1. Insane (4.96 stars, 642 notes)
2. Normal (2.93 stars, 203 notes)
3. UWS's Hard (4.58 stars, 366 notes)

1. Consider adding UWS to tags. (I'm a lazy person so I'd type UWS instead of UnitedWeSin ) Also, adding punk to tags would be a good idea because genre of the song is punk pop. C'mon, add more tags, help us to find this awesome map faster! ♥
2. Hey, UWS, your kiai #4 starts ONE, just ONE ms earlier than the sami kiai on others diffs. :< Consider starting it on 02:53:595 to kep consistency!
3. Disable the widescreen support! The osu file clearly says that this toggler is for SB ONLY.

1. Since it's the easiest diff you could reduce diff settings a bit. You know, beginners would like to play this song, too! However, AR 5 is too hard for them!
   tl;dr: you could be a bit more beginner-friendly
2. 00:34:519 (1) - holding that slider for so long is really boring for average players. And new players are unable to read the repeats because slider is too short for them. try to break it into two sliders.
   NoteL it may rquire reducing the OD. But trust me, it will make your map a bit more challenging and interesting!
3. 01:56:366 (3,1) - i know, you probably hate nazi suggestions, but seriously, if you fix this blanket you get a PERFECT diff. I'd really be happy if you fix it!
4. 03:22:942 (1,2,3) - I'd finish the diff with a spinner because these objects are kinda sudden here and they'll probably surprise players. (this is the easiest diff, remember :<)
   
   Awesome diff! I really like it!

1. This is the Hard diff, HP Drain 6 wouldn't hurt too much! use it to make gameplay a bit more enjoyable!
2. 00:15:605 (6,1) - this is still a [Hard] diff, 1/4 jumps are playable on a low BPM, but this one is TOO big! :< Try to reduce the DS here a bit to make this diff more playable.
   Note: seriously, bbe careful with such jumps! They fit, but they're too insane! :< Same applies for almost every similar pattern :<
3. 00:32:236 (3) - to be honest, I feel like this slider is off vocals and music. Try to finish it on 00:32:562 - and you'll hear what i'm talking about. Don't believe me? Check it out with 25% playback rate, the beat on 00:32:562 - is clearly audible!
4. 00:33:540 (6,1) - nazi - you wanted to make a blanket slider-here, didn't you? Anyway, change it if you feel like doing it! it's not a big deal
5. 01:17:236 (1) - man, I miss your awesome 1/4 patterns here. Usually, you map 1/4 parts here with some awesome rhythm, why did you place just one long slider here? :<
6. 01:19:192 (3) - not sure about this one, but I feel like you should replace this slider with a circle on 01:19:192 - and an 1/4 slider on 01:19:519 - to follow vocals better. Try this in action and you'll hear this!
7. 02:09:410 (2,3,4,5) - love this pattern. It flows so cool and looks perfect.
8. 02:21:475 - 02:26:692 - 02:29:301 - I feel kinda sad about these beats. You totally ignore them and yet you map 1/4s right after this slider :<
   
   Great as always. Except a few little things and these 1/4 jumps. Try to get more opinions on them, but I think that all you have to do is just reducing the DS on them a bit. :>

1. I'd consider using OD 8 because this diff is meant to be really, really hard. However, it's totally up to you.
2. 00:14:790 (5,6,7) - nice usage of 1/8 beats! It's overmapped, fits with music and totally playable!
3. 00:23:432 (7,1) - feels just like 1/4 pattern, got 100 here like three times because it looks too much like 1/4 beat. Try to keep the DS here more consistent.
   Note: 00:28:649 (8,1) - same happens to such patterns and so on. I'd really like to see consistent spacing here.
4. 02:26:366 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - that was crazy. Really crazy. It doesn't sound like 1/8 stream at all, imo. However, try to get more opinions on that.
   
   Pretty nice. I'd love this diff, but that stream bugs me so much.

-Bakari- wrote:

Hell yeah! Totally supporting this map!

[General]

1. Consider adding UWS to tags. (I'm a lazy person so I'd type UWS instead of UnitedWeSin ) Also, adding punk to tags would be a good idea because genre of the song is punk pop. C'mon, add more tags, help us to find this awesome map faster! ♥ k
2. Hey, UWS, your kiai #4 starts ONE, just ONE ms earlier than the sami kiai on others diffs. :< Consider starting it on 02:53:595 to kep consistency! I fixed the kiai in the 2 diffs of mine cause it's actually mine "unsnapped" resulted from the editor bug
3. Disable the widescreen support! The osu file clearly says that this toggler is for SB ONLY. currently waiting for a lyric SB so I ticked this one inb4 =.= lol

[Normal]

1. Since it's the easiest diff you could reduce diff settings a bit. You know, beginners would like to play this song, too! However, AR 5 is too hard for them!
   tl;dr: you could be a bit more beginner-friendly did AR4
2. 00:34:519 (1) - holding that slider for so long is really boring for average players. And new players are unable to read the repeats because slider is too short for them. try to break it into two sliders.
   NoteL it may rquire reducing the OD. But trust me, it will make your map a bit more challenging and interesting! splited
3. 01:56:366 (3,1) - i know, you probably hate nazi suggestions, but seriously, if you fix this blanket you get a PERFECT diff. I'd really be happy if you fix it! did so, I'm still willing to draw more delicious sliders
4. 03:22:942 (1,2,3) - I'd finish the diff with a spinner because these objects are kinda sudden here and they'll probably surprise players. (this is the easiest diff, remember :<) no change for this one. I think the rhythm arrangement is pretty consistent and acceptable as it currently is
   
   Awesome diff! I really like it!

[Inasne]

1. I'd consider using OD 8 because this diff is meant to be really, really hard. However, it's totally up to you. will need more opinion lol maybe I'd be "angry" again
2. 00:14:790 (5,6,7) - nice usage of 1/8 beats! It's overmapped, fits with music and totally playable! ^_^
3. 00:23:432 (7,1) - feels just like 1/4 pattern, got 100 here like three times because it looks too much like 1/4 beat. Try to keep the DS here more consistent. k I did it with 2.0 to avoid some overlap and enable some stacking pattern but well, it's ok to live without
   Note: 00:28:649 (8,1) - same happens to such patterns and so on. I'd really like to see consistent spacing here. yes I know that, fixed all by myself
4. 02:26:366 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - that was crazy. Really crazy. It doesn't sound like 1/8 stream at all, imo. However, try to get more opinions on that. understandable, even ambiguous for my self. I threw this cause I don't know how to handle this ppint =.= will need more opinions
   
   Pretty nice. I'd love this diff, but that stream bugs me so much.

Great mapset!

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Good luck! Have a star! ~

Edit: sorry, totally forgot to shoot the star! Here're two more :3/

Zero__wind wrote:

understandable, even ambiguous for my self. I threw this cause I don't know how to handle this ppint =.= will need more opinions Yeah, I've had a hard trying to create a better pattern here, too. In the end, I've got an idea. try to place a spinner from 02:26:366 - and 'till 02:27:345 - it's totally playable and rankable even with OD8, so it shouldn't be a problem. Yeah, it is something different from your regular pattern but I can't see any better pattern here. / 1/2 slider with a repeat on 02:26:366 works too, but it gives some bad flow here, imo. Anyway, it's your map and your pattern. So, it's up to you!

0.0 omg thx for the surprise~hope that was a nice surprise, haha

1. At first as an introduction... in Normal,i think that you should avoid the act to change Slider Velocity by changing BPM.

1. I think that it do not have any problem about placement and the timing.

1. The point that you should fix was not found. I feel that it is a splendid beatmap.

1. At first as an introduction... i felt that it was very difficult.
   However,it is not good one that I play too much.And i think that there is the person who can clear this degree of difficulty.
   So I think to do modding on a premise that there is the person who can clear.

1. 00:25:877 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - i feel sense of incongruity to drift.
   i feel sense of incongruity in (8)→(1) in particular
   i suggest that I change (3) into (1),(1) into (2),(2) into (3)
   If you feel that distance is far, and you are serious,it is good to change (4) placement

placement

1. 00:26:692 (2) - Ctrl＋g

1. 00:56:366 (4,5) - i suggest that I reverse 5 to 4

placement

1. 02:25:062 (6) - Ctrl＋g

LKs wrote:

hi

[general]

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [Insane] : UnitedWesin UWS punk
- [Normal] : UnitedWesin UWS punk
- [UWS's Hard] : UnitedWesin
fixed
offest +2~+4

[Insane]

00:08:758 (3) - 我会在这里用直slider 嗯重新整理了一下短slider的形状
00:26:692 (2) - 这样flow不太舒服 还是ctrl+g 这个我觉得很好 反过来的话到3不太顺
00:29:301 (2) - 这overlap感觉有点微妙 不如http://puu.sh/4tyts.jpg fixed
00:30:932 (7) - 建议做成直的 感觉弯的太多了
00:32:888 (5) - http://puu.sh/4tyEB.jpg 其实不是要换 但我觉得5那个弧度和8blanket好 嗯好
00:38:105 (4,5,6) - 弯的太多 我简直开始怀疑你的取♂向
01:11:855 (3,4) - 感觉你需要再考虑一下这个slider的位置 再想想
01:30:116 (4,5,6,7) -

感觉没太多可提的 就是几个细节梗还需要推敲一下 音效ok 以及直和弯的比例

[UWS' hard]

diff is fine, nothing to pick up, gl

[Normal]

00:55:062 (1) - blanket得不太好 美死早
01:00:932 (2) - 以及这种弧度 修了下


感觉你被我坑了 这种图实在没啥好mod的 大提升不太可能有 只能多修细节吧 nor里的多注意03:01:420 (1) - 这种slider的形状