1. Easy (2,57 stars, 176 notes)
2. Hard (4,95 stars, 380 notes)
3. Normal (4,18 stars, 224 notes)

1. Easy: 100%
2. Normal: 100%
3. Hard: 100%

-Bakari- wrote:

Good luck with the projct! Man, I wanna see this ranked \:3/

Hope you can mod it, some day when this is finished

1. It's Reminder, not Remainder :p
2. Disable the widescreen support, it's here for the widescreen sb. see?
3. That skin is awesome. But probably you've missed something. Check it, just in case.

1. 00:11:684 (3,4,1) - ULTRANAZI - spacing here looks inconsistent, just from taking a look at it you can notice it. Try to fix it if you want t make your patterns neater
2. 00:23:544 (4,2) - (2) is too close to (4). Players may mitaknly hit (2) without clicking (1). it's not a big deal, but try to make your flow here a bit smoother. example!
3. 00:37:033 (3) - 01:35:637 (3) - that's 1/3. Unusual and hardly catchable for beginners. TRy to reduce the OD to make it more playable, be gentl with beginners!
4. 01:59:126 - 01:59:823 - long empty spaces are confusing for beginners + HP Drain here may scare them! Try to map these two beats, so players will follow claps in the music. I know, you're trying to follow vocals, but it feels too empty here!
5. 02:10:986 (2,3) - nazi - usually, you don't do such overlaps. This one doesn't look as cute as others, probably it'd be better to make a blanket-slider here? @.@/
6. 02:27:033 (2,3) - please, please, please~ looks like a spacing mistake, consider fixing it
   
   That's a pretty nice diff, I like you flow here! However, song is long, so I'd add one more break!

1. Again, try to reduce your OD to make the diff more playable. 1/3 is unusual snap divisor, so it'd be nice to make it a bit more friendly
2. 00:15:870 - I feel kinda bad about this clap being ignored, what if we try to map it? 00:15:521 - circle here and 1/3 slider on 00:15:754 - so we will follow that "take my hands" in vocals perfectly. example
   Note: 00:38:893 (2) - kinda the same. Circle+1/3 slider.
3. 00:24:940 (2) - consider making this slider 1/3 longer, that'd make more sense with vocals and music, imo. Just try it, it makes the diff more playable!
4. 01:33:661 (1) - that flows kinda strange, try to make it flow a bit smoother by unstacking the circles. example.jpg
5. 01:59:126 - 01:59:823 -same as easy, try to map these beats!
   
   Flows good, neat patterns! Awesome diff!

1. C'mon, make it more challenging, increase your HP Drain by one tick! Players will like it! It'll also make your mapset a bit more balanced, btw.
2. 02:09:242 (7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - maybe you could use sliders here instead, y'know, 1/3 streams are kinda tricky.
   
   Whoa, that's awesome!

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo!

[General]

1. It's Reminder, not Remainder :p Oh.. that's true D:. Fixed then
2. Disable the widescreen support, it's here for the widescreen sb. see? Unchecked in Easy and Normal (becuase it was unchecked in Hard already )
3. That skin is awesome. But probably you've missed something. Check it, just in case. It looks like I forgot it to pasted it in the folder.. Added.

[Easy]

1. 00:11:684 (3,4,1) - ULTRANAZI - spacing here looks inconsistent, just from taking a look at it you can notice it. Try to fix it if you want t make your patterns neater Made some tiny changes here
2. 00:23:544 (4,2) - (2) is too close to (4). Players may mitaknly hit (2) without clicking (1). it's not a big deal, but try to make your flow here a bit smoother. example! Prefer to leave it for now, I think it won't be really complicated due to the distance in the timeline. I'll consider it if somebody else point this out.
3. 00:37:033 (3) - 01:35:637 (3) - that's 1/3. Unusual and hardly catchable for beginners. TRy to reduce the OD to make it more playable, be gentl with beginners! I don't think so, players have the necessary time to react at this. I'll ask for a gameplay to some newbies friends in this gamemode to be sure anyway
4. 01:59:126 - 01:59:823 - long empty spaces are confusing for beginners + HP Drain here may scare them! Try to map these two beats, so players will follow claps in the music. I know, you're trying to follow vocals, but it feels too empty here! Reduced the HP Drain Rate in 1 tick instead, I think this kind of stop are reasonable in a Easy. I think reducing the HD by 1 tick will fix this problem
5. 02:10:986 (2,3) - nazi - usually, you don't do such overlaps. This one doesn't look as cute as others, probably it'd be better to make a blanket-slider here? @.@/ I like how it looks :/
6. 02:27:033 (2,3) - please, please, please~ looks like a spacing mistake, consider fixing it dunno how this happened xD. Fixed anyway
   
   That's a pretty nice diff, I like you flow here! However, song is long, so I'd add one more break!

[Normal]

1. Again, try to reduce your OD to make the diff more playable. 1/3 is unusual snap divisor, so it'd be nice to make it a bit more friendly I think this is not necessary, I mean all 1/3 used in this difficulty are sliders starts or end, and this won't be a problem. If I would have notes over purple ticks, there will be a problem, but in this way I don't think so.
2. 00:15:870 - I feel kinda bad about this clap being ignored, what if we try to map it? 00:15:521 - circle here and 1/3 slider on 00:15:754 - so we will follow that "take my hands" in vocals perfectly. example yeah, plays better too. Fixed.
   Note: 00:38:893 (2) - kinda the same. Circle+1/3 slider.
3. 00:24:940 (2) - consider making this slider 1/3 longer, that'd make more sense with vocals and music, imo. Just try it, it makes the diff more playable! Made some changes on my own here.
4. 01:33:661 (1) - that flows kinda strange, try to make it flow a bit smoother by unstacking the circles. example.jpg Fixed.
5. 01:59:126 - 01:59:823 -same as easy, try to map these beats! I'll keep this for now, it is a normal already.
   
   Flows good, neat patterns! Awesome diff!

[Hard]

1. C'mon, make it more challenging, increase your HP Drain by one tick! Players will like it! It'll also make your mapset a bit more balanced, btw. If somebody else suggest me that, I'll probably change it. But remember the difficulty spread, i think it becomes a bit high.
2. 02:09:242 (7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - maybe you could use sliders here instead, y'know, 1/3 streams are kinda tricky. I like as it is.. I'm not the best doing streams and I could pass them easily.
   
   Whoa, that's awesome!

Great map! Interesting rhythm!

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Good luck!

baldrace wrote:

Hi~~~hi~~from #modreq
>.</~~~~~~~it's my first time mod BAT's map Hi! :3

General
awesome English song

Hard
00:33:893 (3) - oh i like this rhythm better Nice one, I used a 1/1 slider after that instead of the single notes (5,6).

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01:32:498 (3) - ^ ^
02:48:661 (10) - ^ the song is not end at the end of the map,a slider here can make a sense of that imo Don't agree here, if you pay attention the music everything sound like a unit thing, anything is connected. So, adding just notes will represent better the music I think.
01:18:195 (4) - I think here this slider should have a bigger radian than 01:18:661 (5) - because of higher volume
00:37:033 a 1/3 slider stard here instead of 00:37:033 (3) - may be better? Nah.. Since this is a Hard, I think notes fit better here.
like this

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01:00:056 (7) - add a note here and add whistle sounds better >.< But.. but.. there is no sound in there :/

Normal
00:45:056 (3) - out of screen 0.0?I'm not sure No, only off-grid. If you play it in widescreen you'll see that every is in screen.
00:54:242 (5) - move it to x367 y255 ,than the blanket can be seen clearly 0.0? I don't thing so, I think the blanket is well done.. proof: http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot980-0.jpg
01:03:312 (2) - decrease the radian a bit for better blanket Hmm.. prefer to leave it for the sake of the blanket
02:36:102 (2) - oh I think this blanket is a mistake I didn't pretend a blanket xD.. That was not intentional when I was mapping :p

Easy
00:22:149 (2,3,4) - not perfect blanket 0.0 Fixed it a bit.

that's all >.<~~~~

1. 00:30:056 (3) - muevelo un poco a la izquierda.
2. 01:26:568 (5) - Yo lo bajaría un poco.
3. 01:35:986 (1,2,3,4,1) - ¿Que tal espaciarlo a 0.6x?, para mi es más fácil de leer a esa distancia. Claro que si no te parece, puedes ignorar esta y las otras dos de adelante xD.
4. 02:05:288 (3,4) - pasas de un spacing en (1,2) de 1.5x a uno de 1.2x... realmente lo sentí raro. Ponlo a 1.5x pls.
5. 02:07:033 (7) - ^, quizas te sugeriría colocarlos así (aunque te puede parecer feo, no se xD):
   
   SPOILER

   
   Esto es dejando el (1) amarillo sin mover, y poniendo el (7) a 1.5x.
6. 02:09:242 (7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - Lo mismo de antes, creo que el spacing a 0.6x se lee mejor, aunque habría que poner el (7) un poco más arriba, algo como x:168 y:24.
7. 02:26:219 (6,7,8,9,1) - ^
8. 02:47:847 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - LOL, que bien final xD.

1. 00:10:870 (2,3) - esta parte se siente engañosa. Es decir, como en (2) parece que se suelta (por el clap que le pusiste), el (3) parece llegar demasiado rápido. Lo interesante es que en 00:45:056 (3,4) - haces lo mismo, pero allí no se siente para nada mal.
2. 00:15:172 (4,1,2) - Este definitivamente será un combo breaker xD, quizas podrías colocar los dos circulos uno debajo del otro.
3. 01:37:498 (2) - Creo que este te quedó un poco corto xD.

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ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

Hola!, mod por pedido random en #spanish (aunque me gustaría que fuera M4M xD)

[Hard]
Ritmicamente lo sentí muy bien (y es cool sentir música a 1/3 ^_^ ), así que la mayoría creo que serán sugerencias nazis para mejorar el flow y la lectura, :

1. 00:30:056 (3) - muevelo un poco a la izquierda. Me gusta mas asi, me hubiese gustado un porque tambien :p
2. 01:26:568 (5) - Yo lo bajaría un poco. Asi como esta le da un mejor efecto a la hora de jugar el map, por eso prefiero dejarlo como esta.
3. 01:35:986 (1,2,3,4,1) - ¿Que tal espaciarlo a 0.6x?, para mi es más fácil de leer a esa distancia. Claro que si no te parece, puedes ignorar esta y las otras dos de adelante xD. En general use 0.4x en todos los streams, prefiero dejarlo asi por consistencia, ademas de que la diferencia no es tan grande.
4. 02:05:288 (3,4) - pasas de un spacing en (1,2) de 1.5x a uno de 1.2x... realmente lo sentí raro. Ponlo a 1.5x pls. No se porque lo sentis raro, quiero decir cuando uso dos sliders a una distancia de 1/3 siempre use 1,5x y haciendo estos cambios de spacing. Lo hago porque basicamente ni se siente el cambio de spacing en estos patrones. Lo voy a dejar asi por ahora, si tengo alguna otra complicacion aca probablemente lo cambie.
5. 02:07:033 (7) - ^, quizas te sugeriría colocarlos así (aunque te puede parecer feo, no se xD): Fluye realmente raro eso :/. Y la explicacion es la misma que te di en el punto anterior.
   
   SPOILER

   
   Esto es dejando el (1) amarillo sin mover, y poniendo el (7) a 1.5x.
6. 02:09:242 (7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - Lo mismo de antes, creo que el spacing a 0.6x se lee mejor, aunque habría que poner el (7) un poco más arriba, algo como x:168 y:24.
7. 02:26:219 (6,7,8,9,1) - ^ Mismo que lo anterior, no le siento un mayor cambio y estos streams se siguen perfectamente con 0.4x. Asi que por ahora lo dejo.
8. 02:47:847 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - LOL, que bien final xD. LOL, gracias xD

[Normal]

1. 00:10:870 (2,3) - esta parte se siente engañosa. Es decir, como en (2) parece que se suelta (por el clap que le pusiste), el (3) parece llegar demasiado rápido. Lo interesante es que en 00:45:056 (3,4) - haces lo mismo, pero allí no se siente para nada mal. Puede que tengas razon, intente otra cosita aca.
2. 00:15:172 (4,1,2) - Este definitivamente será un combo breaker xD, quizas podrías colocar los dos circulos uno debajo del otro. Cambie este patron, creo que entiendo a lo que te refieres. No le di mucha importancia a la voz y preferi seguir el instrumental, simplificando el patron.
3. 01:37:498 (2) - Creo que este te quedó un poco corto xD. Naa.. xD

[Easy]
Pues.. yo lo veo bien Gracias!
(cabe anotar que no soy muy bueno para mirar críticamente a los easy xD)



Otra cosa que noté es que el Skin se ve un poco borroso... Hmm.. no lo creo :p

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Saludos

sjoy wrote:

From #mod req Oh.. modreq is working really good lately xD
just some suggestions
[Hard]
I think 70% hitsounds is a little noisy in no kia part .how about 50%? I'll keep it for now, but I'll take it in consideration in the near future.
01:03:195 add a note? Used a 1/3 Slider instead.
01:20:288 (2) - ctrl+g and 01:20:754 (3) - move to 208 168 I prefer my way, flow better in my opinion.
01:36:916 01:37:265 add a note? I think it's characteristic for your song But.. There is no sound in these places, so notes will only overmap.
02:34:242 (5) - ctrl+g? Flows better in my way :/
02:38:312 02:38:661 add a note Same as before..

I hope it can help you
good luck

1. 00:17:614 (7) - this finish is unnecessary imo, you didn't add finish on 00:06:451 or you can add finish on 00:06:451 instead
2. 00:32:265 (1) - move it 1 grid right to be the center would be great.
3. 00:39:940 (5) - move it 1 grid down believe me, looks better imo.
4. 01:14:009 (10) - maybe move it to 404|284? to same as before double note.
5. 01:29:126 (4) - move to stack with the previous (7) if possible. it would be great

1. 00:35:056 (1) - distance error.... i guess D: and (2)'s tail is lower than head 1 grid, please try to fix that but it not a problem.
2. 01:37:498 (2,3) - try this rhythm maybe? if yes, add clap on (3)'s tail

1. 00:21:102 (1) - move center point and tail point 1 grid right, then copy it and paste on next note. they will be perfect center.
2. 00:32:614 (2) - 1 grid right for perfect center

P A N wrote:

hi hi pm req hi!

[Hard]

1. 00:17:614 (7) - this finish is unnecessary imo, you didn't add finish on 00:06:451 or you can add finish on 00:06:451 instead oh.. yes. Removed.
2. 00:32:265 (1) - move it 1 grid right to be the center would be great. Fixed.
3. 00:39:940 (5) - move it 1 grid down believe me, looks better imo. Alright, I see your point I think.
4. 01:14:009 (10) - maybe move it to 404|284? to same as before double note. yep, I did something like you mentioned.
5. 01:29:126 (4) - move to stack with the previous (7) if possible. it would be great I personally prefer this way, during the gameplay this effect produces a simple stack too.

[Normal]

1. 00:35:056 (1) - distance error.... i guess D: and (2)'s tail is lower than head 1 grid, please try to fix that but it not a problem. Done.
2. 01:37:498 (2,3) - try this rhythm maybe? if yes, add clap on (3)'s tail Yes, I was thinking about to use this pattern, since you suggested me that I'll fix this up (and fixed a similar pattern in the first chorus)

[Easy]

1. 00:21:102 (1) - move center point and tail point 1 grid right, then copy it and paste on next note. they will be perfect center. It looks good right now, I don't find anything wrong with it.. I'll keep it for the sake of symetry and constant spacing
2. 00:32:614 (2) - 1 grid right for perfect center Nice catch! Moved!

that's all good luck mancuso XD

1. 00:45:056 (3) - move tail 1 grid left for parallel perfectly with (4).
2. 01:19:242 (4) - what about move center point 1 grid down for more blanket

P A N wrote:

Recheck no kds:3

[Normal]

1. 00:45:056 (3) - move tail 1 grid left for parallel perfectly with (4).
2. 01:19:242 (4) - what about move center point 1 grid down for more blanket

[Easy]

nothing

[Hard]

nothing D:

good luck

hoshisorakiseki wrote:

hello , from my queue.

general:
i think your ending is too long and i prefer you can end it in 02:55:172 No, I prefer to finish the map in 02:49:009 - because is where the most important part of the song ended. The rest is a fade-out, it is not really necessary to map it.

diff:easy
ok

diff:normal
01:02:498 - a note here? Prefer to map where the vocals start, and avoid drums because it could be difficult for a Normal.

diff:hard
ok

sorry, i can only find these problem.
good luck~~

1. Nothing I guess.

1. 00:32:265 (1) - I would move this note just a bit left so it would make a curve to 00:32:614 (2) - , get it?
   
   Example

   
2. 00:40:637 (1) - I honestly think you could move this slider a bit right, a bit like this? It would look (imo) better.
   
   Example

   
3. 00:53:195 (2,1) - I would do it like this instead:
   
   Example

   
4. Nice diff ~

1. 01:36:451 (1) - I honestly think these two facing the same direction is really bad 01:35:637 (3) - , try CTRL + H on 01:36:451 (1) - ?
   
2. Pro diff o.o

1. The difficulty settings feel quite low on this one, I suggest +1 OD (and +1 HP)
2. 00:48:893 (10,1) - Stack them?
3. 01:06:335 (2,3) - ^
4. 01:26:568 (5,6) - ^
5. 01:40:870 (3,4) - ^
6. 01:46:451 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - So sometimes you stack them, sometimes you don't ;_; I don't really get the idea because I'm a noob but I would say that 01:47:149 (8,9) - Unstack these?
7. 02:39:126 (5,6) - Stack?
   
8. Nice diff~