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Nana Kitade - Tsukihana (TV Size)

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Senbon
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Senbon
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, August 01, 2009 at 10:39:30 AM

Artist: Nana Kitade
Title: Tsukihana (TV Size)
Source: Jigoku Shoujo Mitsuganae
Tags: Jigoku Shoujo Nana Kitade Hell Girl
BPM: 101.97
Filesize: 4024kb
Play Time: 01:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.03 stars, 92 notes)
  2. Hard (4.79 stars, 212 notes)
  3. Normal (4.2 stars, 147 notes)
  4. whymeman's Hell (5 stars, 313 notes)
Download: Nana Kitade - Tsukihana (TV Size)
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I like this song now XD First map for my Hell Girl.. stuff.. maps whatever. o.O


07/26/09 - Mianki's mod
07/28/09 - whymeman's mod and tieff's mod
07/29/09 - Z-Ramm's mod and Vexed's mod
07/29/09 - Added whymeman's Hell! Added new BG for Hard
07/30/09 - animask's mod
07/31/09 - Mafiamaster's mod and HarryOrunitia's mod
08/01/09 - Soaprman's mod
08/02/09 - Lizbeth's and blissfulyoshi's mod and Takuma's mod
Last edited by Senbon , edited 19 times in total.
ElfoVampiro
31 posts
Joined June 2009
ElfoVampiro
autoanalyzer found 140.07bpm here xD
Senbon
480 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Senbon

ElfoVampiro wrote:

autoanalyzer found 140.07bpm here xD
BPM auto analyzing isn't all that effective due to timing sections. Mushing them all into one BPM doesn't work. :(
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
nice map only thing I would recommend is some more hitsounds..
have a star :)
Mianki
2,701 posts
Joined September 2008
Mianki
Normal:

-(00:10:707) Suggestion: reduce the slider length two 1/4 ticks and move it to (00:11:001) and put a circle to (00:10:707)
-(00:21:001) Suggestion: put one more return arrow to (2) slider and reduce (3) slider length two 1/4 ticks and move it a two ticks forward
-(00:31:001) (9.1) Finish hitsounds sound weird, maybe remove them or change them somehow?
-(01:21:590) (1.2) Suggestion: remove the return arrrow and reduce (2) slider length two 1/4 ticks and move it a two ticks forward. Then add circles to (01:22:178) and (01:22:472)

Hard:

-(00:45:413) Suggestion: remove (3) slider and add a return arrow to (2) slider. Then add a circle to (00:45:707)

Star~
Senbon
480 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Senbon

Mianki wrote:

Normal:

-(00:10:707) Suggestion: reduce the slider length two 1/4 ticks and move it to (00:11:001) and put a circle to (00:10:707) Same pattern yup
-(00:21:001) Suggestion: put one more return arrow to (2) slider and reduce (3) slider length two 1/4 ticks and move it a two ticks forward I like it 8D
-(00:31:001) (9.1) Finish hitsounds sound weird, maybe remove them or change them somehow? no change
-(01:21:590) (1.2) Suggestion: remove the return arrrow and reduce (2) slider length two 1/4 ticks and move it a two ticks forward. Then add circles to (01:22:178) and (01:22:472) delishh

Hard:

-(00:45:413) Suggestion: remove (3) slider and add a return arrow to (2) slider. Then add a circle to (00:45:707) Yummy

Star~
thank you super kudo for you~
whymeman
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3,432 posts
Joined November 2008
whymeman
Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Detailed Modding go!

Osz. File Check (Done)

SPOILER
Video: No
Custom Skin: No
[Current] Size: 3.90 MB / 10.00 MB
Source: No (Please add in the Source to all beatmap difficulties.)
Tags: No (Please add in the Tags to all beatmap difficulties.)

[Normal] (Done)

SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 102.000 / 1,002 ms (The timing feels off. Try 101.970 BPM and 989 ms offset.)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 1 / 1.40
Distance Snap Average: x1.0
[Current] Objects: 143 ( 84 Circles / 58 Sliders / 1 Spinner )
[Current] Max Combo: 240
[Current] Max Score: 669,046
[Current] Star Rating: 4.02
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv. 4
[Current] Circle Size: Lv. 3
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv. 4

Needs Lead-In Time. The map starts too sudden. At least 1.5 seconds of Lead-In time would be nice.

00:04:23 (6,7) - Interesting jump... but it stands out very oddly and disrupts the flow.
00:15:11 (1) - Double check the spacing.
00:20:41 (1) - Err.... what happened to the finish?
01:25:11 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Looks a bit cluttered up...
01:26:14 (1) - That speed up would be very unexpected during normal game play...

Notes: The map is okay, but the hitsound use is kinda.... backwards? Try using the timing sections to control the hitsounds. Also, the map plays a bit rough (maybe due to the timing) and not sure if this is newb-friendly. The combo placements felt a bit odd in this map...

[Hard] (Done)

SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 102.000 / 1,002 ms (The timing feels off. Try 101.970 BPM and 989 ms offset.)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 1 / 1.40
Distance Snap Average: x1.0
[Current] Objects: 212 ( 147 Circles / 63 Sliders / 2 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 315
[Current] Max Score: 2,030,380
[Current] Star Rating: 4.79
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv. 9
[Current] Circle Size: Lv. 3
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv. 8

Needs Lead-In Time. The map starts too sudden. At least 1.5 seconds of Lead-In time would be nice.

00:06:73 (6,7) - Not evenly placed under slider end.
00:10:41 (1) - Double check the spacing to make sure it is properly distance snapped.
00:13:06 (1) - Don't think this should be a new combo... -> 00:15:11 (6) - Star the new combo here instead.
00:21:00 (8) - Start the new combo here and remove the new combo from 00:21:59 (1).
00:23:35 (9) - Could start a new combo here... (and removing the new combo from 00:24:23 (1) while doing so for this one. )
00:25:11 (6) - ^
00:27:47 (10,11,12) - Doesn't look neat. Try placing the notes under the slider end.
00:28:64 (2) - Could start a new combo here...
00:36:59 (11) - Slightly uneven under the slider end.
00:40:41 (4) - ^
00:43:35 (9) - ^
00:45:70 (3) - Slightly uneven under the slider end.
00:49:82 (10) - A bit stretched out there... (Check the spacing)
00:53:50 (6,7) - Looks a bit cluttered...
00:54:53 (8,9) - Interesting jump there.... though it looks a bit out of place.
00:55:11 (9) - This should be a start of a new combo, not 00:55:70 (1).
01:04:53 (12) - ^ (Remove the new combo at 01:05:11 (1) )
01:17:76 (1) - Remove the new combo.
01:27:32 (T-Sec.) - Quadruple timing is a bit extreme to use and might be best as the last thing to try. If you need the sliders to go faster, then try adjusting the slider velocity or doubling the map's BPM though this will require remapping the whole thing.

Notes: Going to need some work with the note placements and the combo placements as well. The map isn't that bad, just needs to be fixed up a bit.


Overall: The map isn't that bad and the song is nice. The map just needs more work and the hitsounds are very odd to me. I think it would sound better just using the timing sections to control the hitsounds than to override them (The finishes would sound nice when used right in this map). Double check the spacing as well. I'll drop my star in then.
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Senbon
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Senbon
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
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whymeman
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whymeman
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Senbon
480 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Senbon
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
whymeman
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whymeman
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
tieff
Featured Artist
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Joined March 2009
tieff
Jigoku Shoujo. <3

[Easy]
Add some hitsounds.
00:20:40 (1) - Decrease sample volume.
00:24:52 (3) - ^
00:29:232 - ^
00:33:939 - ^
00:51:00 (6) - New combo.
01:02:18 (5) - ^
01:09:24 (5) - ^

[Normal]
Decrease normal hitsounds volume.
01:00:41 (6) - New combo.
01:18:07 (4) - ^
01:22:77 (4) - ^

[Hard]
00:15:11 (6) - New combo.
00:21:58 (3) - Nazi. Down a bit.
00:24:52 (3) - Nice finish.
00:40:41 (4) - New combo.
00:59:82 (8) - ^

Star, nice hitsounds on hard.
Senbon
480 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Senbon

tieff wrote:

Jigoku Shoujo. <3

[Easy]
Add some hitsounds. In the beginning? Ok Yeah it's kind bland ^^
00:20:40 (1) - Decrease sample volume. Done
00:24:52 (3) - ^ Done
00:29:232 - ^ Done
00:33:939 - ^ Done
00:51:00 (6) - New combo. Done
01:02:18 (5) - ^ Done
01:09:24 (5) - ^ Done

[Normal]
Decrease normal hitsounds volume. Fixed, I think. o.o;
01:00:41 (6) - New combo. Done
01:18:07 (4) - ^ Done
01:22:77 (4) - ^ Done

I added hit sounds to match the guitar in the beginning ^^ Hope they don't sound annoying

[Hard]
00:15:11 (6) - New combo. Done
00:21:58 (3) - Nazi. Down a bit. No change
00:24:52 (3) - Nice finish. Yay =D
00:40:41 (4) - New combo. Done
00:59:82 (8) - ^ Done!

Star, nice hitsounds on hard. Thanks ^^

I tried the beginning hit sounds here too
^^
Senbon
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Topic Starter
Senbon

whymeman wrote:

I feel like making an [Insane] difficulty for this map... though that is up to you.
Go ahead. 8D
whymeman
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whymeman

Senbon wrote:

whymeman wrote:

I feel like making an [Insane] difficulty for this map... though that is up to you.
Go ahead. 8D
Already on it. :-3

Edit: 60.1% done so far...
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Z-Ramm
46 posts
Joined December 2008
Z-Ramm
A few comments...

Easy
Found no real problems here, nice.

Normal
Nothing really stuck out as an issue here either.

Hard
00:52:76 (5,6) - I think it would sound better if you removed the last repeat from each of these, personally.
01:26:89 (1,2) - I think these should be in the center of the screen so that they are more obvious to the player. Ohterwise they seem all lonely over there on the right between those spinners.

Overall
Song is too quiet at times - lower the hitsound volume before the chorus.
Good map. Starred.
Senbon
480 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Senbon

Z-Ramm wrote:

A few comments...

Easy
Found no real problems here, nice. Thanks!

Normal
Nothing really stuck out as an issue here either. Thank yu

Hard
00:52:76 (5,6) - I think it would sound better if you removed the last repeat from each of these, personally. Did my own twist on that ^w^
01:26:89 (1,2) - I think these should be in the center of the screen so that they are more obvious to the player. Ohterwise they seem all lonely over there on the right between those spinners. Done!

Overall
Song is too quiet at times - lower the hitsound volume before the chorus. Made it 2 ticks quieter on all
Good map. Starred.
Vexed_old
162 posts
Joined January 2009
Vexed_old
[Easy]
00:07:46 (3) - Stack on fading 5.
00:23:93 (2) - Stack on 4.

[Normal]
00:24:819 I would rather see this slider as image below. However, the second pick sounds much better.
SPOILER
SPOILER
00:28:93 (4) - Move up 2 grids.

[Hard]
All Good.

Starz.
Senbon
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Topic Starter
Senbon
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
whymeman
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whymeman
I'll right, its finished, but if there is any errors to take care of, i'll make sure to look into it.

Download: Nana Kitade - Tsukihana (TV Size) (Senbon) [Whymeman's Hell].osu(Old Version)


Gah..... stupid spoilerbox >:-u
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