This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009년 8월 13일 목요일 at 오후 6:00:18

Artist: Last Alliance
Title: Hekireki
BPM: 130
Filesize: 1815kb
Play Time: 02:30
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (2.02 stars, 143 notes)
2. Hard (4.69 stars, 263 notes)
3. MoonFragrance's Normal (4.05 stars, 165 notes)

Download: Last Alliance - Hekireki
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My Second Beatmap
i can't speak english but korean Friends help speak english
[Hard] change slider speed 2.0 RE Create (song file change 56kb > 320kb)
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(Thank you bmin11, MoonFragrance, DeathxShinigami, blissfulyoshi, minyeob)

We discuss about BPM, Offset, and etc by chatting.

Star for your good luck.

This is 70% completed version

Download: LAST ALLIANCE - HEKIREKI (hutka) [MoonFragrance's Normal].osu

Not done. :s

+1 star

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Download: LAST ALLIANCE - HEKIREKI (hutka) [MoonFragrance's Normal].osu

Completed Version :)
or maybe not(?)

Download: LAST ALLIANCE - HEKIREKI (hutka) [MoonFragrance's Normal].osu

[Easy]
Genarally, the notes seems to be quite random. But it is your choice how to map so... ya
노트들이 노래랑 따로 노는 부분이 있어 보이지만 그건 만드는 사람 맘이니 태클은 걸지 않겠습니다.

[MoonFragrance's Normal]
00:24:09 (1) - how about create one more return?
00:24:55 (1) - delete this slider then put a note on the red tick
00:31:71 (9) - clap, maybe? Your choice
01:03:32 (1) - from this part, just leave this BPM change and delete until...
01:09:55 (2) - end of this slider
01:17:63 (1) - I don't think you want a sudden BPM change for normal
01:19:94 (x) - place a note
01:21:78 (x) - ^
01:25:25 (x) - place a slider that ends on the blue tick
01:25:48 (1) - reduce one return and then move to the red tick
01:28:94 (x) - place a note
01:46:59 (x) - delete #1 and place a slider that ends on the white tick
01:47:75 (x) - I would love to see what you do with this pare rather then just a break
02:02:40 (3) - move to the blue tick and create one more return (or not)
02:04:13 (3) - make this slider to end on the blue tick
02:24:32 (1) - move this to the red tick
02:28:71 (x) - add a note
02:30:78 (1) - same reason but I think it would be ok if it slows down like this

[Hard]
Whistle spams are bad 호루라기를 너무 많이 쓰지 마세요
There are some weird spacing. I think you can tell during the testing. 몇몇 노트들의 거리가 미묘하게 이상합니다. Distance snap을 써보세요. 아 물론 점프를 원하신다면 확실하게 해주시구요.

00:16:71 (1,1,1,1) - I think you can do something more rather then 4 spinners. 스핀만 4개 이어지게 하지마시고 뭔가 더 넣어보세요.
00:43:25 (x) - Please don't make a short break like this. 왜 여기에 짧은 break가 있죠? 수정하세요.
01:01:48 (1) - Reduce one return. 되돌아감을 하나 줄이세요.
01:10:71 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Delete the new combos and make a bit larger jumps. 뉴콤보를 푸시고 점프를 더 넓혀주세요.
02:07:01 (1) - a huge straight slider... huh? No problem but I just don't really like it... 음... 그냥 긴 슬라이더보단 뭔가 커브가 있음 좋을것 같네요... 뭐 그리 큰 문제는 아니에요.
03:06:90 (2) - straighten this slider up. 슬라이더를 직선으로 세워주세요.
03:08:17 (3) - spacing. 거리가 이상함


A nice song and a nice map. Now we need some mods~! So we can improve this map~!

Offset:16688

Easy:
01:12:55 (6) - very boring, please don't have so many repeats (also, not all the repeats even make sense such as 01:14:40 - )
01:47:63 (1,1,1,1) - having a jump this large in easy...
02:14:86 (2) - same as 01:12:55 (6)
this difficulty felt a lot like following a metronome with virtually every note having a whole note between them and the next

Normal:
00:49:71 (3) - stack under the red 1
I really do not get y there are 0.5x and 2x sliders semi-randomly and on a normal diff without warning
01:43:65 (2) - nazi post: spaced too far

Hard:
00:43:48 - y is there a random break here?
I really don't like the slow sliders in this diff. It sort of make the map feel slow and boring.

Even though I don't like long and sort of slow beatmaps, star.

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: LAST ALLIANCE - HEKIREKI (hutka) [MoonFragrance's Normal].osu

bmin11, blissfulyoshi//thanks Fixed

*Korean

[Easy]
Timing-> Resnap All notes 다시 하세요
00:57:74 (1) - 길이를 1/2 박자 만큼 늘려주세요 (58:438에 롱노트가 끝나야 합니다)

[MoonFragrance]
01:02:11 (3) - 1/4 박자 뒤로(느리게)
01:02:28 (4) - 삭제.
01:43:65 (2) - 약간만 줄이세요 (Grid Snap 설정해놓고 하면 모양 변형되니 조심)
01:47:34 (1) - 1/4박 늘리세요

[Hard]
01:59:16 (5) - 뉴콤보 클릭 ㄱㄱ
뭔가 부족한 것 같지만 틀린 건 없음

제 손으로 랭크시키고 말겠음

Thanks Fixed

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Download: Last Alliance - Hekireki (hutka) [Hard].osu

Remod

[Easy]
00:21:51 (1) - U턴 2회 더
00:36:28 (5) - 이거 때문에 다음 부분이 애매해지네요 1/4박 줄이시고
00:42:74 (5) - U턴 2회 더
00:46:66 (4) - U턴 1회 더
01:10:66 (3) - 뉴콤보 누르세요
01:19:43 (1) - 1/4박 줄이세요
01:45:74 (6) - U턴 1회 더
02:02:82 (1) - 꼭 이렇게 해야겠음? 이건 아닌 듯 ㅋㅋ
02:25:78 (3) - 타이밍 1/4박자 더 빠르게하고 길이 1/4박 늘리세요

Distance snap은 똑같은것만 쓰셔야 되는데 ㄷㄷ (02:21:28 (1) ~ 02:24:05 (1) - 이런 경우는 예외)
이지난이도는 Distance Snap 한맵에 똑같은 것만 쓰셔야 되요

근데 왜 Offset이 다 제각각임?
일단 시작 Offset 16,711로 통일해주세요
바꾼다음에 Timing-> Resnap all notes 하는거 잊지 마시구요

고치기 귀찮겠지만 이거 다 고치면 펜딩 가도 됨

P.S 쿠도스는 소리설정 댓글 말고 이 댓글에만 주세요

^thx fixed

[Easy]
01:34:43 (2) - 스페이싱

그리고 이지인데도 불구하고 점프가 많은 느낌이네요.

[Hard]
00:19:01 (3,4,5) - 스페이싱
00:40:70 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - 스페이싱? 플레이 하다보면 탁 막힌 느낌이네요
01:10:70 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,1,2,3) - 여기도 그렇네요
01:25:70 (5) - 스페이싱
01:59:16 (1) - ^
02:07:01 (1) - 뭐죠 이 의미없는 슬라이더는
02:14:85 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 볼륨이 서서이 켜지는 효과를 주시면 좋을거 같네요
02:15:08 (1,1,1,1) - 뉴 콤보를 지워주세요
02:16:24 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
02:17:62 (2) - 뉴 콤보 넣어주세요
02:31:01 (브레이크) - 뭐 이리 깁니까
02:45:32 (1,2,3,4) - 속도를 줄이면 어떨까요?

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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

here is it

Download: Last Alliance - Hekireki.osz

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