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Crayon Pop - Saturday Night

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Pink Agate
497 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
Pink Agate
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年11月14日 at 1:43:15

Artist: Crayon Pop
Title: Saturday Night
Tags: k-pop kpop yf_bmp 蜡笔团
BPM: 136
Filesize: 19507kb
Play Time: 03:03
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.93 stars, 407 notes)
  2. Normal (4.23 stars, 245 notes)
  3. yf's Easy (2.08 stars, 175 notes)
Download: Crayon Pop - Saturday Night
Download: Crayon Pop - Saturday Night (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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easy by yf_bmp,thanks guest diff
Last edited by Pink Agate , edited 14 times in total.
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
1,630 posts
Joined December 2011
yf_bmp
Easy完成 tick加了clap音
http://puu.sh/4bcKt.zip
Mystyk
osu! Alumni
950 posts
Joined June 2011
Mystyk
small irc mod on hard:
SPOILER
2013-08-29 15:40 Mystyk: 01:06:289 (7,8) -
2013-08-29 15:40 Mystyk: jsut try not to make such overlaps
2013-08-29 15:40 Mystyk: cuz it is not so nice :P
2013-08-29 15:40 Mystyk: 01:09:377 (7,8) -
2013-08-29 15:40 Mystyk: and 00:28:789 (1,2) -
2013-08-29 15:40 Pink Agate: OK
2013-08-29 15:42 Mystyk: 01:53:826 - add hit circle? cuz of lyrics :3 it would be nice to play like that imo
2013-08-29 15:42 Pink Agate: um?
2013-08-29 15:42 Mystyk: 01:55:590 - same here
2013-08-29 15:42 Pink Agate: OK,I will add it
2013-08-29 15:42 Mystyk: hm?
2013-08-29 15:42 Mystyk: that is because you can hear she is rapping (or whatever) kind of quickly
2013-08-29 15:43 Mystyk: do the same that you did here: 02:02:318 (5,6,7) -
2013-08-29 15:43 Pink Agate: OK
2013-08-29 15:44 Mystyk: 02:24:598 (3) - this slider should end on the blue tick, because the big beat is there
2013-08-29 15:45 Pink Agate: oh ,I don't think so
2013-08-29 15:45 Mystyk: http://puu.sh/4dRNE.jpg
2013-08-29 15:45 Pink Agate: I think here just 1/2
2013-08-29 15:45 Mystyk: listen on 25% then
2013-08-29 15:46 Mystyk: and you'll hear it's on the blue tick
2013-08-29 15:46 Mystyk: or at least add a hit circle ><
2013-08-29 15:47 Pink Agate: you are right ,I fix it
2013-08-29 15:52 Pink Agate: ?
2013-08-29 15:52 Mystyk: im back
2013-08-29 15:52 Mystyk: okay
2013-08-29 15:52 Mystyk: lets see
2013-08-29 15:53 Mystyk: i just brough more tea
2013-08-29 15:53 Mystyk: 02:32:318 (1,3) - ctrl+G for better flow
2013-08-29 15:54 Pink Agate: oK,just mod hard diff and post it in thread
2013-08-29 15:54 Mystyk: loool xD
2013-08-29 15:54 Mystyk: why?
2013-08-29 15:54 Mystyk: is it too much?
2013-08-29 15:54 Mystyk: i almost reached the end :P
2013-08-29 15:55 Pink Agate: no
2013-08-29 15:55 Pink Agate: just give me a simple mod
2013-08-29 15:55 Mystyk: okay im doing that its simple xD
2013-08-29 15:56 Pink Agate: have any problem?
2013-08-29 15:56 Mystyk: hm? what do you mean?
2013-08-29 15:56 Mystyk: i didnt plan to tell you 100 things like I do in my mods usually :P
2013-08-29 15:57 Pink Agate: i mean it and i will give you KD
2013-08-29 15:57 Mystyk: nah i dont need it xD
2013-08-29 15:57 Mystyk: its just a quick simple mod not worth a KD
2013-08-29 15:57 Pink Agate: post is
2013-08-29 15:57 Pink Agate: it
2013-08-29 15:57 Mystyk: ><
2013-08-29 15:57 Mystyk: okay okay
2013-08-29 15:57 Pink Agate: my bad english and can't understand many more
2013-08-29 15:57 Mystyk: alright
2013-08-29 15:59 Pink Agate: t/150289
2013-08-29 15:59 Pink Agate: have any wrong need i fix?or go on?
2013-08-29 15:59 Pink Agate: if no ,plz post the mrc mod in here
2013-08-29 16:01 Mystyk: just one more thing
2013-08-29 16:03 Mystyk: 02:42:024 (7,8,1) - this would be nicer and would flow well http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/955241
2013-08-29 16:04 Pink Agate: good ider
2013-08-29 16:04 Mystyk: :3
2013-08-29 16:04 Pink Agate: fixed
2013-08-29 16:04 Mystyk: overall nice work, most of your jumps fit nicely to the music ^^
2013-08-29 16:05 Pink Agate: thanks
2013-08-29 16:05 Mystyk: you're welcome
Awaken
858 posts
Joined February 2012
Awaken
[Hard]
00:35:848 (1) - 滑条不够弯 挡到6了
00:44:892 (6) - ctrl+g试试
00:47:318 (3) - 感觉这里应该ctrl+g..1和2都是尾巴向中间的
01:10:259 (9) - 这个也是..ctrl+g尾巴改向中间
02:00:112 (10) - 试试ctrl+g
02:01:436 (3) - 这尾巴和02:00:112 (10)没stack好
02:21:730 (9) - 这里可以NC
02:51:290 (4) - 4不如在2的尾巴上起头？

[Normal]
00:58:789 (1) - 1的头可以摆一个五角星嘛
01:18:201 (1,2) - 好丑
02:37:171 (1,2,3,4) - 摆个正一点的正方形
03:03:201 (3) - 多个折返

[Easy]
神麻婆的easy果然没什么好挑的

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/113626 快点快点
Angelina_Rocca
33 posts
Joined February 2013
Angelina_Rocca
SPOILER
PA姐姐我❤你
HARD
PA姐姐果然神麻婆，好难找
01:55:703 (2,3) - 这里没包好？
02:09:820 (4) - 这个位置放的，怎么说呢，打起来有那么一点点别扭。再往高一些的话，我个人打起来会舒服一些（个人吐槽而已）
NORMAL
00:44:453 (1,2) - 加点弧度吧，刚好凑在一起，感觉看起来不舒服
01:18:203 (1) - 这里看着也。。。干脆改成01:18:203 (1) +01:18:644 (2) 吧
就不会贴在一起了，而且normal也不用那么简单嘛。
01:19:967 (1,2) - 试试这样？看着贴在一起我有强迫症
SPOILER
02:35:850 (1,2) - 同↑↑
EASY
01:46:879 (1) - slidertick加一个音效吧
02:22:835 (2) - 或者这里干脆去掉，感觉有的地方蛮有感觉的，有的地方就有点奇怪
- TiRaFiouS -
128 posts
Joined November 2012
- TiRaFiouS -
[EZ]
01:23:056 (3) - Prev:1.10
01:50:629 (2) - Prev:1.10
02:22:835 (2) - Prev:0.80
02:24:600 (1) - Prev:0.80
02:26:364 (2) - Prev:0.80
02:47:762 (3) - Prev:1.10
01:25:261 - add circle(?)

[NM]
01:58:791 (1) - 這樣子好看一點((?

[Hard]
00:42:026 (3,4) - x:480 y:216
00:49:526 (7) - x:216 y:328
01:11:144 (1,2) - 槽....有點不好看...
00:35:409 (7) - 00:49:526 (7) - 01:45:997 (6) - 可以加速這些滑條試試看
02:11:475 (3) - remove

主騙KD>_>
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
1,630 posts
Joined December 2011
yf_bmp

Angelina_Rocca wrote:

EASY
01:46:879 (1) - slidertick加一个音效吧 不好
02:22:835 (2) - 或者这里干脆去掉，感觉有的地方蛮有感觉的，有的地方就有点奇怪 调轻了

Piyoko_9796 wrote:

[EZ]
01:23:056 (3) - Prev:1.10 Fixed
01:50:629 (2) - Prev:1.10 on purpose
02:22:835 (2) - Prev:0.80
02:24:600 (1) - Prev:0.80
02:26:364 (2) - Prev:0.80 以上没有关系
02:47:762 (3) - Prev:1.10 Fixed
01:25:261 - add circle(?) too hard(circle多)
SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Crayon Pop - Saturday Night.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 56914
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 15112,37061,99377
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Saturday Night
TitleUnicode:Saturday Night
Artist:Crayon Pop
ArtistUnicode:크레용팝
Creator:Pink Agate
Version:yf's Easy
Source:
Tags:k-pop kpop yf_bmp 蜡笔团
BeatmapID:293983
BeatmapSetID:112214

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:1
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

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205,284,124085,6,0,P|257:176|305:288,1,300,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,320,125849,5,4,0:0:0:0:
416,220,126291,1,4,0:2:0:0:
372,124,126732,1,4,0:2:0:0:
280,80,127173,1,4,0:2:0:0:
180,92,127614,6,0,P|144:112|112:164,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,260,128497,2,0,P|52:240|24:200,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,220,129820,2,0,P|232:160|316:224,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,256,131144,6,0,P|460:264|508:244,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
317,222,132467,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,184,132908,2,0,P|176:176|128:196,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,220,134232,2,0,P|324:172|304:124,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,76,135114,6,0,P|132:80|28:160,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,228,136438,2,0,P|112:272|96:320,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
39,145,137761,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,52,138202,6,0,P|88:24|88:0,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,132,139085,2,0,P|172:96|180:40,2,100,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,208,140408,5,4,0:2:0:0:
256,296,140849,1,4,0:2:0:0:
308,208,141291,1,4,0:2:0:0:
372,132,141732,5,4,0:2:0:0:
256,296,142835,2,0,B|240:248|272:192|256:144,1,150,4|4,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
64,92,144600,6,0,P|48:56|48:16,2,75,4|4|4,0:2|0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
64,292,146364,2,0,P|48:328|48:368,2,75,4|4|4,0:2|0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
264,300,147909,5,8,0:0:0:0:
328,224,148350,1,8,0:0:0:0:
304,128,148791,5,4,0:2:0:0:
216,76,149232,2,0,P|132:80|28:160,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,228,150556,2,0,P|112:272|96:320,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
39,145,151879,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,52,152320,6,0,P|88:24|88:0,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,132,153203,2,0,P|172:96|180:40,2,100,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,208,154526,1,4,0:2:0:0:
256,296,154967,1,4,0:2:0:0:
308,208,155409,1,4,0:2:0:0:
348,116,155850,6,0,B|368:96|368:96|396:84,2,50,4|0|8,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,296,157173,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,196,157615,2,0,B|256:172|256:172|252:168|252:168|252:144,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,164,158938,1,8,0:0:0:0:
125,88,159379,2,0,B|144:96|144:96|164:116,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,160,160703,5,8,0:0:0:0:
380,232,161144,2,0,B|396:252|396:252|404:276,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,160,162467,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,232,162908,2,0,B|116:252|116:252|108:276,2,50,4|0|8,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,160,164232,6,0,B|368:164|392:108|392:108|344:80|352:24,1,200,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,160,165997,2,0,B|144:164|120:108|120:108|168:80|160:24,2,200,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,252,168203,5,4,0:0:0:0:
204,344,168644,1,4,0:2:0:0:
308,344,169085,1,4,0:2:0:0:
352,252,169526,1,4,0:2:0:0:
256,220,169967,6,0,B|256:176|256:176|252:164|252:164|252:120,1,100,4|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,232,171291,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,332,172173,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,232,173056,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,148,173497,6,0,P|492:100|476:48,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,196,174820,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,376,175703,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,196,176585,1,8,0:0:0:0:
80,156,177026,6,0,B|72:112|72:112|76:100|76:100|68:56,1,100,4|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,178350,1,8,0:0:0:0:
443,58,179232,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,256,180114,2,0,P|404:304|424:352,2,100,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,181879,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,168,182320,5,12,0:0:0:0:
204,260,182761,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,260,183203,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,168,183644,1,8,0:0:0:0:
kazumikos
393 posts
Joined February 2010
kazumikos
[Hard]

OD+1 HD+2?
open AIMOD, KIAIs aren't snapped
  1. 00:54:600 - feel like there should be a note here
  2. combos from 01:10:261 (3) - to 01:25:261 (8) - are a bit messy =/ here are a few suggestions
    SPOILER
    00:58:791 (1) - remove nc
    01:09:379 (1) - ^ / 01:10:261 (3) - nc
    01:11:144 (1) - remove nc
    01:12:909 (1) - ^ / 01:14:011 (3) - nc
    01:14:673 (1) - remove nc
    01:16:438 (1) - ^ / 01:17:541 (5) - nc
    01:18:203 (1) - remove nc
    01:19:967 (1) - ^ / 01:21:291 (3) - nc
    01:21:732 (1) - remove nc
  3. 02:07:504 - add note
  4. 02:08:938 (1) - remove nc
  5. 02:11:364 (2,3,4) - this isnt following anything, i suggest you delete 02:11:475 (3) - and stack 02:11:364 (2) - on 02:11:144 (1) - or something like that? just like what you did with 01:07:614 (1,2,3,4) - it's perfect o_O
  6. 02:21:181 (6,7,8,9,10) - please fix this jump? =/ these notes are 1/4
  7. 02:21:732 - miss a note here, add finish too :3
  8. same combo issues from 02:35:850 (1) - too 02:48:203 (1) - look messy
  9. 03:03:864 - miss a note here, the mapset is supposed to end here
[Normal]

AR -1
KIAIs aren't snapped too
I see there is slidertick2 in the folder, why don't you use it for clap like [Easy]?
  1. 00:24:379 (2) - can't recommend overlap here, may be this?
    SPOILER
  2. 00:55:261 (2) - put it like this?
    SPOILER
  3. 01:09:379 (1) - remove nc
  4. 02:27:026 (1) - remove this spinner? it's too short for a normal and plus, [Hard] doesn't have it o_o
  5. 03:03:864 - add a note here
[Easy]

check KIAI, they are not snapped
that's all, nice diff


I like it :D
bokito
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smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
嗨，PA老爺， QQ req。抱歉拖這麼久。

[General]

None.

[yf"s Easy] 怎麼kiai都not snapped..

00:27:909 (4) - 前端finish去除，因為前面也是只有+尾。

[Normal] kiai time不見了

00:44:453 (1,2) - 並在一起不太好看
00:53:056 (1) - 轉盤尾聲音小點?
00:58:791 (1) - 後面折返遮到了前面的圈，換個位置?

01:02:320 (1) -
這個放到01:01:438 (3) - 的滑條中間，然後用01:03:644 (2) 疊 01:02:320 (1) 的滑條頭如何?

01:18:203 (1,2) - 感覺蓋到不太好看，01:19:967 (1,2) - 這個就還好。
01:43:791 (2) - 滑條頭疊在01:42:026 (3) -比較好看
02:10:703 (4) - 疊02:09:820 (2) - ?
02:35:850 (1,2) - 不太好看
02:37:173 (1,2,3,4) - 可以搞個正四邊形，(4)有點歪掉。
02:53:497 (1) - 滑條尾放白線，後面紅線放圈如何?
03:00:556 (1) - ^

[Hard] kiai time也不見了

00:25:041 (5) - 168 312?
00:30:335 (3) - 可以跟4567成個五邊形。
00:45:556 (8) - 沒疊好
00:45:997 (9) - 可以包
00:49:526 (7) - 尾端可疊00:50:629 (2) - 的滑條頭。
00:51:291 (3,4,5,6) - 可呈正四邊
01:03:203 (9) - 可以包
01:08:497 (5) - 可以包，跟(6)做對稱。
01:11:144 (1,2) - 我覺得兩個形狀可以一樣做對稱。
01:16:438 (1,2,3) - 1跟2 ，ctrl+g，再來2跟3，ctrl+g，如何?
01:46:438 (1) - 可以包
01:51:732 (1) - 感覺這段有點難讀。
01:59:673 (3,4) - 可搞對稱?
02:09:820 (4) - 248 72?
02:21:181 (6,7,8,9,10) - 感覺難讀
02:32:761 (2) - Ctrl+g?
02:34:747 (4) - 沒疊好
02:37:614 (1) - 包一下吧
02:48:203 (1,2,3) - 尾端正三角
03:03:864 (8) - 這邊有音，放一顆note在112 104如何?

[Other]

1.如果有任何修改上的問題，可以 PM 或 In-game 詢問。
2.老爺..已經進墳了，希望你up到pending一下。
Pink Agate
497 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
Pink Agate
OK, I fixed all mod ,thanks guys
Nymph
osu! Alumni
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Joined December 2010
Nymph
[General]
各难度的kiai绿线都没有snap好 自己检查一遍 看看aimod写得就好了

我觉得难度设定太低了 hard用OD5 HP5 我个人觉得起码也是7才好 最少最少也要6嘛 同理normal用4是不是更好一些


[Hard]
01:03:203 (9) - slider的形状和位置略尴尬 可以考虑做个blanket啥的

02:42:247 (3,4) - 这种可以3摆在Y轴上 slider4做个Y轴对称之类的 比现在要好看

03:03:864 (X) - 这里感觉可以再加个note因为音乐这里还有节奏的
Pink Agate
497 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
Pink Agate

Nymph wrote:

[General]
各难度的kiai绿线都没有snap好 自己检查一遍 看看aimod写得就好了

我觉得难度设定太低了 hard用OD5 HP5 我个人觉得起码也是7才好 最少最少也要6嘛 同理normal用4是不是更好一些


[Hard]
01:03:203 (9) - slider的形状和位置略尴尬 可以考虑做个blanket啥的

02:42:247 (3,4) - 这种可以3摆在Y轴上 slider4做个Y轴对称之类的 比现在要好看

03:03:864 (X) - 这里感觉可以再加个note因为音乐这里还有节奏的

:arrow: 全部都改了，nomral的HP 4,hard的OD ,HP 6,除了YF EASY难度里KIAI时间有BUG外，其他都没问题了，谢谢MOD
Nymph
osu! Alumni
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Nymph
bubbled.
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
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izzydemon
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izzydemon
bubbled on first page lol
Damori_old
Damori_old
r-r-r-r-r-rank it!
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
jonathanlfj
alright lets see

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
uncheck widescreen storyboard support on all diffs
your preview time is unsnapped by 2ms, please change from 56914 to 56916

[yf's Easy]
some unsnapped green lines, please snap them to appropriate locations:
00:25:590 - snap to 00:25:592
01:43:237 - snap to 01:43:239
02:00:884 - snap to 02:00:886
02:01:987 - snap to 02:01:989
02:04:634 - snap to 02:04:636

01:01:879 (2,4) - i think you meant to perfectly stack these two
02:18:202 (1) - i can see that this is a copy paste of 01:07:614 (1), but its overlapping with the hp bar so consider lowering it a bit
02:32:320 (1) - ^ in similar fashion
03:01:879 (5) - forgot clap

[Normal]
how bout change sampleset to N:C1 to avoid the slider slide sound? if you do this then apply it to Hard as well
00:56:585 (3,1) - add finish on these two? its pretty evident in the music and 00:57:026 (1) marks the start of the chorus
02:28:791 (1) - maybe a bit too far from the center, since it will be hard to navigate to after the spinner. consider readjusting this combo to bring it closer to center and have proper spacing on 02:30:114 (4,1)
next time try to use grid size 4, makes spacing a lot more accurate

[Hard]
01:18:203 (1) - forgot a finish on the start?
01:58:791 (1,4) - shouldnt these be the same slider stacked at the same spot? seems to be your intention here
02:02:320 (7) - add NC here to prevent high combo count
02:09:379 (2) - NC here instead of 02:08:938 (1)
02:21:732 (10) - add a finish
03:00:556 (6) - NC

The diffs themselves are fine, but due to the unsnapped preview time and some issues in Easy im not sure if i will be able to rank this directly. Call me back later and we will figure this out
Pink Agate
497 posts
Joined September 2011
Topic Starter
Pink Agate

jonathanlfj wrote:

alright lets see

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
uncheck widescreen storyboard support on all diffs :arrow: fix
your preview time is unsnapped by 2ms, please change from 56914 to 56916 :arrow: fix

[yf's Easy]
some unsnapped green lines, please snap them to appropriate locations:
00:25:590 - snap to 00:25:592
01:43:237 - snap to 01:43:239
02:00:884 - snap to 02:00:886
02:01:987 - snap to 02:01:989
02:04:634 - snap to 02:04:636
:arrow: all fix
01:01:879 (2,4) - i think you meant to perfectly stack these two :arrow: fix
02:18:202 (1) - i can see that this is a copy paste of 01:07:614 (1), but its overlapping with the hp bar so consider lowering it a bit :arrow: fix
02:32:320 (1) - ^ in similar fashion :arrow: fix
03:01:879 (5) - forgot clap :arrow: fix

[Normal]
how bout change sampleset to N:C1 to avoid the slider slide sound? if you do this then apply it to Hard as well :arrow: all fix
00:56:585 (3,1) - add finish on these two? its pretty evident in the music and 00:57:026 (1) marks the start of the chorus :arrow: fix
02:28:791 (1) - maybe a bit too far from the center, since it will be hard to navigate to after the spinner. consider readjusting this combo to bring it closer to center and have proper spacing on 02:30:114 (4,1)
next time try to use grid size 4, makes spacing a lot more accurate :arrow: fix

[Hard]
01:18:203 (1) - forgot a finish on the start? :arrow: fix
01:58:791 (1,4) - shouldnt these be the same slider stacked at the same spot? seems to be your intention here :arrow: fix
02:02:320 (7) - add NC here to prevent high combo count :arrow: fix
02:09:379 (2) - NC here instead of 02:08:938 (1) :arrow: fix
02:21:732 (10) - add a finish :arrow: fix
03:00:556 (6) - NC :arrow: fix

NORMAL和HARD难度里增加了几条NC:2 clap音效的绿线，结尾高潮增加了一个KIAI喷泉
EASY里还有4个KIAI少于15秒的BUG，其他没问题了。谢谢MOD！

The diffs themselves are fine, but due to the unsnapped preview time and some issues in Easy im not sure if i will be able to rank this directly. Call me back later and we will figure this out
jonathanlfj
Elite Mapper
2,568 posts
Joined February 2010
jonathanlfj
since numerous changes were made i can only rebubble this, will call another BAT to look at this later.
rebubbled~
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