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Smiley - Utopia

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Aoitenshi
711 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
Aoitenshi
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, August 07, 2009 at 5:55:47 PM

Artist: Smiley
Title: Utopia
Source: ITG1
Tags: Utopia Smiley ITG ITG1 ITG2
BPM: 166
Filesize: 1443kb
Play Time: 01:59
Difficulties Available:
  1. Expert (4.87 stars, 355 notes)
  2. Relax (4.59 stars, 172 notes)
Download: Smiley - Utopia
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The BPM is right, But I'm not sure about the timing, Need Star!

Updates:
1)Following what James2230 and maafighter say.
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maafighter
19 posts
Joined July 2008
maafighter
Utopia- Expert

00:28:91 (1) - Starting here...you may want this to be cleaned up =P
00:31:08 (8)- starting here..(8,9) you could replace that with a slider here (again a suggestion)
00:31:80 (1) - move (1) to the left one time and (3) two times to the left on grid level one.
00:32:89 (4) - (4,5,6) replace with a slider *suggestion*
00:33:61 (7) - *New Combo
00:33:61 (7) - move (7) to the left one time and (10) two times to the left on grid level one.
01:05:96 (5) - here, (5,6,7,8) Probably replace with a slider..
01:10:48 (1) - neh..may wanna clean up here...
01:22:40 (1) - *New Combo
01:41:20 (1) - It kinda gets confusing here...O_O;;;..idk about the other ppl.

Well that's it. Hope some of this helps.. ^_^ l like it =)
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James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
relax:
01:25:34 (1), 01:25:70 (1), 01:26:06 (1) these 3 spinners are unrankable (too close together) plz delete them
and whats with the 7 timing sections at the end of the map?
--I also think some of this map is pretty confusing for *relax* but ok...thats more opinion than fact :P

Expert:
01:08:85 (1,2,1,2) - too fast for this bpm and on 1/8 lol change them to something else
maybe slight overkill between 1:15:000 and 1:25:000 but its meant to be hard...so ok
have a star :P
Aoitenshi
711 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
Aoitenshi
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
blissfulyoshi
osu! Alumni
4,755 posts
Joined July 2008
blissfulyoshi
Please lower hitsound volume because the hitsounds are sometimes overpowering

Relax:
please use distance snap because the spacing is unintuitive in place such as:
00:13:55 (4) -
00:16:08 (1) -

Other problems
01:15:18 (1) - 10s spinners are very boring
01:25:48 (1,1,1) - no bonus spinners. These are very illegal
01:34:15 (1,1,1,1) - it looks misleading when the spacing difference between these 4 notes are the same but the timing is not, and this is too hard for your easiest diff
get rid of all the timing sections at the end and move 01:59:16 (1) - to the nearest half beat, sounds correct here.

Your map looks congested in the beginning making it sometimes hard to read, but that is more of a style thing

Expert:
I think there is too much copy and pasting please remap some parts fro more variety
00:22:77 (9) - please stack this under the end of 7
There is very little need for the 2x BPM
00:29:99 (4) - please use new combos on jumps
00:30:72 (7) - " "
00:33:97 (8,9,10) - this is pretty annoying to do and read

I let you choose if you want to use distance snap on this diff because you did an okay job without it. Also this diff is meesy at some parts like 00:33:97 (8,9,10) and 01:40:30 (3,4,5,6,7).Please clean that up. I also advise you the overall difficulty in the difficulty panel to make the map a little less messy.

Contact me after you finish these changes and I will hopefully give you a star then.
nooodl_old
73 posts
Joined August 2008
nooodl_old
You could set some custom combo colors that fit with the background. (song setup -> colors -> enable custom colors)

And please, if you're going to make a beatmap again, use distance snap. You did a pretty good job without it and I've seen a lot worse, but it always helps.

Relax is actually really cramped up for a difficulty calling itself "Relax", as blissfulyoshi said.

00:41:92 (4) -Sliders like this are generally frowned upon, too.
00:44:81 (10) - Same
00:49:51 (3) - The return point doesn't fit with the song, so you'll want to change this as well

But really, most things that could be said have been said by blissfulyoshi ;)

As for Expert: The same goes here - the map is difficult, not only because it requires a lot of accuracy and mouse dexterity, but also because one doesn't have an idea of what's going on at some points.

Also, this map seems to keep increasing in difficulty as it goes on... please take one level of difficulty and stick with it

00:34:51 (10) - line this one up with the end of the slider (if you're even keeping it in at all, see blissfulyoshi's post)
00:44:81 (1,2,3) - What part of the music does this sync up with? It's not really obvious, change this.
(you just copypasted this part - that's not really fun, map the whole thing with variety)
01:03:97 (1,2,3,4,5) - move these down or up, delete (4)
01:15:18 (1) etc - Isn't this part a little over the top?

I'll give a star when you fix this and blissfulyoshi's post (I agree with all his suggestions and suggest you fix all the stuff he said, that guy is good at modding ^^)
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