Hello there!
I'm here because your friend, Dariano, asked me if I can take a look at your awesome map. So, here we go ^^
Sleeping:00:23:233 (1,2) - these 2 sliders look a bit ugly like this :c maybe make them straight-horizontal?
00:39:073 - I would add a circle here
00:40:033 - ^ same
00:41:473 - ^ same
00:42:433 (1) - this slider would look better if you added some curve
00:44:833 - add circle
00:45:793 - ^ same
00:47:713 - ^ same
(won't repeat the same observations for chorus)
01:31:873 - ^ same
01:33:793 - ^ same
02:47:713 - you should add a circle here in order to keep the same style like at 02:43:873
Walking:00:40:513 (5) - I would make this slider in the same style as the slider at 00:38:593 (1)
00:55:393 - add a new circle?
00:59:233 - ^ same
01:03:073 - ^ same
01:06:913 - ^ same
(won't repeat the same observations for chorus)
02:53:953 (3) - I would replace this slider with a circle
Dancing:General question: Why did you place so many circles one over another? o.o I would try to change the position of some of them
01:07:873 (1,2,3) - aren't these circles too close to each other?
01:12:193 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - so many circles... maybe you should change some of them into sliders
01:39:313 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - nice, I like this chain! ^^
02:10:753 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - again only circles... add some sliders
Well, I think that's all ^^ Hope you will get it ranked as soon as possible! :3
P.S: I love T. Swift <3 I've created a beatmap for "I knew you were trouble", but it didn't work well so I deleted it :c Anyway, if you have time and if you want, please check my map:
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/130953 It is similar to some of Taylor's songs, so you might like it