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Bulldog Mansion - Happy Birthday To Me (Cake Dance)
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Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.
Detailed modding go!
Osz. File Check (Done)
Video: Yes
Size: 8.02MB / 20.00MB*
Source: Yes
Tags: Yes
*20MB Max with video.
[Easy] (Done)
Timing (BPM / Offset): 144.000 / 1,990ms (Okay so far)
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 1.00
Distance Snap Average: x0.6
[Current] Objects: 149 (113 Circles / 34 Sliders / 2 Spinners)
[Current] Max Combo: 326
[Current] Max Score: 673,370
[Current] Star Rating: 1.65
00:14:28 (1) - This slider ends a bit odd to me as if its a bit late since there is nothing right after. Try moving it back to 00:14:90 to see if it sounds better.
00:18:24 (5,6,1) - The spacing between these 3 doesn't match. (5) and (6) are cramped together while (1) is more appart from (6).
00:32:61 (B) - Delete and replace the break.
00:40:11 (3,1) - (1) is too close to (3).
00:43:65 (3) - The slider doesn't sound like it ends right. Maybe ending it at 00:44:90 would make it sound better?
01:07:82 (1,1,1,1) - Not sure about having these as single combos...
01:10:32 (B) - Delete and replace the break.
01:23:65 (3,1) - For a map that is an easy difficulty, i'm not too sure about having a spinner pop out right after that hitnote...
01:36:15 (2) - Looks a bit odd with it touching the slider...
01:50:11 (1,1,1) - Maybe this should be a 1 to 3 combo instead of singles?
01:51:99 (B) - Delete and replace the break.
02:11:78 (B) - ^
02:25:53 (B) - ^
02:50:94 (x) - Feels like an odd place to end....
Notes: This map is okay, but it feels a bit dragged with all the extra space between the beats. You might have to either redo some sections or cut the map down to half of the song.
[Normal] (Done)
Timing (BPM / Offset): 144.000 / 1,990ms (Okay so far)
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 1.40
Distance Snap Average: x0.6
[Current] Objects: 256 (220 Circles / 34 Sliders / 2 Spinners)
[Current] Max Combo: 392
[Current] Max Score: 2,560,312
[Current] Star Rating: 3.35
00:21:99 (6) - This should start the new combo.
00:32:61 (B) - Delete and replace break.
00:35:53 (1,2,3,4,5) - The spacing is slightly irregular... (Looking at the spacing between the two stacks then then stack and slider.)
00:58:86 (3,4,5) - Irregular spacing between the notes.
01:01:57 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:08:44 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:10:32 (B) - Delete and replace the break.
01:36:78 (1,2) - Don't think its a good idea having the veiw of these notes blocked by the slider...
01:45:32 (6) - It doesn't look right touching the slider...
01:49:69 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Irregular spacing.
01:51:99 (B) - Delete and replace the break.
02:11:78 (B) - ^
02:24:90 (6,1) - Misplaced jump here...
02:25:53 (B) - Delete and replace the break.
02:39:07 (4,1) - The sliders look a bit cluttered when they overlap like this...
02:44:28 (4) - There's some empty space here between this note and the spinner. Maybe making this into a slider that ends at 02:45:32 would make it work?
02:53:44 (4,5,1) - Not properly placed together.
03:09:28 (1,1,1,1,1) - Not sure about having this as single combos...
Notes: Not that bad. Mainly some spacing issues and some reshaping to do.
[Hard] (Done)
Timing (BPM / Offset): 144.000 / 1,990ms (Okay so far)
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 1.60
Distance Snap Average: x0.8
[Current] Objects: 324 (260 Circles / 54 Sliders / 10 Spinners)
[Current] Max Combo: 457
[Current] Max Score: 4,847,910
[Current] Star Rating: 4.62
00:27:40 (1) - This shouldn't be a new combo point...
00:38:03 (2,3,1,2) - I don't think that is rankable with the slider blocking the hitnotes like that.. :-/
00:45:53 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - (2) is not neatly placed under the slider end. Also, the spacing between the notes look uneven.
00:57:82 (x) - Feels like a hitnote is missing here.
01:07:82 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I don't think stand alone combos would work out...
01:10:32 (B) - Delete and replace the break.
01:19:69 (2,3,1) - Looks a bit cluttered with the over lap...
01:28:24 (5,6,7,8) - Irregular spacing.
01:37:61 (3) - Not lined up with (2).
01:49:49 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - For this one, the first two notes are not lined up with the 3rd one, and also, the stand alone combo thing should be checked into as well...
01:51:99 (B) - Delete and replace the break.
01:59:07 (1) - I don't think this should start a new combo...
02:01:99 (5) - Not even with the slider end.
02:08:65 (5) - ^
02:11:15 (6,1) - That's quite a jump there...
02:11:78 (B) - Delete and replace break.
02:19:07 (1) - Not sure about this starting a new combo that quickly...
02:21:99 (5) - Not even with the slider end.
02:24:90 (8,1) - Decent jump...
02:25:53 (B) - Delete and replace the break.
02:45:74 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The spacing here looks slightly uneven...
02:52:61 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
02:59:07 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
03:08:65 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Again, not sure about the stand alone combos...
Notes: Not that bad here either. Just similar errors like in the other two difficultes.
Overall: Not that bad. I can tell it was supposed to be an easter map by the colors. I like the vid as well. Just need to fix the errors posted and it should be easier on you. Make sure to double check the spacing and the shapes of how the notes are placed. I'll star the map for the effort.
Detailed modding go!
Osz. File Check (Done)
Video: Yes
Size: 8.02MB / 20.00MB*
Source: Yes
Tags: Yes
*20MB Max with video.
[Easy] (Done)
Timing (BPM / Offset): 144.000 / 1,990ms (Okay so far)
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 1.00
Distance Snap Average: x0.6
[Current] Objects: 149 (113 Circles / 34 Sliders / 2 Spinners)
[Current] Max Combo: 326
[Current] Max Score: 673,370
[Current] Star Rating: 1.65
00:14:28 (1) - This slider ends a bit odd to me as if its a bit late since there is nothing right after. Try moving it back to 00:14:90 to see if it sounds better.
00:18:24 (5,6,1) - The spacing between these 3 doesn't match. (5) and (6) are cramped together while (1) is more appart from (6).
00:32:61 (B) - Delete and replace the break.
00:40:11 (3,1) - (1) is too close to (3).
00:43:65 (3) - The slider doesn't sound like it ends right. Maybe ending it at 00:44:90 would make it sound better?
01:07:82 (1,1,1,1) - Not sure about having these as single combos...
01:10:32 (B) - Delete and replace the break.
01:23:65 (3,1) - For a map that is an easy difficulty, i'm not too sure about having a spinner pop out right after that hitnote...
01:36:15 (2) - Looks a bit odd with it touching the slider...
01:50:11 (1,1,1) - Maybe this should be a 1 to 3 combo instead of singles?
01:51:99 (B) - Delete and replace the break.
02:11:78 (B) - ^
02:25:53 (B) - ^
02:50:94 (x) - Feels like an odd place to end....
Notes: This map is okay, but it feels a bit dragged with all the extra space between the beats. You might have to either redo some sections or cut the map down to half of the song.
[Normal] (Done)
Timing (BPM / Offset): 144.000 / 1,990ms (Okay so far)
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 1.40
Distance Snap Average: x0.6
[Current] Objects: 256 (220 Circles / 34 Sliders / 2 Spinners)
[Current] Max Combo: 392
[Current] Max Score: 2,560,312
[Current] Star Rating: 3.35
00:21:99 (6) - This should start the new combo.
00:32:61 (B) - Delete and replace break.
00:35:53 (1,2,3,4,5) - The spacing is slightly irregular... (Looking at the spacing between the two stacks then then stack and slider.)
00:58:86 (3,4,5) - Irregular spacing between the notes.
01:01:57 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:08:44 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:10:32 (B) - Delete and replace the break.
01:36:78 (1,2) - Don't think its a good idea having the veiw of these notes blocked by the slider...
01:45:32 (6) - It doesn't look right touching the slider...
01:49:69 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Irregular spacing.
01:51:99 (B) - Delete and replace the break.
02:11:78 (B) - ^
02:24:90 (6,1) - Misplaced jump here...
02:25:53 (B) - Delete and replace the break.
02:39:07 (4,1) - The sliders look a bit cluttered when they overlap like this...
02:44:28 (4) - There's some empty space here between this note and the spinner. Maybe making this into a slider that ends at 02:45:32 would make it work?
02:53:44 (4,5,1) - Not properly placed together.
03:09:28 (1,1,1,1,1) - Not sure about having this as single combos...
Notes: Not that bad. Mainly some spacing issues and some reshaping to do.
[Hard] (Done)
Timing (BPM / Offset): 144.000 / 1,990ms (Okay so far)
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 1.60
Distance Snap Average: x0.8
[Current] Objects: 324 (260 Circles / 54 Sliders / 10 Spinners)
[Current] Max Combo: 457
[Current] Max Score: 4,847,910
[Current] Star Rating: 4.62
00:27:40 (1) - This shouldn't be a new combo point...
00:38:03 (2,3,1,2) - I don't think that is rankable with the slider blocking the hitnotes like that.. :-/
00:45:53 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - (2) is not neatly placed under the slider end. Also, the spacing between the notes look uneven.
00:57:82 (x) - Feels like a hitnote is missing here.
01:07:82 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I don't think stand alone combos would work out...
01:10:32 (B) - Delete and replace the break.
01:19:69 (2,3,1) - Looks a bit cluttered with the over lap...
01:28:24 (5,6,7,8) - Irregular spacing.
01:37:61 (3) - Not lined up with (2).
01:49:49 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - For this one, the first two notes are not lined up with the 3rd one, and also, the stand alone combo thing should be checked into as well...
01:51:99 (B) - Delete and replace the break.
01:59:07 (1) - I don't think this should start a new combo...
02:01:99 (5) - Not even with the slider end.
02:08:65 (5) - ^
02:11:15 (6,1) - That's quite a jump there...
02:11:78 (B) - Delete and replace break.
02:19:07 (1) - Not sure about this starting a new combo that quickly...
02:21:99 (5) - Not even with the slider end.
02:24:90 (8,1) - Decent jump...
02:25:53 (B) - Delete and replace the break.
02:45:74 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The spacing here looks slightly uneven...
02:52:61 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
02:59:07 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
03:08:65 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Again, not sure about the stand alone combos...
Notes: Not that bad here either. Just similar errors like in the other two difficultes.
Overall: Not that bad. I can tell it was supposed to be an easter map by the colors. I like the vid as well. Just need to fix the errors posted and it should be easier on you. Make sure to double check the spacing and the shapes of how the notes are placed. I'll star the map for the effort.
Uhu, the STEP 2 /o/
Love this song
For now, i'll mod only a few things that a saw on your Normal diff xD
Let's continue the mod ^^
//EASY//
00:17:406(4) - Clap
00:20:740(3) - ^
00:38:240(2) - Clap here sounds good .__.
00:41:573(2) - ^
00:43:656(3) - take the clap on the end
00:56:781(4) - ^
01:09:281(1,1) - take off the new combo
01:50:948(1,1) - ^
//NORMAL//
00:21:99(6,1) - move it 1/8 forward
00:36:15(3,4) - 1/8 backward
00:39:49(3,4) - ^
//HARD//
01:08:031(1) - take off the new combo
01:08:865(1,1,1) - ^
01:10:115(1) - make a pentagon and ^
01:49:698(1) - take off the new combo
01:50:532(1,1,1,1) - ^
03:08:656(1,1) - 2 tiny grids down
03:08:865(1) - ^
03:09:697(1,1,1) - ^
Please, PM me when you finish it, i really love this song *__*
STAR, STAR, STAR! \o/
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my pending beatmaps:
Miku Hatsune and Megurine Luka - Prism Door
Witches - There She is (step 1)
Love this song
Let's continue the mod ^^
//EASY//
00:17:406(4) - Clap
00:20:740(3) - ^
00:38:240(2) - Clap here sounds good .__.
00:41:573(2) - ^
00:43:656(3) - take the clap on the end
00:56:781(4) - ^
01:09:281(1,1) - take off the new combo
01:50:948(1,1) - ^
//NORMAL//
00:21:99(6,1) - move it 1/8 forward
00:36:15(3,4) - 1/8 backward
00:39:49(3,4) - ^
//HARD//
01:08:031(1) - take off the new combo
01:08:865(1,1,1) - ^
01:10:115(1) - make a pentagon and ^
01:49:698(1) - take off the new combo
01:50:532(1,1,1,1) - ^
03:08:656(1,1) - 2 tiny grids down
03:08:865(1) - ^
03:09:697(1,1,1) - ^
Please, PM me when you finish it, i really love this song *__*
STAR, STAR, STAR! \o/
_________________________________________
my pending beatmaps:
Miku Hatsune and Megurine Luka - Prism Door
Witches - There She is (step 1)