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NC feat. NRG Factory - Seduction (Vocal Remix)

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ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, February 13, 2010 at 4:03:45 PM

Artist: NC feat. NRG Factory
Title: Seduction (Vocal Remix)
Source: Dance Dance Revolution
Tags: Ultimate Bemani
BPM: 190
Filesize: 3664kb
Play Time: 01:11
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0.97 stars, 41 notes)
  2. Normal (3.7 stars, 91 notes)
  3. Ultimate's Seduction (5 stars, 201 notes)
Download: NC feat. NRG Factory - Seduction (Vocal Remix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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ADDED AN EASY DIFF

pending

removed nogard's seduction
Last edited by ouranhshc , edited 31 times in total.
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc
nvm
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
wheevived
Ultimate
382 posts
Joined December 2008
Ultimate
Eeh ouranhshc!

General:
BPM: OK
Offset: 1.234
Tags: Add tags please

Edit 4: Done (for now, tell me if i need to map the entire song!):

Download: NC feat. NRG Factory - Seduction (Vocal Remix) (ouranhshc) [Ultimate's Seduction].osu

Also a SS replay of me playing =D

Download: Ultimate - NC feat. NRG Factory - Seduction (Vocal Remix) [Ultimate's Seduction] (2010-01-04) Osu.osr

Last edited by Ultimate , edited 5 times in total.
XepherX3
625 posts
Joined September 2008
XepherX3
hmm:

[mod]
[Easy]
*Suggestion*
00:29:015 (5,6,1) try make it like this screenshot and remove 1(u have to move the circles around after applying this:
SPOILER

[Hard]
01:32:173(17) out of the screen

nice

star from me 8-)
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
[Hard]
00:56:812 (1) - WTF?

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,BottomCentre,"clap.png",320,480
_S,0,1234,,2
_L,1234,38
__F,0,0,1263,0,1
__F,0,1263,2526,1,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples
Mismagius
9,239 posts
Joined July 2008
Mismagius
blahblahblahwtfdifficultyblahblahblah

Download: NC feat. NRG Factory - Seduction (Vocal Remix) (ouranhshc) [Nogard's Seduction].osu
DeathxShinigami
1,176 posts
Joined November 2008
DeathxShinigami
[Overall]
Needs an easy/normal thing Wasn't there once was?
Add sources and or tags?
I think Kiai should be placed in the same areas for all the maps not just in different parts.

[Hard]
00:25:234 (2) - Make symmetrical to (1)

[Ultimate's Seduction]
Like the kiai burst in the end. No problems

[Nogard's Seduction]
00:04:234 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Urgh. To clustery for me.
00:05:655 (3) - Hard to read along with 4 afterwards.
Overall its pretty brutal for a diff and lacks a break.

[Preview Point]
00:11:339 - How about this?

No star for now. Call me back when you want it.
sesito71
398 posts
Joined July 2008
sesito71
Overall: Hmm, maybe you should add tags and source xD

[Hard]

This is not hard IMO Perhaps you should rename it to [Normal]

[Nogard's Seduction]
uhh, this map is somewhat chaotic
00:10:234 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm, this doesn't sound well, and it's hard to read.
00:11:612 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Revise spacing, it's a bit confusing...
00:18:402 (9,1,1,1,1,1) - Doesn't sound too well >_< and fix spacing
00:26:139 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't fit
00:39:718 (5,6) - Warn about this (?)
00:46:665 (1) - Too long >_<
01:01:665 (1) - Hmm, make this slider nicer plzz



Star, but remember to improve that diff ^^
Mismagius
9,239 posts
Joined July 2008
Mismagius
Only changed what i think it's really not good :o

Download: NC feat. NRG Factory - Seduction (Vocal Remix) (ouranhshc).osb

Download: NC feat. NRG Factory - Seduction (Vocal Remix) (ouranhshc) [Nogard's Seduction].osu

Mismagius
9,239 posts
Joined July 2008
Mismagius
Complete intro remap

Download: NC feat. NRG Factory - Seduction (Vocal Remix) (ouranhshc) [Nogard's Seduction].osu
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
[General]

Add "Blue_Dragon", "Nogard, and "BD" to tags?
Delete the .osb.
Nogard's Seduction has a different preview point than the other diffs.

[Normal]

00:11:339 - Add a soft finish note here? :3
00:49:234 (1) - Claps on first repeat and endpoint?
00:50:497 (1) - Finish?

A little iffy for the easiest difficulty.

[Ultimate's Seduction]

00:11:339 - Move this timing point back onto the red tick?

Man, I <3 Ultimate's diffs.

[Nogard's Seduction]

Why does this diff have a bunch of uninherited timing points?
Some of the streams are quite crazy.

00:01:234 (1,2,3,4) - Remember; timing points before the actual note, unless it's a slider tail/tick or spinner end.
00:18:402 (9,1,1,1,1,1) - I found this quite unreadable.
00:23:297 (1,2,3) - Why do these kicksliders start where they do? I don't really feel any rhythmic reason for it.
00:39:718 (5,6) - I don't think these fit at all. :/ I'm strongly of the belief that maps should flow intuitively.
00:52:823 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Err...this might be a bit too hard, even for Insane+.
00:57:876 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^, although not to the same extent.
01:09:402 (11) - This slider is terrible, please make it better-looking. It's also unrankable because it's impossible to determine which way it's going without snaking sliders.

Neat song, star~
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
The map should be ended at 01:32:181 or 01:33:444.


~Normal~
00:21:444 (1,2) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
00:23:339 (7) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
00:26:497 (1,2) - move left 2 grid (Lv3)
00:27:128 (3,4,5,6) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)

~Ultimate's Seduction~
No major issues.


+Star
Sushi
osu! Alumni
2,989 posts
Joined October 2008
Sushi
[Normal]
00:11:339 (1) - Center?
00:22:707 (5) - a little too far, you can see a gap during the pattern
00:27:760 (5) - ^

[Ultimate's]
fine~
Hikato
444 posts
Joined August 2008
Hikato
/me failed. Found nothing wrong with my untrained eyes. D: Normal may be a bit hard for a normal but I've seen harder normals so~ Nice map. :)
fartownik
2,189 posts
Joined December 2008
fartownik
Don't really see any severe issues, but:

Cut the unmapped part of the mp3.
Delete "Blue Dragon" from the tags.
Any custom colours in "Normal"?

That's it. +Star.
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc
FIXED: REDOWNLOAD
arien666
6,273 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
[Normal]
00:31:54(1) - [Suggestion] How about move 1 grid up?
00:52:07(1) - Finish part doesn't cover (3)'s start part, you need to check this :3
00:54:60(5) - ^ Same but (7)'s start part.

[Ultimate's Seduction]
No issues :3



Okay.
Looks great as I saw :3
So, I'll pubble this song after updating this song.
Good luck.

Here's my star :3
arien666
6,273 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
Umm???

Proto-bubbled. Yay!!!
Good luck :3
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