  13. 02:07:212 (3,1,2,3,4) - ^
  14. 01:37:359 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) -
  15. 00:30:300 (1,1,1) - Togli queste new combo tutto fatto su
  16. 00:40:594 (5) - Io eviterei questi slider a meno che non ci sia un momento particolare nella canzone (che non c'è qua)
  17. 00:42:947 (1,2,3,4) - ^ li ho fatti cosi' perche' altrimenti erano troppo lunghi per essere fatti tenendo il cursore fermo sulla testa
  18. 02:40:006 (4) - ^ Questo poi rovina di molto il flow
  19. 03:01:771 (1) - ^
  20. 01:00:888 (2) - Io lo farei orrizontale lasciando il 3 così com'è e' fatto cosi' per essere parallelo a (1)
  21. 01:01:624 (4) - Qualche grid su fatto
  22. 01:03:535 (3) - brrr, cambia
  23. 02:00:006 (4) - ^
  24. 01:31:477 (2,3,4,5) - Non si capisce il loro spacing
  25. 01:32:212 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Mi piace l'idea ma non rende con il momento sto cercando qualche punto dove sta meglio, lo trovero'
  26. 01:45:374 - Fai partire uno spinner fino a 01:46:183
  27. 01:56:330 (2) - Potresti metterlo tra 01:55:447 (3,4) - questi due fatto
  28. 02:03:241 (1,2,1,2) - Togli le new combo, devono seguire più la canzone che i pattern, cerca di usarli sul tick bianco grande, il downbeat
  29. 02:03:830 (3) - Io lo farei simmetrico al 4 ti giuro viene fuori una figura fallica
  30. 02:04:712 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Questo stream non ci sta per niente l'ho lasciato ed ho diminuito lo spacing
  31. 02:06:183 (5) - Stavi seguendo le vocal fino ad ora, questo stona, dovresti continuare con gli 1/2 :\ NON stavi seguendo le vocal fino ad ora, quello slider ha un beat su ogni accento della voce in quel momento
  32. 02:14:712 - Fai iniziare il break qui (basta che vai nella timeline e sposti quando esce lo stesso cursore per fare i repeat degli slider non sapevo si potesse spostare il break, fatto comunque
  33. 02:24:124 - Io mapperei questo pezzo con 0.75 di SV considerando che è una parte lenta prima del kiai finale si penso che lo faro'
  34. 02:27:359 (5,1) - Come detto prima non è quel granché di pattern prima sono d'accordo, qua mi piace anche per via del diverso combocolour
  35. 02:34:271 - Aggiungi una nota qui
  36. 02:38:388 (2) - Mettilo sotto l'inizio di 02:37:947 (6) - fatto
  37. 02:42:065 (1) - Togli la new combo per il motivo di prima
  38. 02:45:006 (5) - Stessa cosa di 02:06:183 (5) -
  39. 02:44:418 (2) - Spostalo da quei slider, sta maluccio, io lo metterei sotto l'1
  40. 02:46:477 (1,3) - Falli spaziati come il 2 e il 4 fatto
  41. 02:49:712 (1,2,3,4) - Troppo spaziati imo fatto
  42. 02:52:065 (7) - Più a destra fatto
  43. 02:57:653 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Troppo spaziati aaa, riduci lo spacing (fai metà di quello che hai usato) fatto
  44. 03:05:300 (4,5,6,7) - Falli usando il rotate di 90° come ho detto prima non li voglio fare di rotazione ma li ho corretti
  45. 03:14:418 (4) - Fallo parallelo, io lo sposterei poi in x:8 y:216 decisamente si
  46. 03:14:712 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Non mi piace tanto, ma vabbé, puoi tenerlo neanche a me, mi piacerebbe qualcosa di molto piu' asimmetrico
  47. 03:18:830 (2) - Unrankabile a meno che non ci fai una storyboard solo per mettere un avviso per l'hold, quindi.. lol il fatto e' che lo puoi completare semplicemente tenendo il cursore fermo sulla testa dello slider, penso che questo lo renda rankabile
Dovrebbe bastare, ricordati che servono gli hitsounds lo so ç_ç
Pagno
hola o/

~ Mod ~
[General]
Stack Leniency=6 maybe?

[Crazy]
00:15:888 (5,6) - CTRL+G these two, to give the correct spacing of the start of the stream? If you don't feel to CTRL+G it, add another note on the blue tick between these two 00:16:183 (6,1)

00:17:506 (3,4) - Try removing hitcircle '4', then move the slider ½ beat to the right, and fill the empty red tick with a hitcircle maybe placed on the end of the slider


00:18:241 (1,2) - Same goes with these two, remove the hitcircle '3', move the slider to the right of ½ beat then place a hitcircle somewhere

00:37:359 (2,4) - Between these two, place a hitcircle right in the middle of the playfield to make it easier to get the time


00:41:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ewwwww, so:
* 00:41:771 (6) - Convert this hitcircle into a slider pointing at the bottom;
* 00:42:065 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - CTRL+J this whole thing and stack the '1' on the past '5'

00:44:418 (2,3) - CTRL+G
00:44:859 (4,5) - CTRL+G

00:48:241 (1,2,3,4,5) - quite hard to read, try following these step by step:
* 00:48:388 (2,4) - Delete these two
* 00:48:535 (2,3) - CTRL+G
* 00:48:241 (1) - Convert this one into a slider which points to the left
* 00:48:535 (2) - Convert this one into a slider which points to the right
* 00:48:830 (3) - Convert this one into a slider which points to the top

01:17:065 (5) - Just a minor thing: make this break start on the new beat (you see that dark gray part, you can move it):


01:31:183 (5) - Remove NC
01:31:477 (6) - Add NC
01:31:918 (3) - Add NC
01:32:212 (1) - Remove NC
(this is to make people understand better the timing)

01:33:241 (8,1) - Add a beat on the red tick between these two?
01:33:830 (1,2) - Here too?

02:13:535 (1) - Same here with the break, make it start on the new beat's tick

02:34:418 (1) - NC
Topic Starter
Sephibro

Pagno wrote:

hola o/

~ Mod ~
[General]
Stack Leniency=6 maybe?

[Crazy]
00:15:888 (5,6) - CTRL+G these two, to give the correct spacing of the start of the stream? If you don't feel to CTRL+G it, add another note on the blue tick between these two 00:16:183 (6,1) risolto allargando il pattern prima

00:17:506 (3,4) - Try removing hitcircle '4', then move the slider ½ beat to the right, and fill the empty red tick with a hitcircle maybe placed on the end of the slider ho creato la sincope volontariamente, mi piace sta figura ritmica che si forma


00:18:241 (1,2) - Same goes with these two, remove the hitcircle '3', move the slider to the right of ½ beat then place a hitcircle somewhere ^

00:37:359 (2,4) - Between these two, place a hitcircle right in the middle of the playfield to make it easier to get the time


00:41:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - ewwwww, so:
* 00:41:771 (6) - Convert this hitcircle into a slider pointing at the bottom; yup
* 00:42:065 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - CTRL+J this whole thing and stack the '1' on the past '5' done, i may reverse this change later btw

00:44:418 (2,3) - CTRL+G fatto
00:44:859 (4,5) - CTRL+G fatto

00:48:241 (1,2,3,4,5) - quite hard to read, try following these step by step: took your advice as a guideline to improve and simplify the pattern
* 00:48:388 (2,4) - Delete these two
* 00:48:535 (2,3) - CTRL+G
* 00:48:241 (1) - Convert this one into a slider which points to the left
* 00:48:535 (2) - Convert this one into a slider which points to the right
* 00:48:830 (3) - Convert this one into a slider which points to the top

01:17:065 (5) - Just a minor thing: make this break start on the new beat (you see that dark gray part, you can move it): fatto


01:31:183 (5) - Remove NC fatto
01:31:477 (6) - Add NC fatto
01:31:918 (3) - Add NC fatto
01:32:212 (1) - Remove NC fatto
(this is to make people understand better the timing)

01:33:241 (8,1) - Add a beat on the red tick between these two?
01:33:830 (1,2) - Here too?

02:13:535 (1) - Same here with the break, make it start on the new beat's tick fatto

02:34:418 (1) - NC
<3
Gamu
hi~

I'm sorry for very late orz

[General]

●Artist: ひとしずくP ⇒ ひとしずくP × やま△
Romanised Artist: Hitoshizuku-P ⇒ HitoshizukuP x Yama
Romanised Title: Crazy Night ⇒ Crazy nighT

These would be correct. The song was made by two people. And, Remove "Yama△" in Tags.

●Song Setup > Design > Music.Toggles > Turn off the letterbox during breaks. don't need?

[Easy]

●hitsound is unsatisfactory. By adding a clap to a steady rhythm, it will be possible to entertain the player.
About placement, I think there would be no problem.

[Crazy]

●00:12:359 (2) - Add new combo. Sound was changed.
●00:21:771 (5) - Add new combo. And, 00:22:212 (1) - Remove new combo.
●00:25:300 (1,2,3,4) - Swap placement ⇒http://puu.sh/40go5.jpg
●00:35:006 (6,7) - Move to x:256 y:192. Place right in the middle.
●00:40:594 (5) - Add new combo. And, 00:41:035 (1) - Remove new combo.
●01:06:771 (1,2) - Ctrl+G? I prefer this.
●01:11:918 (3) - ^
●01:17:065 (5) - Add new combo.
●01:32:653 (6) - ^
●01:32:947 (7) - ^
●01:33:241 (8) - ^
●02:04:124 (8) - Ctrl+G? I prefer this.
●02:26:183 (4) - ^
●hitsound is unsatisfactory. By adding a clap to a steady rhythm, it will be possible to entertain the player.


good luck :3
Franc[e]sco
I hope you find this useful, h-here I go!~

[Eazy]
Looks good but the hitsounds are a bit plain!

01:01:771 (3,4) - whistle hitsound maybe?
01:04:124 (1,2) - see above
01:10:594 (4,5) - whistle only the tail of 4 and on 5?
01:13:535 (1,2) - see above
01:18:241 - switch to soft sampleset
01:18:241 (1) - move finish to 2 to match the bell
01:19:418 (3) - finish on tail of the slider
01:20:594 (4) - see above
01:21:771 (6) - see above
01:22:947 (1) - switch to clap
01:23:535 (2) - finish on the start of the slider
01:24:712 (4) - finish on the start of the slider and clap on the tail
01:40:594 (1) - whistle
01:42:947 (1) - I don't think clap fits here
01:58:241 (3,4) - whistle?
02:00:594 (1,2) - see above
02:07:064 (4) - whistle on tail?
02:08:241 (5) - whistle?
02:10:006 (1,2) - see above
02:24:124 - switch to soft sampleset and add finish hitsounds to match the bells as I suggested at 01:18:241
02:37:065 (3) - whistle on start and tail?
02:38:241 (5) - whistle on tail?
02:40:006 (1) - whistle?
02:45:300 (3) - whistle on tail?
02:47:065 (4) - whistle?
02:48:830 (1,2) - whistle?
02:55:889 (7) - whistle on start and 2nd reverse?
02:58:241 (3) - whistle?
03:05:300 (5) - whistle on start and tail?
03:07:653 (1,2) - whistle?
03:17:065 - switch to soft sampleset

[Crazy]
The map is good and the patterns are challenging to read yet playable.
I personally don't like this style of mapping so I can't really comment on the patterns.
All I can suggest is add hitsounds and sampleset switching in the same style as I suggested on Eazy.
Topic Starter
Sephibro

-Gamu- wrote:

hi~

I'm sorry for very late orz np :)

[General]

●Artist: ひとしずくP ⇒ ひとしずくP × やま△
Romanised Artist: Hitoshizuku-P ⇒ HitoshizukuP x Yama
Romanised Title: Crazy Night ⇒ Crazy nighT

These would be correct. The song was made by two people. And, Remove "Yama△" in Tags.

●Song Setup > Design > Music.Toggles > Turn off the letterbox during breaks. don't need?

Everything done

[Easy]

●hitsound is unsatisfactory. By adding a clap to a steady rhythm, it will be possible to entertain the player.
About placement, I think there would be no problem.

[Crazy]

●00:12:359 (2) - Add new combo. Sound was changed.
●00:21:771 (5) - Add new combo. And, 00:22:212 (1) - Remove new combo. Done
●00:25:300 (1,2,3,4) - Swap placement ⇒http://puu.sh/40go5.jpg Done, i really like this change
●00:35:006 (6,7) - Move to x:256 y:192. Place right in the middle. i want 6 and 7 to be mid-way between 5 and 8
●00:40:594 (5) - Add new combo. And, 00:41:035 (1) - Remove new combo. Done
●01:06:771 (1,2) - Ctrl+G? I prefer this. Done
●01:11:918 (3) - ^ i like it more now
●01:17:065 (5) - Add new combo. Done
●01:32:653 (6) - ^
●01:32:947 (7) - ^
●01:33:241 (8) - ^
●02:04:124 (8) - Ctrl+G? I prefer this. Done
●02:26:183 (4) - ^ i like it more now
●hitsound is unsatisfactory. By adding a clap to a steady rhythm, it will be possible to entertain the player.


good luck :3
Thank you!
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