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Haru - March Handyman (Instrumental)

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Metroid
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Metroid
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, July 18, 2009 at 4:39:17 PM

Artist: Haru
Title: March Handyman (Instrumental)
Source: Old Wood's Hut
Tags: Techno Instrumental Viotex Nexy's Collab Nexy Touhou
BPM: 123
Filesize: 8013kb
Play Time: 03:54
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.87 stars, 546 notes)
  2. Shinxyn's Normal (4.37 stars, 218 notes)
Download: Haru - March Handyman (Instrumental)
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I got very little. Timed by Nexy
this song isn't really related to Touhou but it's not really related to anything so, I'll make it related to Touhou.

Look at that blue haired girl in the clouds!
Remilia is taking a stroll...

Thanks to:
Remmyx25 for the sprites of Tenshi
Rokodo for the Sprites of Remilia and Shinxyn's Avatar
Starrodkirby for the clouds
Nexy for the timing
and Al-Azif for the Metroid avatars which I edited a little.

Part of Nexy's Viotex Beatmap Collab -> forum/viewtopic.php?f=53&t=12924

1st upload - Initial upload from WiP to Pending (added Shinxyn's Normal).
2nd upload - Added SB for Hard.
3rd upload - Did some of SDK's suggestions.
4th upload - SB finished for both difficulties.
5th upload - Gens and MafiaMaster's changes (Edited Background to be 800x600).
6th upload - EEeee Suggestions.
Last edited by Metroid , edited 29 times in total.
GladiOol
4,475 posts
Joined August 2008
GladiOol
Delete first Timing Point (?) Since it has no use at all.
Second Timing point -> 10507
And then I don't see any point for a third one (?)

Hard
00:40:45 (7) - Make the ending and beginning come down on the same place (?)
00:44:84 (6,7) - Can be confusing -> Spacing.
00:46:55 (1) - ^ And then all of the sudden you've got no 'wait' time here ;O
02:07:52 (7) - Move on grid lvl to the right, otherwise it looks 'weird'
Starred~
Metroid
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Metroid

Gladi wrote:

Delete first Timing Point (?) Since it has no use at all.
Second Timing point -> 10507
And then I don't see any point for a third one (?) No, since there's a difference as Nexy timed it,
Also, I won't delete the unused timing section till this goes into pending and I have 3 difficulties.

Hard
00:40:45 (7) - Make the ending and beginning come down on the same place (?) No, since it would be weird and hard to read.
00:44:84 (6,7) - Can be confusing -> Spacing. It's a out of spacing pattern :/
00:46:55 (1) - ^ And then all of the sudden you've got no 'wait' time here ;O It reads fine to me
02:07:52 (7) - Move on grid lvl to the right, otherwise it looks 'weird' Fixed'
Starred~
Shinxyn
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Shinxyn
Source : "Old Woods Hut" << the "original artist"
I don't think you need the touhou tag, but maybe keep it for the bg..

Hard-
00:14:61 (1,2) - please don't have clap and whistle on same note (and this goes for most other soft sections that have this..)
00:23:13 (1) - nazi- up a tick (or move 1,2,3,4 closer)
00:25:33 (8,9) - can't say I like the whistles here, but whatever
00:29:96 (1,2) - I couldn't follow these notes... seemed very random, remove or adjust please
00:32:16 (6,7,8) - right a tick!
00:40:45 (7) - extreme nazi- have end align when start
01:06:06 (x) - I say add note here with a finish hitsound to end the combo and start the break (it feels a bit cut off as it is)
01:19:23 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - spacing? (and new combo?)
01:35:08 (10) - two ticks right to match the (4) on the other side of this "circle" xD
01:56:79 (x) - same as 1:06:06's comment
02:23:38 (12) - I say remove one of the hitsounds here, having them mix here doesn't sound very nice
03:10:94 (x) - same as 1:06:06/1:56:79's comment
03:35:08 (4) - same as 00:40:45's comment
Could use some more New combos~! And theres quite a few places that can look nicer, but oh well~

Oh, yea, here's the normal you requested (rename it whatever you'd like or just put credit on post)
(I think the 1/4 slider made the star rating a bit high... :o )

Download: Haru - March Handyman (Instrumental) (Metroid) [Normal].osu
pete2528
412 posts
Joined March 2009
pete2528
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Starrodkirby86
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Starrodkirby86
Man, this song sounds like something you'd get from playing Maple Story.

[Shinxyn's Normal]:
00:24:84 (1,2,3) - Add a clap around here?
00:45:08 (7) - Clap doesn't fit here...
01:59:72 (3,4,5,6,1) - Nazi: Spacing?
02:15:08 (5) - Nazi: Move 1 right on Grid Level 3.

[Hard]:
00:24:35 (5) - New combo?
00:43:87 (5,6,7,1) - Although it's technically all right, what I don't like here is that the spacing for 1/1 is promised for the moment, but the new combo is 1/2 soon with that same spacing. An easy trip-up.
00:57:04 (6) - Nazi: Move 1 right on Grid Level 3.
01:01:91 (7,8) - Nazi: Either move (7) to the right once on Grid Level 3 or move (8) left once on Grid Level 3.
01:42:77 (6) - Nazi: Move 1 up on Grid Level 3.

I can certainly nazi a whole lot more, but that beats the point of the map. It's fine as is without the unmentioned ones anyway. The ones I mentioned just makes the map look more appealing. :3

And now for some SB ideas~

First, get Shinxyn an avatar like in your difficult. ^.^

The song felt very relaxing to me, so perhaps you can do some zoomed in slow screen panning, somewhat like 'Your Affection'. You can zoom in to the clouds and let them gently move, or maybe have some Remi-action. If you want to achieve an SB atmosphere for this map, in my opinion, it should be relaxing.

Star~
Gens
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Gens
[Overall]
- I really like this map. :D
- EDIT: Ow ow, forgot something: The background resolution is 1280x960. This is way too big methinks. Resize?
- Weren't you waiting for a 3rd difficulty before moving to pending? :/

[Timing]
- Timing is different on each difficulty. :|
- You can do what Gladi said, OR use the Timing Shinxyn used. To me offset is 19,243, though it's just abit different from Sinxyn's.

[Shinxyn's Normal]
Cute. :)

[Hard]
01:37:52 (2,3) - Not stacked properly. It may get stacked in test, but it shows it a weird way.
01:42:40 (5,6,7) - Sorry I have to be nazi, but you can clearly see a spacing inconsistency here.
02:39:96 (2,3) - Not properly stacked.*

* You should know how to re-stack something already.

~ ~ ~

I like the SB. :D
Great map. Here's your star~
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
Wow! The cloud SB is awesome!

Anyways.. You'll have to agree which source you want. "Old Woods Hut" or "Touhou". As I recall from Nexy, it shouldn't be Viotex Instrumentals anymore.

Hard~
It doesn't seem like the first timing section is being used so delete it. Also inherit the timing section at 00:19:23 (1).

That's all I found! Nice job!
Metroid
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Topic Starter
Metroid
I have no clue what to do with the different timing sections :/
I wouldn't have soft hitsounds before the 3rd Red sections if I removed the other ones and both sound similar to me.
I deleted the first red section since it served no purpose.

I'll keep the tags as is since Viotex instrumentals is the collab name.
EEeee
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Joined July 2008
EEeee
Shinxyn's Normal
00:45:08 (7,8) - I think this should move to the right, as in look at the previous pattern, which was 3,4, and 5, but also this is a "I think" cause it wouldn't be snapped, IDK
00:59:72 (2) - add clap, it sound sorta weird just on the 2 red ticks around this note
01:21:431 - Fix Break :D
01:50:21 (5) - idk add new combo, it would look stylish :D

Hard
k this diff looks good to me, also superior green lines metroid just some new combo suggestions :D
00:41:18 (8) - new Wombo
00:43:87 (5) - new wombo
02:53:62 (6) - same wombo, as in add a new wombo

*Star
Starrodkirby86
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I think this map is fine to be bubbled. Upon playing both difficulties, I got an SS and a near-S. The maximum score is pretty high (11mil), but hopefully the jumps and deathstreams will take care of that.

@Next BAT: Please check if clouds-0.png is rankable under the maximum dimensions rule. I believe it is because the height is sufficient, but please check anyway. Also, please consider the max score as well.
Yuukari-Banteki
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Yuukari-Banteki
[Shinxyn]
simple but lovely <3


[Hard]
well, you used whistles correctly about half the time and thats the only thing that even grated on my nerves so....ranked
0_o
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Joined December 2008
0_o
I don't see why your names had to be storyboarded in throughout the entire map, the player already knows who's difficulty it is through the name of the difficulty.. I mean sure if you want to quickly put it the names in at the beginning then fine, but do we really have to stare at the name and avatar throughout the whole map? I found it distracting and unnecessary, personally :|

Otherwise, nice map ^_^ I like the SB'd clouds :) Though isn't this a little easy for a 11m+ map?
WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
WyndII
omg
[Hard]
01:28:01 (7) , 01:29:72 (2) - - omg spacing? oh and some notes approach circle are close some are far...
Lesjuh
Elite Mapper
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Joined October 2008
Lesjuh
This song sounds like a Maplestory track lololol
Alace
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Alace
Don`t worry about it
that is not a big deal
people know how to play that part
Card N'FoRcE
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Card N'FoRcE
This map is totally awesome
I love music, map and storyboard (so simple yet so great)
So, yeah, 10/10

Oh, and DT totally ruins this map, IMO
Gabi
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Gabi

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

This map is totally awesome
I love music, map and storyboard (so simple yet so great)
So, yeah, 10/10

Oh, and DT totally ruins this map, IMO
agreed xD

nice map
Metroid
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Metroid
Thank you

I love the SB myself and how it turned out

Also, this is my first map using the switch to normal then back to soft trick.
EDIT: Since I can't see my replays on the server "dunno why, but the replay button doesn't appear when I look at my score"
I'll put the local .osr here for safety: I finally FC my own song...
Download: Metroid - Haru - March Handyman (Instrumental) [Hard] (2009-07-27) Osu.osr
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Lesjuh
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Lesjuh

Gabi wrote:

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Oh, and DT totally ruins this map, IMO
Nice excuse for not playing with DT noobs lololol

jk :3
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