1. Hope (3,57 stars, 203 notes)
2. Lie (4,57 stars, 314 notes)
3. Love (1,24 stars, 123 notes)

1. Actually, there're two reason to edit your artist. First of all, see our Ranking Criteria! Secondly, check this store. So, yeah, Luka goes to the tags!
   tl;dr Artist is Circus-P
2. Add some tags, well, first of all, add creator of the video to your tags! Give some respect to him for making this awesome video! (Mike Inel) and also, put name of the album to the tags! (Lucid)
3. Blargh, disable the widescreen support! It doesn't need to be enabled unless you have a SB with widescreen elements.
4. You could find a better BG. It doesn't sneed to be a BG from this song, even some random BG would fit here!
5. Mention in the creators word, that "Easy - Love / Normal - Hope and Lie - Hard". So, players will understand what to expect

1. 01:00:206 (1) - overlapped with your HP Bar. It's not a big deal, but it looks a bit messy, coonsider avoiding this overlap!
2. 01:17:348 (1,2,3) - nazi - try to make them symmetrical! Beginners will love this pattern! Probably it sounds a bit too picky, but appearance is really, really important! Even for beginners! example, see if you like it!
3. 03:03:956 - the green line here is useless. I'd recommend you to remove it. Just in case
   
   Not a fan of 1/2 beats in [Easy] diffs but you use them correctly and it looks/sounds amazing! You could reduce HP Drain to make them more playable, tho.

1. A lot of 1/2 beats make this diff pretty hard but BPM here is low, so that's probably ok. Ask some average-skilled players for their opinions!
2. 02:57:527 (4,5,1) - nazi - try to unstack them and make a triangle. That'd flow better + it's more readable! example
   
   Feels a bit too hard for a [Normal], but maybe it's just me! Nice diff!

1. 00:22:706 (1,2,3,4) - nazi - unstacking the circles here could make your flow much better! Try this example
2. 01:56:456 (2) - probably you shoud mute the volume on those 3/4 sliders or end them 1/4 earlier to make them represent music better.
   
   I didn't like those 3/4 sliders, but that's a good map!

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello o3o mod as requested~

[notice][General]
I'm not completely sure if its possible to lower the sound of the sliders, but the loud 'rolling' sound the slider ball makes sounds really distracting :S Try to lower the volume?
[Love]
00:17:348 - On this timing point, could you try to lower vol to 40%? Made it 60% on all diffs
00:22:706 (1) - Try using a 1/1 slider here instead, so the empty space at 00:23:509 corresponds with the one at 00:32:081 (for consistency) Yes but the when i make it exactly like that i'd need to remap the parts. I made two kinds. I know what you mean though.
00:34:491 (1) - Try using a drum-finish on the head instead of whistle, to match that loud beat heard in the music. Sound not so fitting to me. Sorry ><

[Hope]
00:37:706 (3) - A straight slider may look better imo. I made a curved on to not hit the mapping border, haha.
01:55:920 (3) - Remodel to this? Done on purpose. 1 pattern straight slider 1 curved 1 both.

First time seeing you map a Vocaloid song! OAO And already it looks really good!
Hope this helps~! Did help me, thank you for taking time ^-^

Loneight wrote:

Hi~
Request from PM.

[general]

1. S:C2 and S:C1's hitnormal are so low that some places are lack of the hitting feeling in all diffs, try this

Ah, thank you very much for providing me this!

[Love]

1. 00:24:848 (3,1) - a little weird rhythm, how about this same as the picture?
   because 00:23:777 (2) - let me feel there follow the keyboard. If it's ture, then it should end on 00:25:384 - . If you change this, it also can make the rhythm be relaxative for newbie. 00:33:420 (3) - Same as here I followed the vocal here, so it was intentional.
2. 00:45:206 (3) - the distance ...www, I think you aren't deliberate, if you are..., make the distance is same as others would be easier for newbie Omg, omg, omg. ;w; how could that happen. Thanks for telling me
3. 01:25:920 (5) - just my feeling, NC it to represent break time start and a piece of song end. 03:04:491 (4) - Same as here Yes, but im not keen with NC for 1 element. I only use it rare and at the end its not needed. It would also represent some combo spam and overuse.

good ~

[Hope]

1. 01:47:616 (4) - remove it, because it destroy the rhythm of song, and it make me feel it is unnecessary for the song This goes to the piano, its kind of a transition and flows really good.
2. 01:49:491 (2,3) - a little weird for me, try this same as the picture?
   because 01:49:223 - can hear the sound, but dosen't have note. On the contrary, 01:49:759 - has note, but can't hear sound

Yes, you're right. Gonna change this. Thank you!

I have tried to hear the song when use Slider Tick Rate : 2 in this diff, and find some parts would be better, but some parts would have a little unnecessary sound which you can use some green lines to avoid this. Up to you :3 I'm not sure about this, since you need to put the same tick on every difficultie. And on easy it would be too much.

[Lie]

1. 01:19:223 (6,1) - just suggestion, swap NC would be easier to read the order New beat starts at the white tick though (:
2. 02:04:491 (1,3) - how about make them be symmetrical to be prettier ? They are o:

same as Hope's thought[/notice]
that's all ~ :3
good luck ~

Gabe wrote:

Circus-P <3

Fr33z3R wrote:

Hello. :3



[General]
For me the song is kinda weird with its voice echoes and stuff on the chorus. But I still like it though. Yay
Storyboard for this song would be nice. Has a video which is great.

[Love]
01:15:741 - Add note here? Don't like this much, no :s There is also no important beat, so.
01:39:313 (4) - Vertically align with 01:37:170 (2). 96 252.
01:37:170 (2,3,4) - These might make a form of something but it's not what you think. XD Pervert haha

[Lie]
I don't see anything wrong here. Favorite diff. Thank you, glad you like it. (:

[Conclusion]
Good luck!

-Kirito wrote:

hi Babe o^o/ Hey (:

[General]
- BPM 56 is not that right? Its 112

[Lie]
00:19:491 (4) - 1/1 after replacing the slide, 00:20:295 - add a circle? Following the vocal there (:

BOX1

00:21:634 (4) - ^
00:27:527 - circle add? Wont fit my pattern i wanted rythmwise

very sad song Yes ><

Yumih wrote:

Hello! From Forum PM request

I'll give just a few suggestions, since I'm a bit busy.

General

● Offset +18 (224) - The offset you used is a bit off

Fixed that, fits better. Thanks

Love

● 00:18:438 (1,2) - The beginning of the song here has large gaps between the sliders. How about using a smaller spacings on parts like this? Maybe something around 0.8x would make it easier for newbie players and also follow the song better, since this calm part doesn't require "jumps". I want the spacing consistant and not changing sorry.

● 02:25:938 - This break here sounds really out of place, in my opinion. This part of the song is quite "strong" (not so strong as the Kiai Time, but yeah). Why not try mapping this part? I need one break, the song is 3 min long.

● 03:04:509 (4) - How about adding New Combo here? It would be a nice way to follow the song. Also, it would look better if it wasn't stacked to 03:03:438 (3) in my opinion. The NC thing is not so recommended. It is a NC on one single element at the last note. It is just weird and i dont see the point in putting one in. Sorry.

Pretty solid diff[/notice]

Lie

● 00:19:509 (4) - The first time I played the diff, I found this straight slider right on the beginning of the song a bit weird to play. Maybe it's because it's a long straight slider. How about adding a curve to it? It is a straight, curve, other shape row of sliders, so i want to keep it.

● 00:53:795 (1) - Maybe it's just me, but I find this large spacing here out of the place. I agree this part requires a jump, but maybe if it was a bit smaller, it would flow better. It's on purpose i used exactly 3x spacing to make bigger jumps. I wanted to emphasize the vocal.

Really nice diff, nothing much to say

And that's it!

Good luck!

1. The bg, i would recommend you to change for a bigger size ;__; it's so small.
2. Delete the osb in the folder.

1. 01:06:652 (1,2) - sorry but i'm not really a fan of short repeating sliders in easier diff. it's confusing for new players.
2. 02:06:652 (1,2) - ^
3. 03:01:295 (4) - touches the hp bar, need to do something move it a little down :3
4. I love it

1. 00:37:188 (2) - curve it so it gets a better flow.
   
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2. 00:39:599 (2) - moves this a little more up, straight pattern make it look dull.
   
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3. 00:51:652 (1) - why don't you curve this two and become like this?
   
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4. 01:53:795 (1) - curve it like this, it will get a better flow with the next slider and blanket from far :3 keke
   
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1. 00:44:956 (5) - delete this circle? i don't think there's any beat at this time. even when you play in 25% speed.
2. 00:47:099 (5) - ^
3. 00:54:866 (3) - touches the hp bar.
4. 00:57:813 (4) - ^
5. 01:19:241 (6) - rather then making it stack at circle before why not try like this :3
   
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6. 01:51:652 (1) - this touches the hp bar in my editor.
7. I don't highlight other part to delete circle because they're louder then the part that i highlight above ^

HeatKai wrote:

hey ho o/

[General]

1. The bg, i would recommend you to change for a bigger size ;__; it's so small. Towards the video and the make up i cant find any bigger one. This is the best quality i could find. According to the rules it should be fine.
2. Delete the osb in the folder. I see none ;w;

[What is love, Baby don't hurt me no more]

1. 01:06:652 (1,2) - sorry but i'm not really a fan of short repeating sliders in easier diff. it's confusing for new players. 1 repeat isn't much It's pretty common and it fits perfectly.
2. I love it \n.n/

[Where is hope?]

1. 00:37:188 (2) - curve it so it gets a better flow. Wasn't really attempting to have a 100% flow here. The straight movement emphasizes the vocal at this part better.
   
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2. 00:51:652 (1) - why don't you curve this two and become like this? Straight sliders 00:51:652 - , Curved sliders 00:53:795 - , Both shapes 00:55:938 -
   
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3. 01:53:795 (1) - curve it like this, it will get a better flow with the next slider and blanket from far :3 keke Same as above ^
   
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[Lie hurts people]

1. 00:44:956 (5) - delete this circle? i don't think there's any beat at this time. even when you play in 25% speed. Actually here belongs a slider following the vocal but instead i made 2 circles, so it gives also what i wanted.
2. 00:47:099 (5) - ^
3. 01:19:241 (6) - rather then making it stack at circle before why not try like this :3 The forth back movement is emphasizing the vocal.
   
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4. I don't highlight other part to delete circle because they're louder then the part that i highlight above ^