This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lundi 16 septembre 2013 at 22:29:50

Artist: Rise Against
Title: Prayer of the Refugee
Tags: LZD The Sufferer & the Witness Punk
BPM: 150,5
Filesize: 3601kb
Play Time: 03:19
Difficulties Available:

1. Futsuu (3,26 stars, 363 notes)
2. LZD's Kantan (2,37 stars, 308 notes)
3. Muzukashii (4,82 stars, 761 notes)
4. Oni (4,89 stars, 1055 notes)

Download: Rise Against - Prayer of the Refugee
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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First taiko mapset, and first map for ranking, hope you'll like it ~
Oni - Ok.
Muzu - Ok.
Futsuu - Ok.
Kantan by LZD Thanks a lot !
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Rise Against *O*
Sorry, I can't mod Taiko
Good Luck~

ReySHelllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll~

Oni:
Perfect map :3 Nothing need to be changed \:D/

Muzu:
- 00:09:473 add a blue note
- 00:09:871 add a red note

Kantan:
- 00:40:856 remove this slider ,and fix it with notes or spinner :3
- 01:33:642 ^
- 02:44:232 ^



That's all :3

cdhsausageboy wrote:

YOU DON'T NEED TO PUT BREAK TIME IN TAIKO MAPS I know, I didn't add them on purpose, but I don't think mapping the break part is a good idea. I'll do it only if I can't do otherwise

Futsuu

00:25:189 and 00:25:784 and 01:05:856 and 01:17:975 WTF 1/2 in Taiko is ok, but big small/ small big clusters like this(see screenshot) is really a bit too much for "I-only-can-play-Futsuu"players Yeah, I though the same when mapping it, but I find it make the difficulty more enjoyable for the player so I did it anyway. If someone else tell me to remove it, I'll do it

SPOILER

00:40:856 to 00:41:570 slider should end at 00:41:468(ending a slider in 1/3 beat while the song is in 1/2 beats??) I fixed it at first, but finally I followed Andyrucas's inscruction and deleted the sliders
02:44:232 to 02:44:844 slider same as above
No comments about patterns, its fine

Muzukashii

I originally wanted to say something about the quite massive amount of big notes, but then I remembered Rotter Tarmination Muzu Ura so imo your muzu is perfect!Good job!

Thank you :3

Finally...*epic drumroll* Oni!

Change SV to 1.6 to troll people a little more when the song speeds up
And finally a little proposition?LOL
On the start of every speed up part/kiai time, change the notes to a hand twisting stream so everyone will be like "shit the song is speeding up again!"
Seriously, it will be really fun if you actually did that, but if you don't like my "proposition", you can take it as a grain of salt because your Oni is already very good as it is now

I won't change the SV to 1.6 . Regarding your second proposition, I won't add stream (You meant 1/4 ?) at the beggining of the chorus. Maybe you could provide me a screen of want you thought to be sure I understood correctly

KUU-DOO-SUU

AndyRucas wrote:

ReySHelllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll~

Oni:
Perfect map :3 Nothing need to be changed \:D/ Thank you :3

Muzu:
- 00:09:473 add a blue note Fixed
- 00:09:871 add a red note ^

Kantan:
- 00:40:856 remove this slider ,and fix it with notes or spinner :3
- 01:33:642 ^
- 02:44:232 ^

All fixed too

That's all :3

Thank both of you for your mods ! ~

Nashmun wrote:

cdhsausageboy wrote:

Finally...*epic drumroll* Oni!

Change SV to 1.6 to troll people a little more when the song speeds up
And finally a little proposition?LOL
On the start of every speed up part/kiai time, change the notes to a hand twisting stream so everyone will be like "shit the song is speeding up again!"
Seriously, it will be really fun if you actually did that, but if you don't like my "proposition", you can take it as a grain of salt because your Oni is already very good as it is now

I won't change the SV to 1.6 . Regarding your second proposition, I won't add stream (You meant 1/4 ?) at the beggining of the chorus. Maybe you could provide me a screen of want you thought to be sure I understood correctly

Well you understood it correctly. Never mind then, good luck for having your map ranked!

Thank you :3

Hi Nash :3/
Taiko Mod From #modreqs >n</

[General]

1. D (Big don)
2. d (don)
3. K (Big kat)
4. k (kat)

Kantan , Futsuu None
Oni OD 6→5 I Think 5 best...

[Muzukashii]

1. OD5→4 I Think 4....>n<
2. 00:09:473 (13,14,15) - d d k？
3. 00:30:649 (92) - move 00:30:450 (91) - (Drum)
4. 00:34:427 (109,110,111,112,113) - I Think kdddd or kdddk
5. 01:02:081 (12) - move 01:02:280 (12) -
6. 01:03:075 (16) - move 01:03:869 (19) -
7. 01:08:339 (37) - add d or 01:08:439 (37) - Change k
8. 01:09:234 (40,41,42) - k k d or k d k
9. 01:11:916 (52) - move to 01:11:717 (51) - and 01:11:717 (51,52) - dd
10. 01:27:366 (112) - Change k
11. 01:27:672 (114,115) - d k
12. 01:28:591 (119) - k
13. 01:46:193 (16) - move 01:46:040 (16) - and 01:46:346 (17) - d
14. 02:07:621 (102) - add d
15. 02:15:274 (140) - Change d and 02:15:045 - 02:15:504 - add d
16. 02:15:733 (145) - add d
17. 02:18:795 (160) - Del
18. 02:37:191 (15,16,17) - k d k
19. 03:00:915 (31) - move 03:01:221 (32) -
20. 03:08:262 (66) - Del
21. 03:14:385 (4,5) - d K(Finish)

Good map !! Finish very fun >u<///
Good Luck Nash~ :3/

toara_fict wrote:

Hi Nash :3/
Taiko Mod From #modreqs >n</

[General]

1. D (Big don)
2. d (don)
3. K (Big kat)
4. k (kat)

Kantan , Futsuu None
Oni OD 6→5 I Think 5 best... I'll keep OD6 for now, maybe I'll change it if a lot of people tell me to do so.

[Muzukashii]

1. OD5→4 I Think 4....>n< -- Same as Oni
2. 00:09:473 (13,14,15) - d d k？ -- Doesn't fit the drums and doesn't look good either
3. 00:30:649 (92) - move 00:30:450 (91) - (Drum) -- Done
4. 00:34:427 (109,110,111,112,113) - I Think kdddd or kdddk -- Changed to kdddd
5. 01:02:081 (12) - move 01:02:280 (12) - -- Sounds ok, but I think my placement fits the drum better
6. 01:03:075 (16) - move 01:03:869 (19) - -- ^
7. 01:08:339 (37) - add d or 01:08:439 (37) - Change k -- Wow, I won't add 1/4 here o.o and dkd sounds weird
8. 01:09:234 (40,41,42) - k k d or k d k -- Looks ok, bur mine too, so no change
9. 01:11:916 (52) - move to 01:11:717 (51) - and 01:11:717 (51,52) - dd -- Fixed
   ----
10. 01:27:366 (112) - Change k
11. 01:27:672 (114,115) - d k
    ---- Changed the pattern into ddkkddk instead
12. 01:28:591 (119) - k -- Fixed
13. 01:46:193 (16) - move 01:46:040 (16) - and 01:46:346 (17) - d -- Fixed
14. 02:07:621 (102) - add d -- Not added for consistency regards
15. 02:15:274 (140) - Change d and 02:15:045 - 02:15:504 - add d -- Fixed
16. 02:15:733 (145) - add d -- Fixed
17. 02:18:795 (160) - Del -- Nope
18. 02:37:191 (15,16,17) - k d k -- Fixed
19. 03:00:915 (31) - move 03:01:221 (32) - -- Nope
20. 03:08:262 (66) - Del -- This note is here to add some changes in the pattern construction, plus this ddkdd marks the beginning of a new line, so I'll keep it like this.
21. 03:14:385 (4,5) - d K(Finish) -- Fixed

Good map !! Finish very fun >u<///
Good Luck Nash~ :3/

Thank you ~~

Yo Nash, là t'as pas le droit de me tnul \D:/

J'ai tenté de recaser un peu mieux le timing, le début est assez zarb je trouve, à vérifier :
(Juste les red points, j'ai mis de côté les kiai points)

503,402.684563758389,4,1,0,80,1,0
5335,392.156862745098,4,1,0,80,1,0
6903,397.614314115308,4,1,0,80,1,0
19630,397.088021178028,4,1,0,80,1,0
30754,306.122448979592,4,1,0,80,1,0
53340,397.350993377483,4,1,0,80,1,0
83540,306.122448979592,4,1,0,80,1,0
149396,397.851601352695,4,1,0,80,1,0
154130,306.122448979592,4,1,0,80,1,0

Pour les breaks y'a un petit truc à faire, il faut retirer les lignes sous "//Break periods", dans le fichier osu. Cette ligne se situe dans [Events].
Mon mod Oni se basera sur les nouveaux timing points, et notes resnappées.


[Oni]

00:36:111 (130,131,132) - ddk, je ne pense pas vraiment que kdk ici sonne correct par rapport à comment t'as mappé avant.
01:11:618 (53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61) - 61 serait mieux en finish, ça demande une suppression de la note 60 (que je trouve pas spécialement justifiée vu qu'elle est mappée sur rien, le stream devrait s'arrêter à 01:12:114 - de base)
Sur la section passé le second kiai, j'ai l'impression qu'il manque des kats.
03:14:844 (1) - Petit truc à la con : Raccourcis-le de 1/4.
...
.........
............... oui je suis sérieux y'a que ça je déconne pas putain c'est une pro map

[LZD's Kantan]
00:09:672 (5,6) - Those two notes sound awkwardly mapped to be honest, as we first have snares and end with kicks.
00:13:260 (10) - I don't think kat is suitable at all there, listen more closely. Use a big don instead, as it is a crash.
00:14:057 (11) - Change to k to be more consistent with 00:07:679 (2) -
00:14:855 (12,13,14,15) - And make that the same as 00:08:476 (3,4,5,6) - for the same reason.
00:25:983 (26,27) - Reproduce 00:19:630 (18,19,20) - ?
00:28:961 (30,31,32,33,34) - This might be a big source of confusion for the new player.
00:31:978 (36) - Make it a finisher ? This is a good place to put one !
00:41:774 (52) - ^
Consistence : 00:46:060 (59) - with 00:36:264 (43) -
00:48:509 (63) - with 00:38:713 (47) -
00:59:697 (76) - Put a finisher ? It's a ... Oh and well I'd end up saying the same here
01:06:055 (84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91) - I think this whole phrase breaks the flow a lot, I think it needs some reworking.
01:14:796 (95,96,97,98,99) - Same as 00:14:057 (11,12,13,14,15) -
01:21:750 (104,105,106,107,108) - Same as 00:28:961 -
01:24:764 (1) - Make it a finisher ?
01:32:111 (13) - Have you missed a finisher here ? In that other kiai I swear there were 3 finishers in a row
01:33:947 (16) - Invert with: 01:34:560 (17) -
01:48:029 (7) - Kat to match these notes : 01:45:580 (3,5,9) -
02:04:560 (35,36) - Invert those notes, I don't think this setting makes the flow go at its maximum
02:11:907 (48,49) - Invert as you randomly changed the order of the notes, not a good idea
02:21:703 (66) - Might be a finisher put randomly
02:35:354 (82,83) - Dk, you know the drill I think
02:45:150 (102) - Make it kat to match the following pattern ?
03:00:456 (6) - FFFFFFFFFFinisher a bit random too

Nash, t'auras le reste demain après que je voie comment tu réponds à mon mod. Me kd pas tout de suite, même si j'vais la star une fois de plus :>

_Gezo_ wrote:

Yo Nash, là t'as pas le droit de me tnul \D:/

J'ai tenté de recaser un peu mieux le timing, le début est assez zarb je trouve, à vérifier :
(Juste les red points, j'ai mis de côté les kiai points)

503,402.684563758389,4,1,0,80,1,0
5335,392.156862745098,4,1,0,80,1,0
6903,397.614314115308,4,1,0,80,1,0
19630,397.088021178028,4,1,0,80,1,0
30754,306.122448979592,4,1,0,80,1,0
53340,397.350993377483,4,1,0,80,1,0
83540,306.122448979592,4,1,0,80,1,0
149396,397.851601352695,4,1,0,80,1,0
154130,306.122448979592,4,1,0,80,1,0

Comme dit sur IRC, j'ai des doutes sur certaines parties avec ton timing, nottament la troisième reprise du refrain qui me parait pas bonne. Je laisse mon timing en attendant un re-check, mais merci d'avoir pris le temps de vérifier ça.

Pour les breaks y'a un petit truc à faire, il faut retirer les lignes sous "//Break periods", dans le fichier osu. Cette ligne se situe dans [Events].
Mon mod Oni se basera sur les nouveaux timing points, et notes resnappées. -- Déjà viré manuellement les breaks, ils réapparaissent dès que j'ouvre l'éditeur D:


[Oni]

00:36:111 (130,131,132) - ddk, je ne pense pas vraiment que kdk ici sonne correct par rapport à comment t'as mappé avant. -- Ouais pourquoi pas, je fix
01:11:618 (53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61) - 61 serait mieux en finish, ça demande une suppression de la note 60 (que je trouve pas spécialement justifiée vu qu'elle est mappée sur rien, le stream devrait s'arrêter à 01:12:114 - de base) -- Hum, effectivement un finish appuierait la cymbale crash et le début de la nouvelle mesure. Mais je trouve ça bizarre de casser le break comme ça, surtout qu'après réécoute du batteur c'est bien un roulement continu sur 2 temps qu'il fait, sans interruption. Au final je laisse comme c'est :>
Sur la section passé le second kiai, j'ai l'impression qu'il manque des kats.
03:14:844 (1) - Petit truc à la con : Raccourcis-le de 1/4. -- Ohgod, j'avais même pas vu, merci xD
...
.........
............... oui je suis sérieux y'a que ça je déconne pas putain c'est une pro map -- Merci \:D/

Nash, t'auras le reste demain après que je voie comment tu réponds à mon mod. Me kd pas tout de suite, même si j'vais la star une fois de plus :>

As I said, I will not change the timing until I get a onfirmation from someone else, I'll poke LZD so that he can apply your mod. Thank you for your time Gezo ! ~

_Gezo_ wrote:

SPOILER

[LZD's Kantan]
00:09:672 (5,6) - Those two notes sound awkwardly mapped to be honest, as we first have snares and end with kicks. I use this instead http://puu.sh/48Rmi.jpg It fits better
00:13:260 (10) - I don't think kat is suitable at all there, listen more closely. Use a big don instead, as it is a crash. I am not used to map with big notes, so it's my weakness orz. changed
00:14:057 (11) - Change to k to be more consistent with 00:07:679 (2) - ok
00:14:855 (12,13,14,15) - And make that the same as 00:08:476 (3,4,5,6) - for the same reason. ok
00:25:983 (26,27) - Reproduce 00:19:630 (18,19,20) - ? ok, but i will use d k k
00:28:961 (30,31,32,33,34) - This might be a big source of confusion for the new player. confuse because it starts on red tick, right? well, i wont change it because idk how to simplify it. If i change it to http://puu.sh/48ROr.jpg It soudns a bit strange
00:31:978 (36) - Make it a finisher ? This is a good place to put one ! ok
00:41:774 (52) - ^ ok
Consistence : 00:46:060 (59) - with 00:36:264 (43) ok-
00:48:509 (63) - with 00:38:713 (47) - yep, seems obious xd
00:59:697 (76) - Put a finisher ? It's a ... Oh and well I'd end up saying the same here xDDDD yes yes
01:06:055 (84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91) - I think this whole phrase breaks the flow a lot, I think it needs some reworking. changed, and i think now it's perfect
01:14:796 (95,96,97,98,99) - Same as 00:14:057 (11,12,13,14,15) - ok
01:21:750 (104,105,106,107,108) - Same as 00:28:961 - same as i said before
01:24:764 (1) - Make it a finisher ? ok
01:32:111 (13) - Have you missed a finisher here ? In that other kiai I swear there were 3 finishers in a row nope, there was the same
01:33:947 (16) - Invert with: 01:34:560 (17) - are u sure? this is the same as first chorus. I wont change it for now
01:48:029 (7) - Kat to match these notes : 01:45:580 (3,5,9) - fits fine
02:04:560 (35,36) - Invert those notes, I don't think this setting makes the flow go at its maximum yea, this is a nice change
02:11:907 (48,49) - Invert as you randomly changed the order of the notes, not a good idea hmm, nope, i inverted 02:09:458 (44,45) - instead of your suggestion
02:21:703 (66) - Might be a finisher put randomly yep, deleted
02:35:354 (82,83) - Dk, you know the drill I think idk what you tried to say xd, but i changed that to d D, like the other kyai
02:45:150 (102) - Make it kat to match the following pattern ? ok
03:00:456 (6) - FFFFFFFFFFinisher a bit random too yes xD

Thank you gezu

EDIT: Here is the diff Nash /o/ http://puu.sh/48VfR.osu

Thanks LZD ! Updated

Oh oh oh oh oh! OH!!

[General]

1. Timing: My soundcard is wrecked so I can't accurately time, however offsets shift towards early a lot of times, especially at 02:29:356. This one is waaaaaaaaay too early. Kantan has notes mapped here so it's important. Try +50 offset on that one, that seemed like a good estimate.
   In general, I was getting around +6 offset for most of the map so have that in mind.
2. Should set tick rate 1 to all diffs.

[Oni]

1. General structure: I loved pretty much everything except for the solo. The guitar solo feels way too weak, that one stream is not enough in my opinion. I believe you should spice it up in a way you like, don't really have structure suggestions since it seems you have a unique way of mapping this where my suggestions might not be as helpful, but definitely more 1/4 patterns there pls!
2. 00:49:121 (236,237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248,249,250) - The K kkk d repeats are absolutely great, however I think you can introduce variety by slowly going into more don heavy patterns here while keeping the big kats. The guitars are slowly descending so I think it might be cool, but as it is is already pretty awesome.
3. 00:50:958 (251) - This actually felt really weird because it was way too loud and it felt awkward due to the snapping. I would definitely suggest a spinner instead, it would solve the dodgy timing around here too (spamming 1/4 for the slider is strange cause there is a bpm change afterwards).
4. 01:44:050 (259) - k? Sounds/feels better. (same goes for other similar ones in other choruses)
5. 02:16:193 (449) - If you ask me, this should be a k, the patterns in the stream would imply the stream is "rising" towards somewhere (that's the feeling I get at least).
6. 02:45:073 (23) - k?

[Muzu]
Nothing to say here. I probably wouldn't recommend swapping kats from the white tick to the red one so often but that's the style here so it's ok.

[Futsuu]

1. Hp4 is much better. Less notes = higher HP is fine, 3 is just low haha.
2. A bit on the easier side, that's ok though, I would still recommend to make the solo a bit harder at least (more 1/2 patterns).

[Kantan]

1. HP4 should be good for this, 3 is just too low (can go afk for a whole part of the map and still pass).
2. 00:09:672 (5,6) - You should reverse this in my opinion, it doesn't fit like this. (just like you did at 01:02:479 (80,81)) Actually most of the spots where you use dk you should probably use a kd afterwards, because having a dk and then another dk which ends on a downbeat is meh if you ask me.
3. 00:12:463 (9,10) - Not sure if you want to swap to kats for the downbeats, I don't think it works that well, but I guess it's up to you, I would recommend to use dons for base and then using kats for rhythm instead of just changing colors every 2/1.
4. 00:31:978 - Kinda sad to see only 2/1 here, sure it fits but eh, I just don't find it as pleasing. It's alright though, but you may want to create more consistent kat patterns around here. For example, you go with d k d k and then you swap to d d k k, but the final one is d d k d. I don't really see a logical progression here so I dunno.
   Also 00:46:060 (59,60) - are completely different to what you had before and the music repeats. I won't nitpick every single note, but it is clear it lacks some structure, so you may want to think about structure a bit.
5. 01:05:260 - This part is empty, while at the beginning it's not. Consistency! :p
6. 01:21:750 (104,105,106,107,108) - I don't think this is a good idea. All rhythm consistency you had is suddenly gone and this is very unexpected for a kantan in my opinion. While 1/1 notes are fine, but they are located on the red ticks (which do fit the vocals, but you didn't really follow the vocals anywhere pretty much so it's a really sudden change).
7. Final chorus is much better than other ones, should probably map the other ones in that manner too (using 1/1 notes).
8. 02:54:946 (1,1) - Uh, this seems horribly misplaced. There is a pretty big beat at 02:57:395 - which you skip.

Awesome + favd.

lolcubes wrote:

Oh oh oh oh oh! OH!!

[General]

1. Timing: My soundcard is wrecked so I can't accurately time, however offsets shift towards early a lot of times, especially at 02:29:356. This one is waaaaaaaaay too early. Kantan has notes mapped here so it's important. Try +50 offset on that one, that seemed like a good estimate. -- Ohgod, that was indeed quite early, seems better with +50 here
   In general, I was getting around +6 offset for most of the map so have that in mind. The first timing section was indeed 5-6ms earlier than it should be. I changed the timing according to your feedback, it seems better. I'll try to get someone to help me with this because I'm not sure this is the good one either.
2. Should set tick rate 1 to all diffs. -- Fixed

[Oni]

1. General structure: I loved pretty much everything except for the solo. The guitar solo feels way too weak, that one stream is not enough in my opinion. I believe you should spice it up in a way you like, don't really have structure suggestions since it seems you have a unique way of mapping this where my suggestions might not be as helpful, but definitely more 1/4 patterns there pls! -- That's funny because I mapped the guitar solo part in 1/2 on purpose. IMO mapping this part with 1/2 only brings out the guitar solo and the song. I also wanted the player to feel like : 'Hey, I'm actually part of this thing and making the guitar solo even more awesome'
2. 00:49:121 (236,237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248,249,250) - The K kkk d repeats are absolutely great, however I think you can introduce variety by slowly going into more don heavy patterns here while keeping the big kats. The guitars are slowly descending so I think it might be cool, but as it is is already pretty awesome. -- Thanks ! I see what you mean, but I tried some patterns and they didn't feel as good as this one, so I keep it like that
3. 00:50:958 (251) - This actually felt really weird because it was way too loud and it felt awkward due to the snapping. I would definitely suggest a spinner instead, it would solve the dodgy timing around here too (spamming 1/4 for the slider is strange cause there is a bpm change afterwards). -- You're totally right, fixed in both Oni and Muzukashii
4. 01:44:050 (259) - k? Sounds/feels better. (same goes for other similar ones in other choruses) Yup, that's better, fixed !
5. 02:16:193 (449) - If you ask me, this should be a k, the patterns in the stream would imply the stream is "rising" towards somewhere (that's the feeling I get at least). At first I was like : "Looks weird, sounds weird, plays weird." Then I tried it again, and it looks good, so fixed
6. 02:45:073 (23) - k? -- Fixed

[Muzu]
Nothing to say here. I probably wouldn't recommend swapping kats from the white tick to the red one so often but that's the style here so it's ok. -- \:D/

[Futsuu]

1. Hp4 is much better. Less notes = higher HP is fine, 3 is just low haha. -- Yeah, you're right, fixed
2. A bit on the easier side, that's ok though, I would still recommend to make the solo a bit harder at least (more 1/2 patterns). You definately want that solo more intense, right ? Okay I added some 1/2, and made the whole diff a little harder. I might add more notes in the future too.

Awesome + favd.

Wow, thanks a lot !

Re /

[Futsuu]
00:13:266 - Ajoute un d normal ici ? T'as fait ça ici : 00:25:790 (35,36) - | ça paraîtra moins vide aussi dans ce cas
00:43:923 - Hm, essaie d'ajouter un kat ici ? Ca paraîtra moins vide que le début du refrain.
00:45:453 (8,9,10,11,12) - Je trouve que ces 5 dons sont assez vides d'expression, mets des kats ? (dkdkd me semble le mieux)
00:50:964 (1) - Normal qu'il s'arrête tard ? Réduis jusqu'à 00:53:346 -
01:03:279 (8) - kat pour conserver le pattern de kats ?
01:18:776 - Comme le tout premier mod
01:38:239 (75,76,77,78,79) - pareil que 00:45:453 -
02:05:790 (19,20,21) - Je trouve ça un peu compliqué. Je demande rien du tout, c'est un commentaire
02:48:829 (32,33,34,35,36) - pareil que 2 au dessus

[Muzukashii]
00:30:357 (90,91,92) - Fais gaffe à ce type de patterns, même si tu peux les justifier tu vas recevoir des demandes de changements. Je te recommande de mettre ddd.
00:34:739 (111) - Kat, pour rester consistent avec la batterie (En 35 secondes de map tu es resté sur la batterie, et tu changes soudainement)
00:50:964 (1) - Toute petite extension vers le timing point ?
Tout le reste est OK.

GG mec o/

[Kantan]

confuse because it starts on red tick, right? well, i wont change it because idk how to simplify it. If i change it to http://puu.sh/48ROr.jpg It soudns a bit strange

00:28:961 (32,33,34,35,36) - The biggest recommendation on that is to stick on drums.

idk what you tried to say xd, but i changed that to d D, like the other kyai

It was actually regarding the other finisher things @ 00:31:978 (36) - and 00:59:697 (76) -.

_Gezo_ wrote:

Re /

[Futsuu]
00:13:266 - Ajoute un d normal ici ? T'as fait ça ici : 00:25:790 (35,36) - | ça paraîtra moins vide aussi dans ce cas -- Ouep, fixed
00:43:923 - Hm, essaie d'ajouter un kat ici ? Ca paraîtra moins vide que le début du refrain. -- Fixed
00:45:453 (8,9,10,11,12) - Je trouve que ces 5 dons sont assez vides d'expression, mets des kats ? (dkdkd me semble le mieux) -- Changé en dkddk
00:50:964 (1) - Normal qu'il s'arrête tard ? Réduis jusqu'à 00:53:346 - -- Ohgod le boulet, fixed.
01:03:279 (8) - kat pour conserver le pattern de kats ? -- M'okay, fixed
01:18:776 - Comme le tout premier mod -- Fixed
01:38:239 (75,76,77,78,79) - pareil que 00:45:453 - - Changé en dkdkd
02:05:790 (19,20,21) - Je trouve ça un peu compliqué. Je demande rien du tout, c'est un commentaire -- Meh, entre lolcubes qui me dit que c'es ttrop facile et que je devrais ajouter des 1/2 et toi qui me dit que c'est trop dur, je sais plus quoi faire D: . Je laisse comme ça
02:48:829 (32,33,34,35,36) - pareil que 2 au dessus -- Changé en ddddk

[Muzukashii]
00:30:357 (90,91,92) - Fais gaffe à ce type de patterns, même si tu peux les justifier tu vas recevoir des demandes de changements. Je te recommande de mettre ddd. J'avais un ddd à la base, et j'ai changé suite à un mod, mais enfait j'aime bien ddd, je remets ça du coup xD
00:34:739 (111) - Kat, pour rester consistent avec la batterie (En 35 secondes de map tu es resté sur la batterie, et tu changes soudainement) -- Oui pas faux, fixed
00:50:964 (1) - Toute petite extension vers le timing point ? Il est dessus. Il est sur le tick bleu du timing 195BPM mais sur le blanc du 150 BPM.
Tout le reste est OK.

GG mec o/ Thanks

Can I kudo nao ? Thanks a lot for your mod Gezo, it was really helpfull ! I'll see with LZD for the Kantan.

bondour

Kantan :

01:41:907 (29) - D ? other "dawn" are D

Futsuu :

02:14:974 (45,46,47,48,49,50) - au niveau du drum j'trouve que ça fait + jolie si tu fais un d k kkk D
02:16:811 (51) - si tu fix ça ^, c'est mieux si celui la devient un k pour la guitare
03:07:809 (1,2,3,4,5) - j'trouve que ça fait vachement loud avec tout ses finish

Muzukashii :
en la jouant j'ai eu l'impression de faire presque que du k d d
00:18:050 (43,44,45) - change en d k k ? perso j'trouve que ça va mieux avec les autres patterns + ça suit mieux le drum

Oni :
perso j'ai trouvé les patterns assez répétitif.
Et comme je l'avais déjà dis, les couplets full 1/2 avec paf un long stream.

Sinon j'ai pas grand chose à dire sur ta map :c

Kin wrote:

bondour

Futsuu :

02:14:974 (45,46,47,48,49,50) - au niveau du drum j'trouve que ça fait + jolie si tu fais un d k kkk D Hum nope, je préfère suivre la guitare là dessus
02:16:811 (51) - si tu fix ça ^, c'est mieux si celui la devient un k pour la guitare Idem, je préfère suivre la guitare
03:07:809 (1,2,3,4,5) - j'trouve que ça fait vachement loud avec tout ses finish Viré les finish sur le (1,2)

Muzukashii :
en la jouant j'ai eu l'impression de faire presque que du k d d -- :'(
00:18:050 (43,44,45) - change en d k k ? perso j'trouve que ça va mieux avec les autres patterns + ça suit mieux le drum -- Ouep bien vu, fixed.

Oni :
perso j'ai trouvé les patterns assez répétitif. -- :'(
Et comme je l'avais déjà dis, les couplets full 1/2 avec paf un long stream. -- :'(

Sinon j'ai pas grand chose à dire sur ta map :c

Thanks for your mod ~

Aller let's go


[General]

- Ton bg a une taille louche 960*768 dans la mesure du possible essaye d'en chopper un avec une taille standard (1024*768 / 1366*768).
- Peut-être aussi le décaler ? Descendre le "Rise Against" et essayer de mieux avoir aussi le logo du coup.
- Inconsistency in offset The gd don't have the same offset. (Gd=503,Others diffs=509) it seems that Lzd uses the timing of Gezo
- Set the Audio Lead-in in 2000ms exactly (Actually is in 1991)
- Inconsistency in Wide Screen Storyboard, oni=0 , others diffs=1 aucune idée de ce que c'est mais bon ...
- Etant donné que le genre le précisera pas rajoute Punk (rock) dans les tags ?
- Vu que t'as quand même des changements notables de volume dans ta musique peut-être faire suivre le volume de tes hitsounds ?


[Lzd's Kantan]

- Consider adding notes in your two first kiai times. It's actually a bit boring even for a kantan. For this inspire you to your final kiai time and especially in the alternations of 1/1triplet and 2/1notes
You can try this changes (only for first kiai time, there is actually a 1note shift in the second kiai probably an error ?)
- 00:33:509 - Add a d
- 00:35:958 - ^
- 00:38:407 - ^
- 00:42:692 - ^
- 00:44:529 - ^
- 00:47:590 - ^

- 01:14:796 - Don't forget to delet your bookmark
- 01:16:783 (100,101) - Change this in kd


[Futsuu]

- All kiai time begining and end aren't snapped. (cf:AiMod)
- 01:26:913 - Ajoute un d par logique avec ton premier kiai time. Plus généralement me semble qu'il y ai quelques diffs entre tes deux kiai alors qu'ils sonnent pareils tout du long.
- 02:11:913 (39) - d ?
- 02:25:688 (1) - Il est pas snap sur le bon timing j'ai l'impression. Check ta oni, lui me paraît bon.
- 03:14:544 (1) - Seul diff ou tu le termines à 442 au lieu de 748.


[Muzukashii]

Quasiment rien à dire dessus.
- All kiai time begining and end aren't snapped. (cf:AiMod)
- 02:25:688 (1) - Idem que la futsuu
- 02:37:197 (15) - d ? Par logique avec les autres kiai et parce que ça sonne mieux.


[Oni]

Rien à dire à part
- All kiai time begining and end aren't snapped. (cf:AiMod)



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