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[General]
-Change artist to Basshunter & Alina (or Alina feat. Basshunter, or however you want to do it) and remove their names from the song title since it's redundant as it currently is
-Needs a bg
-Move offset to where your first circle is (15,298)
-Hitsounds are pretty overpowering, either lower them or try soft hitsounds
-Add some whistles/claps/finishes, I don't think this song lends itself to all snare drum hits

[Easy]
00:32:63 (7,8,9,10) - I think the spacing on these is too close
00:39:74 (4,5) - Sounds kind of weird to me, moving (5) forward by 1/2 beat and adding a new hitcircle 1/2 beat after (4) sounds better imo
00:52:18 (7,8,9) - I think these are too close to the previous slider train
01:04:18 (3) - How come this slider doesn't go up?
01:38:40 (8,9) - Inconsistent spacing, should be the same size jump as from (7) to (8)
01:49:74 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - This is a difficult stack for an Easy difficulty map
01:56:18 (6,7) - New combo
02:02:63 (10,11) - Inconsistent spacing, should be the same size jump as from (9) to (10)
02:26:40 (5) - Spacing, I would recommend having it just go right to left for consistency
02:45:29 (3,4) - These are a little too close to (2)
02:51:96 (9,10,11,12,13) - Move farther from (8)
02:55:52 (5) - Too close to (4)
02:55:96 (6,7,8,9) - Inconsistent spacing, should be closer together
02:57:96 (1) - This is...a really long spinner o_o Any way you can shorten it?

[Normal]
00:17:52 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Spacing, either spread them out more or use a new combo
00:19:29 (12,13,14) - This sounded weird, like it didn't go to any part of the music
00:31:74 (6) - I think this should start underneath the end of (5)?
00:32:63 (7,8,9,10) - Again, I think spacing is too close on these
00:38:40 (3) - This should probably start from the top to be consistent with the sliders at (1) and (2)
00:48:63 (2,3) - The jump from the end of (1) to (2) should be the same distance as the jump from the end of (2) to (3)
00:50:40 (4) - New combo maybe?
00:53:96 (12) - Space this farther from the end of (11)
00:59:74 (9,10,11) - Space these out like you did for (1,2,3,4,5,6)
01:04:18 (6,7,8) - Move these a little further from (5)
01:07:29 (5) - Too close to (4)
01:28:63 (3) - New combo? Otherwise space them out like you have the end of (1) and (2), or move (2) closer to the end of (1)
01:33:29 (9) - Too far from (8)
01:40:18 (1) - Is a new combo here really necessary?
01:43:29 (1) - ^
01:59:74 (4) - New combo?
02:27:74 (11) - ^
02:45:29 (3) - ^
02:47:07 (6) - ^
02:51:96 (9,10,11,12,13) - Move farther from (8)
02:55:52 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - Move farther from (4)
02:57:96 (1) - Again, this is really long, see if you can shorten it ._.

I'm still really new to modding so you don't have to take everything I say at face value, most of them are just suggestions

Some of the changes and recommendations that you have listed there I have allready rectified, for instance I have placed backgrounds to it.

I have made some of the suggested changes to Normal allready as well. Currently going through the list.

Edit: The beatmaps are now complete.
I just need to get one song graveyarded so I can re-submit this one.

It is now completely finished. (All except the name, which I was unable to change due to an error.

^ Try not to double post, u can edit an old post
Wow, this actually looks pretty good, I mean the last time I checked ur mapping._. u didn't even time it good
But this, Timing looks great/map looks pretty good on play

quick Mod suggestioins

U have a Black hitcircle colour, switch it, cause some parts of the song has a Black BG, which totally blends the hitcircle, that's not allowed.

Also, just try to remember this, fix ur breaks dude,
that's all I have to say

P.S. Nice SB for a first try

[Easy]

You didn't set difficulty settings? Put HP Drain Rate 2 ticks to the Easy side, then put Circle Size 1 tick to the Bigger side and then put Overall Difficulty 2 ticks to the Easy side.

00:25:07 (5) - Put this slider 1/2 later and then shorten the slider 1/2.
00:50:40 (4) - New combo.
00:52:18 (7) - ^
00:59:74 (5,6,7) - Respace these with distance snap on.
01:23:74 (5,6) - ^
01:28:63 (3) - New combo here.
01:32:18 (3) - ^
01:34:40 (7) - ^
01:40:40 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:49:74 (5,6,7) - Fix this spacing with d-snap.
02:01:52 (2,3) - ^
02:02:63 (5,6,1) - ^
02:05:96 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
02:45:29 (3) - New combo.
02:47:07 (5) - ^
02:50:85 (6) - ^
02:51:96 (9) - ^
02:55:52 (5) - ^
02:57:96 (1) - This spinner is too long, 6 seconds is maximum rankable, which is very long already. This spinner is 8 seconds so you will have to change it.

Just a quick tip: Try to keep your spacing consistent throughout the whole diff


[Normal]

Call this diff [Hard], because the difficulty settings, notes and patterns are pretty hard.

00:15:29 (1,2,3,4) - Fix this spacing with d-snap.
00:22:85 (5,6) - This overlap is not allowed, change it.
00:24:85 (7) - Let this note start 1/2 later and shorten it 1/2 then.
01:24:18 (10,11) - Space these with d-snap.
01:31:96 (9) - New combo.
01:49:52 (4,5) - Space these with d-snap.
01:49:85 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Stack these on (5).
02:01:52 (4,5) - Space these with d-snap.
02:02:63 (7,8,1) - ^
02:50:40 (5) - New combo.
02:51:96 (9) - ^
02:53:96 (14) - ^
02:57:96 (1) - This spinner is too long, 6 seconds is maximum rankable, which is very long already. This spinner is 9 seconds so you will have to change it.
03:07:96 (4) - New combo here.

Just a quick tip: Try to keep your spacing consistent throughout the whole diff


Nice map,
Here you have a Star *

Urqhart, I've made a little example for you, so you... well.. just check it out xD


Download: Basshunter - Basshunter & Alina - When You Leave (Urqhart) [Ultimate's Example].osu

I think i'll hear from you soon, good luck!
Ultimate

ps. Don't forget to put the Grid level on 3 (Most precise)!

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Gladi's Hard.
Enjoy~

Download: Basshunter - Basshunter & Alina - When You Leave (Urqhart) [Gladi's Hard].osu

Gladi

Can you please Un-Graveyard this?

Revived.

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