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Hosoe Shinji - SON OF SUN ~Full Version~

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vvvf1000
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009년 9월 13일 일요일 at 오후 11:00:39

Artist: Hosoe Shinji
Title: SON OF SUN ~Full Version~
Source: DJMAX BS - OST
Tags: djmax blacksquare son of sun
BPM: 200
Filesize: 7692kb
Play Time: 03:02
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.83 stars, 359 notes)
  2. Lite (3.92 stars, 289 notes)
  3. Maniac (4.99 stars, 500 notes)
  4. Normal (4.47 stars, 340 notes)
Download: Hosoe Shinji - SON OF SUN ~Full Version~
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hidden song - SON OF SUN ~Full Version~

+7/25
Add a new Pattern - [Normal]
Change the name of the level of difficulty - [Maniac -> Hard]

+7/27
Add a new Pattern - [Maniac] = (insane)

+7/31
Fixed -James2250 -Thank you ^ ^

+8/1
Add a new Pattern - [Lite] = (easy)

+8/23
Fixed -MoonFragrance -thank you ^ ^

+9/11
Fixed -Hanyuu -thank you ^ ^

+9/12
Fixed -Mafiamaster -thank you ^ ^
Hanyuu
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
vvvf1000
Hanyuu// thank you :)
Topic Starter
vvvf1000
Hanyuu// thank you :)
James2250
timing is off
bpm:200 seems fine
offset:329..ish don't forget to resnap notes after changing it

normal:
get rid of the break at the start, its pointless
you need to make this much easier for a normal (make circle size normal) and lower slider velocity, maybe delete more notes
00:10:17 (2) - delete this
00:14:97 (2) - ^
00:21:05 (6,7) - align the endpoints
00:23:45 (6,7) - align them together
00:37:77 (5) - delete this
01:11:37 (2) - ^
01:16:17 (2) - ^
02:56:97 (2) - ^
03:01:77 (1) - ^

hard:
delete break
01:21:95 (1,2) - spacing
02:05:15 (1) - not allowed (cant have endpoint and start point overlapping)
02:09:95 (1) - ^
02:14:75 (1) - ^
02:19:55 (1) - ^
03:00:35 (1) - might just be ok...but I would seperate end and start point more

maniac:
delete break
02:00:95 (4) - repeat is almost hidden
02:02:15 (4) - ^
02:03:35 (4) - ^
02:19:55 (1) - not allowed
02:35:15 (6,7) - dont have these two together like that

overall pretty nice map have a star :)
Topic Starter
vvvf1000

James2250 wrote:

timing is off
bpm:200 seems fine
offset:329..ish don't forget to resnap notes after changing it

normal:
get rid of the break at the start, its pointless
you need to make this much easier for a normal (make circle size normal) and lower slider velocity, maybe delete more notes
00:10:17 (2) - delete this
00:14:97 (2) - ^
00:21:05 (6,7) - align the endpoints
00:23:45 (6,7) - align them together
00:37:77 (5) - delete this
01:11:37 (2) - ^
01:16:17 (2) - ^
02:56:97 (2) - ^
03:01:77 (1) - ^

hard:
delete break
01:21:95 (1,2) - spacing
02:05:15 (1) - not allowed (cant have endpoint and start point overlapping)
02:09:95 (1) - ^
02:14:75 (1) - ^
02:19:55 (1) - ^
03:00:35 (1) - might just be ok...but I would seperate end and start point more

maniac:
delete break
02:00:95 (4) - repeat is almost hidden
02:02:15 (4) - ^
02:03:35 (4) - ^
02:19:55 (1) - not allowed
02:35:15 (6,7) - dont have these two together like that

overall pretty nice map have a star :)

Fixed - Thank you ^ ^
DeathxShinigami
Nice DJmax map ~_~

Not reposting because the change is so little but usually [lite] difficulty is spelled out as [Light]
MoonFragrance
Umm.... I'll use Korean.

안녕하세요^^ 한국인 맵퍼를 또 뵙다니 반갑네요.
한국인 포럼에 한번 놀러오시기 바랍니다.

그럼 일단 모딩으로 들어가볼게요.

[Lite]
00:18:32 (1) - Whistle을 추가 하시는게 어떨까요? 'ㅅ'
00:27:92 (1) - ^
01:06:32 (3) - 되돌아오기를 한번 더 늘려주세요.
02:08:72 (9) - Whistle을 추가 하시는게 어떨까요?
02:13:52 (9) - 스페이싱을 맞춰주시고 휘슬을 추가해주세요
02:31:52 (1) - 02:32:73에서 끝나는게 더 좋아보이네요.
02:44:12 (1,2,1,2,3) - 초보자들은 겹치는 노트를 어려워 합니다. 초보자를 위한 노트라면 겹치지 않게 배열하는것이 좋아 보이네요.
02:48:32 (1,2,3,1,2) - ^
03:02:57 (1) - 3:02:42에 배치하는 것이 좋아 보이네요.

[Normal]
00:38:72 (break) - 00:45:92에 끝나는 스피너를 만드는게 좋을거 같습니다.
01:25:52 (1) - 하나의 스피너를 몇개로 나누어서 배치하는게 좋을거 같네요.
01:31:52 (1) - ^
02:31:52 (1) - 02:32:73에서 끝나는게 더 좋아보이네요.
02:51:55 (1) - 02:51:92에서 시작하는 것이 더 좋을거 같습니다.
03:02:57 (1) - 3:02:42에 배치하는 것이 좋아 보이네요.

이지에서 말했던 것처럼 슬라이더에 휘슬 넣어주시구요.

[Hard]
슬라이더는 앞서 말했던 것처럼 휘슬 넣어주세요.
00:38:72 (break) - 00:45:92에 끝나는 스피너를 만드는게 좋을거 같습니다.
01:43:82 (2) - 스피너로 대신하는건 어떨가요?
02:05:12 (1) - 1/2 비트 더 일찍 끝나도록 길이를 줄여주세요.
02:09:92 (1) - ^
02:14:72 (1) - ^
02:19:52 (1) - ^
02:24:32 (break) - 스피너와 노트들을 추가하는게 좋아보이네요.
02:42:32 (6,7,8) - 이전의 구간처럼 롱노트나 스피너로 하시는게 어떤가요? 어떠한 음도 들리지 않는데 계속 서클은 나타나네요.
03:02:57 (1) - 3:02:42에 배치하는 것이 좋아 보이네요.

[Maniac]
슬라이더는 앞서 말했던 것처럼 휘슬 넣어주세요.
00:32:57 (1) - 1/2 비트 뒤로 배치해 주세요.
00:38:72 (break) - 00:45:92에 끝나는 스피너를 만드는게 좋을거 같습니다.
01:34:22 - 노트를 하나 추가해주세요.
01:34:69 - ^
01:43:82 (2) - 스피너로 대신하는건 어떨가요?
01:45:32 (1) - 뉴 콤보를 넣어주세요
02:19:52 (1) - 1/2 비트 더 일찍 끝나도록 길이를 줄여주세요.
02:24:32 (break) - 스피너와 노트들을 추가하는게 좋아보이네요.
02:42:47 (10,11,12,13,14,15) - 이전의 구간처럼 롱노트나 스피너로 하시는게 어떤가요? 어떠한 음도 들리지 않는데 계속 서클은 나타나네요.
03:02:57 (1) - 3:02:42에 배치하는 것이 좋아 보이네요.
Topic Starter
vvvf1000

MoonFragrance wrote:

Umm.... I'll use Korean.

안녕하세요^^ 한국인 맵퍼를 또 뵙다니 반갑네요.
한국인 포럼에 한번 놀러오시기 바랍니다.

그럼 일단 모딩으로 들어가볼게요.

[Lite]
00:18:32 (1) - Whistle을 추가 하시는게 어떨까요? 'ㅅ'
00:27:92 (1) - ^
01:06:32 (3) - 되돌아오기를 한번 더 늘려주세요.
02:08:72 (9) - Whistle을 추가 하시는게 어떨까요?
02:13:52 (9) - 스페이싱을 맞춰주시고 휘슬을 추가해주세요
02:31:52 (1) - 02:32:73에서 끝나는게 더 좋아보이네요.
02:44:12 (1,2,1,2,3) - 초보자들은 겹치는 노트를 어려워 합니다. 초보자를 위한 노트라면 겹치지 않게 배열하는것이 좋아 보이네요.
02:48:32 (1,2,3,1,2) - ^
03:02:57 (1) - 3:02:42에 배치하는 것이 좋아 보이네요.

[Normal]
00:38:72 (break) - 00:45:92에 끝나는 스피너를 만드는게 좋을거 같습니다.
01:25:52 (1) - 하나의 스피너를 몇개로 나누어서 배치하는게 좋을거 같네요.
01:31:52 (1) - ^
02:31:52 (1) - 02:32:73에서 끝나는게 더 좋아보이네요.
02:51:55 (1) - 02:51:92에서 시작하는 것이 더 좋을거 같습니다.
03:02:57 (1) - 3:02:42에 배치하는 것이 좋아 보이네요.

이지에서 말했던 것처럼 슬라이더에 휘슬 넣어주시구요.

[Hard]
슬라이더는 앞서 말했던 것처럼 휘슬 넣어주세요.
00:38:72 (break) - 00:45:92에 끝나는 스피너를 만드는게 좋을거 같습니다.
01:43:82 (2) - 스피너로 대신하는건 어떨가요?
02:05:12 (1) - 1/2 비트 더 일찍 끝나도록 길이를 줄여주세요.
02:09:92 (1) - ^
02:14:72 (1) - ^
02:19:52 (1) - ^
02:24:32 (break) - 스피너와 노트들을 추가하는게 좋아보이네요.
02:42:32 (6,7,8) - 이전의 구간처럼 롱노트나 스피너로 하시는게 어떤가요? 어떠한 음도 들리지 않는데 계속 서클은 나타나네요.
03:02:57 (1) - 3:02:42에 배치하는 것이 좋아 보이네요.

[Maniac]
슬라이더는 앞서 말했던 것처럼 휘슬 넣어주세요.
00:32:57 (1) - 1/2 비트 뒤로 배치해 주세요.
00:38:72 (break) - 00:45:92에 끝나는 스피너를 만드는게 좋을거 같습니다.
01:34:22 - 노트를 하나 추가해주세요.
01:34:69 - ^
01:43:82 (2) - 스피너로 대신하는건 어떨가요?
01:45:32 (1) - 뉴 콤보를 넣어주세요
02:19:52 (1) - 1/2 비트 더 일찍 끝나도록 길이를 줄여주세요.
02:24:32 (break) - 스피너와 노트들을 추가하는게 좋아보이네요.
02:42:47 (10,11,12,13,14,15) - 이전의 구간처럼 롱노트나 스피너로 하시는게 어떤가요? 어떠한 음도 들리지 않는데 계속 서클은 나타나네요.
03:02:57 (1) - 3:02:42에 배치하는 것이 좋아 보이네요.

감사합니다 ^ ^
Hanyuu
hey for the maniac difficulty can you improve this 2 parts:

01:21:92 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -

01:59:12 (1,2,3,4) -

its realy confusing for me i like this all map but not this 2 :( :(
Topic Starter
vvvf1000

Hanyuu wrote:

hey for the maniac difficulty can you improve this 2 parts:

01:21:92 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -

01:59:12 (1,2,3,4) -

its realy confusing for me i like this all map but not this 2 :( :(

fixed :)
Mafiamaster
Lite~
01:25:52 (1) - Suggestion: Add a finish?
Redo all breaks. Some will shorten a LOT.

Normal~
I would say this may be a bit hard for a Normal.
Redo both breaks. They'll shorten.
01:27:02 (1,2,3) and the other set - I don't think consecutive spinners like this is really recommended for a Normal.
03:02:42 (1) - This slider isn't silent at the end.

Hard~

00:19:52 (1) - Suggestion: Finish?

Maniac~
Mmm, good!
Topic Starter
vvvf1000

Mafiamaster wrote:

Lite~
01:25:52 (1) - Suggestion: Add a finish?
Redo all breaks. Some will shorten a LOT.

Normal~
I would say this may be a bit hard for a Normal.
Redo both breaks. They'll shorten.
01:27:02 (1,2,3) and the other set - I don't think consecutive spinners like this is really recommended for a Normal.
03:02:42 (1) - This slider isn't silent at the end.

Hard~

00:19:52 (1) - Suggestion: Finish?

Maniac~
Mmm, good!

fixed ! Thank you :)
orioncomet
Hi !
These are Suggestion.
[Lite]
01:43:529(1) - remove new combo
01:45:329(3) - new combo

[Normal]
fine ~ for me

[Hard]
fine ~

[Maniac]
02:21:029(3,4) - spacing

Star!
Symbolic
[Lite]

00:56:72 (5) - Whistle.
00:57:92 (1,2,3) - Let these notes be soft with finish, that sounds very well with the background-music.
01:00:32 (1,2,3) - ^
01:02:72 (1,2,3) - ^
01:05:12 (1,2) - ^
02:07:52 (6) - New combo.
02:12:32 (6) - ^
02:17:12 (6) - ^
02:21:92 (6) - ^
02:44:12 (1,2) - Let these notes be soft with finish, that sounds very well with the background-music.
02:45:92 (1,2,3) - ^
02:48:32 (1,2,3) - ^
02:50:72 (1,2,3) - ^
03:01:97 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:02:12 (1) - ^


[Normal]

Use 1 Circle Size bigger.

00:37:52 (4) - New combo.
00:38:72 (1) - This spinner isn't rankable lol, it's 8 seconds.. Max. is 6 i think and thats a whole lot already :o
00:57:92 (1,2,3) - Let these notes be soft with finish, that sounds very well with the background-music.
01:00:32 (1,2,3) - ^
01:02:72 (1,2,3) - ^
01:05:12 (1,2) - ^
02:07:52 (6) - New combo.
02:12:32 (6) - ^
02:17:12 (6) - ^
02:18:32 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:19:52 (2) - New combo.
02:21:92 (9) - ^
02:44:12 (1,2) - Let these notes be soft with finish, that sounds very well with the background-music.
02:45:92 (1,2,3) - ^
02:48:32 (1,2,3) - ^
02:50:72 (1,2) - ^
02:59:12 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:01:97 (1) - ^
03:02:12 (1) - ^
03:02:27 (1) - ^


[Hard]

00:37:52 (4) - New combo here.
00:38:72 (1) - This spinner isn't rankable lol, it's 8 seconds.. Max. is 6 i think and thats a whole lot already :o
01:12:32 (4) - New combo.
01:30:62 (1,2,3) - Let these notes be soft with finish, that sounds very well with the background-music.
02:23:12 (6) - New combo goes here.
02:54:32 (4) - ^
02:55:52 (7) - ^
03:01:75 (1) - Remove new combo.
03:01:97 (1) - ^
03:02:12 (1) - ^
03:02:27 (1) - ^


[Maniac]

00:26:72 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - NO. change this pattern.
00:38:72 (1) - This spinner isn't rankable lol, it's 8 seconds.. Max. is 6 i think and thats a whole lot already :o
01:13:52 (3) - New combo.
01:14:72 (5) - ^
01:17:12 (1) - This spacing is confusing.
01:27:92 (1) - Let these notes be soft with finish, that sounds very well with the background-music.
01:29:12 (1) - ^
01:30:47 (1,3,5,7) - ^
01:32:72 (1) - ^
01:33:92 (1) - ^
02:23:57 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:24:02 (1) - ^
03:01:75 (1) - ^
03:01:82 (1) - ^
03:01:97 (1) - ^
03:02:12 (1) - ^
03:02:27 (1) - ^


Nice map, annoying song :p
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