FIRST! btw there is already a ranked song of this~ just fyi
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Normal-I can only nazi~ therefore it's good
Nazi-
00:15:20 (1) - align with (2)? If you want
00:23:85 (2) - I know what sound you're trying to get here, but I like it better with clap at end, too (just my opinion)
00:37:22 (2) - hmmm make this more spaced out please, I couldn't tell it was on 1/4 when I played... just song issue
00:59:24 (2) - down a tick for alignment?
01:23:66 (2) - the whistles made this part seem faster than it should, remove one? or both
01:35:39 (1,2,3,4) - this part sounds the same (music) as the last two sections with same vocal, but theres no hitsounds on theses notes.... add?
Hard-00:13:86 (1) - this whistle sliderslide sounded bad, remove please
00:41:75 (2,3) - ^ (not as much, but still didn't like them)
I didn't count those ^ as nazi~ xD
Nazi-
00:15:98 (7,8,9) - up a tick (align with 6)
00:28:29 (8) - for the sake of a new hitsound flow and your own beats- new combo please
00:45:98 (5) - felt like new combo
00:49:06 (4) - ^ if you did that, then you should add new combo to this one too
00:52:90 (4) - like 00:28:29 comment
01:08:29 - Really really felt like there should be a note here (because all the rest that sound like 01:08:48 (1,2,3,4) (hitsound wise) had a note before it. (and if you do add, have the new combo start here)
01:11:36 - ^
01:14:44 - ^
01:33:86 (1,2,3,4,5) - this stream didn't sound appealing... hmm try removing first two whistle hitsounds?
01:37:13 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this stream didn't sound appealing either... try just leaving whistle to 1 and 6 only? (the whistles felt too fast)
Side note - the hitcircles skin doesn't match the spinner, slider ball and cursor ~_~, and the cursor has a shadow where you can see the square shape, please remove... (if you don't know what im talking about, I'll send screenie), and the spinner looks kinda wabbly
nevertheless its well done~
Star'd