1. Hard (4,86 stars, 79 notes)
2. Insane (4,99 stars, 87 notes)
3. Irre's Extra (4,99 stars, 88 notes)
4. Lanturn's Easy (1,95 stars, 32 notes)
5. Normal (3,34 stars, 42 notes)

Feverie wrote:

Just saying, cool choose of song xD Heh, I like it, too


Easy-


0:22.6 - 0:23.1 - I suggest not stacking these notes, try a stream ! Fixed.

Normal-

0:26.6 | Half the slider and use a repeat arrow (so it is the same length as before). This sounds better to me Fixed.

Hard

This is more Insane than Hard, Increase the Circle Size then it will be just right! You're right. Thank you.

Insane

Fairly Short, I think this would be better if it was Longer.
All the timing however is Correct! It's not finished yet. :p I will do it i a few days.

Another

All good! Haha, Thank you!

All

Try Adding some more Hitsounds! Yes, I'm looking for some. Any suggestions? ^^

Hope this help Yes, it helped me. Thank you!

Harpie wrote:

I just think you sjould consider reducing number of notes in Normal. It is considered actually as an Insane.
Even Hard mode look like Insane... Consider trying to reduce Normal mode to 3 or 3,5 stars.
It looks like you like to create Insane song anyway. Good Job!

1. check aimod

• 00:03:628 (1,2,3) - the blanket is worse so remake it again
  00:07:128 (4) - distancing look different instead before slider (i mean 00:05:628 (3) ) and after slider (i mean 00:07:628 (1) )
  00:11:628 (1,1) - Finish
  00:11:619 - i think inherited point offset is wrong
  00:15:627 - ^
  00:33:627 (1) - this slider is not in White tick. oh wait but this tick fit the vocal ignore this ignore this

1. the last inherited point don't need kiai time again

• 00:19:628 (1) - i think you don't need stack here
  00:21:628 (1,2) - ^
  00:24:878 (5) - the red node i think don't useless
  00:29:627 (1) - fix the placement. It's not triangle

1. No kiai end time???

• 00:03:628 (1,2) - you must make this slider really 135°
  
  Example

  
  00:06:878 (4) - Bad overlap
  00:11:628 - 00:15:128 - Circles at here. Don't put clap in here. Change it into clap instead the before.
  00:15:627 - 00:19:627 - i think The slider SV i look from here is different instead 00:19:628 - 00:23:627
  00:27:627 (1,3) - Try blanket ^.^ it's more good

1. 00:01:130 - i think, timing point in here must delete then the offset is 3628
2. AR9 is not humanly possible for HARD. But insanes must have AR9 or AR10. I think the AR is 8.
3. OD-1
4. The Grid size must "Medium (level 2)"
5. No kiai end time???

• 00:01:377 (1,1,1,1) - Delete NC. No NC spam pleiz

1. No kiai end time???

DenoisoGoiso wrote:

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okay i think this is M4M. delete another please the slider wooppp 1337 5|_1[)33R

[General]

1. check aimod

[Easy]

• 00:03:628 (1,2,3) - the blanket is worse so remake it again Remade it.
  00:07:128 (4) - distancing look different instead before slider (i mean 00:05:628 (3) ) and after slider (i mean 00:07:628 (1) ) ^
  00:11:628 (1,1) - Finish Fixed.
  00:11:619 - i think inherited point offset is wrong
  00:15:627 - ^
  00:33:627 (1) - this slider is not in White tick. oh wait but this tick fit the vocal ignore this ignore this

1. the last inherited point don't need kiai time again

Thanks for the advice.

[Normal]

• 00:19:628 (1) - i think you don't need stack here Fixed.
  00:21:628 (1,2) - ^ Too.
  00:24:878 (5) - the red node i think don't useless Don't know what you mean, sorry. ^^
  00:29:627 (1) - fix the placement. It's not triangle Fixed.

1. No kiai end time???

Fixed.

[Hard]

• 00:03:628 (1,2) - you must make this slider really 135° Fixed.
  
  Example

  
  00:06:878 (4) - Bad overlap I actually like the way it is here. I'll keep it. :3
  00:11:628 - 00:15:128 - Circles at here. Don't put clap in here. Change it into clap instead the before. I think it's ok here. :p
  00:15:627 - 00:19:627 - i think The slider SV i look from here is different instead 00:19:628 - 00:23:627 Don't exactly know, what you mean here. :O
  00:27:627 (1,3) - Try blanket ^.^ it's more good Good advice. But I think it is ok here.

1. 00:01:130 - i think, timing point in here must delete then the offset is 3628
2. AR9 is not humanly possible for HARD. But insanes must have AR9 or AR10. I think the AR is 8. Fixed.
3. OD-1
4. The Grid size must "Medium (level 2)" Fixed.
5. No kiai end time???

Fixed.

[Insane]

• 00:01:377 (1,1,1,1) - Delete NC. No NC spam pleiz Fixed. :3

1. No kiai end time???

That.
Thank you and GL~ Thanks.

darkguydari wrote:

Hope this helps, I liked it.

[General]

It doesn't have preview point, you can add one in Timing > "Set current point as preview point" Fixed. Thanks for the explanation. :3
Kiai time is not snapped, maybe because you changed the offset, go to the timing points where the kiai time is and pick "use current time". Fixed.


[Another]

Kiai doesn't end at all, pick and ending point.
Use distance snap!, the whole difficult is very hard to read.

00:03:627 (1) - The end is not snapped, move the end of the slider a little bit until it fits in the tick.
00:07:128 (7) - What is this?, the BPM of the map does not allow this. It can be replaced with a hit circle.
00:17:128 (7) - Same as above

I deleted the map. I wanted to test something with the sliders. It was bad, I know. xD
[Insane]

00:01:876 (2) - Fix the end of this, it is not snapped. All fixed. :3 Thanks for the explanation.
00:02:376 (2) - ^
00:02:876 (2) - ^

[Hard]

00:15:628 - From that point until the end, check ALL the sliders and fix them, you only have to grab their end and move them a little bit. Don't exactly know what you mean. :S

[Normal]

Kiai time never ends. Pick an ending point. Fixed.
I don't think the normal difficults should have these jumps. 00:09:878 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - eventhough they look cool :c I agree, but for the short time of the map I think it's ok. :S I am not sure.

[Easy]

00:19:128 (7) - Use distance snap Fixed.
00:25:628 (4,5,6) - ^ Fixed.

Secretpipe wrote:

Hi , I'm from #modreqs

Tell me if my mod is bad or good , I'll try !

[Easy]
00:22:128 - Put a note here ? I put a slider instead. :3


[Normal]

00:12:628 (5) - You should reverse it ! I think it's ok the way it is.
00:13:628 (1,2,3,4) - Put 1 and 2 in left side ; 3 and 4 in right side You're right. Thank you.

[Hard]

00:26:627 (3) - Make the slider more simple ! Hehe, I really like the sliders, so I'll keep them.

[Insane]

00:26:625 (3) - ^ ^



Here's my mod ! I don't find a lot of wrong things
Seriously , I like that map ! I laughed so hard when I listened to it 1st time xDD Yeah, I know. This song is too good.

Good luck ! :3

-[ SooHanZ ]- wrote:

Hi Fatfan Kolek, now I'm going to say the mistakes I've seen.

~Lanturn's Easy

-The last spinner finish in 00:35:150 (1) -.
-The times are good .
-HP Drain Rate i would change to 3.

~Normal:

-The map is okay, okay but a bit faster.
-HP Drain Rate: change to 3.
-Approach Rate: change to 4.

~Hard:

-The difficulty is very similar to insane.
-Approach Rate: change to 5.
-Overall Difficulty: change to 6.

~Insane:

-The times are good but, you need to speed up, because the hard is almost the same velocity that this.
-Change the Circle Size to 5 or 6.

*General:

-The Kiai mode begins at 00:19:650 (3) - and ends in 00:25:650 (1) -. Then again in 00:27:400 (6) - and ends 00:33:150 (14) -
-And in the end if you like, you can put again the kiai mode in 00:33:650 (1) - and ends in the end of the song.
-At the end of the song, the hits do not match with the BPM of the song.

Well this was my contribution, I gave my opinions of the map.

I hope you have served

PS:Sorry, my english is not very good

Fixed a few things. :3 Thanks for your mod!

No Dap wrote:

[General]
For some reason, it is not showing the bit rate. But it must fall between 128kbps and 192kpbs.

00:03:650 seems like the right time for preview point since this song is a conversation and only 35 seconds long. Tried it before. I think it is better like it is now. :3

Put hit sound file for soft-hitclap. Because people who are not using default skin will be hearing random off noise with only "soft-slidertick2"

Try to make slider points like this Fixed.
as opposed to this

The picture is from insane 00:24:650 (5)

[Easy]
HP=2 AR=3 OD=2 (Does not really make any difference...) Fixed.
00:05:650 (2,1) - Can be blanket better, which means if you are going to change you have to ch1ange 00:03:650 (1) too I think it's ok here, but I see your problem with that. :p
00:25:650 (1) - 00:26:650 tick's hit sound is not right. You have to put soft-hitclap for unified hit sounds as I suggested in previously.
Move your last timing point to 00:35:087. Fixed.

[Normal]
HP=4 AR=5 OD=4 (Again, does not really matter) Fixed.

00:10:400 (6) - To 304,144 and move the rest accordingly.. Thanks. Fixed. :3

[Hard]
00:10:650 (4,5) - 3/4 slider does not seem fit to me here I actually like it. :c
00:13:650 (1,2) - ^ ^
00:33:868 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why are these note not on any of the ticks? This is a very unrankable factor. I recommend placing a spinner like Easy and Normal Diff. Yeah, can't find the right Bpm there lol. Fixed it with a spinner.


[Insane]
00:25:150 (6) - Move 1st point to 460,152 / 2nd to 286,176 / 3rd to 312,156 to make it symmetrical with 00:24:650 (5) Mmh, I think it is ok here. :3
00:25:650 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why not add sliders like Hard diff? Oh, wait, this is a guest diff.
00:33:650 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Again, Spinner fits very well here. It is unrankable with these notes.
Lastly, you can make this more harder. Fixed it with a Spinner.

Thanks for your mod~ :3

CloudSplash16 wrote:

Hi,

[General]
The dimensions of your video exceed the maximum allowed in ranking criteria. Use 854x480
Audio track should be removed from video.
Here is the video with correct dimensions and no sound: http://puu.sh/5KR9h.avi Fixed and Thank you!

What's with the high Stack Leniency? Is there a reason for it? Hmh? Dunno.

[Lanturn's Easy]
00:21:650 (1,3) - Swap NC? and remove NC from 00:25:650 (1) - for consistent 8 beat phrases throughout.
00:27:650 (1) - Drum finish instead?
Great
Edit: well... I don't have anything to say then xD Sorry

[Normal]
AR -> 5 Fixed.
I think you should refer to Lanturn's Easy to see how to hitsound. Try to imitate his hitsound patterns.
Your combos are inconsistent. I suggest using new combo every 4 or 8 beats (on the big white ticks). For example: http://puu.sh/5KTsp.png I tried my best. :S I hope it is fixed now.
00:07:400 (1,3) - I think you should prevent these from overlapping. Try moving them like this: http://puu.sh/5KSWc.jpg Fixed.
00:13:150 (4,6) - When these stack in game, it makes overlap between (3,4). If you move (4,6) down 1 grid and right 1 grid (ignoring DS), it will look much better in game. (In editor: http://puu.sh/5KTe2.jpg) (In game: http://puu.sh/5KTcm.jpg) Don't know if its right know, but I did it like you explained it to me. :p Fixed. :s
There are many more overlaps which I feel can be avoided using slight shifts in placement, or maybe by increasing DS to 1.2 for the entire map. I won't list all of them, please find them yourself. I'll look for them. Thank you.
00:25:650 (1) - I understand what you tried to do here, I don't think you should use speed-ups in a Normal diff. It can be hard for the less skilled players, especially there are no visible sliderticks indicating a speed change. Try sticking to 1.0x SV? Yeah, I know. I am thinking about a remade on normal difficulty in general. Let's see.^^
00:33:400 (1) - Make the spinner start on 00:33:650 - . Fixed.

[Hard]
Same thing about hitsounds.
Change audio preview time to 19150 like all other diffs. You can do this by editing the *.osu file where it says "PreviewTime:" Fixed.
00:11:650 (7,1) - Swap NC Fixed.
00:23:627 - Inheriting section is not snapped. Resnap it. Fixed.
00:28:618 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Why are these not snapped? Fixed. My fault lol.
00:33:400 (1) - Start spinner at 00:33:650 - Fixed.

[Irre's Insane]
00:05:150 (1,2) - Swap NC. By lyrics and music the second phrase starts at 00:05:650 - Fixed.
00:19:400 (1,2,8,9) - Consistency...? I suggest swapping NC between 00:19:400 (1,3) - since that's how it is for all other instances of this rhythm in your map. Fixed.
00:24:150 (3) - Why did you stop using claps? The sound in the music here is the same as the previous phrase, so use a similar hitsound pattern? Fixed.
00:25:650 (1) - I think you shouldn't stack this on the end. Every other part where you have this rhythm, it's not stacked. Ok, fixed.^^
00:31:650 (8) - NC Fixed.
00:33:400 (1) - Start spinner at 00:33:650 - ? Fixed.

That's all from me. Sorry for a not-very-good mod. Thanks for the mod. :3 So many fixes lol. I
Good luck Thanks~

deejaydray wrote:

Hello, from #modreqs ^^

Lanturn's EASY:

Surprisingly, I haven't found anything wrong about this difficulty :3
However, I would add a "whistle" sound at the end of this slider too 00:03:650 (1) , and same goes for the other objects of the same type (like the end of this slider at 00:05:650 (2) or this circle at 00:09:150 (2) and so on...), but it's just an opinion, you don't have to do this if you don't like it ^^